rework ch4 opening scene, add new cafeteria ambience
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@ -680,12 +680,11 @@ label chapter_3:
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play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
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I "GOOD LORD HE’S HEAVY." with vpunch
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stop music fadeout 2
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pause .5
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N "Alright,{w=.4} the Nurses’ Office is down the main hall on the left side,{w=.4} near the front desk."
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stop music fadeout 1.0
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I "I’m clenching my face too much to be able to speak,{w=.4} I can only get a slight nod out."
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I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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@ -742,8 +741,7 @@ label chapter_3:
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show anon:
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alpha 1 yalign 0.1
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unknown "{cps=*.3}Judgement{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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unknown "{cps=*.25}Judgement{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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show anon:
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easein 0.5 xalign 0.8
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@ -754,7 +752,7 @@ label chapter_3:
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show stella:
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easein 1 xalign 0.35
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show stella considering with Dissolve(.25)
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unknown "Karma?{w=.6} No.{w=.6} No,{w=.4} maybe second chance?"
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unknown "Karma?{w=.6} No.{w=.75} No,{w=.4} maybe second chance?"
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I "She draws closer,{w=.4} a contemplative expression on her face."
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@ -782,10 +780,10 @@ label chapter_3:
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pause .5
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A "Still lost."
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pause .25
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pause .5
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show stella explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
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unknown "It’s you.{w=.6} Your card.{w=.6} You are on the precipice of a great ordeal.{w=.6} Many difficult points of divergence and contention are coming your way.{w=.6} Reflect on them."
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show stella explanatory
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unknown "It’s you.{w=.6} Your card.{w=.75} You are on the precipice of a great ordeal.{w=.6} Many difficult points of divergence and contention are coming your way.{w=.75} Reflect on them."
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show stella neutral with Dissolve(.25)
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I "I think about asking the green weirdo to make sense,{w=.4} but the bell is about to ring."
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@ -1021,6 +1019,7 @@ label chapter_3:
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# TODO: cheesy record scratch?
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stop music fadeout 0.1
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play ambient 'audio/effects/classroomLoop.ogg' fadein 1
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I "Uhp"
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@ -1032,7 +1031,8 @@ label chapter_3:
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show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
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F "What was that?"
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pause .5
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stop ambient fadeout 1
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play music 'audio/OST/fighter.ogg' fadein 1.0
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A "{cps=*.2}Nuthin’{/cps}"
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@ -1383,6 +1383,7 @@ label chapter_3:
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I "I don’t know what just happened."
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# TODO: this track doesn't loop very gracefully
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play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' fadein 2
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pause .5
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show anon sad
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@ -1934,7 +1935,7 @@ label chapter_3:
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show trish surprised flip with Dissolve(.25)
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T "We what?!{w=.5} {nw}"
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show trish unimpressed flip
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extend "Fang,{w=.4} from him!"
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extend "Fang,{w=.4} from him?"
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# temporarily commented out due to script document disparity
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# Re "Like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} He’s alright but{cps=*.1}...{/cps} like, for real?"
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@ -1,13 +1,11 @@
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label chapter_4:
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#Music class
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play music 'audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg' fadein 2
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# CH 4 SCENE 1 - Anon is one slice of toast away from living an anime
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pause 1
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I "-- The Following Monday Morning --"
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pause .5
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scene outside school fog with Fade(0,0,2)
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play music 'audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg' fadein 2
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scene outside school fog with Fade(1,0,1)
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I "{cps=*.3}-- The Following Monday Morning --{/cps}"
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pause .5
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I "I haven’t been able to focus much lately."
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@ -15,83 +13,160 @@ label chapter_4:
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I "My original plan is in absolute tatters."
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I "As opposed to staying silent and not facing any conflict, I’m now all buddy-buddy with the school reject club."
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I "As opposed to staying silent and not facing any conflict,{w=.4} I’m now all buddy-buddy with the school reject club."
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I "And then there’s Naser and Naomi as well, and all their issues…"
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I "And then there’s Naser and Naomi as well,{w=.4} and all their issues{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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pause .5
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I "At any moment I feel I’m going to get found out."
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I "At any moment I feel I'm going to get found out."
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I "Trish would certainly beat me senseless."
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I "Fang might as well…"
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I "Fang might as well{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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I "Definitely Naser."
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pause .5
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I "All this shit happening, I can’t even get into my favorite hobby."
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I "All this shit happening,{w=.4} I can’t even get into my favorite hobby."
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I "I don’t think I’ve made a single forum post in three days."
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pause .5
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I "I stare down at my phone screen and see a sea of threads to post in."
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I "And yet, I have nothing to say."
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I "And yet,{w=.4} I have nothing to say."
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pause .5
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I "Wait, it’s already seven?!"
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I "Wait,{w=.3} it’s already seven?!"
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I "Fuck me, I dragged my feet too much!"
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I "Fuck me,{w=.4} I dragged my feet too much!"
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I "I sprint the rest of the way to school."
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scene classroom with fade
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I "Luckily, I’m able to slink into homeroom without the teacher molesting me for a tardy pass."
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I "Classes tick by in the daily slog, and like all things, lunch eventually comes to pass."
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scene cafeteria with dissolve
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show anon neutral flip at sright
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I "I grab a packaged lunch from the omnivore line and begin looking for a place to sit."
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I "By now it’s a foregone conclusion, I already know what happens next."
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# TODO: play west coast kicking
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scene classroom with fade
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I "Luckily,{w=.3} I’m able to slink into homeroom without the teacher molesting me for a tardy pass."
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I "Classes tick by in the daily slog,{w=.4} and like all things,{w=.4} lunch eventually comes to pass."
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stop music fadeout 3
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play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCafeteriaLoop.ogg' fadein 2
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scene cafeteria
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show anon neutral at aright
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with fade
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I "I grab a packaged lunch from the omnivore line and begin looking for a place to sit."
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I "By now it’s a foregone conclusion,{w=.4} I already know what happens next."
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pause .25
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stop ambient fadeout 3
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play music 'audio/ost/west_coast_kicking.ogg' fadein 1
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pause .5
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N "Anon!"
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pause .5
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I "Right on cue."
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show naomi neutral at sleft with moveinleft
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show naser neutral behind nanomi with moveinleft:
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xalign 0.25 yalign -0.0
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I "Naomi rushes over, followed by Naser. I’d really rather not deal with her anymore today."
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N "Come on, Anon, let's continue our conversation from earlier!"
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I "I need to think of something, and fast."
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A "Err, sorry. I already promised Fang I’d be eating with her."
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show anon neutral flip with dissolve
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show naomi neutral:
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yalign 0.0 xalign -0.75
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show naomi:
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easein 1 xalign 0.4
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with dissolve
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show naser neutral:
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yalign 0.1 xalign -1
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show naser:
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easein 1.5 xalign -0.275
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with dissolve
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I "Naomi rushes over,{w=.4} followed by Naser.{w=.6} I’d really rather not deal with her anymore today."
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show naomi explanatory
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N "Come on,{w=.2} Anon,{w=.4} let's continue our conversation from earlier!"
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show naomi neutral
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I "I need to think of something,{w=.4} and fast."
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A "Err,{w=.3} sorry.{w=.4} I already promised Fang I’d be eating with her."
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pause .5
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I "Smooth."
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N "Oh..."
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I "Oh!"
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I "I’m glad to hear you’re trying to be better friends with Fang!"
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Nas "Well hey, this is a welcome surprise!"
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A "Right. Actually, she doesn’t eat in the cafeteria, does she?"
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Nas "Didn’t she tell you? She hangs out with her band in the auditorium."
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pause .25
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show naomi considering with Dissolve(.25)
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N "Oh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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show naomi neutral
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N "Oh!"
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show naomi explanatory
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N "I’m glad to hear you’re trying to be better friends with Fang!"
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show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
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show naser happy
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Nas "Well hey,{w=.4} this is a welcome surprise!"
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A "Right.{w=.4} Actually,{w=.2} she doesn’t eat in the cafeteria,{w=.4} does she?"
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show naser neutral
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Nas "Didn’t she tell you?{w=.4} She hangs out with her band in the auditorium."
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A "She’s allowed to do that?"
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N "I’ve asked Principal Spears before, he sees no issue with it."
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A "Huh. Anyways, I uh… Don’t want to keep them waiting!"
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show naser considering
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N "I’ve asked Principal Spears before,{w=.4} he sees no issue with it."
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A "Huh.{w=.4} Anyways,{w=.2} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Don’t want to keep them waiting!"
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show naser happy
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Nas "See you."
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show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25)
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show naomi:
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ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
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ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
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N "Have fun!"
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A "Right. Bye!"
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hide naser with moveoutleft
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hide naomi with moveoutleft
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I "I turn away from the two and leave them behind in the cafeteria."
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pause .5
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A "Right.{w=.3} Bye!"
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show anon:
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easeout 1 xalign 1.5
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pause .1
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show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
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hide anon with dissolve
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I "I turn away from the two and leave them behind."
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# TODO: scene door auditorium
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scene auditorium
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I "Now that i’m in front of the auditorium when it isn’t crowded for once, I can get a decent look around the foyer."
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I "The walls are as vine-covered as anywhere else in the building, but the ones here have small magenta flowers blooming on them here and there."
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I "I suppose there’s different kinds of vines, wouldn’t make much sense otherwise. Never really thought about it until now."
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I "I peer into the small window in the door to see Fang’s gang lazing about within. Reed is messing with some box on a table, and Fang and Trish are sitting on the first row of seats chattering to each other."
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I "I put my hand on the doorhandle and hesitate a bit. Then I pull it open."
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scene door auditorium with fade
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# TODO: scene auditorium
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I "Now that i’m in front of the auditorium when it isn’t crowded for once,{w=.4} I can get a decent look around the foyer."
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I "The walls are as vine-covered as anywhere else in the building,{w=.4} but the ones here have small magenta flowers blooming on them here and there."
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I "I suppose there’s different kinds of vines,{w=.4} wouldn’t make much sense otherwise.{w=.5} Never really thought about it until now."
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pause .5
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I "I open the door enough to see Fang’s gang lazing about within."
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I "Reed is messing with some box on a table,{w=.4} and Fang and Trish are sitting on the first row of seats chattering to each other."
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stop music fadeout 3
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I "I put my hand on the doorhandle and hesitate a bit.{w=.4} Then I pull it open."
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# CH 4 SCENE 2 -
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scene auditorium with Dissolve(1)
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I "The squeak of the door echoes through the near empty auditorium, and immediately all three turn their heads and stare."
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I "There’s an awkward pause that goes on for just a bit too long. Eventually Fang calls out from her seat."
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show fang shocked at scenter with dissolve
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# TODO: sound direction says play She Fucks Human Men, resolve this
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I "Define a Treble clef? I don’t know what a Treble clef is! I don’t care about this shit, it won’t ever be useful."
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I "Fuck this, who can I cheat off of?"
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I "I lean back in my uncomfortable chair hoping to pop my spine back in place."
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N "{i}Oh! What if you asked Fang for help?{/i}"
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N "{i}Oh! What if you asked Fang for help?{/i}" # TODO: is this from a previous line? If so can't find it
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I "I crane my head, looking for Fang. At her own desk she’s filling out her assignment page easily, drumming her fingers on her desk. Almost looks like she’s strumming honestly."
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I "Agh, and that’s another thing. Who the fuck made guitars?! Fuck trying to memorize frets or whatever the fuck."
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I "Oh shit, she’s looking at me now."
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