diff --git a/game/script/13A.fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen.rpy b/game/script/13A.fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen.rpy index 5dbf82e..223c8ca 100644 --- a/game/script/13A.fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen.rpy +++ b/game/script/13A.fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen.rpy @@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ label chapter_13A: FD "Don’t sweat it, son." - FD "Thing about humans, as well as many charnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement." + FD "Thing about humans, as well as many carnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement." FD "You’d be surprised how useful staying quiet and stationary can be." diff --git a/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy b/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy index 0e127f8..393f6bb 100644 --- a/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy +++ b/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy @@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ label chapter_13C: FD "Don’t sweat it, son." - FD "Thing about humans, as well as many charnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement." + FD "Thing about humans, as well as many carnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement." FD "You’d be surprised how useful staying quiet and stationary can be." @@ -433,6 +433,7 @@ label chapter_13C: F "Mumbling." "Fuck." + Nas "I think I’ll hit up the catering first." Nas "What about you guys?" @@ -529,6 +530,7 @@ label chapter_13C: stop music fadeout 1.0 play music "audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg" fadein 1.0 "Lucy's looking on edge, I should probably intervene quick." + N "-dress is very nice, Lucy, we should go out together clothes shopping sometime!" F "I-I uh…" @@ -1249,7 +1251,7 @@ label chapter_13C: A "And I mean, I REALLY can’t dance." - A "Like, quadraplegic with down syndrome can’t dance." + A "Like, quadriplegic with down syndrome can’t dance." A "But-" diff --git a/game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy b/game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy index 62e25d4..4961100 100644 --- a/game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy +++ b/game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy @@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ label chapter_13D: FD "Don’t sweat it, son." - FD "Thing about humans, as well as many charnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement." + FD "Thing about humans, as well as many carnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement." FD "You’d be surprised how useful staying quiet and stationary can be." diff --git a/game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy b/game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy index a1645c9..c5e6277 100644 --- a/game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy +++ b/game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy @@ -1,47 +1,89 @@ label chapter_6: #Not A Date scene room anon dark with fade + "-One Month Later-" + play music 'audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg' fadein 1.0 + "I’m laying in bed on a saturday morning." + "It’s been raining the last few days, so I’m stuck inside." + "Not like I had any other plans anyways." + "The forecast says it should clear up later today." + "There’s no new games out, and my backlog is just the perfect size of fuck that noise." + "I don’t even feel like baiting on a certain basket weaving polynesian forum." + "The light of my phone is the only thing illuminating my hovel of a home." + "I scroll through the camera roll out of boredom." + "At least that’s what I tell myself." + "Interspersed through various memes and screenshots of homework assignments are pictures Fang has been sending." + "Over the last month I’ve been included more in Fang’s circle of friends." + #[CG of Fang having beaten Anon on a Primal Rage arcade cabinet] + "Ugh… My cred… I can feel it slipping away." + #[CG of Reed in his mascot outfit at one of Naser’s track meet] + "Hehehehe, Reed stole all the hotdogs that day." + #[CG of a selfie of Trish and Fang on the pier] + "I scroll past that one swiftly… god damn it Trish…" + "My perusal through old pictures is interrupted with a text." + "Fang: Looking for new band venue" + "Fang: Don’t feel like going alone" + "Fang: Do you want to come with?" + "...Alone…? No, shut the fuck up alarms." + "Anon: Why alone?" + "Fang: Trish has a horn appt and Reed is" + "A pause." + "Fang: Preoccupied." + #cut to Reed in bathroom cg + Re "...dude like… back to the story..." + #cut back to Anon + "Anon: Alright, where we dropping?" + "Fang: Just show up at my place in like an hour" + "Fang: Need to go now" + "Anon: k" + stop music fadeout 1.0 + "This is fine." + play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg' fadein 1.0 + "It’s just helping a friend of mine find someplace for her band to play." + "A friend I have feelings for." + "And we’re alone." + scene room anon day "JUST HANGING OUT CALM DOWN ANON CALM THE FUCK DOWN." "I boot up my computer and start a gacha thread on a taiwanese rum brewing blogsite." diff --git a/game/script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy b/game/script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy index 1c5a6d5..9204d01 100644 --- a/game/script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy +++ b/game/script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy @@ -344,7 +344,6 @@ label chapter_8: A "Er… why not." - "I take the guitar from her hands and put the strap on, letting its weight hang from my shoulder." "Fang hands me the pick and I aimlessly strum the guitar, the mess of a noise sounding a far cry from her elegant playing." @@ -356,7 +355,9 @@ label chapter_8: show fanganonguitar with dissolve "Fang grabs another guitar and motions me to copy her hand movements." + "I try to mimic her hands on the fretboard but it feels like my fingers are twisting into pretzels." + F "Not like that, your hand’s gonna get cramped as fuck like that." "Fang sets her guitar down on a stand and comes over to me."