merge both routes through Spear's office into one with the appropriate dialogue variation, rework Spear's office scene

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Bowie 2021-06-26 13:51:28 +01:00
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@ -1067,7 +1067,7 @@ label chapter_1:
Nas "Fa-{w=0.6}{nw}"
window hide
with hpunch # TODO: some crash / crack SFX would punctuate these interruptions, think AA
with hpunch # TODO: some slapstick SFX would punctuate these interruptions
pause 0.7
@ -1489,10 +1489,14 @@ label chapter_1:
menu:
"Naser's a bro":
# affects dialogue with Spears when entering his office
$ late_to_spears = True
jump .naserBro
"I don't wanna piss off the caveman.":
$ late_to_spears = False
jump .pissOffCaveman
# Anon tries to find Naser before heading to Spear's office
label .naserBro:
"Principal caveman can wait.{w=0.4} I want to apologize to Naser about yesterday{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
@ -1782,11 +1786,11 @@ label chapter_1:
# hide naomi with easeoutright
hide naomi with Dissolve(1)
"Naomi huffs and returns her focus to a stack of papers on the desk, leaving a satisfied raptor in her wake."
"Naomi huffs and returns her focus to a stack of papers on the desk,{w=0.4} leaving a satisfied raptor in her wake."
show reed happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
Re "Heh,{w=0.4} works every time{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
Re "Heh,{w=0.4} {cps=*.5}works every time{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"I need to learn how to do that."
@ -1816,10 +1820,12 @@ label chapter_1:
N "Oh!{w=0.5} Anon,{w=0.3} I didnt see you there!"
show naomi neutral flip
show naomi happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
N "Just in time to finish your paperwork!"
show naomi neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
A "Paperwhatsit now?"
show naomi explanatory flip
@ -1832,147 +1838,11 @@ label chapter_1:
"Whatever.{w=0.6} Probably a detention slip or whatever the principal has planned."
scene office spears with dissolve
stop ambient fadeout 1
"I open the door to the cramped office, expecting to see a gruff cave of a workspace."
# Branch joins up again at Spear's office, with some small dialogue differences
jump .spears_office
"Instead, it was a fairly well furnished space complete with armchairs and cabinets of old photos."
show spears neutral flip at sright with dissolve
Sp "You going to stand there forever? What are you waiting for? Sit."
show anon neutral at aleft with moveinleft
"I plant myself in one of the armchairs and sink a bit lower into the cushion than expected."
"Perks of being a human, I guess."
Sp "I believe I told you last night to be here first thing this morning."
"Shit!"
Sp "Tell me, do I have a stutter?"
A "..."
Sp "Speak."
A "N-no, sir."
Sp "{i}*sigh…*{/i}"
Sp "Take this as a learning experience, Anon."
Sp "Punctuality gets you far in life."
A "Yes, sir."
Sp "I let you off the hook last night because youre a new student."
Sp "I meant what I said last night."
"Hopefully not about the whole pile driving thing."
Sp "Still, I didnt bring you in here to lecture you."
"He didnt?"
Sp "Not many people have to use the schools financial services."
A "What?"
A "Financial services?"
Sp "All the paperworks done to get you a special lunch card for the semester."
Sp "You dont have to worry about paying until after graduation. No interest, no down payments, none of that."
A "I uh… Whats happening, sir?"
Sp "You signed up for the financial services, correct?"
Sp "Naomi told me you needed help with food and even had the papers filed out."
"Naomi?!"
Sp "Allow me to double-check real fast."
Sp "NAOMI!!"
show naomi neutral at rleft behind spears with dissolve
play music 'audio/effects/Alarm.ogg'
"Hello tinnitus my old friend…"
N "...."
Sp "....."
"Oh god am I stuck like this?"
Sp "-dismissed Naomi. And just to be absolutely clear, Anon did ask you for this, correct?"
N "Well, he {i}is{/i} in need of assistance, right?"
N "Otherwise hes stuck with the budget meals."
Sp "Anon?"
"I glance between the two."
"It probably wasnt malicious, but still…"
"Im not getting involved in office politics today."
A "... Yes."
N "Oh, lovely!"
N "Dont hesitate to ask if you have any other prob-"
Sp "You may leave now, Naomi."
N "Oh! Yes sir!"
hide naomi with dissolve
"She leaves the office and Spears clicks the papers on his desk into a stack."
Sp "Hate to do that, but she goes on for ages."
Sp "Anyways, go ahead and sign here. Here. Here. Initial here. Date here. Print your name here."
"I didnt catch any of that."
A "W-what?"
Sp "Just kidding. Youre good to go, Anon, and dont forget this."
"He holds out the poorly laminated lunch card for me to take."
Sp "Just keep in mind,"
Sp "As a senior, this semester is your last, your biggest chance to figure your future out."
Sp "Even if youre new to all of us here at Volcano High, were here to help you make the most of it."
"Huh…"
A "Thank you, Mister Spears."
"Mr. Spears nods and gives a small smile."
Sp "You can come in anytime. Im always here to listen. Except for topics relating to estrus season."
"I sense great exhaustion in that last bit."
"I thank Mr. Spears one last time and head to homeroom."
"..."
scene black with fade
jump postCavemanConference
label .pissOffCaveman:
"Probably best I try and not make the principal pissed at me."
@ -2062,30 +1932,60 @@ label chapter_1:
A "Sure, thanks."
scene office spears with fade
label .spears_office:
scene office spears with fade
play music 'audio/OST/we just turned on the microphone in our programmers_ house.ogg'
"I open the door to the cramped office, expecting to see a gruff cave of a workspace."
"I open the door to the cramped office,{w=0.2} expecting to see a gruff cave of a workspace."
"Instead, it was a fairly well furnished space complete with armchairs and cabinets of old photos."
"Instead,{w=0.35} it was a fairly well furnished space complete with armchairs and cabinets of old photos."
show spears neutral flip at sright with dissolve
Sp "You going to stand there forever? What are you waiting for? Sit."
Sp "You going to stand there forever?{w=0.4} What are you waiting for?{w=0.5} Sit."
show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
"I plant myself in one of the armchairs and sink a bit lower into the cushion than expected."
"Perks of being a human, I guess."
Sp "Punctual like I asked. I like that, Anon."
if late_to_spears:
Sp "I trust that what happened last night wont become a recurring problem with you?"
Sp "I believe I told you last night to be here first thing this morning."
A "No, sir."
"Shit!"
Sp "Good. I meant what I said last night."
Sp "Tell me, do I have a stutter?"
A "..."
Sp "Speak."
A "N-no, sir."
Sp "{i}*sigh…*{/i}"
Sp "Take this as a learning experience, Anon."
Sp "Punctuality gets you far in life."
A "Yes, sir."
Sp "I let you off the hook last night because youre a new student."
Sp "I meant what I said last night."
else:
Sp "Punctual like I asked. I like that, Anon."
Sp "I trust that what happened last night wont become a recurring problem with you?"
A "No, sir."
Sp "Good. I meant what I said last night."
"Hopefully not about the whole pile driving thing."
@ -2113,76 +2013,136 @@ label chapter_1:
Sp "Allow me to double-check real fast."
Sp "NAOMI!!"
pause 0.75
show naomi neutral at rleft behind spears with dissolve
stop music
play ambient '<from 0.1 to 0.7>audio/effects/tinnitus.wav' fadein 4 volume 0.25
"Hello tinnitus my old friend…"
Sp "NAOMI!!" with vpunch
N "...."
pause 0.5
Sp "....."
show naomi neutral at rleft zorder 1 with easeinleft
pause 1.25
"Hello tinnitus my old friend{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
show naomi explanatory
N "{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}"
show naomi neutral
Sp "{cps=*0.2}......{/cps}"
show naomi considering
N "{cps=*0.2}....{/cps}"
show naomi neutral
Sp "{cps=*0.2}.....{/cps}"
"Oh god am I stuck like this?"
Sp "-dismissed Naomi. And just to be absolutely clear, Anon did ask you for this, correct?"
stop ambient fadeout 1
play music 'audio/OST/we just turned on the microphone in our programmers_ house.ogg' fadein 2
N "Well, he {i}is{/i} in need of assistance, right?"
Sp "-dismissed Naomi.{w=0.5} And just to be absolutely clear,{w=0.3} Anon did ask you for this,{w=0.4} correct?"
show naomi explanatory
N "Well,{w=0.4} he {i}is{/i} in need of assistance,{w=0.2} right?"
N "Otherwise hes stuck with the budget meals."
show naomi neutral
pause 0.5
Sp "Anon?"
"I glance between the two."
"It probably wasnt malicious, but still…"
"It probably wasnt malicious,{w=0.3} but still{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
"Im not getting involved in office politics today."
A "... Yes."
A "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} Yes."
N "Oh, lovely!"
show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25)
N "Dont hesitate to ask if you have any other prob-"
N "Oh,{w=0.2} lovely!"
Sp "You may leave now, Naomi."
N "{cps=*0.5}Dont hesitate to ask if you have any other prob-{/cps}{nw}"
N "Oh! Yes sir!"
Sp "You may leave now,{w=0.2} Naomi."
hide naomi with dissolve
show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
N "Oh!{w=0.2} Yes sir!"
hide naomi with Dissolve(1)
"She leaves the office and Spears clicks the papers on his desk into a stack."
Sp "Hate to do that, but she goes on for ages."
Sp "Hate to do that,{w=0.4} but she goes on for ages."
Sp "Anyways, go ahead and sign here. Here. Here. Initial here. Date here. Print your name here."
Sp "Anyways,{w=0.3} go ahead and sign here.{w=0.4} Here.{w=0.4} Here.{w=0.4} Initial here.{w=0.4} Date here.{w=0.4} Print your name here."
"I didnt catch any of that."
A "W-what?"
A "W{w=0.1}-what?"
Sp "Just kidding. Youre good to go, Anon, and dont forget this."
Sp "Just kidding.{w=0.4} Youre good to go,{w=0.2} Anon,{w=0.4} and dont forget this."
"He holds out the poorly laminated lunch card for me to take."
Sp "Just keep in mind,"
Sp "As a senior, this semester is your last, your biggest chance to figure your future out."
Sp "As a senior,{w=0.3} this semester is your last,{w=0.4} your biggest chance to figure your future out."
Sp "Even if youre new to all of us here at Volcano High, were here to help you make the most of it."
Sp "Even if youre new to all of us here at Volcano High,{w=0.4} were here to help you make the most of it."
"Huh"
"Huh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "Thank you, Mister Spears."
A "Thank you,{w=0.2} Mister Spears."
show spears happy flip
"Mr. Spears nods and gives a small smile."
Sp "You can come in anytime. Im always here to listen. Except for topics relating to estrus season."
Sp "You can come in anytime.{w=0.5} Im always here to listen."
show spears neutral flip
Sp "You can come in anytime. Im always here to listen.{fast} Except for topics relating to estrus season."
"I sense great exhaustion in that last bit."
stop music
scene hallway
"I thank Mr. Spears one last time and head out."
if late_to_spears:
"I thank Mr. Spears one last time and head to homeroom."
"..."
stop music fadeout 1
scene black with fade
jump .postCavemanConference
else:
"I thank Mr. Spears one last time and head out."
stop music fadeout 1
scene black with fade
jump .finding_naser
label .finding_naser:
scene hallway with Dissolve(1.5)
"Naser should be around here somewhere, I wanted to talk to him before class."
@ -2308,10 +2268,10 @@ label chapter_1:
"..."
scene black with fade
jump postCavemanConference
jump .postCavemanConference
label postCavemanConference:
label .postCavemanConference:
"The periods pass and eventually its lunchtime again."