rework ch3 Naser exhaustion scene
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label chapter_3:
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scene black with fade
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# SCENE 1 - Weapons of mass distraction
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play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg'
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play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg' fadein 1
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scene black with fade
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"{cps=*0.2}-- One Week Later --{/cps}"
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scene classroom with fade
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@ -22,18 +23,19 @@ label chapter_3:
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"I don't even bother attempting the assignment,{w=.4} instead pretending my phone is a calculator and spending the first half shitposting about video games I haven’t played online."
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stop music fadeout 2
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"The second half,{w=.4} interrupted by something pointy to the back of the dome."
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pause .5
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"*sshk*"
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pause .5
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"I can feel something stuck between my chair and my back."
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play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg' fadein 1.0
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"I fish around and pull out a crumpled paper airplane,{w=.4} a completed set of problems."
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pause .5
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play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg' fadein 1.0
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"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}this is Reed's.{w=.4} And it's{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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"...done?{w=.5} Even the extra problems that I don't even bother with because they take another ten minutes each."
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@ -146,7 +148,7 @@ label chapter_3:
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"The tiny triceratops rolled her eyes dramatically."
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show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
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T "Fang.{w=.4} Fang’s been talkin’ bout you."
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T "Fang.{w=.5} Fang’s been talkin’ bout you."
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pause .5
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A "All good things,{w=.3} I’m sure."
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scene black with fade
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"..."
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"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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# SCENE 2 - I can't believe Naser is fucking dead
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play music 'audio/OST/The Top of the Social Ladder.ogg' fadein 2
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scene cafeteria
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show anon neutral at aleft
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show naomi neutral flip at scenter
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show naser neutral flip at nright
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show cafeteria
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play music 'audio/OST/The Top of the Social Ladder.ogg'
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show naser unimpressed flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1
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with Fade(0,.5,1.5)
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pause .5
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"Naser ended up dragging me to sit with him and the magenta motormouth again."
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"Naomi hovers over Naser, who currently has Gucci under his eyes."
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Nas "So, I uh… Talked to the soccer team earlier."
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"Naomi hovers over Naser,{w=.4} who currently has Gucci under his eyes."
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pause .5
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Nas "So,{w=.3} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Talked to the soccer team earlier."
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Nas "They’re going to make the first game after all."
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N "Isn’t that great, Anon?"
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A "..."
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Nas "I also… Got the L&L Club to finally take down their christmas decorations…"
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Nas "So… The library’s clean again…"
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"Naser’s head lands in his chicken salad, then he jerks wide awake."
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show naomi shocked flip
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show naomi explanatory flip
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N "Isn’t that great,{w=.2} Anon?"
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show naomi neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
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A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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show naser:
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ease 1.5 xalign 1.125
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ease 1.5 xalign 1.075
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repeat
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Nas "I also{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Got the L&L Club to finally take down their christmas decorations{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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Nas "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} The library’s clean again{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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pause .5
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show naser:
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easeout_quart 1 yalign -0.15 xalign 1.05
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pause .5
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"Naser’s head lands in his chicken salad,{w=.4} then he jerks wide awake."
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show naomi behind anon:
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easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.45
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show naomi shocked with Dissolve(.25)
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pause .5
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show naomi:
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easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.55
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N "NASER!"
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show naser shocked flip
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show naser behind naomi:
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easein_elastic 0.5 yalign 0.1 xalign 1.2
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play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg'
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show naser shocked flip with Dissolve(.1)
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with vpunch
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Nas "OH GOOD LORD NOT THE WATER-"
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A "..."
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show naser sad flip
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Nas "Ugh… Sorry."
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Nas "...Did you say something, Anon?"
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show naomi unimpressed flip
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A "Naser, you look like you fell into another blender."
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A "What’s going on, big guy?"
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Nas "Don’t worry about it…"
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Nas "Just some… Family problems last night…"
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pause .5
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A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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show naser sad flip with Dissolve(1)
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Nas "Ugh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Sorry."
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show naomi sad with Dissolve(.25)
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pause .25
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show naser unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
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Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Did you say something,{w=.2} Anon?"
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A "Naser,{w=.4} you look like you fell into another blender."
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show naomi behind naser:
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easein 0.75 xalign 0.6
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show naomi unimpressed flip with dissolve
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pause .5
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A "What’s going on,{w=.2} big guy?"
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pause .5
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Nas "Don’t worry about it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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Nas "Just some{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Family problems last night{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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A "Like what?"
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Nas "Ugh…"
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N "You don’t have to tell him if you don’t want to, dear."
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show naomi happy flip with dissolve
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pause .25
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show naser sad flip with Dissolve(.25)
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Nas "Ugh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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show naomi considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
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N "You don’t have to tell him if you don’t want to,{w=.2} dear."
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show naomi:
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easein 0.5 xalign 0.58
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show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25)
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N "Why don’t you wipe that alfredo sauce off your cute little face."
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"She’s so saccharine she’d give a third world country diabetes"
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Nas "It’s my sister again…"
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pause .5
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Nas "It’s my sister again{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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"Why is it always his sister with him?"
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show naomi unimpressed flip
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N "Aww…"
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Nas "I was going to sleep last night, when I heard something downstairs."
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"...When did this turn into an interrogation?"
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Nas "It was about one or two in the morning. I checked what it was, and…"
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Nas "Fang was just, standing in front of the microwave."
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show naomi sad with dissolve
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N "Aww{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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Nas "I was going to sleep last night,{w=.3} when I heard something downstairs."
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"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}When did this turn into an interrogation?"
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show naser unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
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Nas "It was about one or two in the morning.{w=.5} I checked what it was,{w=.3} and{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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show naser sad flip with Dissolve(.25)
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Nas "Fang was just,{w=.5} standing in front of the microwave."
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show naomi unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
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Nas "Staring at the dino nuggets rotate inside."
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pause .5
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"At one in the morning?"
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pause .5
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Nas "At one in the morning."
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show naomi neutral flip
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N "This is a personal issue, isn’t it?"
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N "Wouldn’t you rather just be enjoying lunch with us?"
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Nas "I just need advice from someone at this point, Naomi."
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show naomi sad with Dissolve(.25)
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N "This is a personal issue,{w=.4} isn’t it?"
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show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
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N "Wouldn’t you rather just be {nw}"
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show naomi:
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ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
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ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
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extend "enjoying lunch with us?"
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pause .5
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Nas "I just need advice from someone at this point,{w=.4} Naomi."
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show naomi considering with Dissolve(.25)
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N "But from Anon?"
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A "But from me?"
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show naomi considering flip
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"Naser continues."
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Nas "I asked her what she was doing, and she just…"
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Nas "Just says ‘fuck off…’, so I think ‘maybe dad will help’."
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Nas "...He didn’t."
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Nas "...They just got into a shouting match."
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Nas "I asked her what she was doing,{w=.4} and she just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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show naser unimpressed flip
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Nas "Just says 'fuck off...',{w=.4} so I think 'maybe dad will help'."
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show naser sad flip
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Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}He didn’t."
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Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}They just got into a shouting match."
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Nas "Screamin’ bout her lack of control an’ dad was pissed an’-"
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show naomi sad flip
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show naser behind naomi
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show naomi:
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easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.675
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show naomi sad with Dissolve(.25)
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N "Poor baby."
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"Naomi wraps her arms around Naser’s head, cradling the tired pterosaur in her bosom."
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"Naomi wraps her arms around Naser’s head,{w=.4} cradling the tired pterosaur in her bosom."
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show naser unimpressed flip with dissolve
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show naser:
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easeout_quart 1 xalign 1.3 yalign -0.3
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pause .5
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hide naser with dissolve
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play sound 'audio/effects/anonHeadbutt.ogg'
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with vpunch
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"There’s a rumbling snore and it’s clear that Naser has checked out."
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A "...Riiiiiiiight…"
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A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{cps=*.5}Riiiiiiiight{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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pause .5
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"Naomi looks distraught."
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N "He’s always like this…"
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N "But it’s been getting worse recently..."
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N "He’s always like this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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N "But it’s been getting worse recently{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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pause .5
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A "Going unconscious?"
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N "Trying to help. Wearing himself ragged."
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N "That Fang…"
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show naomi considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
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N "Trying to help.{w=.5} Wearing himself ragged."
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show naomi unimpressed flip with dissolve
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N "That Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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pause .5
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show naomi sad flip with Dissolve(.25)
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N "We should help Naser."
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A "What, by talking to Fang?"
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A "What,{w=.4} by talking to Fang?"
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N "By taking him to the nurses office."
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pause .5
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"Ah fuck."
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"Naomi looks at me with the biggest, wettest doe eyes possible."
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A "Alright alright. He doesn’t look that heavy anyway."
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show dimmer_darker behind anon, naomi:
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alpha 0.0
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linear 2.5 alpha 1
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show naomi:
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easein 2 xalign 0.625
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pause .25
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"Naomi looks at me with the biggest,{w=.4} wettest doe eyes possible."
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hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(.2)
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A "Alright alright.{w=.4} He doesn’t look that heavy anyway."
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N "Only a hundred and sixty pounds."
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A "How do you- nevermind."
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A "How do you-{w=.4} nevermind."
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scene black with fade
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"Naomi puts herself under Naser’s left arm, motioning me to take the other one."
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"Naomi puts herself under Naser’s left arm,{w=.4} motioning me to take the other one."
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"I sling his arm around my back and-"
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"GOOD LORD HE’S HEAVY."
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N "Alright, the Nurses’ Office is down the main hall on the left side, near the front desk."
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play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
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"GOOD LORD HE’S HEAVY." with vpunch
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pause .5
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N "Alright,{w=.4} the Nurses’ Office is down the main hall on the left side,{w=.4} near the front desk."
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stop music fadeout 1.0
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"I’m clenching my face too much to be able to speak, I can only get a slight nod out."
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"..."
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"I’m clenching my face too much to be able to speak,{w=.4} I can only get a slight nod out."
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"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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pause .5
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# SCENE 3 - Steganography
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scene hallway with fade
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"After dropping Naser at the nurse and leaving before Naomi could argue with her about staying, the lunch bell rings."
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"With music at the ass end of the campus I have to sprint through the halls."
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