minor tweaks

game/script/2.fourth-day-of-school.rpy

@@ -970,7 +970,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     pause .15
     hide anon with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    play sound "<from 0.2 to 2.0>audio/effects/Slam.ogg" volume 1.9
+    play sound "<from 0.2 to 2.0>audio/effects/Slam.ogg" volume 1.4
     with vpunch
 
     I "Luckily I fell sideways and there was a cold hard desk in the way to catch my fall."
@@ -1774,6 +1774,8 @@ label chapter_2:
     show reed neutral flip
     pause .5
 
+    # TODO: mix up the music a bit here? Something a bit more chill?
+
     scene black with fade
 
     I "I end up walking to get food with Trish,{w=.2} Reed{w=.2} and Fang."
@@ -2126,10 +2128,9 @@ label chapter_2:
 
     I "Her shrill goody goody sugary voice is piercing through the chatter of the lunchroom,{w=.4} I don’t wanna reply if it means hearing more of her voice{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    show naomi explanatory
     N "Tell me,{w=.2} Anon!{w=.4} What were you and Fang talking about?{w=.4} I didn’t know you were friends!"
 
-    show naomi:
+    show naomi explanatory:
         ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
         ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
     N "I wanna know about everything!"
@@ -2181,7 +2182,7 @@ label chapter_2:
 
     A "Colorful folk,{w=.3} I know."
 
-    show naser neutral
+    show naser neutral with Dissolve(.25)
     Nas "Uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} no{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I mean -THEY-{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Hm?"
@@ -2219,9 +2220,8 @@ label chapter_2:
 
     A "...?"
 
-    show naomi explanatory
     N "If there’s anything Fang needs in these trying times,{w=.4} it’s a new friend to talk to!"
-    show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .5
 
     A "{cps=*.3}Uuuuuh,{/cps}{w=.4} I don’t know about that,{w=.4} you know how they is,{w=.2} right?"
 
@@ -2259,15 +2259,15 @@ label chapter_2:
 
     Nas "Uhhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} we’ll talk later,{w=.2} Anon.{w=.5} I’ll have to keep my eye on you,{w=.2} though."
 
-    show naomi explanatory:
+    show naomi:
         easein 0.5 xalign 0.05
-    N "Don’t worry,{w=.1} Naser.{w=.4} I know Anon is of good character!"
-    show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    N "Don’t worry, Naser.{w=.4} I know Anon is of good character!"
+    pause .5
 
     I "What is she talking about?"
     pause .5
 
-    I "You know what,{w=.4} it don’t matter.{w=.5} Nonathiss matters."
+    I "You know what,{w=.4} it don’t matter.{w=.6} Nonathiss matters."
     pause .5
 
     I "Only useful thing I learned all day."
@@ -2292,11 +2292,9 @@ label chapter_2:
     show naomi neutral
     show naser happy
     with Dissolve(.25)
-    Nas "Hey,{w=.4} take it easy,{w=.1} man!"
+    Nas "Hey,{w=.4} take it easy, man!"
 
-    show naomi explanatory
-    N "Come Naser!{w=.3} We have a busy day today!"
-    show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    N "Come Naser!{w=.4} We have a busy day today!"
 
     show naser considering with Dissolve(.25)
     Nas "Oh,{w=.2} sure."