more ch1 tweaks before looking at ch2
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@ -696,18 +696,20 @@ label chapter_1:
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I "I wanted to flee.{w} Hide away.{w} Anything to avoid those judging eyes."
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pause .5
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N "{cps=*0.4}Why did you transfer here?{/cps}"
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N "{cps=*0.5}What was your old school like?{/cps}"
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#TODO: 2spooky?
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play music 'audio/effects/menacing.ogg' fadein 0.5 # Attribution 3.0, LICENSE updated
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show dimmer_darker behind anon with Dissolve(1)
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I "My throat clenches.{w} It’s an innocent question.{w=0.5} But I think back again to it all."
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I "My throat clenches.{w} I think back again to it all."
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A "uh{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}{w=0.4} I{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}"
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I "There’s whispers now.{w} The hushed tones,{w=0.4} silenced snickers,{w=0.4} blending with the everpresent stares.{w} My heart hammers at my chest and I am sure that they all can hear it.{w=0.5} See the cold chill racing over me."
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I "There’s whispers now.{w} The hushed tones,{w=0.3} silenced snickers,{w=0.3} blending with the everpresent stares."
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I "My heart hammers at my chest and I am sure that they all can hear it.{w=0.5} See the cold chill racing over me."
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show dimmer_darker behind anon, jinflip with dissolve
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@ -728,7 +730,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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with ease
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Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Puriizu retaano tsu yo shiito,{w=0.3} Anon-kun.{w=0.5} {i}Hai{/i},{w=0.3} nao curassu-{/cps}"
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pause 0.5
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pause 0.75
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I "{cps=*0.5}That was nothing like my Japanese animes.{/cps}"
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pause 0.5
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@ -824,6 +826,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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Nas "Wanna sit with Naomi and me?{w=0.7} Since you’re new and all."
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I "He points to a table where the living pink sugar rush is waving."
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pause .5
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I "God damn it."
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@ -834,7 +837,6 @@ label chapter_1:
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#TODO: music variation
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stop ambient fadeout 0.25
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play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg'
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scene cafeteria
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show anon neutral at aleft
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show naomi neutral flip at sright
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@ -896,7 +898,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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# "I perk up at Naser’s interjection. Naomi looks disappointed for a second."
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# A "Not really,{w=0.4} just had to sign up for some handouts."
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A "Not really,{w=0.4} just have to sign up for some handouts."
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A "Not really,{w=0.4} just got to sign up for some handouts."
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show naomi sad flip with dissolve
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@ -952,6 +954,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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N "I know some great vegan shops in the area!"
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I "My stomach roils at the V-word."
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pause .5
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A "{cps=*0.25}Maaaaybe{/cps} another time,{w=0.2} sorry.{w=0.6} So about that concert Naser?"
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@ -989,6 +992,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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I "I look at my pizza,{w=0.3} noticing something is wrong."
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I "I test it with my plastic spork and watch the cheap utensil shatter to bits."
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pause .5
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I "I curse life for a third time today."
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@ -1002,6 +1006,9 @@ label chapter_1:
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Nas "But it’s my sandwich!"
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show naomi:
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ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
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ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
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N "It’s fine,{w=0.3} we can split my vegan TLT!"
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show naser sad flip with dissolve
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@ -1034,6 +1041,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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I "..."
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stop music fadeout 1
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scene black with fade
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I "{cps=*0.2}--After school--{/cps}"
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@ -1051,6 +1059,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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I "All that’s left for today is the concert.{w=0.5} And dinner."
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play music 'audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg' fadein 1
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scene door auditorium
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show naser neutral:
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xalign 0.0 yalign 0.1
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@ -1157,6 +1166,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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play music 'audio/OST/we just turned on the microphone in our programmers_ house.ogg'
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unknown "Wait.{fast}"
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pause 0.6
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I "His massive hand stops me."
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@ -1183,6 +1193,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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show spears happy
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Sp "You can thank your classmates for that."
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pause .5
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I "What?"
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@ -1191,6 +1202,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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Sp "Now,{w=0.3} go enjoy the show."
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A "Yes sir."
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pause .5
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Sp "Oh,{w=0.4} I do need you to come by my office tomorrow for some paperwork."
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@ -1203,6 +1215,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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show naser neutral at nleft
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with fade
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play music 'audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg' fadein 1
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play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 1.0
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I "Naser leads me and the large crowd into the shitty school theater."
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@ -1264,6 +1277,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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I "Everyone seems to share the same sentiment."
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I "So why the hell did they even show up for this?"
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pause .6
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I "Naser finally comes back and opens the door to the main hall."
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@ -1272,8 +1286,9 @@ label chapter_1:
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I "The crowd moves in,{w=0.3} though I hang back so I can talk with Naser."
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show naser neutral at ncenter with dissolve
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pause .5
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A "What’s with them,{w=0.1} Naser?"
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A "What’s with them,{w=0.2} Naser?"
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Nas "What do you mean?"
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@ -1319,7 +1334,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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Nas "{cps=*0.5}I brought them here so Fang has an audience.{/cps}"
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stop music
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stop music fadeout 0.5
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pause 1
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A "Oh."
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@ -1347,6 +1362,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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pause 0.7
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I "The voice on the other end is loud and shrill."
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pause .5
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Nas "Yeah{w=0.2} I-{w=0.5}{nw}"
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pause 0.7
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I "He holds the phone away from his ear to save his eardrum."
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pause .5
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Nas "Okay okay I-"
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A "Seriously?"
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Nas "Yeah,{w=0.3} Fang doesn’t want me here.{w=0.6} Said I’ll ruin the show."
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pause .5
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I "Harsh."
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pause .5
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show naser neutral with Dissolve(0.25)
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Nas "Look,{w=0.5} whatever happens{w=0.3} promise you won’t hold this against them."
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Nas "They're actually a really a nice person once you get to know them"
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pause 0.6
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A "Naser why did you just murder the english language in cold blood?"
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pause .5
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I "Within I see the rest of the audience,{w=0.3} huddled in groups around tiny snack tables."
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pause 0.7
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stop ambient fadeout 1
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stop music fadeout 2
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stop music fadeout 3
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unknown "{cps=*0.5}PFFFT AHAHAHA{/cps}{w=0.5} THEY STILL FUCKING SUCK!!"
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pause 1
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play music 'audio/ost/Many Such Cases Of Being So True.ogg'
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# TODO: find suitable jeering loop
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Sp "Anon.{fast}"
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pause 0.5
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pause 0.65
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I "{cps=*0.2}Oh fuck{/cps}"
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A "Yes sir?"
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I "He looks to the crowd and then to me."
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pause .5
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Sp "I don’t want to hear about any of this come tomorrow."
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Sp "I expect some goddamned maturity from you,{w=0.3} Anon."
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Sp "You’ll be an adult once you graduate."
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pause .5
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A "Uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.3} Why me though?"
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I "{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}{w=0.2} Guess I gotta take it one day at a time."
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show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve
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show anon neutral at acenter with Dissolve(1)
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I "Picking myself up, I slide into todays’ (and everydays’) clothes and pour myself a bowl of off-brand cereal I picked up the day before."
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I "Picking myself up, I slide into todays’{w=0.2} (and everydays’){w=0.2} clothes{w=0.4} and pour myself a bowl of off-brand cereal I picked up the day before."
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I "My eyes scan over my phone while I shovel my sugary breakfast into my mouth."
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pause .5
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I "*Scroll*{fast}"
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I "*Crunch*{fast}"
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I "Like a poorly oiled machine until it runs out of fuel with a noisy slurp."
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pause .5
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I "Soon enough it's time to leave for school.{w=0.5} I grab my backpack and slide it over my shoulders.{w} I take my jacket off the hanger and"
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I "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
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I "I take off the backpack and put the jacket on.{fast}"
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I "I take off the backpack and put the jacket on."
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stop music fadeout 1
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pause 1
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pause 0.4
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repeat
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play sound 'audio/effects/punch.ogg'
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T "GET YOUR HANDS OFF ME!!" with vpunch
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Nas "Trish,{w=0.2} I’m not going to fight you again."
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T "Even if you weren’t trying to mess with Fang!"
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T "Screw!{w=0.4} You!"
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T "Screw!{w=0.5} You!"
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pause .5
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I "She stomps off."
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I "Guess it’s to the principal’s office with me.{w=0.3} Again."
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I "And thinking about him makes me think about last night."
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pause .5
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Sp "{cps=*0.6}{i}You are not the only person in the world.{/i}{/cps}"
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pause .5
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I "Poor Naser,{w=0.3} man.{w=0.5} Just wanted to help his sister."
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I "But it’s not like he did anything wrong."
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pause 0.5
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stop ambient fadeout 3
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play music 'audio/OST/Those Other Two Weirdos.ogg' volume 0.8 fadein 3
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scene hallway
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show naomi unimpressed at sleft
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show reed explanatory flip
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Re "Bro,{w=0.4} you’ve known I’m in a band for like,{w=0.4} a year now."
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pause 0.6
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show reed neutral flip
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pause 0.7
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show naomi angry:
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easein 0.25 xalign 0.1
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pause 0.25
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N "No!{w=0.5} {cps=*.4}{i}Contra{/i}band!{/cps}{w=0.5} In your backpack!"
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N "No!{w=0.6} {cps=*.4}{i}Contra{/i}band!{/cps}{w=0.5} In your backpack!"
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pause .5
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Re "{cps=*0.2}Hmmm...{/cps}{w=0.4}{nw}"
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show reed explanatory flip
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I "Naomi facepalms,{w=0.4} or whatever counts as a facepalm with a snout."
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show reed shocked flip
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show naomi angry:
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play sound 'audio/effects/punch.ogg'
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N "Reed!{fast}{w=0.7} You have a bong in your backpack!" with vpunch
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Re "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}But we aren’t in Britain?"
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show reed neutral flip with dissolve
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Re "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2}{nw}"
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Re "...{fast} But we aren’t in Britain?"
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show reed neutral flip
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show naomi unimpressed with Dissolve(.75)
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N "Ugh,{w=0.3} you’re impossible{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
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I "The fuck just happened?"
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A "How the fuck did I end up here?"
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unknown "Don’t worry man,{w=0.3} it happens to new students all the time{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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unknown "Don’t worry man,{w=0.5} it happens to new students all the time{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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A "Wha-?"
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I "Some pink raptor smelling of very heavily burnt grass surprises me."
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pause .5
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unknown "If you’re looking for the office you’re gonna wanna go thataway."
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unknown "I’m about to go myself,{w=0.2} but I forgot something in my locker."
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I "He walks off down another hallway."
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I "I should follow the directions he gave me."
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I "In front of the principals’ office is Naomi and some other chick,{w=0.3} engaged in a heated conversation."
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T "Six!{w=0.5} {i}This{/i} is the seventh!"
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N "Go ahead and fill out a form{w=0.2}{nw}"
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N "It was illegible,{w=0.2} Trish.{w=0.5} You should work on your handwriting a bit."
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T "I don’t have time for this,{w=0.3} I need to go track someone down."
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Sp "-dismissed Naomi.{w=0.5} And just to be absolutely clear,{w=0.3} Anon did ask you for this,{w=0.4} correct?"
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Sp "-dismissed Naomi.{w=0.5} And just to be absolutely clear,{w=0.4} Anon did ask you for this,{w=0.4} correct?"
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show naomi explanatory
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show naomi neutral
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pause 0.5
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pause 0.65
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Sp "Anon?"
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I "Naser’s leaning against a set of lockers,{w=0.3} along with that guy from before."
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pause .5
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I "The other one’s making a throat-slashing gesture,{w=0.3} waving a palm across his neck."
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pause 0.5
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pause 0.6
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A "Uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.3} nothing important."
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@ -2622,9 +2673,9 @@ label chapter_1:
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show reed explanatory
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unknown "So as I was saying,{w=0.1} bro{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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unknown "So as I was saying,{w=0.2} bro{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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unknown "BXR,{w=0.4} best tactic in the game,{w=0.2} y’know?"
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unknown "BXR,{w=0.5} best tactic in the game,{w=0.2} y’know?"
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show reed neutral
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show naser considering flip
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@ -2632,9 +2683,9 @@ label chapter_1:
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Nas "Erm,{w=0.3} yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.3} Makes sense,{w=0.2} I guess?"
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show naser unimpressed flip
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show naser unimpressed flip with dissolve
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Nas "Anyways,{w=0.1} Reed.{w=0.5} I’m sorry for how things went last night,{w=0.4} {cps=*.7}I didn’t think those assholes would laugh at you.{/cps}"
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Nas "Anyways,{w=0.2} Reed.{w=0.5} I’m sorry for how things went last night,{w=0.5} {cps=*.7}I didn’t think those assholes would laugh at you.{/cps}"
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stop ambient fadeout 0.5
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show dimmer_light behind anon, naser, reed with dissolve
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@ -2659,6 +2710,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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Re "Hell yeah,{w=0.2} man.{w=0.5} Nothin’ goin’ on in the Trish department at all."
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I "Reed suddenly reaches into his pocket and retrieves his phone,{w=0.3} tapping away at a shockingly long password."
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pause .5
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show reed shocked:
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easein 0.2 xalign 0.65
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@ -2677,6 +2729,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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show naser neutral flip with dissolve
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Nas "Weird guy."
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pause .5
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A "Uh,{w=0.3} Naser,{w=0.4} {cps=*.4}I actually wanted to talk to-{/cps}{nw}"
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@ -2702,6 +2755,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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Nas "Crap,{w=0.3} can’t miss my homeroom today."
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Nas "Sorry,{w=0.4} it’ll have to wait a bit."
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pause .5
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A "It{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.5} no,{w=0.3} that’s fine."
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