From 203a58fcadac77304ac188707baa4ccb9b01fe8c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: nutbuster Date: Sun, 31 Oct 2021 18:02:07 +1100 Subject: [PATCH] Revert "Story Revision 13C FINAL" This reverts commit 65c5ad2be710bf6f1c47bbbde5cf93baaf00c235. --- ...13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy | 68 +++++++------------ 1 file changed, 26 insertions(+), 42 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy b/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy index 0e887ce..4cee673 100644 --- a/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy +++ b/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy @@ -2286,13 +2286,13 @@ label chapter_13C: A "Back to the mosh pits, meeting strange people, having fun, maybe going for that solo career I know you can achieve." - A "..." + A "You should leave your options open while I'm gone." + + A "I don't want to hold you back or make you waste time waiting for me." show anon sad flip with dissolve A "...We might not even see each other again..." - A "I don't want to hold you back or make you waste time waiting for me." - A "But...{w=0.5} I'll never forget you, Lucy..." show fang surprised with dissolve @@ -2304,66 +2304,50 @@ label chapter_13C: #I hate google docs, this is “” a mistake Lucy "Fuck... that hurts like hell..." - Lucy "I’m the one who’s supposed to barge in and break us up!" + Lucy "It's... I...." - Lucy "Not You..." - - Lucy "But..." + Lucy "Damn it, Anon..." Lucy "..." - "She lets out a loud sigh." - - Lucy "...I’ve never told this to anyone other than Trish...{w=0.5} but there was this guy I dated back in my freshman year." - - Lucy "We only lasted a week though." - - Lucy "Same with the next, and the one after..." - - Lucy "..." - - Lucy "I’ve never had a relationship that’s lasted more than a week..." - - Lucy "Eventually, I gave up on dating..." - show fang angry with dissolve - "She grits her teeth in anger." + "Lucy grits her teeth in anger." - Lucy "Every time, I fucked it all up by dumping my baggage, or by being some social retard!" + Lucy "I'm sorry, about all my bullshit!" - "She covers her face with her hands." + Lucy "Please! T-that’s… that’s not me anymore…" - Lucy "Anon...{w=0.5} never wanted to dump all my baggage on you..." + Lucy "I can't go back to being that thing!" - Lucy "It's wasn’t right!" + show fang surprised with dissolve + "My voice causes my girlfriend to flinch." - #TODO: Choreography kino here - "I move to place a hand on Lucy's shoulder." + show anon behind fang: + ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4 + "I move to place a hand on her shoulder." + show fang sad with dissolve + A "Lucy…" - A "Lucy...{w=0.5} It's okay..." + "Lucy lets out a sigh." - A "You can let it all out." - - "She takes a deep breath, then exhales." + Lucy "Anon… {w=0.5}I wouldn't feel right going back to how I used to be." show fang anguish show anon concerned flip with dissolve - Lucy "That thing I used to be... I never realized..." + Lucy "It's not right." - Lucy "It was so humiliating!" + Lucy "It was just a phase! I swear!" + + Lucy "I thought what I was doing was completely normal." + + Lucy "It was so humiliating..." Lucy "Naser might have known... {w=0.5}and he suffered so much because of it..." - Lucy "I can't imagine just how much more my parents would've hated if they'd known the real truth." + Lucy "I can't imagine just how much more my parents would've hated if I stuck to being... being..." - Lucy "So just forget it." - - Lucy "It was an obsession." - - Lucy "One I was convinced would make me happy." - - Lucy "But it was never meant to be." + Lucy "I don't even know who I used to be now." Lucy "I… {w=0.5}I was just an ungrateful bitch..."