Merge remote-tracking branch 'Nio/choreo_ch7andup_basedonBowies' into bowieniocombo

LICENSE

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 Non-Cavemanon sourced items with attribution clauses
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 WoodSnap.wav - "Snapping, Wooden Fence, N.wav" by InspectorJ (www.jshaw.co.uk) of Freesound.org
-firealarm.ogg - "School Fire Alarm" by Cullen Card 
+firealarm.ogg - "School Fire Alarm" by Cullen Card
 shot.ogg - "38 Caliber Gun Shot 5x" by Mike Koenig
 wind.wav - "Wind" by Mark DiAngelo
 rumble.ogg - "CinematicBoomNorm" by Herbert Boland
 sizzle.ogg - "Hot Sizzling" by Mike Koenig
 drumroll.ogg, drumrollend.ogg - "Drum Roll with Cymbals Crash" by Iwan Gabovitch
 firework.ogg - "Fuse" by soundslikewillem of freesound.org, "fireworks 3burst sizzle" by atomwrath of freesound.org
-splash.ogg - "Splash, Jumping, D" by InspectorJ of freesound.org
+splash.ogg - "Splash, Jumping, D" by InspectorJ of freesound.org
+punch.ogg - "Strong Punch" by Mike Koenig
+menacing.ogg - "Scaryscape 01" by Suonho (soundcloud.com/suonho) of Freesound.org

ch7-review.txt

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+chapter 7:
+
+Opening
+>opening scene needs the CG of Fang's ass when Anon is gawping as she leans over the amp, it's in the art channel somewhere
+
+Tarot Reading
+>swapping Anon and Stella's places (and directions) in the tarot reading scene would solve the issue with "OPPAI" being flipped to "IAPPO"
+>whoosh SFX plays after Stella has left the scene, I suggest putting it in front of the `moveoutright` statement so it plays as that movement occurs
+>the screenshake effect when Anon trips ends with a slightly misaligned screen and you can see some transparency around the edges 
+>Anon does an odd screenwrap teleport when he falls over, you could check out when anon trips over gardening tools in chapter 5 for some ideas
+
+Showtime (general)
+>there's some script duplication at the start of both branches, I would pull this segment out of both branches and just stick it in front of where the real divergence occurs
+
+Showtime (leave cables)
+>this scene needs a soft transition like `with fade` after "We've got sweet music to play." since at the moment all the characters just appear
+>IMO this scene should not be taking place in Moe's backroom since it's supposed to be on a stage inside the main restaurant, looks to me like this is an oversight from the original game. You have a few options:
+>>A) ask for someone to source and process a stage background
+>>B) re-use the CG from the failed concert (potentially controversial)
+>>C) use the Moe's Pizza background with the `dimmer_darker` effect behind the characters
+>ask for an applause loop to insert at the appropriate point
+>if you use option B, return to a BG with the character sprites when it hits "The bandmates' faces light up" so you can show them all happy and sheit
+>Reed is falling off the right side of the screen a bit
+
+Showtime (fix cables)
+>see comment about the background
+>Reed is getting too cosy with Fang
+>Summertime Synth only plays for a couple of lines, I would move the `stop music fadeout` much further down. When Trish leaves would be a good time.
+>the line where Trish says "You are not the only person in the world!" was changed to "We exist too, you know!" in the script doc
+NOTE: For the above point I should have mentioned earlier, there are occasionally updated lines or segments that we have to watch out for - first thing I do when I'm reworking a chapter is to look for any changes in this google doc https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-T0SNGgRkypzXshZ16JqdKqaHL4fKUIR5XWsz0YTH_A
+>
+
+Post Showtime (leave cables)
+>the fanghug sprite after "Before I could react I was swept up in a blur of feathers" is suspended in midair, try a `yalign` of 0.0 or 0.1
+
+Cleaning Up
+>Reed appears very close to the right screen edge again. For situations like this where the quick and dirty location definitions are jank (`rright`?) you can specify the positioning with a custom `xalign`. This usually takes a bit of trial and error.
+>Trish overlaps quite a lot with Reed when she appears
+>personally I would not have gone for the heartbeat as well as the music