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 <h2>Special thanks to...</h2>
-<p>A random anon on /lit/ saved this project from poor writing after we submitted a beta version of our script. The post goes as follows <b>(minor spoiliers ahead)</b>:</p>
+<p>A random anon on /lit/ saved this project from poor writing after we submitted a beta version of our script. The post goes as follows <b>(minor spoilers ahead)</b>:</p>
 <p>"Aight you kind of get this is an attention seeking thing. But this is as much of a symptom as the gender thing, not the root cause. Bio says she's neglected by her parents because her brother is perfect and gets everything right. He's a goody two shoes with grades and parents, popular, I'm guessing that other girl is his gf too. Fang's response is to adopt an "I need nobody" attitude, and has basically bought an off the shelf personality and identity to compensate. People like this do not feel like they have agency. They lack self actualization. These "store-bought" identities from ideologies like the LGBTQIAAOMGWTFBBQ people and racebaiters offer only the feeling of validation without the essential step of self. This behavior you can find in (You) baiting on 4channel, which is an attempt to find some semblance of "I exist!" instead of realizing you can't get that affirmation from outside. Fang adopting Tradwife, sticking with high school attitudes, or shooting up the school isn't fixing the problem of her gaining agency. You can fix this by having Anon be there as an example of being a self-actualized person, he shouldn't be there to fuck her or save her. Every choice that's not purely cosmetic should be set up with the intent to help her gain agency. She feels like she's always compared to her brother, never judged on her own merits or personhood, so she substitutes this with an identity that comes with excess baggage. It shouldn't matter if she's goth or bisexual, as long as this comes from within, and not because this will make up for her lack of personhood. This is why tradwife is missing the point a bit, it's substituting colored hair and pronouns for Jesus and prayer. She still does it because its an identity without any real substance of the self behind it. Or maybe I am talking out my ass and all she really did need was a man to fuck the degeneracy out of her. You guys do you</p>
 <p>Whoever you are, you changed the writing direction from shitposty, pandering garbage to a genuine story that out preforms what our competators could do. Whoever you are, be proud of your critique and continue to critique. Story makers need vigilant anons like you.</p>
 <b>(Of note, we didn't take /lit/anon's word one-to-one about every detail we said. Nuance exists!)</b>