rework concert disaster & subsequent run in with Spears
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@ -942,7 +942,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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Nas "I did."
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"I take a box down from the stack. Others have already started stacking their plates."
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"I take a box down from the stack.{w=0.3} Others have already started stacking their plates."
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"I check the logo on the box."
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@ -974,6 +974,8 @@ label chapter_1:
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"I lean against the wall, chewing bits of supreme and observing the rest of the crowd."
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show dimmer_light behind anon with dissolve
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unknown "{cps=*0.6}-nother shitshow-{/cps}"
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unknown "{cps=*0.6}She’s so stupid-{/cps}"
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@ -982,6 +984,8 @@ label chapter_1:
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unknown "{cps=*0.6}Bunch of losers-{/cps}"
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hide dimmer_light with dissolve
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"Everyone seems to share the same sentiment."
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"So why the hell did they even show up for this?"
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@ -1004,13 +1008,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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Nas "{i}What?!{/i}{fast}"
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# show anon neutral at acenter with move
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# show anon neutral flip at aright with move
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# show naser angry flip at ncenter with dissolve
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# show naser angry flip at sleft with move
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# ANGERY dinosaurs vibrating at incredible high speed
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# VERY angry dinosaur vibrating at incredible high speed
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show naser angry flip:
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linear 0.05 xalign 0.595
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linear 0.05 xalign 0.605
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@ -1067,7 +1065,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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Nas "Fa-{w=0.5}{nw}"
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window hide
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with hpunch
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with hpunch # TODO: some crash / crack SFX would punctuate these interruptions, think AA
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"The voice on the other end is loud and shrill."
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@ -1094,7 +1092,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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show naser neutral with Dissolve(0.25)
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Nas "Look,{w=0.4} whatever happens{w=0.3} promise you won’t hold this against them."
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Nas "Look,{w=0.5} whatever happens{w=0.3} promise you won’t hold this against them."
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Nas "They're actually a really a nice person once you get to know them"
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@ -1110,61 +1108,63 @@ label chapter_1:
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hide naser with Dissolve(1.5)
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"I enter the hall and take a seat in the back, away from the rest of the crowd."
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"I enter the hall and take a seat in the back,{w=0.3} away from the rest of the crowd."
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scene black with fade
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"The lights dim and the curtains are drawn open."
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stop music fadeout 1.0
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stop music fadeout 1.0 # TODO: was there meant to be music playing before this?
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scene fang band playing with fade
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scene fang band playing with Dissolve(2.0)
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"Onstage is a trio of people my age."
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"I think Fang is the drummer? He doesn’t look related to Naser, maybe it is the main front-woman?"
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"I think Fang is the drummer?{w=0.5} He doesn’t look related to Naser,{w=0.4} maybe it is the main front-woman?"
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"That must be Naser’s sister."
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A "Wh-"
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"Then why the whole confusion over her sex? For fuck’s sake."
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"Then why the whole confusion over her sex?{w=0.4} For fuck’s sake."
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"I’m just getting thrown around today. I don’t know."
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"I’m just getting thrown around today.{w=0.5} I don’t know."
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"She looks familiar."
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"The band doesn’t bother introducing themselves."
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play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg'
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"Instead the purple one begins plucking her bass."
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"It all went tumbling down from there."
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"What I thought was a guitar sounded horrifically wrong, far too heavy."
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"What I thought was a guitar sounded horrifically wrong,{w=0.5} far too heavy."
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"The lead guitarist was using a fucking bass."
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"And then the vocals kicked in."
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"It’s horrific screeching, combined with the amelodious shredding on a bass created a cacophony equal to hundreds of cats ritualistically sacrificed."
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"It’s horrific screeching,{w=0.3} combined with the amelodious shredding on a bass created a cacophony equal to hundreds of cats ritualistically sacrificed."
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"I fight the urge to cover my ears."
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"I don’t know too much about music, but even I know that you don’t use two basses in one band unless you know exactly what you’re doing."
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"I don’t know too much about music,{w=0.4} but even I know that you don’t use two basses in one band unless you know exactly what you’re doing."
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"Ooooooh nooooooo."
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"{cps=*0.4}Ooooooh nooooooo.{/cps}"
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"Ooooooooh God."
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"{cps=*0.5}Ooooooooh{/cps} God."
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"What were they thinking?!"
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"What were they thinking?!{fast}" with vpunch
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"I looked back to the crowd to gauge their interest."
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"Surely I’m not alone in thinking this is an absolute travesty."
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unknown "PFFFT AHAHAHA THEY STILL FUCKING SUCK!!"
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play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' volume 1.5 fadein 2.0
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#(In-CG insult layers)
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window hide
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$ i = 0
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@ -1175,34 +1175,37 @@ label chapter_1:
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#(In-CG insult layers)
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"The crowd was standing, jeering and laughing with whoever said that."
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"The crowd was standing,{w=0.3} jeering and laughing with whoever said that."
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"More words were said but the laughter eclipsed them and the music."
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"Wait, what happened to the music?"
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"Wait,{w=0.4} what happened to the music?"
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"On-stage, the trio looked panicked."
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"On-stage,{w=0.3} the trio looked panicked."
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"The drummer was inching off stage, while the purple bassist was about to break down into tears."
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"The drummer was inching off stage,{w=0.4} while the purple bassist was about to break down into tears."
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"But the frontwoman stood there. Stood her ground."
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"But the frontwoman stood there.{w=0.7} Stood her ground."
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#(In-CG insult layers)
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window hide
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$ showCG()
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#(In-CG insult layers)
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scene fang band screaming
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scene fang band screaming with vpunch
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unknown "FUCK YOU!"
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unknown "{b}FUCK YOU!{/b}{fast}"
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"She tossed her bass aside, raising both hands and proudly displaying a finger on each of them."
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"She tossed her bass aside,{w=0.3} raising both hands and proudly displaying a finger on each of them."
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unknown "FUCK ALL OF YOU!"
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unknown "NO ONE WOULD WANT TO FUCK YOU, BITCH!"
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window hide
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pause 0.5
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"Pffft… That struck a chord with her."
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unknown "NO ONE WOULD WANT TO FUCK YOU,{w=0.2} BITCH!"
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"Pffft{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}{w=0.2} That struck a chord with her."
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#(In-CG insult layers)
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$ i = i + 1
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#(In-CG insult layers)
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"I watch as she grabs her bass and takes the arm of the purple one, rushing off stage with the pink drummer."
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"I watch as she grabs her bass and takes the arm of the purple one,{w=0.3} rushing off stage with the pink drummer."
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scene black with fade
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pause 1
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$ i = i + 1
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"Oh God I can’t take this, I’m gonna grow a 6 pack from laughing so much, I’m just gonna grab my pizza and leave"
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"Oh God I can’t take this,{w=0.3} I’m gonna grow a 6 pack from laughing so much,{w=0.5} I’m just gonna grab my pizza and leave"
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stop ambient fadeout 2.0
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scene auditorium
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show anon neutral flip at aright
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show spears neutral at sleft
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show dimmer_darker behind anon, spears
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with fade
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"I turn towards the door and see Principal Spears, a fierce glare freezing me in place."
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Sp "Anon."
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"I turn towards the door and see Principal Spears,{w=0.4} a fierce glare freezing me in place."
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"Oh fuck"
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Sp "Anon.{fast}"
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"{cps=*0.2}Oh fuck{/cps}"
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"His voice is even more stern than this morning."
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Sp "I don’t want to hear about any of this come tomorrow."
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Sp "I expect some goddamned maturity from you, Anon."
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Sp "I expect some goddamned maturity from you,{w=0.2} Anon."
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Sp "You’ll be an adult once you graduate."
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A "Uh… Why me though?"
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A "Uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.3} Why me though?"
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Sp "I’ve taught many students, and I can tell these things."
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Sp "I’ve taught many students,{w=0.4} and I can tell these things."
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show anon fear flip
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show spears:
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easein_quart 1.0 xalign 0.5
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"His hand lands on my shoulder."
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"It’s grip was firm as it weighed on me."
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Sp "Listen here, Anon. You are not the only person in the world."
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show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(1)
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Sp "Listen here,{w=0.2} Anon.{w=0.7} {cps=*0.5}You are not the only person in the world.{/cps}"
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Sp "Everyone’s fighting their own battles."
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"The hand squeezes before pushing me towards the door."
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show anon neutral at aright
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show anon neutral at aright with Dissolve(0.25)
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show spears:
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xalign 0.6
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show anon:
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xalign 1.1
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with MoveTransition(0.5, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
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Sp "I want to see you in my office first thing tomorrow."
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Sp "Now get out of here, this is the only warning that you’ll get from me."
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Sp "Now get out of here,{w=0.4} this is the only warning that you’ll get from me."
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Sp "Next time it will be campus clean-up."
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stop audio
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stop music fadeout 0.5
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hide anon with Dissolve(1)
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show spears neutral flip with Dissolve(0.25)
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stop sound
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stop music
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"Behind me the principal’s voice shakes the room."
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show spears angry with dissolve
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show spears angry flip with vpunch
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Sp "WHOSE SORRY ASS AM I GOING TO HAVE TO SUPLEX!"
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Sp "{b}WHOSE SORRY ASS AM I GOING TO HAVE TO SUPLEX!{/b}" # TODO: suitable SFX
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scene hallway with dissolve
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show anon neutral at aleft
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