diff --git a/game/script/x9-naomi-tribulations.rpy b/game/script/x9-naomi-tribulations.rpy index 1ed339a..30b2098 100644 --- a/game/script/x9-naomi-tribulations.rpy +++ b/game/script/x9-naomi-tribulations.rpy @@ -9,14 +9,14 @@ label chapter_x9: "What the fuck just happened?" - "One second Naser and Naomi were talking…" + "One second Naser and Naomi were talking{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" "Now I’ve got a cripple brother looking more lost and confused than ever before." "And little miss ‘perfect life’ crying like a baby outside my house." show naser explanatory flip with dissolve - Nas "M-maybe I…{w=0.5} I should-" + Nas "M-maybe I{cps=*.20}...{/cps}{w=0.5} I should-" show fang nonxmas pendant angry with dissolve F "Naser for once in your life, do the smart thing and shut up!" @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ label chapter_x9: "With the thought of what I’m about to do, I realize just how much Anon had really done for me." - "But god damn it, I really don’t want to…" + "But god damn it, I really don’t want to{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" show fang nonxmas pendant unimpressed with dissolve: xzoom 1.0 stop music fadeout 5.0 @@ -119,14 +119,14 @@ label chapter_x9: yalign -0.5 "Naomi finally looks up to me with a tear-stained face." - N "A break…{w=1.0} N-Naser s-said he… {w=1.0}he wants to take a break!" + N "A break{cps=*.20}...{/cps}{w=1.0} N-Naser s-said he{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=1.0}he wants to take a break!" show fang nonxmas pendant angry with dissolve "I almost want to slap the bitch." "She’s putting on all the waterworks because Naser wants some time away from her?" pause 1.0 - F "...And?" + F "{cps=*.20}...{/cps}And?" show naomi angry with dissolve: @@ -160,9 +160,9 @@ label chapter_x9: "I’m probably the least qualified person when it comes to relationships." - "Still… {w=0.5}not like Naser’s going to be any better at this." + "Still{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.2}not like Naser’s going to be any better at this." - "Fuck… {w=0.5}guess it really comes down to me..." + "Fuck{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.2}guess it really comes down to me{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" show naomifangcg with dissolve play ambient1 ['audio/OST/good faith leadup drums synth.ogg', 'audio/OST/good faith leadup drums synth.ogg'] fadein 5.0 "I sit down next to Naomi on the curb." @@ -173,11 +173,11 @@ label chapter_x9: F "Big fucking whoop!" - F "It’s not the end of the world. It just means… {w=0.5}you two have some things to think about…" + F "It’s not the end of the world. It just means{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}you two have some things to think about{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" "I know my words are directed at Naomi, but a part of me can’t help but feel they are also applicable to me." - "After all… {w=0.5}I’m still trying to figure out what’s really going to happen between Anon and myself…" + "After all{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}I’m still trying to figure out what’s really going to happen between Anon and myself{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" N "What is there to think about!?{w=0.3} Naser and I were supposed to be together!" @@ -187,14 +187,14 @@ label chapter_x9: N "What am I going to do now!?{w=0.3} I already told my parents that I’m moving out!{w=0.3} Where do I go!?{w=0.3} What do I even do!?" - "I find myself scowling at Naomi’s words…" + "I find myself scowling at Naomi’s words{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" pause 0.5 F "So, this is what all this shit’s about?" F "Your {i}‘perfect’{/i} little plan falling apart before your eyes?" stop ambient1 fadeout 4.0 - F "You haven’t really changed in the last year..." + F "You haven’t really changed in the last year{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" "Naomi's head snaps toward me, her eyes baleful and teary as she glares daggers at me." @@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ label chapter_x9: "She grits her teeth so tightly that for a second, I think she’s going to make her gums bleed." - N "F-Fu-Fuck you, you… {w=0.5}you discount-brand guitarist!" + N "F-Fu-Fuck you, you{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}you discount-brand guitarist!" F "Insult me all you want. You know I’m right." @@ -223,11 +223,11 @@ label chapter_x9: F "Perfect for one another? I’m not the one with a broken relationship after a single fucking night!" - F "Me and Anon… yeah, we fight, but we always come out of it stronger." + F "Me and Anon{cps=*.20}...{/cps} yeah, we fight, but we always come out of it stronger." - F "We’re taking a break… but that doesn’t mean our relationship’s over." + F "We’re taking a break{cps=*.20}...{/cps} but that doesn’t mean our relationship’s over." - F "Unlike yours…" + F "Unlike yours{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" "At first, Naomi gives me a look of absolute rage." @@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ label chapter_x9: "But that expression doesn’t last long as her eyes again fill with tears and her shoulders slump." pause 0.5 - N "Why…?" + N "Why{cps=*.20}...{/cps}?" F "Why what?" @@ -267,9 +267,9 @@ label chapter_x9: "Anger isn’t going to do anything right now." - F "I’m not here to kick your ass… {w=0.5}even if you deserve a beating." + F "I’m not here to kick your ass{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}even if you deserve a beating." - F "I just…" + F "I just{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" "I look toward the window and see Naser still sweeping, his shoulders hunched and wings drooped." @@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ label chapter_x9: F "That he’s willing to take everyone’s issues and ignore his own." - N "I… {w=0.5}but he said…" + N "I{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}but he said{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" N "He said he wanted to take a break! Just like you and Anon!" @@ -307,13 +307,13 @@ label chapter_x9: F "No, I didn’t put him up to this shit. Hell, I didn’t even tell him that Anon and I went on break!" - F "Naser… {w=0.5}did you actually TELL him how you set me and Anon up from the very start?" + F "Naser{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}did you actually TELL him how you set me and Anon up from the very start?" "The dumb bitch blanches at that." "Nailed it." - F "That’s another thing about my brother, y’know…" + F "That’s another thing about my brother, y’know{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" F "He can be stupidly dense." @@ -333,7 +333,7 @@ label chapter_x9: N "Go to the same college and graduate together." - N "We would have a perfect life together…" + N "We would have a perfect life together{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" "I facepalm at her words." @@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ label chapter_x9: F "Mostly harmless." - F "But then you became... {w=0.5}whatever this is." + F "But then you became{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.2}whatever this is." "I motion to her whole being." @@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ label chapter_x9: F "How do you think Naser would react to finding out what you did?" - N "... He…" + N "{cps=*.20}...{/cps} He{cps=*.20}{cps=*.20}...{/cps}{/cps}" "Naomi shuts her mouth as fast as she opens it." show naomi considering flip with dissolve @@ -422,16 +422,16 @@ label chapter_x9: show naomi sad flip with dissolve - N "Shut up…" + N "Shut up{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" F "No way, I’m-" - N "I know already…" + N "I know already{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" show naomi sad with dissolve "The dumb bitch shifts her head to the side, trying to hide her eyes." - N "P-please, couldn’t y-you let me just...{w=0.5} g-grovel h-here?" + N "P-please, couldn’t y-you let me just{cps=*.20}...{/cps}{w=0.2} g-grovel h-here?" "Naomi’s words are coming out haphazardly. It’s clear that she’s having a hard time forming thoughts." @@ -454,11 +454,11 @@ label chapter_x9: play ambient1 ['audio/OST/good faith leadup drums synth.ogg', 'audio/OST/good faith leadup drums synth.ogg'] fadein 5.0 "Her grimace slowly vanishes, replaced instead with a thousand-yard stare." - N "You’re…" + N "You’re{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" pause 0.5 - N "...You’re right…" + N "{cps=*.20}...{/cps}You’re right{cps=*.20}{cps=*.20}...{/cps}{/cps}" - N "I… {w=0.5}I haven’t changed one bit…" + N "I{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}I haven’t changed one bit{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" show naomi: ease_cubic 0.5 yalign -0.5 @@ -467,17 +467,17 @@ label chapter_x9: "She grabs hold of her head and once more falls on her knees." - N "Ever since I… {w=0.5}I stopped being a meek nerdy girl, I became obsessed with perfection... {w=0.5}to the point that I… I wound up becoming some kind of coral castellan." + N "Ever since I{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.4}I stopped being a meek nerdy girl, I became obsessed with perfection{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.2}to the point that I{cps=*.20}...{/cps} I wound up becoming some kind of coral castellan." N "Did I work hard to get there?{w=0.5} Yes." N "Should I have worked so hard when it led to where I am today?" - N "... I… {w=0.5}I don’t know anymore…" + N "... I{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}I don’t know anymore{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" - N "All I know is that…{w=0.5} aside from your brother… {w=0.5}nothing's ever really made me happy…." + N "All I know is that{cps=*.20}...{/cps}{w=0.2} aside from your brother{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}nothing's ever really made me happy{cps=*.20}...{/cps}." - N "...Nothing…" + N "...Nothing{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" pause 0.5 hide fang with dissolve @@ -488,25 +488,25 @@ label chapter_x9: F "Hey, just because you’re a manipulative fucking bitch doesn’t mean that you haven’t done some good." - F "I mean… {w=0.5}you did bring me and Anon together." + F "I mean{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.2}you did bring me and Anon together." - F "Also… {w=0.5}you did make my brother happy… {w=0.5}even if it was under your authoritarian thumb…" + F "Also{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.2}you did make my brother happy{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}even if it was under your authoritarian thumb{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" "I kinda feel sick saying that." "I shouldn’t be praising her manipulative bitchiness, but I can’t deny that Naser was genuinely happy being with Naomi." - "Even if most of that happiness was a side-effect and not a direct result of a healthy relationship..." + "Even if most of that happiness was a side-effect and not a direct result of a healthy relationship{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" - F "Maybe… {w=0.5}maybe a break is what you two need now more than ever." + F "Maybe{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}maybe a break is what you two need now more than ever." F "Time away to think." F "Time away to contemplate what the two of you really mean for each other." - F "Time to really figure out what the two of you mean to each other…" + F "Time to really figure out what the two of you mean to each other{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" - "Once again, though my words are meant for Naomi, a part of me can’t shake the fact that they’re applicable to me as well…" + "Once again, though my words are meant for Naomi, a part of me can’t shake the fact that they’re applicable to me as well{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" N "Y-you really think so?" @@ -516,11 +516,11 @@ label chapter_x9: F "Maybe this break’s what the two of you need to really start a new phase of your relationship." - F "Or maybe this is it… {w=0.5}and maybe you two will go your separate ways…" + F "Or maybe this is it{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.2}and maybe you two will go your separate ways{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" "I almost feel myself tearing up as I say those words." - "I don’t want to admit it, but a part of me fears that my words may turn out to be prophetic in regard to Anon and Myself…" + "I don’t want to admit it, but a part of me fears that my words may turn out to be prophetic in regard to Anon and Myself{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" "Naomi is eerily quiet as she absorbs my words." @@ -530,9 +530,9 @@ label chapter_x9: "The fuck did I know." - "Still, being there for Naomi - even if most of me still hated the bitch - felt good…" + "Still, being there for Naomi - even if most of me still hated the bitch - felt good{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" - N "So… {w=0.5}What… {w=0.5}What am I supposed to do now?" + N "So{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}What{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.5}What am I supposed to do now?" "The question really struck me harder than it should have." @@ -540,7 +540,7 @@ label chapter_x9: "I don’t know any proper answer." - "But the one thing I can do is try to bury this hatchet with Naomi once and for all…" + "But the one thing I can do is try to bury this hatchet with Naomi once and for all{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" "So I spoke with Naomi. Truly spoke to her." @@ -566,24 +566,24 @@ label chapter_x9: N "Fang?" - F "..." + F "{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" - N "This is probably just me being deliriously exhausted, but…" + N "This is probably just me being deliriously exhausted, but{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" - N "I… {w=0.5}I enjoyed this talk we had." + N "I{cps=*.20}...{/cps} {w=0.4}I enjoyed this talk we had." F "You better. Not everyday I pour out my soul to anyone that isn’t Anon." show naomi neutral with dissolve "Naomi actually laughs at my humor this time." - "Progress…" + "Progress{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" - N "Hanging out might not be so bad sometimes..." + N "Hanging out might not be so bad sometimes{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" "She goes quiet. Before she can muddy up her thoughts with something else, she gets in the taxi." - N "See you around…" + N "See you around{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" show naomi neutral flip with dissolve pause 0.1 @@ -591,11 +591,11 @@ label chapter_x9: hide naomi with easeoutleft "She shuts the door before I can say anything and is gone within seconds." - "Yeah, I can probably hang around with Naomi again…" + "Yeah, I can probably hang around with Naomi again{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" - F "..." + F "{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" - F "......" + F "{cps=*.20}......{/cps}" "I need to get up from this curb." stop ambient fadeout 5.0 @@ -616,7 +616,7 @@ label chapter_x9: "My place would probably be down to the foundations by now." - "..." + "{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" "Dragging myself up the stairs, I remember Naomi and Naser didn’t even really get to say goodbye." @@ -639,7 +639,7 @@ label chapter_x9: "When I turn over to the cool side of my pillow my fingertips brush against the corner of my phone." - "A break…" + "A break{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" show fangphonevideocall call_ended_bg call_ended behind dimmer_lighter at scenter with dissolve: yalign -0.045 @@ -651,15 +651,15 @@ label chapter_x9: show fangphonevideocall bgnight anonconcerned with dissolve - A "Lucy? It’s three in the morning…" + A "Lucy? It’s three in the morning{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" - F "I know, but…" + F "I know, but{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" A "You okay?" F "Yes. I just wanted to see you." - A "Hm…" + A "Hm{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" F "Anon, I know we’re on break." @@ -723,7 +723,7 @@ label chapter_x9: "It’s just a break after all." - "..." + "{cps=*.20}...{/cps}" stop ambient fadeout 2.0 stop music fadeout 3.0