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"What the fuck just happened?"
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"One second Naser and Naomi were talking…"
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"One second Naser and Naomi were talking{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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"Now I’ve got a cripple brother looking more lost and confused than ever before."
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"And little miss ‘perfect life’ crying like a baby outside my house."
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show naser explanatory flip with dissolve
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Nas "M-maybe I…{w=0.5} I should-"
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Nas "M-maybe I{cps=*.20}...{/cps}{w=0.5} I should-"
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show fang nonxmas pendant angry with dissolve
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F "Naser for once in your life, do the smart thing and shut up!"
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"With the thought of what I’m about to do, I realize just how much Anon had really done for me."
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"But god damn it, I really don’t want to…"
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"But god damn it, I really don’t want to{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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show fang nonxmas pendant unimpressed with dissolve:
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xzoom 1.0
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yalign -0.5
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"Naomi finally looks up to me with a tear-stained face."
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N "A break…{w=1.0} N-Naser s-said he… {w=1.0}he wants to take a break!"
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N "A break{cps=*.20}...{/cps}{w=1.0} N-Naser s-said he{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=1.0}he wants to take a break!"
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show fang nonxmas pendant angry with dissolve
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"I almost want to slap the bitch."
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"She’s putting on all the waterworks because Naser wants some time away from her?"
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pause 1.0
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F "...And?"
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F "{cps=*.20}...{/cps}And?"
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show naomi angry with dissolve:
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"I’m probably the least qualified person when it comes to relationships."
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"Still… {w=0.5}not like Naser’s going to be any better at this."
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"Still{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.2}not like Naser’s going to be any better at this."
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"Fuck… {w=0.5}guess it really comes down to me..."
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"Fuck{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.2}guess it really comes down to me{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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show naomifangcg with dissolve
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play ambient1 ['<sync ambient>audio/OST/good faith leadup drums synth.ogg', 'audio/OST/good faith leadup drums synth.ogg'] fadein 5.0
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"I sit down next to Naomi on the curb."
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F "Big fucking whoop!"
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F "It’s not the end of the world. It just means… {w=0.5}you two have some things to think about…"
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F "It’s not the end of the world. It just means{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}you two have some things to think about{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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"I know my words are directed at Naomi, but a part of me can’t help but feel they are also applicable to me."
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"After all… {w=0.5}I’m still trying to figure out what’s really going to happen between Anon and myself…"
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"After all{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}I’m still trying to figure out what’s really going to happen between Anon and myself{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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N "What is there to think about!?{w=0.3} Naser and I were supposed to be together!"
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N "What am I going to do now!?{w=0.3} I already told my parents that I’m moving out!{w=0.3} Where do I go!?{w=0.3} What do I even do!?"
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"I find myself scowling at Naomi’s words…"
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"I find myself scowling at Naomi’s words{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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pause 0.5
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F "So, this is what all this shit’s about?"
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F "Your {i}‘perfect’{/i} little plan falling apart before your eyes?"
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stop ambient1 fadeout 4.0
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F "You haven’t really changed in the last year..."
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F "You haven’t really changed in the last year{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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"Naomi's head snaps toward me, her eyes baleful and teary as she glares daggers at me."
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"She grits her teeth so tightly that for a second, I think she’s going to make her gums bleed."
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N "F-Fu-Fuck you, you… {w=0.5}you discount-brand guitarist!"
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N "F-Fu-Fuck you, you{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}you discount-brand guitarist!"
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F "Insult me all you want. You know I’m right."
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F "Perfect for one another? I’m not the one with a broken relationship after a single fucking night!"
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F "Me and Anon… yeah, we fight, but we always come out of it stronger."
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F "Me and Anon{cps=*.20}...{/cps} yeah, we fight, but we always come out of it stronger."
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F "We’re taking a break… but that doesn’t mean our relationship’s over."
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F "We’re taking a break{cps=*.20}...{/cps} but that doesn’t mean our relationship’s over."
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F "Unlike yours…"
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F "Unlike yours{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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"At first, Naomi gives me a look of absolute rage."
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"But that expression doesn’t last long as her eyes again fill with tears and her shoulders slump."
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pause 0.5
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N "Why…?"
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N "Why{cps=*.20}...{/cps}?"
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F "Why what?"
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"Anger isn’t going to do anything right now."
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F "I’m not here to kick your ass… {w=0.5}even if you deserve a beating."
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F "I’m not here to kick your ass{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}even if you deserve a beating."
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F "I just…"
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F "I just{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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"I look toward the window and see Naser still sweeping, his shoulders hunched and wings drooped."
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F "That he’s willing to take everyone’s issues and ignore his own."
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N "I… {w=0.5}but he said…"
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N "I{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}but he said{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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N "He said he wanted to take a break! Just like you and Anon!"
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F "No, I didn’t put him up to this shit. Hell, I didn’t even tell him that Anon and I went on break!"
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F "Naser… {w=0.5}did you actually TELL him how you set me and Anon up from the very start?"
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F "Naser{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}did you actually TELL him how you set me and Anon up from the very start?"
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"The dumb bitch blanches at that."
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"Nailed it."
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F "That’s another thing about my brother, y’know…"
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F "That’s another thing about my brother, y’know{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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F "He can be stupidly dense."
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N "Go to the same college and graduate together."
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N "We would have a perfect life together…"
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N "We would have a perfect life together{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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"I facepalm at her words."
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F "Mostly harmless."
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F "But then you became... {w=0.5}whatever this is."
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F "But then you became{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.2}whatever this is."
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"I motion to her whole being."
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F "How do you think Naser would react to finding out what you did?"
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N "... He…"
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N "{cps=*.20}...{/cps} He{cps=*.20}{cps=*.20}...{/cps}{/cps}"
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"Naomi shuts her mouth as fast as she opens it."
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N "Shut up…"
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N "Shut up{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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F "No way, I’m-"
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N "I know already…"
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N "I know already{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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show naomi sad with dissolve
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"The dumb bitch shifts her head to the side, trying to hide her eyes."
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N "P-please, couldn’t y-you let me just...{w=0.5} g-grovel h-here?"
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N "P-please, couldn’t y-you let me just{cps=*.20}...{/cps}{w=0.2} g-grovel h-here?"
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"Naomi’s words are coming out haphazardly. It’s clear that she’s having a hard time forming thoughts."
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play ambient1 ['<sync ambient>audio/OST/good faith leadup drums synth.ogg', 'audio/OST/good faith leadup drums synth.ogg'] fadein 5.0
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"Her grimace slowly vanishes, replaced instead with a thousand-yard stare."
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N "You’re…"
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N "You’re{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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pause 0.5
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N "...You’re right…"
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N "{cps=*.20}...{/cps}You’re right{cps=*.20}{cps=*.20}...{/cps}{/cps}"
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N "I… {w=0.5}I haven’t changed one bit…"
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N "I{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}I haven’t changed one bit{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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"She grabs hold of her head and once more falls on her knees."
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N "Ever since I… {w=0.5}I stopped being a meek nerdy girl, I became obsessed with perfection... {w=0.5}to the point that I… I wound up becoming some kind of coral castellan."
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N "Ever since I{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.4}I stopped being a meek nerdy girl, I became obsessed with perfection{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.2}to the point that I{cps=*.20}...{/cps} I wound up becoming some kind of coral castellan."
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N "Did I work hard to get there?{w=0.5} Yes."
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N "Should I have worked so hard when it led to where I am today?"
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N "... I… {w=0.5}I don’t know anymore…"
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N "... I{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}I don’t know anymore{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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N "All I know is that…{w=0.5} aside from your brother… {w=0.5}nothing's ever really made me happy…."
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N "All I know is that{cps=*.20}...{/cps}{w=0.2} aside from your brother{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}nothing's ever really made me happy{cps=*.20}...{/cps}."
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N "...Nothing…"
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N "...Nothing{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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F "Hey, just because you’re a manipulative fucking bitch doesn’t mean that you haven’t done some good."
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F "I mean… {w=0.5}you did bring me and Anon together."
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F "I mean{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.2}you did bring me and Anon together."
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F "Also… {w=0.5}you did make my brother happy… {w=0.5}even if it was under your authoritarian thumb…"
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F "Also{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.2}you did make my brother happy{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}even if it was under your authoritarian thumb{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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"I kinda feel sick saying that."
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"I shouldn’t be praising her manipulative bitchiness, but I can’t deny that Naser was genuinely happy being with Naomi."
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"Even if most of that happiness was a side-effect and not a direct result of a healthy relationship..."
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"Even if most of that happiness was a side-effect and not a direct result of a healthy relationship{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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F "Maybe… {w=0.5}maybe a break is what you two need now more than ever."
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F "Maybe{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}maybe a break is what you two need now more than ever."
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F "Time away to think."
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F "Time away to contemplate what the two of you really mean for each other."
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F "Time to really figure out what the two of you mean to each other…"
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F "Time to really figure out what the two of you mean to each other{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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"Once again, though my words are meant for Naomi, a part of me can’t shake the fact that they’re applicable to me as well…"
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"Once again, though my words are meant for Naomi, a part of me can’t shake the fact that they’re applicable to me as well{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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N "Y-you really think so?"
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F "Maybe this break’s what the two of you need to really start a new phase of your relationship."
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F "Or maybe this is it… {w=0.5}and maybe you two will go your separate ways…"
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F "Or maybe this is it{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.2}and maybe you two will go your separate ways{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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"I almost feel myself tearing up as I say those words."
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"I don’t want to admit it, but a part of me fears that my words may turn out to be prophetic in regard to Anon and Myself…"
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"I don’t want to admit it, but a part of me fears that my words may turn out to be prophetic in regard to Anon and Myself{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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"Naomi is eerily quiet as she absorbs my words."
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"The fuck did I know."
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"Still, being there for Naomi - even if most of me still hated the bitch - felt good…"
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"Still, being there for Naomi - even if most of me still hated the bitch - felt good{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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N "So… {w=0.5}What… {w=0.5}What am I supposed to do now?"
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N "So{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}What{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}What am I supposed to do now?"
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"I don’t know any proper answer."
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"But the one thing I can do is try to bury this hatchet with Naomi once and for all…"
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"So I spoke with Naomi. Truly spoke to her."
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N "This is probably just me being deliriously exhausted, but…"
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N "This is probably just me being deliriously exhausted, but{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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N "I… {w=0.5}I enjoyed this talk we had."
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N "I{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.4}I enjoyed this talk we had."
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F "You better. Not everyday I pour out my soul to anyone that isn’t Anon."
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"Naomi actually laughs at my humor this time."
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N "Hanging out might not be so bad sometimes..."
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N "Hanging out might not be so bad sometimes{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
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"She goes quiet. Before she can muddy up her thoughts with something else, she gets in the taxi."
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"She shuts the door before I can say anything and is gone within seconds."
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"Yeah, I can probably hang around with Naomi again…"
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"Dragging myself up the stairs, I remember Naomi and Naser didn’t even really get to say goodbye."
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"When I turn over to the cool side of my pillow my fingertips brush against the corner of my phone."
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A "Lucy? It’s three in the morning…"
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F "I know, but…"
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"It’s just a break after all."
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