ch3 alterations from feedback
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@ -465,7 +465,7 @@ label chapter_3:
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I "Naomi hovers over Naser,{w=.4} who currently has Gucci under his eyes."
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pause .5
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Nas "So,{w=.3} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Talked to the soccer team earlier."
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Nas "So,{w=.3} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} talked to the soccer team earlier."
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Nas "They’re going to make the first game after all."
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@ -480,9 +480,9 @@ label chapter_3:
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ease 1.5 xalign 1.075
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repeat
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Nas "I also{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Got the L&L Club to finally take down their christmas decorations{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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Nas "I also{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} got the L&L Club to{w=.4} {cps=*.5}finally take down their{w=.3} christmas decorations{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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Nas "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} The library’s clean again{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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Nas "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} {cps=*.3}{size=-5}the library’s{/size}{size=-10} clean again...{/cps}{/size}"
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pause .5
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show naser:
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@ -592,13 +592,14 @@ label chapter_3:
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N "But from Anon?"
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A "But from me?"
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pause .5
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I "Naser continues."
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Nas "I asked her what she was doing,{w=.4} and she just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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show naser unimpressed flip
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Nas "Just says 'fuck off...',{w=.4} so I think 'maybe dad will help'."
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Nas "Just says{w=.2} 'fuck off...',{w=.4} so I think 'maybe dad will help'."
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show naser sad flip
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Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}He didn’t."
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@ -620,6 +621,8 @@ label chapter_3:
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easeout_quart 1 xalign 1.3 yalign -0.3
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pause .5
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hide naser with dissolve
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show naomi shocked
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play sound 'audio/effects/anonHeadbutt.ogg'
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with vpunch
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stop sound fadeout 1
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@ -628,9 +631,10 @@ label chapter_3:
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I "There’s a rumbling snore and it’s clear that Naser has checked out."
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A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{cps=*.5}Riiiiiiiight{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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pause .5
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show naomi sad with dissolve
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I "Naomi looks distraught."
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pause .5
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N "He’s always like this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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@ -682,7 +686,7 @@ label chapter_3:
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play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
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I "GOOD LORD HE’S HEAVY." with vpunch
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stop music fadeout 2
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stop music fadeout 4
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pause .5
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N "Alright,{w=.4} the Nurses’ Office is down the main hall on the left side,{w=.4} near the front desk."
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@ -890,6 +894,10 @@ label chapter_3:
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stop music fadeout .25
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play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
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show dimmer_light:
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alpha 0
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show dimmer_light:
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linear 0.25 alpha 1
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A "SHIT!" with vpunch
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pause .5
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@ -899,6 +907,7 @@ label chapter_3:
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pause .5
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I "Do I really want to pick it up and potentially face a harsh reality?"
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pause .5
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I "{cps=*.5}Schrodingers’ crack.{/cps}"
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@ -910,15 +919,23 @@ label chapter_3:
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I "It’s the moment of truth."
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pause .5
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show anonphone with easeinbottom
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pause .5
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I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}No cracks?"
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pause .5
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hide dimmer_light with Dissolve(.25)
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pause .25
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play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg'
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I "Thank the Lord."
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show fang happy at scenter with Dissolve(1)
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show fang happy at scenter behind anonphone with Dissolve(1)
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F "Yeah,{w=.3} you got lucky."
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hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
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F "Yeah,{w=.5} you got lucky."
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pause .5
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I "Fang has stopped playing and is throwing a small smirk my way."
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@ -1150,6 +1167,8 @@ label chapter_3:
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I "Oh."
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show anon:
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easein_back 1 xalign 0.25
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I "I step around her and grab the handle,{w=.4} pulling the door wide open."
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pause .5
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@ -1164,14 +1183,14 @@ label chapter_3:
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show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
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show fang neutral flip behind anon:
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easeout 1 xalign 0.25
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pause .4
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hide fang with dissolve
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pause .25
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easeout 1 xalign 0.15
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pause .6
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play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg'
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show anon shocked:
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easein_elastic 0.5 yalign -0.05 xalign -0.3
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show fang:
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linear 0.25 xalign 0.15 alpha 0
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A "FUCK!" with vpunch
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F "Hurry up already."
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@ -1255,19 +1274,27 @@ label chapter_3:
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show jewlcase at truecenter:
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xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.5
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xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5 zoom 0.3
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linear 0.5 align (.15, .4) knot (0.25, 0.25) rotate 395
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show jewlcase behind dimmer_light with dissolve
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play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
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linear 0.4 align (.15, .4) knot (0.25, 0.25) rotate 395
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show jewlcase behind dimmer_light with Dissolve(.4)
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play sound 'audio/effects/anonDink.ogg'
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show anon:
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easein_quart 0.25 xalign -0.3 #-0.275
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easein 0.25 xalign -0.275
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easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.4
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# B: previous iteration of this animation commented out
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# easein_quart 0.25 xalign -0.3 #-0.275
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# easein 0.25 xalign -0.275
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# show jewlcase:
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# easein_quart 0.25 xpos 0.14
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# easein 0.25 xpos 0.15
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# pause 0.5
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# show jewlcase:
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# easeout_cubic 0.5 ypos 1.1 rotate 445
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show jewlcase:
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easein_quart 0.25 xpos 0.14
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easein 0.25 xpos 0.15
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pause 0.5
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show jewlcase:
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easeout_cubic 0.5 ypos 1.1 rotate 445
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pause 1.5
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xpos .15 ypos .4
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linear 0.5 align (.3, 1.5) knot (0.25, 0.25) rotate 180
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pause .2
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show anon sad flip with Dissolve(.25)
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pause 1
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hide jewlcase
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show trish angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
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T "What the fuck?!"
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I "It strikes against my head with a dull *tonk* and lands on the ground in front of me."
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pause .5
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show jewlcase:
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xalign 0.5
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show anon neutral with dissolve
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pause .25
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show anon:
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easein 1 xalign -0.275
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pause .5
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# leet renpy hax
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show jewlcase
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show dimmer_light behind jewlcase
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show fang behind jewlcase
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show trish behind jewlcase
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show reed behind jewlcase
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hide jewlcase
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show jewlcase with easeinbottom:
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rotate 20 xalign 0.5 zoom 1.5 yalign 0.5
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show dimmer_light as xtra_dimmer behind jewlcase with Dissolve(.25)
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