crunch some sounds

game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "It’s my first day at a new school."
 
-    I "It’s the second half of the first semester of senior year."
+    I "The second half of the first semester of senior year."
 
     I "I had six months left at my old school."
 
@@ -74,12 +74,14 @@ label chapter_1:
     unknown "It’s been too long!"
 
     unknown "It was only three weeks *Giggle*"
+    pause .65
 
     I "I can make out the building now."
 
     I "The fog shrouding gives the school an ominous vibe to it."
 
     I "I look at the name written on the arch over the entrance"
+    pause .5
 
     I "{cps=*0.2}{b}{size=+10}{i}Volcano High{/i}{/size}{/b}{/cps}"
 
@@ -243,6 +245,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     with vpunch
 
     I "I look up.{w} The bench broke down."
+    pause .7
 
     I "I lay on the ground,{w=0.4} ass hurt from hitting jagged concrete and splintered wood."
 
@@ -265,6 +268,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "I instinctively apply my ‘chill guy’ facade in the presence of strangers to hide how uneasy I am today."
 
     I "A hand is held over my face.{w=0.5} In my pain addled confusion I shake it."
+    pause .5
 
     unknown "Naser!"
 
@@ -287,13 +291,15 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "It also felt like enough force to pull my arm out of its socket."
 
-    show anon neutral at acenter
+    show anon neutral at acenter#
+    pause .5
 
     A "Uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.4} 'Sup?"
 
     Nas "You're Anon,{w=0.4} yeah?"
 
     unknown "I'm glad we found you!"
+    pause .5
 
     A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Who are you guys?{w=0.4} Why do you know my name?"
 
@@ -672,8 +678,9 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause 0.8
 
     I "OH!"
+    pause 0.6
 
-    I "I stood from my seat and faced the class.{w=0.5} Once again all eyes on me and the tightness in my chest returns.{w} I inhale deep,{w=0.3} willing my erratic heart to slow."
+    I "I stand from my seat and face the class.{w=0.5} Once again all eyes on me and the tightness in my chest returns.{w} I inhale deep,{w=0.3} willing my erratic heart to slow."
 
     show anon neutral flip at acenter
     show jinflip behind anon:
@@ -683,6 +690,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause 0.75
 
     A "Hey{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     I "Again those eyes,{w=0.4} just like three weeks ago."
 
@@ -742,8 +750,9 @@ label chapter_1:
     hide jinflip with dissolve
 
     I "And I probably have to do this for each class today?"
+    pause 0.7
 
-    I "Double fuck my life."
+    I "{cps=*0.6}Double fuck my life.{/cps}"
 
     scene black with fade
 
@@ -812,7 +821,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     show naser explanatory with Dissolve(0.2)
 
     Nas "...Yours?{fast}"
-    pause 0.5
+    pause 0.6
 
     I "I swear to all that is good and holy."
 
@@ -831,6 +840,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "God damn it."
 
     I "I don’t want to make a scene."
+    pause .6
 
     A "{cps=*0.25}Suuuure{/cps}{cps=*0.1}..{/cps}"
 
@@ -936,7 +946,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "What was that?"
 
-    I "I’ll pretend that wasn’t meant to be malicious."
+    I "I’ll assume that wasn’t meant to be malicious."
 
     show naser neutral flip
 
@@ -981,18 +991,19 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     show naser considering flip with dissolve
     Nas "The good kind?"
+    pause .6
 
     A "You don’t know,{w=0.3} do you."
 
     show naser neutral flip
     Nas "Nope."
 
-    I "Well,{w=0.3} free food is free food.{w=0.5} Sign me the fuck up"
+    I "Well,{w=0.3} free food is free food."
+    pause .5
 
     I "I look at my pizza,{w=0.3} noticing something is wrong."
 
     I "I test it with my plastic spork and watch the cheap utensil shatter to bits."
-    pause .5
 
     I "I curse life for a third time today."
 
@@ -1032,7 +1043,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     show naser sad flip behind naomi:
         easein 1 xalign 0.7
-    pause 1.2
+    pause 1.5
 
     I "I will never forget your brave sacrifice."
     pause 0.5
@@ -1169,12 +1180,14 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause 0.6
 
     I "His massive hand stops me."
+    pause .5
 
     A "A{w=0.2}-ah.{w=0.5} Y-yes?"
 
     I "I’m guided to the side,{w=0.4} away from the crowd that’s filtering into the auditorium."
 
     show spears neutral at sleft with Dissolve(1.5)
+    pause .3
 
     unknown "So how are you feeling about our lovely school,{w=0.3} Anon?"
 
@@ -1341,10 +1354,10 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     pause 1
 
-    show naser considering with dissolve
-
     play sound 'audio/effects/cellphone.ogg' # CC0
 
+    show naser considering with dissolve
+
     I "Naser’s phone rings.{w=0.4} He moves aside to answer it."
 
     show naser flip neutral with Dissolve(0.25)
@@ -1376,6 +1389,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause .5
 
     Nas "Okay okay I-"
+    pause .5
 
     I "The call ends and Naser sags."
 
@@ -1449,7 +1463,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "It all went tumbling down from there."
 
-    pause 0.5
+    pause .5
     play music 'audio/OST/its_the_piece_of_shit_you_asked_for.ogg' volume 1
     with hpunch
     pause 2 
@@ -1457,6 +1471,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "What I thought was a guitar sounded horrifically wrong,{w=0.5} far too heavy."
 
     I "The lead guitarist was using a fucking bass."
+    pause .5
 
     I "And then the vocals kicked in."
 
@@ -1526,6 +1541,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause 0.5
 
     unknown "NO ONE WOULD WANT TO FUCK YOU,{w=0.2} BITCH!"
+    pause .5
 
     I "Pffft{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}{w=0.2} That struck a chord with her."
 
@@ -1692,7 +1708,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     play sound "audio/effects/digital_alarm.ogg" # CC0
 
-    I "{cps=*20}{w=0.4}*BLEEP*{w=0.5} *BLEEP*{w=0.5} *BLEEP*{w=0.5} *BLEEP*{w=0.5} *BLEEP*{w=0.5} *BLEEP*{/cps}"
+    I "{cps=*20}*BLEEP*{w=0.51} *BLEEP*{w=0.51} *BLEEP*{w=0.51} *BLEEP*{w=0.51} *BLEEP*{w=0.51} *BLEEP*{/cps}"
 
     stop sound fadeout 0.2