From 9cbe06a8c653f879065773677313893b364fab14 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bowie Date: Sun, 18 Jul 2021 21:32:21 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] rework ch4 auditorium lunch scene, rename anon grin --- .../anon/base set/{grin.png => anon grin.png} | Bin .../4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy | 414 ++++++++++++++---- 2 files changed, 317 insertions(+), 97 deletions(-) rename game/images/anon/base set/{grin.png => anon grin.png} (100%) diff --git a/game/images/anon/base set/grin.png b/game/images/anon/base set/anon grin.png similarity index 100% rename from game/images/anon/base set/grin.png rename to game/images/anon/base set/anon grin.png diff --git a/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy b/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy index 50542dc..2ec8459 100644 --- a/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy +++ b/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ label chapter_4: - # CH 4 SCENE 1 - Anon is one slice of toast away from living an anime + # CH 4 SCENE 1 - Anon is just one slice of toast away from living an anime pause 1 play music 'audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg' fadein 2 @@ -139,8 +139,9 @@ label chapter_4: hide anon with dissolve I "I turn away from the two and leave them behind." - - # TODO: scene door auditorium + + + # CH 4 SCENE 2 - Trish continues to hate Anon's guts, more at 11 scene door auditorium with fade @@ -159,163 +160,382 @@ label chapter_4: I "I put my hand on the doorhandle and hesitate a bit.{w=.4} Then I pull it open." - # CH 4 SCENE 2 - - scene auditorium with Dissolve(1) - I "The squeak of the door echoes through the near empty auditorium, and immediately all three turn their heads and stare." + I "The squeak of the door echoes through the near empty auditorium,{w=.4} and immediately all three turn their heads and stare." + pause .75 - I "There’s an awkward pause that goes on for just a bit too long. Eventually Fang calls out from her seat." + I "There’s an awkward pause that goes on for just a bit too long.{w=.5} Eventually Fang calls out from her seat." - show fang shocked at scenter with dissolve + # TODO: sound direction says play 'She Fucks Human Men', resolve this + # play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg' + play music 'audio/ost/she_fucks_human_men.ogg' fadein 2 + pause .5 - # TODO: sound direction says play She Fucks Human Men, resolve this - play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg' + show fang surprised flip with Dissolve(1): + yalign 0.0 xalign 1.3 + pause 1 + + show fang shocked flip with Dissolve(.25) + F "What the hell are {i}you{/i} doing here,{w=.2} dweeb?" + show fang considering flip with dissolve + + show anon: + yalign 0.1 xalign -0.5 + show anon neutral: + easein 1 xalign -0.15 + with dissolve + pause 1 - F "What the hell are you doing here, dweeb?" - hide fang shocked - show fang neutral at scenter - show anon neutral flip at sright A "Hiding from Naomi." + pause .25 + + show fang: + easein_cubic 2 yalign -0.1 xalign 1.35 + show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) I "Fang throws her head back and goes limp on the shitty wooden chair." - F "UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGHHHHHH, THAT BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITCH." - show fang considering - I "..." - A "..." - F "..." - A "..." + + show fang angry flip + F "{cps=*.7}UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGHHHHHH{/cps},{w=.2} THAT {cps=*.7}BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITCH{/cps}." + show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 + + I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + show fang: + easein_cubic 1 yalign 0.0 xalign 1.3 I "Fang lifts her head back up." - show fang unimpressed with dissolve - F "Ffffffffine, you can stay." - I "I go sit a few yards away from Fang and Trish on the theater seat. Reed turns back to that device he was messing with before." + + show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) + F "{cps=*.3}Ffffffffine{/cps},{w=.4} you can stay." + pause .5 + + show anon: + ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.4 + + I "I go sit a few yards away from Fang and Trish on the theater seat.{w=.5} Reed turns back to that device he was messing with before." + I "Looks like a projector?" + pause .5 + A "You don’t like Naomi?" - show fang angry with dissolve - F "What was your first fuckin’ clue? That stupid bitch, acting all high and mighty all the time." - T "Hey, Fang." + + show fang angry flip with Dissolve(.25) + F "What was your first fuckin’ clue?{w=.5} That stupid bitch,{w=.4} acting all high and mighty all the time." + pause .5 + + T "Hey,{w=.4} Fang." + + show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25) F "Oh look at me I’m super smart and nice to everyone and everyone likes me so if you disagree with me I get the moral high ground no matter what!" + I "Fang lets out some combination of a snort and a sigh." - F "No different than Naser. What a couple." - F "Ugh, whatever. What was she doing to bother you?" - A "She’s been pestering me about every little thing since school started. Granted, she’s been a big help in some cases, but jeez she’s overbearing sometimes." - show trish neutral at tleft with dissolve + + F "No different than Naser.{w=.4} What a couple." + + show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) + F "Ugh,{w=.4} whatever.{w=.5} What was she doing to bother you?" + + A "She’s been pestering me about every little thing since school started.{w=.5} Granted,{w=.4} she’s been a big help in some cases,{w=.4} but jeez she’s overbearing sometimes." + T "Fang?" - F "I’ll say. Sometime in the first semester she ended up helping me with a major science project. We only had a day to do the whole thing." + pause .5 + + show anon: + easein 1 xalign 0.0 #0.4 + show fang: + easein 1 xalign 0.65 #1.3 + with None + + show trish neutral flip: + yalign 0 xalign 1.35 + show trish: + easein 1 xalign 0.9 + with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 + + show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + F "I’ll say.{w=.4} Sometime in the first semester she ended up helping me with a major science project.{w=.4} We only had a day to do the whole thing." + pause .5 + A "You waited until the last day for a major grade?" - F "It… That doesn’t matter. Shut up." - F "Anyways, Naomi insisted on helping me, and I just went along with it. She ended up just bossing me around for eight hours." - show trish indignant + + show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25) + F "It{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} That doesn’t matter.{w=.4} Shut up." + + show fang neutral flip + F "Anyways,{w=.4} Naomi insisted on helping me,{w=.3} and I just went along with it." + + show fang unimpressed flip + F "She ended up just bossing me around for eight hours." + + show trish: + easein 1 xalign 0.95 + show trish indignant flip with Dissolve(.25) T "HEY GUYS DID YOU FORGET I’M HERE TOO?!" + + show trish neutral flip with dissolve + pause .25 + show fang: + easein 1 xalign 0.6 + show fang happy with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 + + F "Oh,{w=.2} right.{w=.4} What were you talking about Trish?" + + show trish smug flip with Dissolve(.25) + I "Trish pulls a cardboard tube out of her backpack.{w=.4} She pops the top of the tube open and pulls a rolled up poster out and unfurls it." + + show trish happy flip + T "This!{w=.4} Tada!{w=.5} Our first poster!" + + show fang surprised with Dissolve(.25) + + pause .5 + + A "VVURM DRAMA?{w=.4} That’s an{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} interesting name{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} and what’s with the date on it?" + show fang neutral flip with dissolve - F "Oh, right. What were you talking about Trish?" - show trish neutral - I "Trish pulls a cardboard tube out of her backpack. She pops the top of the tube open and pulls a rolled up poster out and unfurls it." - T "This! Tada! Our first poster!" - A "VVURM DRAMA? That’s an… interesting name… and what’s with the date on it?" - F "Trish wants-" - T "We need to have an actual show! Not some dumb school show. We need actual people who matter to show our genius to!" - I "Genius? More like retardation." - show fang sad with dissolve + pause .25 + F "{cps=*.5}Trish wants-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" + + show trish smug flip + T "We need to have an actual show!{w=.4} Not some dumb school show.{w=.5} We need actual people who matter to show our genius to!" + pause .5 + + I "Genius?{w=.4} More like retardation." + + show fang sad with Dissolve(.25) F "I don’t know Trish." - A "Yeeeaaaaahhhh I’m with Fang on this one." - show fang neutral - show trish unimpressed + pause .5 + + A "{cps=*.4}Yeeeaaaaahhhh{/cps}{w=.2} {nw}" + show trish neutral flip + extend "I’m with Fang on this one." + + show fang considering + show trish unimpressed flip + with Dissolve(.25) I "The glare Trish levels at me was akin to a very dull knife." + + show trish: + easein 0.5 xalign 0.9 T "You don’t even know how good we are!" + + show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25) T "That was simply a practice session!" - T "Since you’re Naser’s friend too, just know HE ruined our first concert. Right Fang?" - F "Ugh, yeah. If he hadn’t invited all those cocksuckers…" - A "Still I think-" - show trish angry with dissolve - T "It doesn’t matter what YOU think!" - I "Whoa, where did that come from." - show fang happy with dissolve - F "Let’s drop it for now. My tuna sandwich is getting cold." - show trish smug + pause .25 + + show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) + T "Since you’re Naser’s friend too,{w=.4} just know HE ruined our first concert.{w=.5} Right Fang?" + + show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) + F "Ugh,{w=.4} yeah.{w=.5} If he hadn’t invited all those cocksuckers{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 + + A "Still {cps=*.4}I think-{w=.4}{nw}" + + T "It doesn’t matter what {w=.1}{nw}" + show trish angry flip + play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' + show anon: + easein_cubic .75 xalign -0.05 + extend "YOU{w=.2} think!" with vpunch + show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve + pause .25 + + I "Whoa,{w=.4} where did that come from." + + show fang neutral flip with dissolve + pause .25 + F "Let’s drop it for now.{w=.4} My tuna sandwich is getting cold." + + show trish smug flip with Dissolve(.25) I "Trish grins in victory." - Re "Dude… ya got told…" - I "What the fuck am I doing? I’m dead if I out myself here outnumbered" + pause .5 + + Re "{size=-10}Dude{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} ya got told{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{/size}" + + stop music fadeout 2 + pause .25 + show dimmer_light behind anon, trish with dissolve + pause .25 + + I "What the fuck am I doing?{w=.5} I’m dead if I out myself whilst outnumbered here" I "Trish tore at me like she knew I was there." + pause .5 I "Had to happen EVENTUALLY." - I "I hope that’s not the case." - show trish neutral - I "I finally get to opening my omnivore lunch. A BLT, some chicken nuggets, and an orange." + I "I pray that’s not the case." + pause .5 + + play music 'audio/ost/she_fucks_human_men.ogg' fadein 1 + hide dimmer_light + show trish neutral flip + with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 + + I "I finally get to opening my omnivore lunch.{w=.5} A BLT,{w=.3} some chicken nuggets,{w=.3} and an orange." + I "I take my first bite of the sandwich and-" + stop music fadeout 1.0 - I "*DING-DONG BING-BONG*" + play sound 'audio/effects/schoolBell.ogg' + I "{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.7}DONG {w=0.65}BING-{w=0.7}BONG{/i}{/cps}" + pause 0.5 + stop sound fadeout 1 + I "Are you kidding me." + I "I cram as much of the sandwich into my mouth as I can and close the box." - I "Reed puts the projector in the corner of the room, and Trish makes for the exit with Fang. I follow after, cheeks still filled with food" - scene hallway with fade - show fang happy flip at scenter with dissolve - show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve - I "Next class is… Music, that’s right. I’ll be walking with Fang then." + + I "Reed puts the projector in the corner of the room,{w=.3} and Trish makes for the exit with Fang." + + I "I follow after,{w=.4} cheeks still filled with food" - show hallway - play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg' + # CH 4 SCENE 3 + + play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 2 + scene hallway with Fade(1, 0, 1) + + pause .5 + + I "Next class is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Music,{w=.4} that’s right.{w=.5} I’ll be walking with Fang then." I "The three all wave each other goodbye and Fang turns towards our shared class." + pause .5 + + stop ambient fadeout 3 + play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg' I "May as well make some small talk." - A "So, uh… What’s your favorite band, Fang?" - F "My favorite band, huh…" - F "Guess it’d be something like The Skinks… Maybe the Fossillies?" - A "‘Oi, tha’ ‘ere’s sum pre’ey bri’ish tayste, yeah?" - F "Pffft." + + show anon neutral: + yalign 0.1 xalign 0.1 + show fang neutral behind anon: + yalign 0.0 xalign 0.9 + with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 + + A "So,{w=.2} uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} What’s your favorite band,{w=.2} Fang?" + + show fang considering flip with dissolve + F "My favorite band,{w=.3} huh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + F "Guess it’d be something like The Skinks{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Maybe the Fossillies?" + + A "‘Oi,{w=.3} tha’ ‘ere’s sum pre’ey bri’ish tayste,{w=.4} yeah?" + + show fang: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.975 + show fang happy with Dissolve(.25) + F "{cps=*.35}Pffft.{/cps}" + I "She turns away to hide her snickers." + + show fang happy flip with dissolve + pause .25 + F "Shut it." + F "I’m sure your favorite is much better." - A "I’m into…" - #>>Boomer rock - #>>Obscure hipster shit - #>>Anime openings and video game OSTs + pause .5 + + A "I’m into{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 menu: "Boomer rock": - jump regardlessofselect + pass "Obscure hipster shit": - jump regardlessofselect + pass "Anime openings and video game OSTs": - jump regardlessofselect + pass - label regardlessofselect: + pause .5 + + show fang: + easein 0.5 xalign 1.05 I "Fang holds a hand up to her beak." - F "AHAHAHAHAHAHHA. God you are such a dweeb" - I "I flash her my biggest shit-eating grin." - A "Least I don’t need a ‘loisence’ to listen to it." - F "Oi luv, didn’ share me taystes to get rallied on, bit rewd, innit?" - stop music fadeout 1.0 - scene black with fade - I "The two of us banter with each other with increasingly strong british accents all the way to class." - scene classroom with fade - I "..." + F "{cps=*.4}AHAHAHAHAHAHHA.{/cps} {w=.5}{nw}" + show fang: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.9 + extend "God you are such a dweeb" + + show anon grin with dissolve + I "I flash her my biggest shit-eating grin." + + A "Least I don’t need a ‘loisence’ to listen to it." + pause .5 + + F "Oi luv,{w=.3} didn’ share me taystes to get rallied on,{w=.5} bit rewd,{w=.2} innit?" + pause .25 + + scene black with fade + pause .5 + + I "The two of us banter with each other with increasingly strong british accents all the way to class." + pause .5 + + stop music fadeout 3 + + scene bandroom with Fade(1, 0, 1) + pause 1 + + I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' - show bandroom - I "ARGH!! This stupid-" - I "Define a Treble clef? I don’t know what a Treble clef is! I don’t care about this shit, it won’t ever be useful." - I "Fuck this, who can I cheat off of?" + play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' + I "ARGH!! This stupid-" with vpunch + pause .25 + + I "Define a Treble clef?{w=.5} I don’t know what a Treble clef is!{w=.5} I don’t care about this shit,{w=.3} it won’t ever be useful." + + I "Fuck this,{w=.4} who can I cheat off of?" + pause .5 + I "I lean back in my uncomfortable chair hoping to pop my spine back in place." - N "{i}Oh! What if you asked Fang for help?{/i}" # TODO: is this from a previous line? If so can't find it + + # TODO: this line doesn't occur until chapter 6 + N "{i}Oh! What if you asked Fang for help?{/i}" + I "I crane my head, looking for Fang. At her own desk she’s filling out her assignment page easily, drumming her fingers on her desk. Almost looks like she’s strumming honestly." + I "Agh, and that’s another thing. Who the fuck made guitars?! Fuck trying to memorize frets or whatever the fuck." + I "Oh shit, she’s looking at me now." + I "She tilts her head and taps her sheet." + I "OH!" + I "I respond with an eyeroll and finger gun at my temple. My thumb hammer drops and I fake die in my seat." + I "Fang shakes her head, returning to her assignment with a tiny smile gracing her beak." + I "I look at the papers we need to finish. Fuck me, how the hell are we suppose to finish these by the end of class?!" + + # TODO: this line doesn't occur until chapter 6 N "It can’t hurt to ask, though, right?" + I "Maybe the neon Nero had a good point." + I "Still, interrupting her now might piss her off." + I "FFFFFfuck. I’ll flip a coin." - #>>> Heads, ask Fang for help - #>>> Tails, leave Fang alone menu: "Heads, ask Fang for help":