feedback changes, refactor narrator, add Fang bikini CG to ch5

This commit is contained in:
Bowie 2021-08-14 13:37:23 +01:00
parent 52ca7a0a10
commit 3a6acbb2ff
9 changed files with 1742 additions and 1709 deletions

Binary file not shown.

After

Width:  |  Height:  |  Size: 1.2 MiB

Binary file not shown.

After

Width:  |  Height:  |  Size: 65 KiB

Binary file not shown.

After

Width:  |  Height:  |  Size: 12 KiB

View File

@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ transform randPosition:
# Click-to-continue icons / animations
# TODO: settle on a position/animation that people like
image ctc_end_marker:
"pickicon2"
"pickicon_smaller"
# xalign 0.925 yalign 0.98
alpha 0
linear 0.25 alpha 1
@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ define long_textbox = { "window_background": long_textbox_img, 'namebox_style':
#Characters
define base = Character (ctc="ctc_end_marker", ctc_pause="ctc_mid_marker", ctc_timedpause=Null(), ctc_position="nestled") # try to remember some of the basics of CTC
define I = Character(kind=base) # for internal dialogue i.e narration. Required for CTC indicators working with Anon's thoughts
define narrator = Character(kind=base)
define A = Character ('Anon', base, color="#36E12D", who_outlines=[(1, '#0C300A')]) # Light Green
define F = Character ('Fang', base, color="#B4D4CE", who_outlines=[(1, '#112D27')]) # Light Cyan
define Lucy = Character ('Lucy', base, color="#B4D4CE", who_outlines=[(1, '#112D27')]) # Light Cyan
@ -260,6 +260,7 @@ image reed happy flip = im.Flip("reed/reed happy.png", horizontal=True)
image reed happy sunglasses flip = im.Flip("reed/reed happy sunglasses.png", horizontal=True)
image anon face happy flip = im.Flip("anon/base set/anon face happy.png", horizontal=True)
image anon happy flip = im.Flip("anon/emotive set/anon happy.png", horizontal=True)
image anon grin flip = im.Flip("anon/base set/anon grin.png", horizontal=True)
image trish future smug flip = im.Flip("trish/trish future smug.png", horizontal=True)
image trish prom happy flip = im.Flip("trish/trish prom happy.png", horizontal=True)
image stella happy flip = im.Flip("stella/stella happy.png", horizontal=True)

File diff suppressed because it is too large Load Diff

File diff suppressed because it is too large Load Diff

View File

@ -5,49 +5,49 @@ label chapter_4:
play music 'audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg' fadein 2
scene outside school fog with Fade(1,0,1)
I "{cps=*.3}-- The Following Monday Morning --{/cps}"
"{cps=*.3}-- The Following Monday Morning --{/cps}"
pause .5
I "I havent been able to focus much lately."
"I havent been able to focus much lately."
pause .5
I "My original plan is in absolute tatters."
"My original plan is in absolute tatters."
I "As opposed to staying silent and not facing any conflict,{w=.4} Im now all buddy-buddy with the school reject club."
"As opposed to staying silent and not facing any conflict,{w=.4} Im now all buddy-buddy with the school reject club."
I "And then theres Naser and Naomi as well,{w=.4} and all their issues{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"And then theres Naser and Naomi as well,{w=.4} and all their issues{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
I "At any moment I feel I'm going to get found out."
"At any moment I feel I'm going to get found out."
I "Trish would certainly beat me senseless."
"Trish would certainly beat me senseless."
I "Fang might as well{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"Fang might as well{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
I "Definitely Naser."
"Definitely Naser."
pause .5
I "All this shit happening,{w=.4} I cant even get into my favorite hobby."
"All this shit happening,{w=.4} I cant even get into my favorite hobby."
I "I dont think Ive made a single forum post in three days."
"I dont think Ive made a single forum post in three days."
pause .5
I "I stare down at my phone screen and see a sea of threads to post in."
"I stare down at my phone screen and see a sea of threads to post in."
I "And yet,{w=.4} I have nothing to say."
"And yet,{w=.4} I have nothing to say."
pause .5
I "Wait,{w=.3} its already seven?!"
"Wait,{w=.3} its already seven?!"
I "Fuck me,{w=.4} I dragged my feet too much!"
"Fuck me,{w=.4} I dragged my feet too much!"
I "I sprint the rest of the way to school."
"I sprint the rest of the way to school."
scene classroom with fade
I "Luckily,{w=.3} Im able to slink into homeroom without the teacher molesting me for a tardy pass."
"Luckily,{w=.3} Im able to slink into homeroom without the teacher molesting me for a tardy pass."
I "Classes tick by in the daily slog,{w=.4} and like all things,{w=.4} lunch eventually comes to pass."
"Classes tick by in the daily slog,{w=.4} and like all things,{w=.4} lunch eventually comes to pass."
stop music fadeout 3
play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCafeteriaLoop.ogg' fadein 2
@ -55,9 +55,9 @@ label chapter_4:
show anon neutral at aright
with fade
I "I grab a packaged lunch from the omnivore line and begin looking for a place to sit."
"I grab a packaged lunch from the omnivore line and begin looking for a place to sit."
I "By now its a foregone conclusion,{w=.4} I already know what happens next."
"By now its a foregone conclusion,{w=.4} I already know what happens next."
pause .25
stop ambient fadeout 3
play music 'audio/ost/west_coast_kicking.ogg' fadein 1
@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ label chapter_4:
N "Anon!"
pause .5
I "Right on cue."
"Right on cue."
show anon neutral flip with dissolve
@ -80,19 +80,20 @@ label chapter_4:
show naser:
easein 1.5 xalign -0.275
with dissolve
pause .5
I "Naomi rushes over,{w=.4} followed by Naser.{w=.6} Id really rather not deal with her any more today."
"Naomi rushes over,{w=.4} followed by Naser.{w=.6} Id really rather not deal with her any more today."
show naomi explanatory
N "Come on,{w=.2} Anon,{w=.4} let's continue our conversation from earlier!"
show naomi neutral
I "I need to think of something,{w=.4} and fast."
"I need to think of something,{w=.4} and fast."
A "Err,{w=.3} sorry.{w=.4} I already promised Fang Id be eating with her."
pause .5
I "Smooth."
"Smooth."
pause .25
show naomi considering with Dissolve(.25)
@ -138,34 +139,34 @@ label chapter_4:
show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
hide anon with dissolve
I "I turn away from the two and leave them behind."
"I turn away from the two and leave them behind."
# CH 4 SCENE 2 - Trish continues to hate Anon's guts, more at 11
scene door auditorium with fade
I "Now that im in front of the auditorium when it isnt crowded for once,{w=.4} I can get a decent look around the foyer."
"Now that im in front of the auditorium when it isnt crowded for once,{w=.4} I can get a decent look around the foyer."
I "The walls are as vine-covered as anywhere else in the building,{w=.4} but the ones here have small magenta flowers blooming on them here and there."
"The walls are as vine-covered as anywhere else in the building,{w=.4} but the ones here have small magenta flowers blooming on them here and there."
I "I suppose theres different kinds of vines,{w=.4} wouldnt make much sense otherwise.{w=.5} Never really thought about it until now."
"I suppose theres different kinds of vines,{w=.4} wouldnt make much sense otherwise.{w=.5} Never really thought about it until now."
pause .5
I "I open the door enough to see Fangs gang lazing about within."
"I open the door enough to see Fangs gang lazing about within."
I "Reed is messing with some box on a table,{w=.4} and Fang and Trish are sitting on the first row of seats chattering to each other."
"Reed is messing with some box on a table,{w=.4} and Fang and Trish are sitting on the first row of seats chattering to each other."
stop music fadeout 3
I "I put my hand on the doorhandle and hesitate a bit.{w=.4} Then I pull it open."
"I put my hand on the doorhandle and hesitate a bit.{w=.4} Then I pull it open."
scene auditorium with Dissolve(1)
I "The squeak of the door echoes through the near empty auditorium,{w=.4} and immediately all three turn their heads and stare."
"The squeak of the door echoes through the near empty auditorium,{w=.4} and immediately all three turn their heads and stare."
pause .75
I "Theres an awkward pause that goes on for just a bit too long.{w=.5} Eventually Fang calls out from her seat."
"Theres an awkward pause that goes on for just a bit too long.{w=.5} Eventually Fang calls out from her seat."
# TODO: sound direction says play 'She Fucks Human Men', resolve this
# play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg'
@ -193,14 +194,14 @@ label chapter_4:
show fang:
easein_cubic 2 yalign -0.1 xalign 1.35
show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
I "Fang throws her head back and goes limp on the shitty wooden chair."
"Fang throws her head back and goes limp on the shitty wooden chair."
show fang angry flip
F "{cps=*.7}UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGHHHHHH{/cps},{w=.2} THAT {cps=*.7}BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITCH{/cps}."
show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause .5
I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -210,7 +211,7 @@ label chapter_4:
show fang:
easein_cubic 1 yalign 0.0 xalign 1.3
I "Fang lifts her head back up."
"Fang lifts her head back up."
show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "{cps=*.3}Ffffffffine{/cps},{w=.4} you can stay."
@ -219,9 +220,9 @@ label chapter_4:
show anon:
ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.4
I "I go sit a few yards away from Fang and Trish on the theater seat.{w=.5} Reed turns back to that device he was messing with before."
"I go sit a few yards away from Fang and Trish on the theater seat.{w=.5} Reed turns back to that device he was messing with before."
I "Looks like a projector?"
"Looks like a projector?"
pause .5
A "You dont like Naomi?"
@ -235,7 +236,7 @@ label chapter_4:
show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Oh look at me Im super smart and nice to everyone and everyone likes me so if you disagree with me I get the moral high ground no matter what!"
I "Fang lets out some combination of a snort and a sigh."
"Fang lets out some combination of a snort and a sigh."
F "No different than Naser.{w=.4} What a couple."
@ -291,7 +292,7 @@ label chapter_4:
F "Oh,{w=.2} right.{w=.4} What were you talking about Trish?"
show trish smug flip with Dissolve(.25)
I "Trish pulls a cardboard tube out of her backpack.{w=.4} She pops the top of the tube open and pulls a rolled up poster out and unfurls it."
"Trish pulls a cardboard tube out of her backpack.{w=.4} She pops the top of the tube open and pulls a rolled up poster out and unfurls it."
show trish happy flip
T "This!{w=.4} Tada!{w=.5} Our first poster!"
@ -310,7 +311,7 @@ label chapter_4:
T "We need to have an actual show!{w=.4} Not some dumb school show.{w=.5} We need actual people who matter to show our genius to!"
pause .5
I "Genius?{w=.4} More like retardation."
"Genius?{w=.4} More like retardation."
show fang sad with Dissolve(.25)
F "I dont know Trish."
@ -323,7 +324,7 @@ label chapter_4:
show fang considering
show trish unimpressed flip
with Dissolve(.25)
I "The glare Trish levels at me was akin to a very dull knife."
"The glare Trish levels at me was akin to a very dull knife."
show trish:
easein 0.5 xalign 0.9
@ -352,14 +353,14 @@ label chapter_4:
show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve
pause .25
I "Whoa,{w=.4} where did that come from."
"Whoa,{w=.4} where did that come from."
show fang neutral flip with dissolve
pause .25
F "Lets drop it for now.{w=.4} My tuna sandwich is getting cold."
show trish smug flip with Dissolve(.25)
I "Trish grins in victory."
"Trish grins in victory."
pause .5
Re "{size=-10}Dude{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} ya got told{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{/size}"
@ -369,15 +370,15 @@ label chapter_4:
show dimmer_light behind anon, trish with dissolve
pause .25
I "What the fuck am I doing?{w=.5} Im dead if I out myself whilst outnumbered here"
"What the fuck am I doing?{w=.5} Im dead if I out myself whilst outnumbered here"
pause .5
I "Trish tore at me like she knew I was there."
"Trish tore at me like she knew I was there."
pause .5
I "Had to happen EVENTUALLY."
"Had to happen EVENTUALLY."
I "I pray thats not the case."
"I pray thats not the case."
pause .5
play music 'audio/ost/she_fucks_human_men.ogg' fadein 1
@ -386,23 +387,23 @@ label chapter_4:
with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
I "I finally get to opening my omnivore lunch.{w=.5} A BLT,{w=.3} some chicken nuggets,{w=.3} and an orange."
"I finally get to opening my omnivore lunch.{w=.5} A BLT,{w=.3} some chicken nuggets,{w=.3} and an orange."
I "I take my first bite of the sandwich and-"
"I take my first bite of the sandwich and-"
stop music fadeout 1.0
play sound 'audio/effects/schoolBell.ogg'
I "{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.7}DONG {w=0.65}BING-{w=0.7}BONG{/i}{/cps}"
"{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.7}DONG {w=0.65}BING-{w=0.7}BONG{/i}{/cps}"
pause 0.5
stop sound fadeout 1
I "Are you kidding me."
"Are you kidding me."
I "I cram as much of the sandwich into my mouth as I can and close the box."
"I cram as much of the sandwich into my mouth as I can and close the box."
I "Reed puts the projector in the corner of the room,{w=.3} and Trish makes for the exit with Fang."
"Reed puts the projector in the corner of the room,{w=.3} and Trish makes for the exit with Fang."
I "I follow after,{w=.4} cheeks still filled with food"
"I follow after,{w=.4} cheeks still filled with food"
# CH 4 SCENE 3
@ -412,14 +413,14 @@ label chapter_4:
pause .5
I "Next class is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Music,{w=.4} thats right.{w=.5} Ill be walking with Fang then."
"Next class is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Music,{w=.4} thats right.{w=.5} Ill be walking with Fang then."
I "The three all wave each other goodbye and Fang turns towards our shared class."
"The three all wave each other goodbye and Fang turns towards our shared class."
pause .5
stop ambient fadeout 3
play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg'
I "May as well make some small talk."
"May as well make some small talk."
show anon neutral:
yalign 0.1 xalign 0.1
@ -443,7 +444,7 @@ label chapter_4:
show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
F "{cps=*.35}Pffft.{/cps}"
I "She turns away to hide her snickers."
"She turns away to hide her snickers."
show fang happy flip with dissolve
pause .25
@ -468,7 +469,7 @@ label chapter_4:
show fang:
easein 0.5 xalign 1.05
I "Fang holds a hand up to her beak."
"Fang holds a hand up to her beak."
F "{cps=*.4}AHAHAHAHAHAHHA.{/cps} {w=.5}{nw}"
show fang:
@ -476,7 +477,7 @@ label chapter_4:
extend "God you are such a dweeb"
show anon grin with dissolve
I "I flash her my biggest shit-eating grin."
"I flash her my biggest shit-eating grin."
A "Least I dont need a loisence to listen to it."
pause .5
@ -487,7 +488,7 @@ label chapter_4:
scene black with fade
pause .5
I "The two of us banter with each other with increasingly strong british accents all the way to class."
"The two of us banter with each other with increasingly strong british accents all the way to class."
pause .5
stop music fadeout 3
@ -497,60 +498,60 @@ label chapter_4:
scene bandroom with Fade(1, 0, 1)
pause 1
I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg'
play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
I "ARGH!!{w=.5} This stupid-" with vpunch
"ARGH!!{w=.5} This stupid-" with vpunch
pause .25
I "\"Define a treble clef\"?{w=.5} I dont know what a treble clef is!{w=.5} I dont care about this shit,{w=.3} it wont ever be useful."
"\"Define a treble clef\"?{w=.5} I dont know what a treble clef is!{w=.5} I dont care about this shit,{w=.3} it wont ever be useful."
I "Fuck this,{w=.4} who can I cheat off of?"
"Fuck this,{w=.4} who can I cheat off of?"
pause .5
I "I lean back in my uncomfortable chair hoping to pop my spine back in place."
"I lean back in my uncomfortable chair hoping to pop my spine back in place."
# TODO: added to resolve Anon's premonition, to be reviewed by writing team
# I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Bet if I shared this class with Naomi she'd pester me into asking Fang for help right about now."
I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I can guess exactly what Naomi would suggest if we shared this class."
# "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Bet if I shared this class with Naomi she'd pester me into asking Fang for help right about now."
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I can guess exactly what Naomi would suggest if we shared this class."
# TODO: this line doesn't actually occur until chapter 6
N "{i}\"Oh!{w=.4} What if you asked Fang for help?\"{/i}"
pause .5
I "I crane my head,{w=.3} looking for Fang.{w=.5} She's at her own desk shes filling out her assignment page easily,{w=.4} drumming her fingers on her desk.{w=.6} Almost looks like shes strumming honestly."
"I crane my head,{w=.3} looking for Fang.{w=.5} She's at her own desk shes filling out her assignment page easily,{w=.4} drumming her fingers on her desk.{w=.6} Almost looks like shes strumming honestly."
pause .5
I "Agh,{w=.3} and thats another thing.{w=.5} Who the fuck made guitars?!{w=.5} Fuck trying to memorize frets or whatever the fuck."
"Agh,{w=.3} and thats another thing.{w=.5} Who the fuck made guitars?!{w=.5} Fuck trying to memorize frets or whatever the fuck."
pause .5
I "Oh shit,{w=.4} shes looking at me now."
"Oh shit,{w=.4} shes looking at me now."
I "She tilts her head and taps her sheet."
"She tilts her head and taps her sheet."
pause .5
I "OH!"
"OH!"
I "I respond with an eyeroll and finger gun at my temple.{w=.6} My thumb hammer drops and I fake die in my seat."
"I respond with an eyeroll and finger gun at my temple.{w=.6} My thumb hammer drops and I fake die in my seat."
I "Fang shakes her head,{w=.4} returning to her assignment with a tiny smile gracing her beak."
"Fang shakes her head,{w=.4} returning to her assignment with a tiny smile gracing her beak."
pause .5
I "I look at the papers we need to finish.{w=.5} Fuck me,{w=.4} how the hell are we suppose to finish these by the end of class?!"
"I look at the papers we need to finish.{w=.5} Fuck me,{w=.4} how the hell are we suppose to finish these by the end of class?!"
pause .5
# TODO: this line is also from chapter 6
N "{i}\"It cant hurt to ask, though,{w=.4} right?\"{/i}"
pause .5
I "Maybe the Neon Nero has a good point."
"Maybe the Neon Nero has a good point."
I "Still,{w=.4} interrupting Fang now might piss her off."
"Still,{w=.4} interrupting Fang now might piss her off."
I "{cps=*.25}FFFFFf{/cps}uck.{w=.4} Ill flip a coin."
"{cps=*.25}FFFFFf{/cps}uck.{w=.4} Ill flip a coin."
pause .5
menu:
@ -568,14 +569,14 @@ label chapter_4:
# TODO: sound direction says 'Appreciating the Scenery', old script had 'Appreciating the Atmosphere' resolve this
stop music fadeout 3
I "Guess thats that."
"Guess thats that."
I "May as well get it over with."
"May as well get it over with."
pause .5
play music 'audio/OST/appreciating_the_scenery.ogg' fadein 2
I "I slink out of my chair and go around to Fangs desk."
"I slink out of my chair and go around to Fangs desk."
pause .5
@ -591,7 +592,7 @@ label chapter_4:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.1
pause .1
show fang shocked flip with Dissolve(.25)
I "She jumps in her chair"
"She jumps in her chair"
show fang surprised flip with dissolve
F "Howd you get-{w=.4} {nw}"
@ -601,7 +602,7 @@ label chapter_4:
A "Sorry{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
I "I look at her work and see shes only a quarter done.{w=.5} Fuck,{w=.3} I hope we have enough time."
"I look at her work and see shes only a quarter done.{w=.5} Fuck,{w=.3} I hope we have enough time."
A "{cps=*.2}Sooo...{/cps}{w=.3} you seem to be capable of deciphering dead languages."
pause .5
@ -623,9 +624,9 @@ label chapter_4:
A "Only elective that had an open spot.{w=.4} Even though its mid semester and Im expected to be at the level of everyone thats been here all year."
show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
I "Fang leans her head down and holds her hand on top of her muzzle."
"Fang leans her head down and holds her hand on top of her muzzle."
I "Im guessing thats supposed to be like pinching the bridge of your nose."
"Im guessing thats supposed to be like pinching the bridge of your nose."
pause .5
show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
@ -655,7 +656,7 @@ label chapter_4:
pause .5
I "Fang and I jump several inches."
"Fang and I jump several inches."
show anon sad flip
show fang surprised flip
@ -668,7 +669,7 @@ label chapter_4:
show anon neutral flip with dissolve
A "And whats with the costume?"
I "Reed is in an overly large inflatable T-rex costume."
"Reed is in an overly large inflatable T-rex costume."
pause .5
Re "Gotta get a signature for this absent note,{w=.2} man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -681,14 +682,14 @@ label chapter_4:
Re "Theres,{w=.3} like,{w=.5} pockets in here man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} You get to bring a lot of cool stuff{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5} As long as you clean it after{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
I "Im not even going to bother at this point."
"Im not even going to bother at this point."
F "Thanks,{w=.2} Reed."
Re "Sall good, man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
stop music fadeout 3
I "Reed gets up and goes to the teachers desk in the corner of the room."
"Reed gets up and goes to the teachers desk in the corner of the room."
show reed:
easeout 1 xalign -2.0
@ -699,7 +700,7 @@ label chapter_4:
show anon:
ease 1 xalign 0.5
show anon neutral with dissolve
I "I turn back to Fang expectantly."
"I turn back to Fang expectantly."
pause .5
F "Im not getting up.{w=.4} Get your crap and sit down already."
@ -707,7 +708,7 @@ label chapter_4:
A "Thanks."
I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like this chick.ogg'
pause .5
@ -725,17 +726,17 @@ label chapter_4:
stop music fadeout 3
I "Guess that settles it."
"Guess that settles it."
I "Fang wouldnt want to be bothered right now anyways."
"Fang wouldnt want to be bothered right now anyways."
pause .5
I "Looking back to my paper,{w=.4} I try once again to make sense of the questions and music notes."
"Looking back to my paper,{w=.4} I try once again to make sense of the questions and music notes."
I "\"Write the following notes in both Treble and Bass clef\"."
"\"Write the following notes in both Treble and Bass clef\"."
play music 'audio/OST/Those Other Two Weirdos.ogg' volume 0.8 fadein 3
I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What?"
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What?"
pause .5
show reed king rex:
@ -751,7 +752,7 @@ label chapter_4:
with vpunch
pause .5
I "I have to grab the desk to keep myself from falling out of my chair."
"I have to grab the desk to keep myself from falling out of my chair."
A "Reed,{w=.4} what the fuck are you doing here?!"
@ -760,13 +761,13 @@ label chapter_4:
A "And whats with the outfit?!"
I "Reed is in an overly large inflatable T-rex costume."
"Reed is in an overly large inflatable T-rex costume."
pause .5
Re "School mascots are pretty cool{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} You wouldnt believe the things they let you do with these{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
I "Im not going to ask for clarification."
"Im not going to ask for clarification."
pause .5
Re "But,{w=.2} uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} You should get some help or something{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -782,7 +783,7 @@ label chapter_4:
Re "YO,{w=.1} TEACH!{w=.4} THIS GUY NEEDS SOME EXTRA HELP!" with vpunch
pause .5
I "All eyes turn to us.{w=.6} The desk makes a nice conk sound when my head hits it."
"All eyes turn to us.{w=.6} The desk makes a nice conk sound when my head hits it."
show jingo at sleft with dissolve
pause .25
@ -792,7 +793,7 @@ label chapter_4:
jingo "Err{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} someone{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {i}Fang!{/i}{w=.5} You help him with the packet."
I "Fang glares daggers at the two of us."
"Fang glares daggers at the two of us."
pause .5
A "{cps=*.3}Thanks,{/cps}{w=.4} Reed."
@ -804,19 +805,19 @@ label chapter_4:
with dissolve
pause .25
I "Reed shuffles over to the teachers desk in the corner to get his signature."
"Reed shuffles over to the teachers desk in the corner to get his signature."
stop ambient fadeout 5
pause .5
I "Fang calls out from her chair."
"Fang calls out from her chair."
F "Im not getting up.{w=.4} If you need help grab your stuff and get over here."
pause .5
I "The damage is done.{w=.4} May as well at this point."
"The damage is done.{w=.4} May as well at this point."
play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like this chick.ogg'
I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
scene bandroom
@ -841,18 +842,18 @@ label chapter_4:
A "How the hell do you know any of this."
I "Anon then realized,{w=.4} he is horrendously fucking stupid."
"Anon then realized,{w=.4} he is horrendously fucking stupid."
show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Ive been into playing music since pre-k"
pause .5
I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Roll with it"
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Roll with it"
pause .5
A "So does it take that long to learn that horrid thing?"
I "I point at the class electric guitar."
"I point at the class electric guitar."
pause .25
F "Nah,{w=.3} I started with piano.{w=.5} I didnt get my first guitar til freshman year."
@ -860,7 +861,7 @@ label chapter_4:
A "The piano?{w=.4} Isnt that the hardest one?"
I "I have no clue what i'm talking about."
"I have no clue what i'm talking about."
pause .25
F "Maybe for some,{w=.4} but I started early and got ahead.{w=.6} My grandma had an old piano she would let me mess around with."
@ -878,16 +879,16 @@ label chapter_4:
pause .5
show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
I "Fang gets a strange expression,{w=.4} a mix between a blush and a scowl as she returns back to her snappy attitude."
"Fang gets a strange expression,{w=.4} a mix between a blush and a scowl as she returns back to her snappy attitude."
show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "You done with that yet?{w=.5} It's taking you way too long,{w=.4} rather have you out of my way."
pause .5
I "Cute."
"Cute."
pause .5
I "I show her the half-finished worksheet."
"I show her the half-finished worksheet."
A "I still dont get this fucking part."
@ -900,7 +901,7 @@ label chapter_4:
F "Did you even read the page?"
I "Fang then grabs the paper and points at the top right.{w=.5} In a small box is a list of three types,{w=.5} woodwind,{w=.3} brass,{w=.3} and percussion."
"Fang then grabs the paper and points at the top right.{w=.5} In a small box is a list of three types,{w=.5} woodwind,{w=.3} brass,{w=.3} and percussion."
pause .5
A "Oh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -908,9 +909,9 @@ label chapter_4:
F "You still need me to help you with this or do you have it from here?"
I "Of course I have it,{w=.3} I know this shit,{w=.4} it's just 3 categories."
"Of course I have it,{w=.3} I know this shit,{w=.4} it's just 3 categories."
I "Percussion is simple enough.{w=.4} Getting the differences between woodwind and brass is a bit harder."
"Percussion is simple enough.{w=.4} Getting the differences between woodwind and brass is a bit harder."
stop music fadeout 3
@ -918,7 +919,7 @@ label chapter_4:
pause .5
show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
I "I heard a sigh from Fang."
"I heard a sigh from Fang."
pause .5
F "I cant believe this."
@ -975,18 +976,18 @@ label chapter_4:
show dimmer_light behind anon, fang with dissolve
I "I-{w=.1}I,{w=.4} what did Fang mean by that?{w=.6} It all just came out of nowhere -{w=.4} I mean jeez-"
"I-{w=.1}I,{w=.4} what did Fang mean by that?{w=.6} It all just came out of nowhere -{w=.4} I mean jeez-"
I "Were talking about how she cant get friends and now she wants to know about THAT{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"Were talking about how she cant get friends and now she wants to know about THAT{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
I "Oh God.{w=.5} Im getting hot."
"Oh God.{w=.5} Im getting hot."
pause .5
I "Its Trish.{w=.6} Trish told Fang{w=.3} and now she knows everything."
"Its Trish.{w=.6} Trish told Fang{w=.3} and now she knows everything."
pause .5
I "Play dumb?{w=.5} Hopefully that will work."
"Play dumb?{w=.5} Hopefully that will work."
hide dimmer_light with dissolve
@ -1008,7 +1009,7 @@ label chapter_4:
show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Anon,{w=.4} what is there TO understand?"
I "Shes laughing."
"Shes laughing."
pause .5
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -1035,7 +1036,7 @@ label chapter_4:
A "Whatever you say,{w=.3} Fang."
show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
I "With a roll of her eyes she returns to scrolling through her phone again.{w=.6} I seriously wonder now what she meant."
"With a roll of her eyes she returns to scrolling through her phone again.{w=.6} I seriously wonder now what she meant."
stop music fadeout 3
pause .25
@ -1054,46 +1055,46 @@ label chapter_4:
hide fang with dissolve
pause .5
I "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
"{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
show dimmer_darker behind anon with Dissolve(.25)
play music 'audio/OST/you can_t sage here.ogg'
pause .25
I "She knows."
"She knows."
pause .5
I "But how?!"
"But how?!"
pause .5
show anon:
easein_cubic 0.75 xalign 0.6
pause .5
I "She left her phone on the desk."
"She left her phone on the desk."
I "I can see the imprint of the password being illuminated by the rooms lamps"
"I can see the imprint of the password being illuminated by the rooms lamps"
pause .5
show anon neutral flip with dissolve
I "It{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} It wouldnt be right."
"It{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} It wouldnt be right."
pause .5
show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I have to know."
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I have to know."
I "I reach over to pick up the phone."
"I reach over to pick up the phone."
pause .5
I "Some movement in the corner of my eye solidifies me."
"Some movement in the corner of my eye solidifies me."
show reed king rex behind anon:
yalign 0.1 xalign -1.2
show dimmer_light behind anon, reed
with Dissolve(2)
I "{i}Whys Reed still here{/i}?!"
"{i}Whys Reed still here{/i}?!"
pause .5
Re "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
@ -1104,7 +1105,7 @@ label chapter_4:
Re "{cps=*.05}...{/cps} {cps=*.2}{i}*snrrrk*{/i}{/cps}"
pause .5
I "Oh thank Raptor Jesus.{w=.5} Hes asleep."
"Oh thank Raptor Jesus.{w=.5} Hes asleep."
play ambient 'audio/effects/classroomLoop.ogg' fadein 3
hide dimmer_light
@ -1113,52 +1114,52 @@ label chapter_4:
with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
I "Fangs password is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"Fangs password is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
I "Wait,{w=.4} only the one key is smudged?"
"Wait,{w=.4} only the one key is smudged?"
I "I guess its worked until now{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"I guess its worked until now{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
I "Ah,{w=.4} the messenger app."
"Ah,{w=.4} the messenger app."
#TODO: IMPLEMENT MESSAGING GUI
#do we even have time for this?
#maybe this will be a post release update
#lmao as if
#--refer to Writer1 for the entirety of the texting part as he wants it to be more interactive.
I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Theres surprisingly not a lot."
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Theres surprisingly not a lot."
I "Seems they interact mostly in person."
"Seems they interact mostly in person."
pause .5
I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What did I even just accomplish?"
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What did I even just accomplish?"
I "I shouldnt have looked."
"I shouldnt have looked."
I "All because of my paranoia{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I just violated someones privacy."
"All because of my paranoia{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I just violated someones privacy."
show anon sad with dissolve
I "I can feel a pit open in my stomach."
"I can feel a pit open in my stomach."
I "I shouldn't have done it."
"I shouldn't have done it."
I "Trish is Fangs friend.{w=.5} Not me."
"Trish is Fangs friend.{w=.5} Not me."
pause .5
I "God damn it,{w=.2} Anon.{w=.5} The fuck is wrong with you."
"God damn it,{w=.2} Anon.{w=.5} The fuck is wrong with you."
show anon neutral with dissolve
I "I set the phone back where it was."
"I set the phone back where it was."
I "A glance back at Reed and I confirm that hes still unconscious."
"A glance back at Reed and I confirm that hes still unconscious."
pause .5
stop ambient fadeout 2
play music 'audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg'
I "Whats another secret to keep?"
"Whats another secret to keep?"
I "Each one just building on the last,{w=.5} the growing maw in my gut threatens to make me violently ill."
"Each one just building on the last,{w=.5} the growing maw in my gut threatens to make me violently ill."
pause .5
show fang neutral:
@ -1179,16 +1180,16 @@ label chapter_4:
show fang neutral flip
with dissolve
I "Im startled as Fang retakes her seat."
"Im startled as Fang retakes her seat."
pause .5
F "Did you manage to do {i}anything{/i} on the sheet?"
pause .25
I "I simply shake my head as I show her the incomplete worksheet."
"I simply shake my head as I show her the incomplete worksheet."
show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
I "Fang sighs frustratedly."
"Fang sighs frustratedly."
pause .5
A "Look if Im being a bother-"
@ -1196,20 +1197,20 @@ label chapter_4:
show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Its simple you dweeb."
I "Fang began breaking down the questions,{w=.4} her tone less condescending than when we initially started."
"Fang began breaking down the questions,{w=.4} her tone less condescending than when we initially started."
I "The way she explained it was infinitely better than how Mr. Jingo did at the start of class."
"The way she explained it was infinitely better than how Mr. Jingo did at the start of class."
pause .5
I "Over time the sheet was slowly filled in,{w=.4} things finally starting to click now."
"Over time the sheet was slowly filled in,{w=.4} things finally starting to click now."
show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Looks like you got the hang of this bit.{w=.5} Good job,{w=.3} dork."
I "Fang smirks a bit."
"Fang smirks a bit."
pause .5
I "I see a chance to strike."
"I see a chance to strike."
pause .5
A "Helps to have an actual decent teacher."
@ -1217,13 +1218,13 @@ label chapter_4:
show fang:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.05
show fang surprised flip with dissolve
I "The slight red tint tells me I was right on the mark."
"The slight red tint tells me I was right on the mark."
I "Theres also the steady *thump{w=.2} thump{w=.2} thump*{w=.2} of her tail on the back of her seat to clue me in.{w=.6} I cant help thinking of tugging on the appendage."
"Theres also the steady *thump{w=.2} thump{w=.2} thump*{w=.2} of her tail on the back of her seat to clue me in.{w=.6} I cant help thinking of tugging on the appendage."
I "Wait,{w=.4} the thumping."
"Wait,{w=.4} the thumping."
I "*Thump thump{cps=*.1}...{/cps} thump thump thump{cps=*.1}...{/cps} thump thump{cps=*.1}...{/cps} thump thump thump*"
"*Thump thump{cps=*.1}...{/cps} thump thump thump{cps=*.1}...{/cps} thump thump{cps=*.1}...{/cps} thump thump thump*"
pause .5
A "Hey uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Is your tail drumming right now?"
@ -1240,7 +1241,7 @@ label chapter_4:
F "Maybe,{w=.3} maybe not.{w=.6} Are you done with the packet yet?"
pause .5
I "I groan."
"I groan."
pause .5
A "Still got half a page left."
@ -1251,7 +1252,7 @@ label chapter_4:
A "I know,{w=.3} I know."
pause .5
I "I have to resort to good ol logic to solve the crossword.{w=.4} The longest and shortest words are easy enough to figure out."
"I have to resort to good ol logic to solve the crossword.{w=.4} The longest and shortest words are easy enough to figure out."
pause .5
A "But,{w=.2} uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -1265,7 +1266,7 @@ label chapter_4:
show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Uhh yeah.{w=.4} Sure."
I "Theres that red tint again."
"Theres that red tint again."
F "Ill help again{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} {nw}"
show fang unimpressed flip
@ -1279,28 +1280,28 @@ label chapter_4:
stop music fadeout 1
play sound 'audio/effects/schoolBell.ogg'
I "{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.7}DONG {w=0.65}BING-{w=0.7}BONG{/i}{/cps}"
"{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.7}DONG {w=0.65}BING-{w=0.7}BONG{/i}{/cps}"
pause 0.5
play music 'audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg' fadein 1.0
stop sound fadeout 1
I "Thats the bell telling us to piss off to the last period.{w=.5} Crap,{w=.3} I still got a few words left."
"Thats the bell telling us to piss off to the last period.{w=.5} Crap,{w=.3} I still got a few words left."
pause .5
scene black with Fade(1, 0, 1)
I "I guess the last few words and rush over to the teachers desk to turn it in.{w=.6} When I turn back I catch sight of Fang leaving the room in a hurry,{w=.4} tail between her legs."
"I guess the last few words and rush over to the teachers desk to turn it in.{w=.6} When I turn back I catch sight of Fang leaving the room in a hurry,{w=.4} tail between her legs."
pause .5
Nas "{i}{cps=*.6}Shes not that bad once you get to know her.{/cps}{/i}"
stop music fadeout 3
pause .5
I "Guess he was right after all."
"Guess he was right after all."
pause 1
I "God,{w=.4} I feel like a jerk now."
"God,{w=.4} I feel like a jerk now."
I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
return

File diff suppressed because it is too large Load Diff