diff --git a/game/audio/effects/anonGardenFall.ogg b/game/audio/effects/anonGardenFall.ogg new file mode 100644 index 0000000..eed4c29 Binary files /dev/null and b/game/audio/effects/anonGardenFall.ogg differ diff --git a/game/images/backgrounds/parking_lot.jpg b/game/images/backgrounds/parking_lot.jpg new file mode 100644 index 0000000..67f5526 Binary files /dev/null and b/game/images/backgrounds/parking_lot.jpg differ diff --git a/game/images/vfx/fastforward.png b/game/images/vfx/fastforward.png new file mode 100644 index 0000000..6c06e63 Binary files /dev/null and b/game/images/vfx/fastforward.png differ diff --git a/game/script.rpy b/game/script.rpy index cee4193..faa603f 100644 --- a/game/script.rpy +++ b/game/script.rpy @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ image ctc_end_marker: # linear 0.5 alpha 0 # repeat image ctc_mid_marker: - "pickicon2" + "pickicon_smaller" # xalign 0.925 yalign 0.98 alpha 0 linear 0.25 alpha 1 diff --git a/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy b/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy index 3a13463..a5b9a51 100644 --- a/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy +++ b/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ label chapter_5: "It’s been a couple of days since I snooped on Fang’s phone." - "The guilt still weighs on me,{w=.4} but I’ve found a way to cope with it." + "The guilt still weighs on me, but I’ve found a way to cope with it." "Even more aggressive shitposting on a Hungarian steak sampling vlogsite." pause .5 @@ -44,12 +44,12 @@ label chapter_5: "Spears sentenced me to one week ‘Campus Beautification’ for using taxpayer money on a few dozen gigs of videos." pause .5 - "Well,{w=.4} now I know to space the torrenting out a bit more." + "Well, now I know to space the torrenting out a bit more." pause .5 - "As I get closer to the dreaded building,{w=.4} the more the thought of ditching crosses my mind." + "As I get closer to the dreaded building, the more the thought of ditching crosses my mind." - "But then the thought of Principal Spears pops up and violently pile drives it into a prius.{w=.5} Weird thought but enough to discourage me from ditching." + "But then the thought of Principal Spears pops up and violently pile drives it into a prius. Weird thought but enough to discourage me from ditching." stop music fadeout 3 play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 2 @@ -59,10 +59,10 @@ label chapter_5: "So here I am now walking to the side and where the gardens of the school are." - "I can see others are here as well,{w=.4} probably all for detention too." + "I can see others are here as well, probably all for detention too." pause .5 - "Wait a sec.{w=.3} Isn’t that Fang?{w=.6} Why is she talking to that green weirdo from before?" + "Wait a sec. Isn’t that Fang?{w=.4} Why is she talking to that green weirdo from before?" show fang unimpressed at sleft show stella neutral at stleft @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ label chapter_5: with dissolve pause 1 - "No,{w=.5} I am." + "No, I am." "Why did I walk up to them?!" pause .5 @@ -88,29 +88,29 @@ label chapter_5: "I cast my gaze aside instead." pause .5 - "The flower bulbs are still closed for the winter,{w=.4} but a few are peeking out." + "The flower bulbs are still closed for the winter, but a few are peeking out." stop ambient fadeout 3 play music 'audio/OST/Ramo de Rosas.ogg' fadein 2 show rosa neutral flip with Dissolve(1): yalign 0.2 xalign 1.2 - unknown "I see you are admiring our work!{w=.6} The gardening club takes much pride in our flowers!" # rosa + unknown "I see you are admiring our work! The gardening club takes much pride in our flowers!" # rosa show anon behind fang: easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.5 show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25) "BWAHSHIT!" - "For such a{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} large girl she’s surprisingly stealthy." + "For such a{cps=*.1}...{/cps} large girl{w=.4} she’s surprisingly stealthy." show rosa considering flip with Dissolve(.25) show stella explanatory - unknown "Good morning,{w=.2} Rosa!{w=.4} Ready for today?" # stella + unknown "Good morning, Rosa! Ready for today?" # stella show stella neutral with Dissolve(.25) show rosa neutral flip - Ro "¡Sí!{w=.4} It is a beautiful day for gardening,{w=.3} isn’t it?" + Ro "¡Sí!{w=.4} It is a beautiful day for gardening, isn’t it?" show rosa considering flip with Dissolve(.25) pause .25 @@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ label chapter_5: show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) F "Rosa’s the head of the gardening club." - "Judging by Fang’s tone,{w=.4} she’s been through this kind of detention multiple times already." + "Judging by Fang’s tone, she’s been through this kind of detention multiple times already." show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) @@ -130,15 +130,15 @@ label chapter_5: easein 0.5 xalign 1.175 pause .25 repeat - Ro "Oh!{w=.4} Does he wish to join our club?{w=.4} Is that why he is here?{w=.4} Stella!{w=.6} Stella,{w=.2} we have a new member!" + Ro "Oh! Does he wish to join our club?{w=.4} Is that why he is here?{w=.4} Stella! Stella, we have a new member!" show rosa: ease 0.5 xalign 1.2 show rosa considering flip with Dissolve(.25) show stella explanatory - St "Oh,{w=.2} wonderful!" + St "Oh, wonderful!" - "My eyes are drawn to the green stego,{w=.4} who I immediately recognize from that encounter with the cards." + "My eyes are drawn to the green stego, who I immediately recognize from that encounter with the cards." show stella neutral with Dissolve(.25) @@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ label chapter_5: pause .2 show anon neutral flip with dissolve - A "Hey,{w=.4} you’re that weird stego from the other day." + A "Hey, you’re that weird stego from the other day." show stella sad with Dissolve(.25) @@ -160,7 +160,7 @@ label chapter_5: St "I was just saying what my tarot guidebook told me{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show stella considering with Dissolve(.25) - St "The,{w=.2} uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} work of an astrologer is to show people what fate has in store for them." + St "The, uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} work of an astrologer is to show people what fate has in store for them." show stella explanatory with Dissolve(.5) St "And that’s what I do!" show stella neutral with Dissolve(.25) @@ -171,10 +171,10 @@ label chapter_5: St "But there will always be those who aren’t able to accept what their fortune tells." pause .5 - A "A,{w=.3} that’s retarded.{w=.5} Two,{w=.3} astrology is retarded.{w=.5} And thirdly,{w=.3} that sounds like something from a bad video game." + A "A, that’s retarded.{w=.4} Two, astrology is retarded.{w=.4} And thirdly, that sounds like something from a bad video game." show stella sad with Dissolve(.25) - St "N-{w=.2}no!{w=.4} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {cps=*.35}awwwww{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + St "N-no!{w=.4} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {cps=*.35}awwwww{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show stella mad with dissolve @@ -191,10 +191,10 @@ label chapter_5: easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.025 show rosa neutral flip - Ro "There there,{w=.2} Stella.{w=.5} You’re still my friend no matter how much of the black arts you believe." + Ro "There there, Stella.{w=.4} You’re still my friend no matter how much of the black arts you believe." show fang happy flip behind anon with dissolve - F "Pfft,{w=.4} you’re one to talk about ‘believing black arts’,{w=.2} Rosa." + F "Pfft, you’re one to talk about ‘believing black arts’, Rosa." F "You and your magic dino in the sky." show rosa considering flip with dissolve @@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ label chapter_5: pause .1 repeat - Ro "Ay pinche pagana{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} you’re lucky I don’t-" + Ro "Ay pinche pagana{cps=*.1}...{/cps} you’re lucky I don’t-" show fang neutral flip show rosa: @@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ label chapter_5: show stella considering with dissolve - "The caveman’s bellow reverberates throughout the entire school,{w=.4} even though I’m pretty sure he wasn’t using the PA system." + "The caveman’s bellow reverberates throughout the entire school,even though I’m pretty sure he wasn’t using the PA system." play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 5 show rosa: @@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ label chapter_5: hide stella with dissolve pause .5 - "Not wanting to piss him off even more,{w=.4} I follow the others to where Principal Spears has a few other students gathered in front of him." + "Not wanting to piss him off even more, I follow the others to where Principal Spears has a few other students gathered in front of him." "The only one I recognize is the guy Trish had in a headlock that one day." pause .5 @@ -260,13 +260,13 @@ label chapter_5: "It takes me a moment to realize Fang is talking to me." - A "I,{w=.3} er{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} used too much of the school bandwidth." + A "I, er{cps=*.1}...{/cps} used too much of the school bandwidth." show fang happy with Dissolve(.25) - F "What,{w=.4} Spears catch you downloading porn in the library or something?" + F "What, Spears catch you downloading porn in the library or something?" show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - A "No!{w=.5} Just torrenting,{w=.3} like,{w=.3} TV shows that I can’t get on cable." + A "No!{w=.4} Just torrenting, like, TV shows that I can’t get on cable." "She raises an eyebrow like she doesn’t believe me but doesn’t follow it up." pause .5 @@ -295,18 +295,18 @@ label chapter_5: # show fang neutral behind anon: # xalign 0.0 yalign 0.0 - Sp "I’m glad you could make it,{w=.2} Anon.{w=.4} I think that’s just about everyone." + Sp "I’m glad you could make it, Anon.{w=.4} I think that’s just about everyone." "Not that he gave me much of a choice." - Sp "Alright,{w=.4} I’m sure you’re all familiar with Rosa,{w=.4} she’ll be supervising you for campus beautification today." + Sp "Alright, I’m sure you’re all familiar with Rosa, she’ll be supervising you for campus beautification today." Sp "If I hear a bad word from her about any of you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 "I think I can fill in the rest." - "Spears nods to Rosa,{w=.4} who reminds me of Naomi with how overly happy she looks." + "Spears nods to Rosa, who reminds me of Naomi with how overly happy she looks." show spears neutral with Dissolve(.25) hide spears with easeoutright @@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ label chapter_5: "How can anyone be so enthusiastic about coming to school on the weekend?" - Ro "So by the end of the day we need to get weeding done in the gardens,{w=.4} as well as replanting older flowers,{w=.5} and some of the vines are ready to be trimmed back!" + Ro "So by the end of the day we need to get weeding done in the gardens, as well as replanting older flowers, and some of the vines are ready to be trimmed back!" show rosa considering flip with Dissolve(.25) show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) @@ -337,7 +337,7 @@ label chapter_5: show stella neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) pause .5 show stella explanatory flip - St "Make sure you all get a pair of gloves,{w=.5} and to return them before you leave!" + St "Make sure you all get a pair of gloves, and to return them before you leave!" show stella neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) show fang: @@ -355,7 +355,7 @@ label chapter_5: "Fang lowers her hand." show stella explanatory flip - St "You should all pair off now to split the work evenly,{w=.4} decide amongst yourselves." + St "You should all pair off now to split the work evenly, decide amongst yourselves." show stella neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 3 @@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ label chapter_5: A "Can’t say I’m a big fan either." - F "Whatever,{w=.4} let’s just take vine trimming and get this over with." + F "Whatever, let’s just take vine trimming and get this over with." show fang: easein 1 xalign 1.0 @@ -403,7 +403,7 @@ label chapter_5: show anon: easein 0.5 xalign -0.1 - A "Wait,{w=.4} don’t you need gloves?" + A "Wait, don’t you need gloves?" show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) F "What?{w=.4} I’m not a wuss." @@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ label chapter_5: pause .25 show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "Alright cool,{w=.4} gimme the snippy thing." + F "Alright cool, gimme the snippy thing." A "I don’t like the idea of you with a weapon very much." @@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ label chapter_5: F "Hold the ladder steady while I do this." show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) - F "I’ve been here a few times,{w=.4} this is the easiest job of the three." + F "I’ve been here a few times, this is the easiest job of the three." A "If you say so{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 @@ -454,7 +454,7 @@ label chapter_5: show fang: easein_back 1 yalign 0.4 show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) - "Fang is quick to scale the ladder,{w=.4} leaving me to hold it in place." + "Fang is quick to scale the ladder, leaving me to hold it in place." "I wish I could shitpost on my phone right now to distract myself but my hands are occupied." pause .5 @@ -468,7 +468,7 @@ label chapter_5: A "But you’re still on it." show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) - F "Don’t feel like getting down.{w=.4} Come on,{w=.2} you can’t be that weak." + F "Don’t feel like getting down.{w=.4} Come on, you can’t be that weak." pause .5 "Whatever.{w=.4} {nw}" @@ -480,7 +480,7 @@ label chapter_5: easein_back 1 xalign 0.9 pause .5 easein_back 1 xalign 0.8 - extend "I shimmy the ladder to the side,{w=.4} Fang’s weight making the process more difficult." + extend "I shimmy the ladder to the side, Fang’s weight making the process more difficult." pause .5 "Damn my scrawny arms." @@ -537,7 +537,7 @@ label chapter_5: "And an evil idea comes to mind to get her attention." pause .5 - "There’s a less evil one,{w=.2} too,{w=.4} something that’d just shock her." + "There’s a less evil one, too, something that’d just shock her." pause .5 menu: @@ -548,7 +548,7 @@ label chapter_5: pause .5 - "As I reach out to her she drops another clump into my eyes,{w=.4} blinding me." + "As I reach out to her she drops another clump into my eyes, blinding me." show dimmer_darker with Dissolve(.1) show dimmer_darker as xtra_dimmer with Dissolve(.1) @@ -560,7 +560,7 @@ label chapter_5: scene black with Dissolve(.25) - "There’s a shrill cry above me.{w=.5} That got her attention." + "There’s a shrill cry above me.{w=.4} That got her attention." A "Stop dropping shi-" @@ -613,7 +613,7 @@ label chapter_5: F "Why the fuck would you think my TAIL was my ANKLE?!" show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25) - A "Because I couldn’t see{w=.3} because YOU kept dropping fucking vines in my eyes!" + A "Because I couldn’t see because YOU kept dropping fucking vines in my eyes!" F "So you pull my fucking tail you perverted fuck!" @@ -670,7 +670,7 @@ label chapter_5: F "That’s the weakest threat I’ve ever heard." - F "Actually,{w=.4} in general you seem a bit milquetoast around people." + F "Actually, in general you seem a bit milquetoast around people." F "What gives?" @@ -678,17 +678,18 @@ label chapter_5: "I start prying off some of the vines stuck to my clothes." - A "It’s like,{w=.4} why waste time on certain people,{w=.4} you know?" + A "It’s like, why waste time on certain people, you know?" show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25) A "It wouldn’t be worth my time to do something crazy." + pause .5 - "Fang leans forward on the ladder,{w=.4} pretending to be hurt." + "Fang leans forward on the ladder, pretending to be hurt." show fang: easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.0 - F "Aww,{w=.4} I’m not worth your time?" + F "Aww, I’m not worth your time?" pause .5 A "Some people certainly aren’t." @@ -700,7 +701,7 @@ label chapter_5: "She drops the smug expression for a second." pause .5 - F "Anyways,{w=.4} you should get up." + F "Anyways, you should get up." F "Rosa will kill you if she sees you crumpled in her stupid flowers." pause .5 @@ -710,7 +711,7 @@ label chapter_5: "A yell echoes from somewhere across the schoolgrounds." - Ro "He {w=.2}{nw}" + Ro "He {w=.3}{nw}" play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg' extend "{b}WHAT{/b}." with vpunch pause .25 @@ -720,6 +721,7 @@ label chapter_5: A "Hang on{cps=*.1}...{/cps}!" + play sound 'audio/effects/vines.ogg' show anon: easein_elastic 1 xalign 0.05 pause 0.25 @@ -789,7 +791,8 @@ label chapter_5: show anon neutral with dissolve pause .5 - A "Uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} no,{w=.4} I fell on my own." + A "Uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} no, I fell on my own." + pause .5 A "Sorry{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 @@ -809,14 +812,14 @@ label chapter_5: Ro "Name!{w=.4} What is your name?!" - A "Er,{w=.4} Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "Er, Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 stop music fadeout 4 play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 3 show rosa unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.75) pause .25 - Ro "An-{w=.2}on!{w=.5} Why are you still in there?{w=.5} Get up niño,{w=.3} get up!" + Ro "An-{w=.2}on!{w=.4} Why are you still in there?{w=.4} Get up niño, get up!" # B: I know this visual doesn't really work so well because it's not clear that Anon was meant to be lying in the flowerbed, but whatever show rosa: @@ -840,7 +843,7 @@ label chapter_5: "She grabs a bicep proudly." show rosa neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - Ro "I say all the time.{w=.4} Outside work is good for your health!" + Ro "I say all the time. Outside work is good for your health!" show rosa considering flip with Dissolve(.25) show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) @@ -849,34 +852,37 @@ label chapter_5: show rosa: easein 0.5 xalign 0.5 - Ro "Wait,{w=.4} An-{w=.1}on,{w=.3} why is your face so red?" + Ro "Wait, An-on, why is your face so red?" - A "The uh,{w=.3} vines.{w=.5} Guess I have an allergy." + A "The uh, vines. Guess I have an allergy." show rosa bossy flip with Dissolve(.25) - Ro "Oh,{w=.2} no,{w=.3} no no!{w=.5} You must stop working vines then!" + Ro "Oh, no, no no!{w=.4} You must stop working vines then!" "She points back up to Fang." show rosa bossy with Dissolve(.25) - Ro "You!{w=.4} Get down from there,{w=.4} you are both switching to weeds!" + Ro "You!{w=.4} Get down from there, you are both switching to weeds!" pause .25 show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25) F "{i}{cps=*.2}Uuuuughhhhh...{/cps}{/i}" show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Alright,{w=.3} whatever." + F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Alright, whatever." show rosa bossy flip with Dissolve(.25) - Ro "Go,{w=.4} go now!{w=.4} And no more tripping!" + Ro "Go, go now!{w=.4} And no more tripping!" + pause .5 - scene black with fade + scene black with Fade(1, 0, 1) + pause .5 "We go exchange our equipment for weeding trowels." - "Once we get directed to a place in the dirt to start,{w=.4} Fang and I diligently continue in silence for a bit." + "Once we get directed to a place in the dirt to start, Fang and I diligently continue in silence for a bit." + pause .5 scene garden show anon neutral: @@ -897,7 +903,7 @@ label chapter_5: A "Uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - A "Spur of the moment,{w=.4} I guess?" + A "Spur of the moment, I guess?" A "Seemed like the easiest way out of getting in more trouble?" pause .5 @@ -918,15 +924,15 @@ label chapter_5: A "What do you mean?" - F "You know,{w=.3} your reasons,{w=.4} real reasons?{w=.5} Your recta ratio." + F "You know, your reasons, real reasons? Your recta ratio." pause .5 - A "Recta ratio?{w=.4} Fancy words outta you." + A "Recta ratio? Fancy words outta you." A "But I don’t understand{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) - F "You fucking moron what was your motive?{w=.6} Why would you care?" + F "You fucking moron what was your motive? Why would you care?" show anon neutral flip with dissolve A "Uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -938,13 +944,13 @@ label chapter_5: F "About how some people won’t ever amount to anything." - A "Oh,{w=.2} uh,{w=.3} yeah.{w=.4} That was,{w=.3} uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "Oh, uh, yeah. That was, uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" F "What did you mean by that?" "Why the fuck is she so curious?" - A "I dunno,{w=.4} you’d probably think I’m some creep for saying this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "I dunno, you’d probably think I’m some creep for saying this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" F "I already think you’re a creep." @@ -957,23 +963,24 @@ label chapter_5: pause .5 show anon neutral with dissolve - pause .5 - A "I dunno,{w=.4} It’s like,{w=.4} the world is too full." + pause 1 + + A "I dunno, It’s like, the world is too full." A "And there’s only gonna be more people as time goes on." - A "Eventually we’ll run out of food and resources,{w=.5} but culture will be too far gone to really fix anything." + A "Eventually we’ll run out of food and resources, but culture will be too far gone to really fix anything." pause .25 show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25) "Fang stops digging for a moment and gives an attentive stare out of the corner of her eye." pause .5 - A "Midwits and morons have kids like crazy.{w=.4} The number of smart people in the world remains stagnant." + A "Midwits and morons have kids like crazy. The number of smart people in the world remains stagnant." A "Or even goes down over time." - A "Nobody is immune to propaganda,{w=.4} and useful people can be indoctrinated right into the crowds." + A "Nobody is immune to propaganda, and useful people can be indoctrinated right into the crowds." A "Y’know?" pause .5 @@ -983,7 +990,7 @@ label chapter_5: A "Told you it’d sound weird." show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) - F "No,{w=.4} actually,{w=.3} that’s{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Wow." + F "No, actually, that’s{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Wow." F "That’s actually exactly how I feel about things!" pause .5 @@ -993,30 +1000,30 @@ label chapter_5: "Fang is acting strangely enthusiastic all of a sudden." - F "Right like,{w=.3} in all of history,{w=.4} if you {i}really{/i} look at it,{w=.4} the smart people have never even once had to answer to the excess." + F "Right like, in all of history, if you {i}really{/i} look at it, the smart people have never even once had to answer to the excess." - F "Back in the day,{w=.4} innovation was propelled by smart people working with other smart people." + F "Back in the day, innovation was propelled by smart people working with other smart people." F "Trying all sorts of new things the masses would have hated." - F "Like rock music,{w=.4} right?" + F "Like rock music, right?" F "People hated that at first." show fang happy with Dissolve(.25) - F "When {i}my{/i} band takes off,{w=.4} I’ll get to rub it in everyone’s faces." + F "When {i}my{/i} band takes off, I’ll get to rub it in everyone’s faces." - F "All those cock goblins.{w=.4} It’s like everywhere you go,{w=.4} there’s a hundred dumb people for one person worth anything." + F "All those cock goblins. It’s like everywhere you go, there’s a hundred dumb people for one person worth anything." pause .5 - A "What’d you call it before?{w=.4} Excess?" + A "What’d you call it before? Excess?" - F "Yeah,{w=.4} like Naomi." + F "Yeah, like Naomi." A "Right." show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) - F "Most people in the school,{w=.2} even." + F "Most people in the school, even." pause .25 A "I can see it." @@ -1028,48 +1035,51 @@ label chapter_5: "{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}" show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) - F "Rosa and Stella,{w=.4} definitely." + F "Rosa and Stella, definitely." "What the-" show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) - F "Naser,{w=.2} too,{w=.3} unfortunately.{w=.4} Oh, well." + F "Naser, too, unfortunately. Oh, well." pause .5 show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "All of them,{w=.4} sheep." + F "All of them, sheep." pause .5 "To casually brush everyone aside like that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - "What does she think of me,{w=.2} then?" + "What does she think of me, then?" pause .5 - A "If you think so little of Rosa and Stella and everyone,{w=.4} why hang out with them?" + show anon shrug flip with dissolve + A "If you think so little of Rosa and Stella and everyone, why hang out with them?" + show anon neutral flip with dissolve show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I don’t like being alone.{w=.4} You don’t need to know any more." + F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I don’t like being alone. You don’t need to know any more." F "As long as they aren’t the sort of people that showed up that day at our concert{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "Those lazy,{w=.3} talentless,{w=.3} inconsiderate,{w=.3} self-righteous,{w=.3} condescending excuses for peers." + F "Those lazy, talentless, inconsiderate, self-righteous, condescending excuses for peers." F "Thinking they can just make fun of our music." pause .5 - A "Haha,{w=.4} yeah,{w=.4} those guys sucked.{w=.6} Their insults weren’t even that creative." + A "Haha, yeah, those guys sucked.{w=.4} Their insults weren’t even that creative." stop ambient fadeout 3 pause .5 + play sound 'audio/effects/vines.ogg' show fang: easein_elastic 0.5 xalign 0.1 show fang angry flip with Dissolve(.25) show anon: easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.85 - "Fang’s arm jerks back violently,{w=.4} pulling a bundle of weeds and topsoil out and onto my jacket." + "Fang’s arm jerks back violently, pulling a bundle of weeds and topsoil out and onto my jacket." A "Hey-" @@ -1078,6 +1088,7 @@ label chapter_5: pause .75 F "What is that supposed to mean?" + pause .5 "Her eyes scrutinize me thoroughly." @@ -1088,16 +1099,16 @@ label chapter_5: "{cps=*.2}Oh shit.{/cps}" - "My foot tastes a bit salad-like today.{w=.4} Damn gardening." + "My foot tastes a bit salad-like today. Damn gardening." - A "Er,{w=.3} just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} gossip I heard from classmates afterwards?" + A "Er, just{cps=*.1}...{/cps} gossip I heard from classmates afterwards?" pause .5 "We both know that’s a lie." "I feel anxious as Fang continues watching me." - "I watch it happen,{w=.4} as if in slow motion,{w=.4} as comprehension dawns on Fang." + "I watch it happen, as if in slow motion, as comprehension dawns on Fang." "Her voice is low." @@ -1109,7 +1120,6 @@ label chapter_5: show fang very angry with Dissolve(.25) F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}you were at the show?" - pause .5 show dimmer_light behind anon, fang with dissolve "My heart stops." @@ -1119,11 +1129,11 @@ label chapter_5: "I couldn’t have hoped to hide it forever." pause .5 - "Fang stands over me,{w=.4} her wings spread wide and her shoulders shaking." + "Fang stands over me, her wings spread wide and her shoulders shaking." - "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} how do I explain this?" + "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} how do I explain this?" - "We’re close enough friends now,{w=.3} right?" + "We’re close enough friends now, right?" "I could probably even joke about it a bit." pause .5 @@ -1151,19 +1161,19 @@ label chapter_5: hide dimmer_light with dissolve pause .5 - A "Well,{w=.5} Naser did invite me to your concert{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} and I did end up going." + A "Well, Naser did invite me to your concert{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} and I did end up going." pause .5 show fang angry with dissolve "Fang’s expression hardens and she crosses her arms." pause .5 - A "He told me there’d be free food so I figured why not?{w=.5} It’s not like I knew it was going to end up the way it did." + A "He told me there’d be free food so I figured why not?{w=.4} It’s not like I knew it was going to end up the way it did." pause .5 F "So why did you tell us you didn’t go?" - A "Because I kept seeing your psycho friend hunting down everyone else who went,{w=.5} why would I make myself a target?" + A "Because I kept seeing your psycho friend hunting down everyone else who went, why would I make myself a target?" F "Trish was only looking for the dicks who{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 @@ -1184,6 +1194,7 @@ label chapter_5: F "Did.{w=.4} You.{w=.4} Laugh?" "I open my mouth to answer but the words aren’t coming to me." + pause .5 "Fang seems to pick up on my inability to answer." pause .5 @@ -1197,7 +1208,7 @@ label chapter_5: F "I fucking knew it." pause .5 - A "Look Fang,{w=.5} I’m sorry,{w=.3} right?{w=.5} {cps=*.4}I didn’t know-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" + A "Look Fang, I’m sorry, right?{w} {cps=*.4}I didn’t know-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" show fang: easein_cubic 0.5 xalign -0.1 @@ -1210,7 +1221,7 @@ label chapter_5: hide fang with dissolve "Fang begins to storm off and I try to chase after her." - A "Fang,{w=.3} wait!" + A "Fang, wait!" show anon: easeout_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.5 @@ -1225,7 +1236,7 @@ label chapter_5: easeout_quad .5 rotate -90 yalign -0.01 xpos 0.3 pause .15 hide anon with Dissolve(.25) - play sound "audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg" + play sound "audio/effects/anongardenfall.ogg" with vpunch scene black with dissolve @@ -1233,8 +1244,10 @@ label chapter_5: "The world spins and I land on my ass where we were weeding." "At least something broke my fall{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 "Wait.{w=.4} Isn’t this the flowerbed?" + pause .5 "Suddenly an orange terror descends upon me like I set off some sort of alarm." @@ -1244,7 +1257,7 @@ label chapter_5: label .jokeAround: - "We’re good enough friends now,{w=.3} right?{w=.4} This’ll be {cps=*.3}fiiiine.{/cps}" + "We’re good enough friends now, right?{w=.4} This’ll be {cps=*.3}fiiiine.{/cps}" pause .5 play music 'audio/OST/Summertime Synth.ogg' fadein 1.0 @@ -1256,9 +1269,11 @@ label chapter_5: show fang: easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.05 - "Her eyes narrow.{w=.6} Eh,{w=.3} maybe if I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "Her eyes narrow." + + "Eh, maybe if I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - A "I was expecting dinner and a show,{w=.4} not a comedy skit." + A "I was expecting dinner and a show, not a comedy skit." pause .5 show fang: @@ -1267,14 +1282,15 @@ label chapter_5: repeat "I know I’m not the best comedian but still nothing?" - "No,{w=.3} wait,{w=.4} I think I hear some cracking." + "No, wait, I think I hear some cracking." + pause .5 - "Oh,{w=.4} that’d be her knuckles popping." + "Oh, that’d be her knuckles popping." "Fang’s face twists into a sneer and her hand slowly comes up into a fist." pause .5 - "I may have overestimated my comedic talents.{w=.5} Or our friendship." + "I may have overestimated my comedic talents. Or our friendship." pause .5 show anon behind fang @@ -1287,7 +1303,7 @@ label chapter_5: play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg' scene black with Fade(.1, 0, 1, color="#fff") - "My head snaps to the side,{w=.4} a burning sting radiating from my cheek." + "My head snaps to the side, a burning sting radiating from my cheek." "My foot catches on the pile of discarded gardening tools." @@ -1301,10 +1317,10 @@ label chapter_5: F "{cps=*.3}You fucking asshole{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - "Fang storms off,{w=.4} shouldering past Rosa,{w=.4} who is stunned silent." + "Fang storms off, shouldering past Rosa, who is stunned silent." pause .5 - "Rosa isn’t stunned for long though,{w=.4} and suddenly an orange terror descends upon me like I set off some sort of alarm." + "Rosa isn’t stunned for long though, and suddenly an orange terror descends upon me like I set off some sort of alarm." $ punched_into_flowerbed = True jump .postAnonLaughReveal @@ -1326,10 +1342,10 @@ label chapter_5: A "Err{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Sorry?" # TODO: the line "do you have any idea how long it takes for those to bloom" is also used earlier when Anon first falls into the flowerbed - Ro "{i}Ay Dios mío{/i}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} do you have any idea how long it takes those to bloom?!" + Ro "{i}Ay Dios mío{/i}{cps=*.1}...{/cps} do you have any idea how long it takes those to bloom?!" if not punched_into_flowerbed: - Ro "And for you to just tumble onto them{w=.3} AGAIN!" + Ro "And for you to just tumble onto them AGAIN!" show anon neutral: alpha 0 @@ -1337,14 +1353,14 @@ label chapter_5: show anon: easein 0.5 yalign 0.1 alpha 1 - "I jump to my feet and quickly inspect the damage.{w=.4} The entire section of flowerbed where I had landed was imprinted with my outline like a snow-angel." + "I jump to my feet and quickly inspect the damage. The entire section of flowerbed where I had landed was imprinted with my outline like a snow-angel." show anon: alpha 1 yalign 0.1 pause .5 "Just my luck." - A "Rosa,{w=.3} I didn’t mean-" + A "Rosa, I didn’t mean-" Ro "It doesn’t matter what you meant!" @@ -1371,14 +1387,14 @@ label chapter_5: easein_back 1 xalign 0.9 show rosa: easein_back 1 xalign 0.9 - St "Whoa,{w=.3} whoa,{w=.3} whoa!!" + St "Whoa, whoa, whoa!!" "I am saved by a green stegosaur grabbing the mighty arm of judgement out of the air mid-swing." pause .5 show anon sad with dissolve pause .25 - St "Rosa,{w=.4} remember what we talked about!" + St "Rosa, remember what we talked about!" show rosa: easein_elastic 0.5 xalign 0.85 @@ -1395,18 +1411,18 @@ label chapter_5: Ro "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - St "Don’t use physical force to make people hurt,{w=.4} alright?" + St "Don’t use physical force to make people hurt, alright?" pause .5 A "Th-{w=.3}thank you St-" - St "That’s what manual labor is for,{w=.4} right?" + St "That’s what manual labor is for, right?" show anon neutral with dissolve A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 - Ro "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Yes{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Yes,{w=.2} of course." + Ro "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Yes{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Yes, of course." pause .5 play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg' @@ -1414,7 +1430,7 @@ label chapter_5: easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.65 show rosa bossy flip with Dissolve(.15) - Ro "You!{w=.5} An-{w=.1}on,{w=.4} you will help extra two hours after everyone else!{w=.5} Two!!" + Ro "You! An-on, you will help extra two hours after everyone else! Two!!" pause .5 A "For flowers?!" @@ -1433,7 +1449,7 @@ label chapter_5: St "Where did Fang go?" pause .5 - A "I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} did something I shouldn’t have." + A "I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} did something I shouldn’t have." A "She ran off{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 @@ -1442,10 +1458,10 @@ label chapter_5: Ro "You ruin the flowers of friendship like you do of my labor!!" show stella unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - St "You should go find Fang and apologize.{w=.5} And bring her back." + St "You should go find Fang and apologize. And bring her back." show stella sad flip with Dissolve(.25) - St "If you don’t share someone’s pain,{w=.4} you can never understand them." + St "If you don’t share someone’s pain, you can never understand them." pause .5 "Did this bitch just quote Naruto of all things?" @@ -1453,7 +1469,7 @@ label chapter_5: "If I weren’t being directed to leave I would have bailed anyways." pause .5 - A "I saw her going towards the parking lot,{w=.4} I’ll be right back." + A "I saw her going towards the parking lot, I’ll be right back." pause .5 show anon: @@ -1470,10 +1486,12 @@ label chapter_5: Ro "You better!" pause .5 - scene outside school + scene parking_lot with Fade(1,0,1) + pause .5 - "There aren’t many cars in the parking lot,{w=.4} so Fang shouldn’t be too hard to find." + "There aren’t many cars in the parking lot, so Fang shouldn’t be too hard to find." + pause .5 # B: this music is meant to play as per the audio direction doc, but it's pretty chill considering Fang is flipping out play music 'audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg' fadein 1.0 @@ -1481,16 +1499,16 @@ label chapter_5: "That pair of wings rustling in-between two parked cars is probably a hint,{w=.4} not sure." pause .5 - "I silently approach,{w=.4} hiding behind the other cars in the lot." + "I silently approach, hiding behind the other cars in the lot." show fang angry with dissolve: yalign 0.0 xalign 1.5 "She’s huddled around the passenger door of a garishly yellow minivan." pause .5 - "Wait,{w=.4} is she{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?" + "Wait, is she{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?" - "Shit,{w=.4} I gotta stop her." + "Shit, I gotta stop her." pause .5 show anon concerned: @@ -1500,19 +1518,19 @@ label chapter_5: with dissolve pause .5 - A "Fang,{w=.5} what are you doing?!" + A "Fang, what are you doing?!" show fang: easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.6 show fang very angry flip with Dissolve(.25) pause .5 - F "Fuck off,{w=.2} fuck-knuckle." + F "Fuck off, fuck-knuckle." pause .5 show fang angry with dissolve A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - A "Fang,{w=.4} {cps=*.75}don’t break into a teacher's car{w},{/cps}{cps=*.5} we’ll get-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" + A "Fang, don’t break into a teacher's car{w},{cps=*.5} we’ll get-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" show fang: easein_back 0.5 xalign 1.2 @@ -1532,12 +1550,12 @@ label chapter_5: F "{cps=*.5}Hehehehe{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - F "Why,{w=.4} you want to join in on a joyride?" + F "Why, you want to join in on a joyride?" "She looks at me like it’s a genuine question." pause .5 - A "No,{w=.4} I don’t." + A "No, I don’t." pause .5 show fang: @@ -1557,7 +1575,7 @@ label chapter_5: play ambient 'audio/effects/caralarmloop.ogg' pause .5 - A "Fang,{w=.1} what are you doing?!" + A "Fang, what are you doing?!" pause .5 show fang: @@ -1590,16 +1608,16 @@ label chapter_5: A "except I’m sorry." - A "I messed up and that was a dick move," + A "I messed up and that was a dick move" A "But if you keep this up we’ll both be going-" F "What do you care?!" - F "We’re already in detention,{w=.4} what’s a FEW MORE DAYS?!" + F "We’re already in detention, what’s a FEW MORE DAYS?!" show anon angry with Dissolve(.25) - A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}TO JAIL,{w=.3} FANG." + A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}TO JAIL, FANG." pause .5 F "GO." @@ -1615,7 +1633,7 @@ label chapter_5: pause 1 show fang sad with dissolve - "Fang stops kicking the glass,{w=.4} drained of energy and out of breath." + "Fang stops kicking the glass, drained of energy and out of breath." show fang sad at sright show anon neutral @@ -1623,14 +1641,15 @@ label chapter_5: pause .5 stop ambient fadeout 6 - "Thankfully,{w=.4} the glass isn’t even scratched." + play ambient1 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 6 + "Thankfully, the glass isn’t even scratched." pause .5 show anon: easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1 - A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You’re right for being angry at me,{w=.5} you’re talented and skilled,{w=.4} and I got nothing to show for myself,{w=.4} and what I did was wrong{cps=*.1}..{/cps}" + A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You’re right for being angry at me, you’re talented and skilled, and I got nothing to show for myself, and what I did was wrong{cps=*.1}..{/cps}" - A "But you’re better than this,{w=.4} come on." + A "But you’re better than this, come on." pause .5 F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -1640,10 +1659,10 @@ label chapter_5: "At least she hasn’t started kicking the car again." pause .5 - stop music fadeout 3 "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Might be a good idea to give her some space." pause .5 + stop ambient1 fadeout 3 "All of a sudden I feel like I shouldn’t be here." pause .5 @@ -1679,13 +1698,13 @@ label chapter_5: "Fang immediately bolts towards the front of the school." - "I follow after,{w=.4} legs pumping furiously in an attempt to both catch up to Fang and avoid the teacher screeching at us from behind." + "I follow after, legs pumping furiously in an attempt to both catch up to Fang and avoid the teacher screeching at us from behind." - "I see Fang veer into the school,{w=.4} the door closing slowly after." + "I see Fang veer into the school, the door closing slowly after." "By the jacket on my back I’m able to slip in just before the door shuts completely." - "Fang is panting in the stairwell near the door.{w=.5} And I’m sure I’m redder than I was earlier with the vines." + "Fang is panting in the stairwell near the door. And I’m sure I’m redder than I was earlier with the vines." scene hallway with fade pause .5 @@ -1710,7 +1729,7 @@ label chapter_5: "Why?" A "Be{w=.2} {cps=*.5}haaaaah{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} because{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} I’m sorry{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - stop music fadeout 3 + stop music fadeout 6 pause 1 show fang: @@ -1720,17 +1739,17 @@ label chapter_5: "Her sneer returns and she makes to turn away." pause .5 - A "I fucked up.{w=.75} Yes,{w=.4} I was at that concert.{w=.6} And yes,{w=.3} I laughed.{w=.6} I never expected to actually become your friend." + A "I fucked up.{w=.4} Yes, I was at that concert.{w=.4} And yes, I laughed.{w=.4} I never expected to actually become your friend." pause .5 "Her wings block my view of her." - "But she hasn’t left yet.{w=.4} Maybe I can fix this after all." + "But she hasn’t left yet. Maybe I can fix this after all." pause .5 - A "I just wanted to coast through school.{w=.5} I was happy being a loner." + A "I just wanted to coast through school. I was happy being a loner." - A "I’ve always been one,{w=.3} after all." + A "I’ve always been one, after all." pause .5 show fang: @@ -1745,7 +1764,7 @@ label chapter_5: play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' fadein 1.0 show anon: easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.6 - pause 1.5 + pause 2 "Fuck." pause .5 @@ -1755,7 +1774,7 @@ label chapter_5: "And standing here by myself I have time to think of my own admission." pause .5 - "If Fang leaves me alone,{w=.4} I’ll get exactly what I want.{w=.4} Right?" + "If Fang leaves me alone, I’ll get exactly what I want. Right?" "She could probably talk Trish and Reed into leaving me alone too." @@ -1774,7 +1793,7 @@ label chapter_5: show stella considering: yalign 0.1 xalign -0.5 show stella: - easein 1 xalign 0.1 + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1 with dissolve pause .5 @@ -1784,12 +1803,14 @@ label chapter_5: "Oh." show anon neutral flip with dissolve - "You know,{w=.4} I always thought that tempting fate thing was just a dumb cliche." - - "It still is.{w=.4} But maybe Stella has a good point about astrology." pause .5 - show stella explanatory + "You know, I always thought that tempting fate thing was just a dumb cliche." + + "It still is. But maybe Stella has a good point about astrology." + pause .5 + + show stella explanatory with Dissolve(.25) St "Rosa!{w=.4} I found our errant runaway!" show stella neutral with Dissolve(.25) @@ -1804,6 +1825,8 @@ label chapter_5: show anon: easein 0.5 xalign 0.45 show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 + Ro "Where did you go?!" Ro "You were supposed to get Fang and return!{w=.4} {nw}"# @@ -1813,17 +1836,20 @@ label chapter_5: easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.35 extend "RETURN!!" - A "Oh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Right.{w=.4} Yeah,{w=.2} uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Sorry." + A "Oh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Right.{w=.4} Yeah, uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Sorry." Ro "You will be sorry!" show stella considering with Dissolve(.25) - St "There’s two hours left for the rest of the students,{w=.4} but that makes four for you." + St "There’s two hours left for the rest of the students, but that makes four for you." - show rosa considering flip with Dissolve(.75) + show anon concerned + show rosa considering flip + with Dissolve(.75) pause .5 + show rosa neutral flip - Ro "Do not worry An-{w=.15}on!{w=.5} We stay as well!" + Ro "Do not worry An-on!{w=.4} We stay as well!" pause .5 A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{cps=*.3}Greaaat.{/cps}" @@ -1860,11 +1886,11 @@ label chapter_5: "I could already tell that by the end of the day I would have crippling arthritis." pause .5 - "Fang returns eventually,{w=.4} but still won’t talk to me and just sticks nearby cutting vines." + "Fang returns eventually, but still won’t talk to me and just sticks nearby cutting vines." - "Only an hour has passed,{w=.4} but I’m about ready to sleep for days." + "Only an hour has passed, but I’m about ready to sleep for days." - Ro "An-{w=.2}on!{w=.4} We will now be replanting the flowers you destroyed!" + Ro "An-on!{w=.4} We will now be replanting the flowers you destroyed!" show rosa considering with Dissolve(.25) "‘Destroyed’ is a harsh word{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -1873,10 +1899,10 @@ label chapter_5: A "But I don’t know anything about planting-" show rosa neutral - Ro "You speak nonsense!{w=.5} {nw}" + Ro "You speak nonsense!{w=.4} {nw}" show rosa: easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.2 - extend "Come here,{w=.2} now,{w=.4} I’ll teach you!" + extend "Come here, now, I’ll teach you!" "She motions me to get on my knees next to her and hands me a clump of dirt with a juvenile daisy in it." pause .5 @@ -1887,7 +1913,7 @@ label chapter_5: show anon neutral with dissolve pause .5 - Ro "I will dig the hole,{w=.4} you will place it in.{w=.5} Very simple!" + Ro "I will dig the hole, you will place it in.{w=.4} Very simple!" show rosa considering with Dissolve(.25) pause .25 @@ -1896,33 +1922,33 @@ label chapter_5: A "Y-{w=.2}yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "I don’t even {i}want{/i} to think what would happen if I mess up a third time." + pause .5 - "Rosa points up at Fang,{w=.5} who is still aggressively trimming back the vines." + "Rosa points up at Fang, who is still aggressively trimming back the vines." show rosa neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - Ro "Fang,{w=.4} do you want to plant some,{w=.2} too?" + Ro "Fang, do you want to plant some, too?" pause .5 - F "{size=-5}I’ll{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} pass.{/size}" + F "{size=-5}I’ll{cps=*.1}...{/cps} pass.{/size}" pause .5 - show rosa considering with Dissolve(.25) + show rosa considering with dissolve "With a practiced hand Rosa clears out a cylindrical hole deep enough for the clump to go in." - Ro "Okay,{w=.3} it’s ready." - show rosa considering with Dissolve(.25) + Ro "Okay, it’s ready." "My arms are practically rubber from today’s work and are faltering to the point pieces of dirt are being shaken off." - "A little bit from the hole,{w=.4} I have to catch the whole thing when it slips from my grip." + "A little bit from the hole, I have to catch the whole thing when it slips from my grip." "Rosa puts her hands around mine to steady them before I drop it for real." - Ro "{cps=*.2}Veeery {/cps}easy,{w=.4} like this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + Ro "{cps=*.2}Veeery {/cps}easy, like this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "The bulb is placed in the hole and we let go." - "Rosa quickly fills up the patch of dirt with the trowel,{w=.4} leaving only the stem and flower visible." + "Rosa quickly fills up the patch of dirt with the trowel, leaving only the stem and flower visible." pause .5 show rosa: @@ -1935,7 +1961,7 @@ label chapter_5: show anon: easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.7 pause .2 - show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + show anon shrug flip with dissolve A "Doesn’t seem like I did much at all{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show rosa unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) @@ -1946,7 +1972,7 @@ label chapter_5: show anon sad flip with Dissolve(.25) "A keening whine rumbles from my mouth." - A "Can’t I just take the beating instead?{w=.4} Please?" + A "Can’t I just take the beating instead? Please?" pause .5 F "{size=-5}I’ll do that if you really want.{/size}" @@ -1958,7 +1984,7 @@ label chapter_5: pause .25 show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - A "I’d prefer the shovel.{w=.5} Aim right here,{w=.4} and do {i}not{/i} resuscitate me after." + A "I’d prefer the shovel. Aim right here, and do {i}not{/i} resuscitate me after." stop ambient fadeout 4 play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating her Company.ogg' fadein 1.0 @@ -1970,8 +1996,10 @@ label chapter_5: pause .5 scene black with Fade(1, 0, 1) + pause .5 "I continue replanting flowers under Rosa’s caring yet Orwellian supervision." + pause .5 "At noon the bellowing of our principal calls us back up to the front of the school." @@ -1993,7 +2021,7 @@ label chapter_5: "I catch Fang rolling her eyes from the corner of my vision." - Sp "Please do stay safe on your way home,{w=.4} and try to keep out of trouble in the future." + Sp "Please do stay safe on your way home, and try to keep out of trouble in the future." pause .5 Sp "Dismissed." @@ -2009,7 +2037,7 @@ label chapter_5: show rosa bossy flip with Dissolve(.25) pause .25 - Ro "Not you,{w=.3} An-{w=.1}on!{w=.4} You stay!" + Ro "Not you, An-on!{w=.4} You stay!" show anon concerned with dissolve pause .25 @@ -2048,118 +2076,119 @@ label chapter_5: "I graciously accept a plate and stack it high with salty-sweet goodness." pause .5 - "The hot food is absolutely heavenly,{w=.5} reinvigorating me as I bite into the mexican meal." + "The hot food is absolutely heavenly, reinvigorating me as I bite into the mexican meal." - F "Mmmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} so filling{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + F "Mmmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps} so filling{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - A "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} wish I could cook like that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} wish I could cook like that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 "Wait." - "I look around and see that the only ones left are Rosa,{w=.3} Stella,{w=.3} Fang{w=.3} and I." + "I look around and see that the only ones left are Rosa, Stella, Fang and I." "Even Spears has gone home." pause .5 - A "Fang,{w=.5} ab-" + A "Fang, ab-" - Ro "Alright{w=.2} An-{w=.15}on,{w=.3} back to work!{w=.4} You still owe me two hours of heavy lifting!" + Ro "Alright An-on, back to work!{w=.4} You still owe me two hours of heavy lifting!" show anon sad with Dissolve(.25) pause .25 - Ro "Oh don't be sad.{w=.5} You are a natural greenthumb!" + Ro "Oh don't be sad. You are a natural greenthumb!" show rosa unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - Ro "When you are not laying on my flowers,{w=.4} that is." + Ro "When you are not laying on my flowers, that is." pause .5 show rosa considering flip show anon neutral with dissolve - "I don’t really{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} get compliments." + "I don’t really{cps=*.1}...{/cps} get compliments." - "It’s just circumstance,{w=.4} it’s not like I'm actually any less lazy or unskilled." + "It’s just circumstance, it’s not like I'm actually any less lazy or unskilled." play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 4 - stop music fadeout 4 + stop music fadeout 6 show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) - F "Hold on,{w=.4} I’m not done yet." + F "Hold on, I’m not done yet." show stella explanatory flip - St "We can wait a bit while you two finish.{w=.4} You need all your energy after all." + St "We can wait a bit while you two finish. You need all your energy after all." show stella neutral flip pause .5 "These guys aren’t half bad." - "I thought they were slave drivers,{w=.4} but then again I did ruin their hard work." + "I thought they were slave drivers, but then again I did ruin their hard work." pause .5 play music 'audio/OST/Dino Destiny Reader.ogg' pause .5 - A "Stella,{w=.4} I’ve been meaning to ask{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "Stella, I’ve been meaning to ask{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" A "Why {i}are{/i} you like this?" show stella sad flip with Dissolve(.25) St "Like what?" - A "You know,{w=.4} the whole thing with astrology and quoting{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "You know, the whole thing with astrology and quoting{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}video games." show stella considering flip with Dissolve(.25) - St "Oh,{w=.4} I dunno,{w=.4} I guess it’s just the stuff I like." + St "Oh, I dunno, I guess it’s just the stuff I like." A "Right{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show stella neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) St "Why do you ask?{w=.5} {nw}" show stella explanatory flip - extend "{cps=*.2}Ooh,{/cps}{w=.4} are you interested in it,{w=.15} too?!" + extend "{cps=*.2}Ooh,{/cps} are you interested in it, too?!" show stella neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - A "I,{w=.3} err{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} maybe some other time,{w=.2} Stella." + A "I, err{cps=*.1}...{/cps} maybe some other time, Stella." pause .5 stop ambient fadeout 3 - scene black with fade + scene black with Fade(1, 0, 1) pause .5 - "The rest of lunch passes by without incident,{w=.4} and I’m left savoring Rosa’s delicious cooking." + "The rest of lunch passes by without incident, and I’m left savoring Rosa’s delicious cooking." - "Like they say,{w=.3} the first rule of Mexican food:{w=.5} the more it looks like raw sewage,{w=.3} the better it tastes." + "Like they say, the first rule of Mexican food: the more it looks like raw sewage, the better it tastes." + pause .5 "The next two hours of work fly by relatively quickly without Rosa and Stella breathing down my neck." pause .5 - "Replant the rest of the flowers I had crushed,{w=.4} all done by me." + "Replant the rest of the flowers I had crushed, all done by me." pause .5 - "Collect all of the discarded vines and clippings into compost bins,{w=.4} all done by me." + "Collect all of the discarded vines and clippings into compost bins, all done by me." pause .5 "Carry all of the tools back into the maintenance shed." "Take a guess who did it." - stop music fadeout 3 + stop music fadeout 6 pause .5 - "Fang stuck around for some reason,{w=.4} even though I don’t think she had any other work to do." + "Fang stuck around for some reason, even though I don’t think she had any other work to do." "But now my prison sentence is finally over and I’m free to go." play music 'audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg' fadein 1.0 pause .5 - "My feet hurt,{w=.4} my arms hurt,{w=.4} my back hurts." + "My feet hurt, my arms hurt, my back hurts." pause .5 scene garden @@ -2173,10 +2202,10 @@ label chapter_5: pause .5 show rosa neutral - Ro "An-{w=.1}on,{w=.3} you did such a good job today!{w=.5} You should sign up for the gardening club!" + Ro "An-on, you did such a good job today! You should sign up for the gardening club!" show stella explanatory - St "Yeah!{w=.4} You could come and help out with {i}all{/i} of our meetings!" + St "Yeah! You could come and help out with {i}all{/i} of our meetings!" pause .5 show dimmer_darker behind anon, rosa, stella with Dissolve(.25) @@ -2188,7 +2217,7 @@ label chapter_5: show anon: easein 1 xalign 1.0 - A "That’s{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} I’ll{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} think about it." + A "That’s{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I’ll{cps=*.1}...{/cps} think about it." pause .5 show anon: @@ -2196,12 +2225,12 @@ label chapter_5: pause .2 show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25) hide anon with dissolve - "I walk away before either of them can push joining their club further.{w=.4} I’m too tired to argue." + "I walk away before either of them can push joining their club further. I’m too tired to argue." scene flower garden with fade pause .5 - "Fang seems to have disappeared,{w=.4} guess she didn’t want to stick around longer than she had to after all." + "Fang seems to have disappeared, guess she didn’t want to stick around longer than she had to after all." pause .5 show anon neutral: @@ -2213,7 +2242,7 @@ label chapter_5: show anon neutral flip with dissolve "As I pass by some of the gardens I take a moment to admire my handiwork." - "As much as I didn’t want to be here,{w=.4} I have to admit they look a lot cleaner than before." + "As much as I didn’t want to be here, I have to admit they look a lot cleaner than before." pause .5 show fang neutral flip: @@ -2221,37 +2250,38 @@ label chapter_5: show fang: easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.2 with dissolve - pause .5 + pause 1 - F "See?{w=.4} That’s what doing some actual hard work for once can do." + F "See? That’s what doing some actual hard work for once can do." show anon: - ease 0.5 xalign 0.2 + easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.2 show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25) - "Fang’s sudden appearance from behind me makes me flinch.{w=.4} I guess she stuck around after all." + "Fang’s sudden appearance from behind me makes me flinch. I guess she stuck around after all." show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "A wimp like you could use it,{w=.2} too." + F "A wimp like you could use it, too." pause .5 - "So now Fang is suddenly talking to me,{w=.3} again?" + "So now Fang is suddenly talking to me, again?" + pause .5 - A "Yeah,{w=.4} sure{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "Yeah, sure{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25) F "Now all the important and beautiful plants can thrive without any of the useless weeds choking them up and holding them back." pause .5 - "Oh right,{w=.4} I almost forgot Fang thinks people like me are barely worth the oxygen." + "Oh right, I almost forgot Fang thinks people like me are barely worth the oxygen." "Not that I really blame her after earlier." pause .5 - A "Yeah,{w=.2} well,{w=.4} don’t let the weeds like me get in your way{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "Yeah, well, don’t let the weeds like me get in your way{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show anon neutral flip with dissolve - "I sigh and turn away from Fang,{w=.4} beginning my very achy walk home." + "I sigh and turn away from Fang, beginning my very achy walk home." "Time to go and sleep for twenty hours." pause .5 @@ -2262,18 +2292,20 @@ label chapter_5: show fang neutral flip: easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.1 - F "Anon,{w=.5} wait." + F "Anon, wait." - "I stop in my tracks.{w=.4} Now what does she want?" + "I stop in my tracks." + + "Now what does she want?" show anon neutral with dissolve pause .5 - A "Look,{w=.4} I said I was sorry,{w=.2} okay?{w=.5} I laughed at you guys and ruined your concert." + A "Look, I said I was sorry, okay? I laughed at you guys and ruined your concert." - A "I don’t care if you never want to talk to me again,{w=.5} I just don’t know what else you want me to say." + A "I don’t care if you never want to talk to me again, I just don’t know what else you want me to say." show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + F "Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps} it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show fang sad flip with dissolve pause .5 @@ -2285,39 +2317,39 @@ label chapter_5: A "It’s not?" show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "I mean,{w=.4} maybe a little bit,{w=.4} but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + F "I mean, maybe a little bit, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show fang sad flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "I’m mad because you kept it from me,{w=.4} okay?" + F "I’m mad because you kept it from me, okay?" - F "It’s just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} I haven’t made many friends in,{w=.4} well{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} a while." + F "It’s just{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I haven’t made many friends in, well{cps=*.1}...{/cps} a while." F "I don’t want to lose an actual friend over stupid bullshit like that." F "I just thought you would have trusted me enough to tell me the truth{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 - A "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} is this why you stuck around earlier?" + A "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} is this why you stuck around earlier?" - "She hesitates before nodding,{w=.4} like she needed to convince herself." + "She hesitates before nodding, like she needed to convince herself." - F "Not that it matters but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I’m sorry too." + F "Not that it matters but{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I’m sorry too." - A "You{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} for what?{w=.4} Kicking me in the face?" + A "You{cps=*.1}...{/cps} for what? Kicking me in the face?" show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) F "I {i}might{/i} have overreacted a bit earlier but you did deserve that." show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "I’m sorry for calling you one of the weeds.{w=.5} You’re not a weed,{w=.3} you’re{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I dunno,{w=.3} a mushroom or some shit." + F "I’m sorry for calling you one of the weeds.{w=.4} You’re not a weed, you’re{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I dunno, a mushroom or some shit." pause .5 - A "A mushroom?{w=.4} Not like a cool tree or a cactus or something?" + A "A mushroom? Not like a cool tree or a cactus or something?" - F "Hell no,{w=.3} you’re not {i}that{/i} cool.{w=.5} Mushrooms take all the bad shit and turn it into nutrients for all of the good plants,{w=.4} y’know?" + F "Hell no, you’re not {i}that{/i} cool. Mushrooms take all the bad shit and turn it into nutrients for all of the good plants, y’know?" show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "Plus you kinda look like one,{w=.2} too." + F "Plus you kinda look like one, too." pause .5 "Fucking rude." @@ -2329,26 +2361,25 @@ label chapter_5: F "Now you’re pushing it." pause .5 - "I let out a sigh of relief.{w=.4} Can’t say that’s how I expected this conversation to go." + "I let out a sigh of relief. Can’t say that’s how I expected this conversation to go." pause .5 - A "I guess we’re both assholes,{w=.2} then{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "I guess we’re both assholes, then{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - F "Heh,{w=.3} yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5} friends?" + F "Heh, yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} friends?" pause .5 A "Friends." pause .5 - A "So,{w=.2} uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} why do you know so much about mushrooms,{w=.2} exactly?{w=.5} Reed?" + A "So, uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} why do you know so much about mushrooms, exactly?{w=.4} Reed?" show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25) "Fang gives me a sideways glance and smiles a bit." F "Spend enough time around Stella and Rosa and you pick up a few gardening facts." - A "Yeah,{w=.4} first impressions aside they’re pretty alright I guess.{w=.5} Stella’s a bit weird and Rosa is a walking stereotype." - pause .5 + A "Yeah, first impressions aside they’re pretty alright I guess.{w=.4} Stella’s a bit weird and Rosa is a walking stereotype." show fang: easein_back 1 xalign 1.2 @@ -2357,11 +2388,16 @@ label chapter_5: easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.0 extend "{i}you{/i}{w=.2} calling Stella weird?" + show anon shrug with dissolve A "A dork like me has every right to call out Stella." + show anon neutral with dissolve - F "Sure,{w=.2} sure.{w=.5} Anyway,{w=.4} I’ll be seeing ya,{w=.2} Anon." + F "Sure, sure." + + F"Anyway, I’ll be seeing ya, Anon." + pause .5 - A "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} See you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} See you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 show fang: @@ -2373,19 +2409,19 @@ label chapter_5: show fang happy with Dissolve(.25) hide fang with dissolve - "Fang strolls away,{w=.4} humming some tune I’ve never heard." + "Fang strolls away, humming some tune I’ve never heard." "Left alone now with just my thoughts I find myself feeling a great weight lift from me." pause .5 - "Friends,{w=.3} huh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} I can’t recall the last time I had a legitimate friend{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - pause .5 + "Friends, huh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I can’t recall the last time I had a legitimate friend{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause 1 A "{i}\"Some people certainly aren’t.\"{/i}" A "{i}\"Just never meant to amount to anything or do anything important.\"{/i}" - stop music fadeout 4 + stop music fadeout 6 pause .5 A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -2393,20 +2429,22 @@ label chapter_5: A "I just don’t know anymore." pause .5 - scene black with fade + scene black with Dissolve(1.5) pause .5 - "I set off for my apartment,{w=.4} body sore but spirit soaring." + "I set off for my apartment, body sore but spirit soaring." "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}" - pause 1 + pause 1.5 #Heart to Heart play music 'audio/OST/punk_revamp.ogg' fadein 1 pause 1 - "One month now.{w=.75} Five to go and I’ve found myself in a predicament." + "One month now." + + "Five to go and I’ve found myself in a predicament." pause .5 "I’m enjoying my time with Fang." @@ -2433,7 +2471,8 @@ label chapter_5: "I’m talking more with her than anyone I’ve ever talked with." - "Not to mention lunch and after school.{w=.5} It’s less hiding from the tangerine tyrant and Naser these days and more spending time with Fang and Reed." + "Not to mention lunch and after school. It’s less hiding from the tangerine tyrant and Naser these days and more spending time with Fang and Reed." + pause .5 "Even if he’s constantly checked out." pause .5 @@ -2441,9 +2480,11 @@ label chapter_5: "And smells of burnt skunk." pause .5 - "The fuck is he on,{w=.2} anyway?!" + "The fuck is he on, anyway?!" pause .5 + Re "It’s carfe, bro{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + scene auditorium show anon neutral: yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5 @@ -2452,10 +2493,6 @@ label chapter_5: with Fade(0,0,1) pause .5 - show reed explanatory flip - Re "It’s carfe,{w=.2} bro{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What?" show reed considering flip @@ -2482,19 +2519,21 @@ label chapter_5: "But I find myself having these weird thoughts lately." - "Like,{w=.3} is any of this real or not?" + "Like, is any of this real or not?" pause .5 show anon: easein 0.5 xalign 0.45 pause .75 + + show dimmer_light behind anon: + alpha 0 + linear 0.5 alpha 1 show anon fear: easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4 with Dissolve(.25) pause .5 - show dimmer_light behind anon with Dissolve(.25) - "I tumble backwards." "Off of the stage." @@ -2514,13 +2553,13 @@ label chapter_5: "Woah" pause .5 - A "ow{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "Ow{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show reed explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) - Re "Bro{cps=*.1}.....{/cps}{w=.3} that sucks{cps=*.1}.....{/cps}" + Re "Bro{cps=*.1}.....{/cps} that sucks{cps=*.1}.....{/cps}" show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - "It’s lunch time now,{w=.4} and I guess I dozed off." + "It’s lunch time now, and I guess I dozed off." "Too many late night ‘study’ sessions." @@ -2547,15 +2586,15 @@ label chapter_5: show anon: easein 0.5 yalign -0.45 alpha 1 - "I hobble to my feet,{w=.4} feeling out the bruise blossoming on my shoulder." + "I hobble to my feet, feeling out the bruise blossoming on my shoulder." show anon: alpha 1 yalign -0.45 pause .5 - A "Hrrrrg{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} stupid fuckin’ stage." + A "Hrrrrg{cps=*.1}...{/cps} stupid fuckin’ stage." show anon neutral with dissolve - "I consider jumping back up,{w=.4} but find the stairs up more appealing." + "I consider jumping back up, but find the stairs up more appealing." pause .5 show anon: @@ -2579,9 +2618,9 @@ label chapter_5: play music 'audio/OST/i_have_no_clue_what_im_doing.ogg' pause 1 - "Going up the stairs,{w=.3} Trish suddenly grabs my shoulder,{w=.4} pinning it to the wall." + "Going up the stairs, Trish suddenly grabs my shoulder, pinning it to the wall." - "She leans in close,{w=.4} looking me dead in the eyes." + "She leans in close, looking me dead in the eyes." pause .5 A "Uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -2598,22 +2637,22 @@ label chapter_5: "She gestures to where Fang is sitting." pause .5 - "Fang’s picking at her lunch with a fork,{w=.4} not eating a bite." + "Fang’s picking at her lunch with a fork, not eating a bite." - "Now that I think about it,{w=.4} she has been a bit distant today." + "Now that I think about it, she has been a bit distant today." pause .5 T "They’ve been like this since band practice yesterday." pause .5 - "Wait,{w=.4} what?" + "Wait, what?" show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) pause .25 T "Did you do something to them?" pause .5 - "Do something?{w=.4} What does she mean?" + "Do something? What does she mean?" "She doesn't think that Fang and I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 @@ -2633,7 +2672,7 @@ label chapter_5: A "Why are you so concerned?" - A "Everyone has a bad day every now and then,{w=.4} right?" + A "Everyone has a bad day every now and then, right?" pause .25 show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve @@ -2641,26 +2680,27 @@ label chapter_5: T "Fang and I have been friends for ten years now." T "Not once have I seen them this upset." - - T "You’re the only new thing around here." pause .5 - T "It can’t be anyone else." + T "You’re the only new thing around here." - T "So.{w=.5} What did you do?" + T "It can’t be anyone else." + pause .5 + + T "So.{w=.4} What did you do?" pause .5 A "I swear I haven’t done anything with Fang." pause .5 - A "Look,{w=.4} we’ve got music next.{w=.5} I’ll ask Fang what’s up then." + A "Look, we’ve got music next. I’ll ask Fang what’s up then." pause .5 - "Trish glowers.{w=.5} We both glance at Fang to see her still sitting there with her untouched food." + "Trish glowers. We both glance at Fang to see her still sitting there with her untouched food." show trish: easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.55 - T "{i}You’ll{/i} talk to Fang?{w=.6} You’ll probably make it worse.{w=.6} {i}I{/i} should be the one to talk with them." + T "{i}You’ll{/i} talk to Fang? You’ll probably make it worse. {i}I{/i} should be the one to talk with them." pause .5 A "So why haven’t you?" @@ -2679,10 +2719,10 @@ label chapter_5: show trish annoyed flip with dissolve pause .5 - T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Fine{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} but you better not fuck up." + T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Fine{cps=*.1}...{/cps} but you better not fuck up." show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve - "She lets go of my shoulder,{w=.4} stuffing her hands in her jacket pockets with a huff." + "She lets go of my shoulder, stuffing her hands in her jacket pockets with a huff." pause .5 show trish: @@ -2716,10 +2756,10 @@ label chapter_5: show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) pause .5 - A "Done?{w=.5} With the projector?" + A "Done? With the projector?" show reed considering flip - Re "That’s right,{w=.2} man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} now we can watch movies{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} shows{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} pornos{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {nw}" + Re "That’s right, man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} now we can watch movies{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} shows{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} pornos{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {nw}" show reed explanatory flip extend "all that." show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) @@ -2753,11 +2793,9 @@ label chapter_5: show anon: easein_cubic 0.5 xalign -0.05 pause 0.5 - play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickWipe.ogg' volume 0.7 + play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickWipe.ogg' volume 0.7 show orangeslice: easeout_cubic 0.65 ypos 0.19 rotate 160 - pause 0.75 - show orangeslice: easeout_cubic 1 ypos 1.1 rotate 360 "Trish throws an orange slice at me." @@ -2779,12 +2817,12 @@ label chapter_5: T "How about the Count of Monte Cristo?" show reed explanatory flip - Re "Oh,{w=.3} I know that one!{w=.4} The actors in that one are pretty great{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + Re "Oh, I know that one!{w=.4} The actors in that one are pretty great{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) pause .25 stop music fadeout 3 - A "Oh yeah.{w=.4} I love the VA work." + A "Oh yeah. I love the VA work." pause .5 show reed: @@ -2804,11 +2842,11 @@ label chapter_5: Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 - "Crap,{w=.4} was it something I said?" + "Crap, was it something I said?" pause .5 show trish explanatory flip - T "What-" + T "What-{w=.5}{nw}" play sound 'audio/effects/schoolBell.ogg' "{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.7}DONG {w=0.65}BING-{w=0.7}BONG{/i}{/cps}" @@ -2829,7 +2867,7 @@ label chapter_5: "When did she leave?" pause .5 - A "Oh,{w=.3} Fang left already.{w=.4} I’ll go catch up with her." + A "Oh, Fang left already. I’ll go catch up with her." show anon: easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.2 @@ -2841,21 +2879,25 @@ label chapter_5: scene black with fade - "I make record time out of the auditorium,{w=.4} leaving a still confused Trish and Reed." + "I make record time out of the auditorium, leaving a still confused Trish and Reed." "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - - stop music fadeout 3 + stop music fadeout 6 pause .5 - scene bandroom with fade - play ambient 'audio/effects/classroomLoop.ogg' fadein 3 + scene bandroom with Fade(1, 0, 1) + pause .5 "Fang isn’t in music class when I get there." + pause .5 - "I tap out a quick message to her on my phone.{w=.4} I take a spot next to her seat and wait." + "I tap out a quick message to her on my phone. I take a spot next to her seat and wait." "Maybe she just needed to use the bathroom." + pause .5 + + scene black with dissolve + pause .5 "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 @@ -2865,14 +2907,20 @@ label chapter_5: "I’m starting to get worried." pause .5 + play ambient 'audio/effects/classroomLoop.ogg' fadein 3 + scene bandroom with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 + T "{i}{alpha=0.75}\"Something’s up with Fang today.\"{/alpha}{/i}" pause .5 "Hmmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 show anonphone with easeinbottom "I looked at my phone,{w=.4} and the message I sent her way just before class started." + pause .5 A "\"Hey. Wanna talk?\"{fast}" pause .5 @@ -2885,7 +2933,7 @@ label chapter_5: pause .5 T "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"You better not fuck up.\"{/i}{/alpha}" - pause .5 + pause 1 "God damn it." pause .5 @@ -2896,11 +2944,12 @@ label chapter_5: "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" scene hallway with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 "One guitar-shaped bathroom pass later I’m scrambling through the halls." pause .5 - "If I were a non-binary teenage pterodon having a crisis,{w=.4} where would I hide?" + "If I were a non-binary teenage pterodon having a crisis, where would I hide?" "Someplace only Fang would go{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 @@ -2909,9 +2958,9 @@ label chapter_5: "There are only two in the building." - "I sprint to the first bathroom,{w=.4} closer to the back of the school and nestled away in the special needs area." + "I sprint to the first bathroom, closer to the back of the school and nestled away in the special needs area." - "My knuckles rap against the door,{w=.4} locked and preoccupied." + "My knuckles rap against the door, locked and preoccupied." pause .5 A "Fang?{w=.4} You’re missing class and I seriously need help with this sheet music." @@ -2923,16 +2972,19 @@ label chapter_5: unknown "{cps=*.4}The one you seek is elsewhere.{/cps}" pause .5 - "Who the fuck{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Wait{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "Who the fuck{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + "Wait{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - A "You’re that weird stego chick{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Stella?" + A "You’re that weird stego chick{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Stella?" pause .5 - St "That’s very rude{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} And I’m not weird{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + St "That’s very rude{cps=*.1}...{/cps} And I’m not weird{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - A "Whatever,{w=.4} do you know where Fang is?" + A "Whatever, do you know where Fang is?" + pause .5 - St "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Not here{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {size=-5}Can you please leave?{/size}{w=.4} {size=-10}I have a nervous bladder.{/size}" + St "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Not here{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {size=-5}Can you please leave?{/size}{w=.4} {size=-10}I have a nervous bladder.{/size}" pause .5 "I turn away from the door and sprint to the front of the school where the other bathroom is." @@ -2944,9 +2996,10 @@ label chapter_5: "The feathers floating by the window provide me with the clue I need." pause .5 - "I look out the window,{w=.4} and while I can’t look up to see for sure,{w=.4} the shadow that she is casting on the ground below is enough verification required." + "I look out the window, and while I can’t look up to see for sure, the shadow that she is casting on the ground below is enough verification required." - "My feet climb the steps easily,{w=.4} but my mind is ill at-ease." + "My feet climb the steps easily, but my mind is ill at-ease." + pause .5 "The hell is wrong with me right now." @@ -2960,29 +3013,34 @@ label chapter_5: T "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"Fang and I have been friends for ten years now.\"{/i}{/alpha}" - "I’ve known her for barely a month.{w=.5} And why is it my problem to fix?" + "I’ve known her for barely a month. And why is it my problem to fix?" pause .5 T "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"Not once have I seen them this upset.\"{/i}{/alpha}" - stop music fadeout 4 + stop music fadeout 6 pause .5 "I can’t stop the gnawing feeling in my chest." pause .5 - scene black with fade - - "I’m at the door to the roof now.{w=.6} It’s shut,{w=.4} but by the handle I notice a piece of cardboard tucked between the door and frame,{w=.4} keeping the latch open." + scene black with Dissolve(1.5) pause .5 - F "\"{i}Good job,{w=.3} dork.{/i}\"" - - "{i}Fang smirks a bit.{/i}" + "I’m at the door to the roof now." + + "It’s shut, but by the handle I notice a piece of cardboard tucked between the door and frame, keeping the latch open." pause .5 - "Damn it all.{w=.5} Fang’s problems first,{w=.4} then I can figure out my chest." + F "\"{alpha=0.75}{i}Good job, dork.{/i}{/alpha}\"" + + "{alpha=0.75}{i}Fang smirks a bit.{/i}{/alpha}" pause .5 + "Damn it all." + + "Fang’s problems first, then I can figure out my chest." + pause 1 + play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 5 scene roof day with Fade(1, 1, 2, color="#fff") @@ -3005,7 +3063,7 @@ label chapter_5: F "Whose the-{w=.4} {nw}" show fang neutral flip - extend "Anon?{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5} What’s with the guitar?" + extend "Anon?{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} What’s with the guitar?" "Fang is sitting atop the stair enclosure looking down at me." pause .5 @@ -3013,16 +3071,16 @@ label chapter_5: show anon neutral: yalign 0.1 xalign -0.5 show anon: - easein 1 xalign 0.0 + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0 with dissolve pause 1 - A "Mr. Jingo’s hall pass.{w=.5} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} kinda need help with sheet music again." + A "Mr. Jingo’s hall pass.{w=.4} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} kinda need help with sheet music again." show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "Wow.{w=.4} You really suck at music." + F "Wow. You really suck at music." - A "Yeah.{w=.4} I really do." + A "Yeah. I really do." pause .5 # TODO: I can't really think of a good way to show this @@ -3036,7 +3094,7 @@ label chapter_5: "Around Fang are scattered feathers." pause 1 - A "You alright?{w=.5} {cps=*.5}The feath-{/cps}" + A "You alright?{w} {cps=*.5}The feath-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" F "Preening." pause 1 @@ -3045,13 +3103,13 @@ label chapter_5: pause .5 show fang considering flip with dissolve - "Fang sighs.{w=.5} She holds one of her wings and gently brushes her fingers through the feathers." + "Fang sighs.{w=.4} She holds one of her wings and gently brushes her fingers through the feathers." pause .5 F "I’m preening my wing." pause .5 - "She winces.{w=.6} A feather drifts to the floor." + "She winces.{w=.4} A feather drifts to the floor." pause .5 show anon: @@ -3073,7 +3131,7 @@ label chapter_5: show anon neutral flip with dissolve pause 1 - "I sit down next to her and look out at Volcaldera Bluff.{w=.6} It’s a beautiful view." + "I sit down next to her and look out at Volcaldera Bluff. It’s a beautiful view." pause .5 "It’s a distraction." @@ -3097,7 +3155,7 @@ label chapter_5: "Fang stares at the vista of Volcaldera but her eyes are vacant." pause .5 - F "I feel like no matter what I do,{w=.4} I’ll never be able to make something." + F "I feel like no matter what I do, I’ll never be able to make something." F "I try and try but nobody likes the ways I express myself." pause .5 @@ -3112,7 +3170,7 @@ label chapter_5: pause .5 "Her eyes wetten.{w=.6} Her voice roughens.{w=.6} Her shoulders quake." - F "Nobody's ever said{w=.2} ‘Good job,{w=.3} Fang!{w=.4} Can I get a copy of that last song on CD’." + F "Nobody's ever said ‘Good job, Fang! Can I get a copy of that last song on CD’." pause .5 F "I’ve been playing music since I was basically in diapers and all I have to show for it is a shit reputation." @@ -3139,7 +3197,7 @@ label chapter_5: show fang very angry flip with Dissolve(.25) - "Her hand curls into a fist.{w=.6} Her nails bite into her palm,{w=.4} and I can clearly see the minute trickle of blood." + "Her hand curls into a fist.{w=.6} Her nails bite into her palm, and I can clearly see the minute trickle of blood." F "How much harder do I have to try to get people to notice me!" @@ -3154,12 +3212,12 @@ label chapter_5: F "When dad looks at me it’s like he just sees a lost cause!" - F "\"Oh,{w=.2} Fang is the scene teen,{w=.5} better focus on the one that ISN’T broken so we don’t screw up again!\"" + F "\"Oh, Fang is the scene teen, better focus on the one that ISN’T broken so we don’t screw up again!\"" - "She punctuated her shouts with her fist,{w=.4} striking the roof beneath her." - - "Her fist lands softly one final time,{w=.5} uncurling to reveal the bleeding grooves her sharp nails have left." + "She punctuated her shouts with her fist, striking the roof beneath her." + pause .5 + "Her fist lands softly one final time, uncurling to reveal the bleeding grooves her sharp nails have left." show fang ear cover flip with dissolve pause .5 @@ -3178,7 +3236,7 @@ label chapter_5: F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 - "Watching her break apart,{w=.5} it’s causing the dull pain in my chest to intensify." + "Watching her break apart, it’s causing the dull pain in my chest to intensify." pause .5 F "Why can’t I be popular like him?" @@ -3189,12 +3247,12 @@ label chapter_5: show fang very sad flip with dissolve pause .5 - "Fang deflates completely.{w=.6} All her anger gone,{w=.4} replaced with melancholy." + "Fang deflates completely.{w=.6} All her anger gone, replaced with melancholy." pause .5 F "Naser doesn’t have to try at all!" - F "Even crippled,{w=.4} he just breezes through life!" + F "Even crippled, he just breezes through life!" pause .5 F "Why does he get straight A’s?" @@ -3250,7 +3308,7 @@ label chapter_5: F "And I’ll always be in his fucking shadow!" pause .5 - F "I can’t just change,{w=.4} just magically get better at everything even if someone like Naser tries to help." + F "I can’t just change, just magically get better at everything even if someone like Naser tries to help." F "And it’s clear he wants to." pause .5 @@ -3286,7 +3344,7 @@ label chapter_5: show fang anguish with Dissolve(1) pause .5 - "She wipes a tear with one of her hands,{w=.5} but leaves a bloody smudge instead." + "She wipes a tear with one of her hands, but leaves a bloody smudge instead." pause .5 F "Naser knows who he is." @@ -3310,7 +3368,7 @@ label chapter_5: show fang: easein_quart 1 xalign 0.2 show fang ultra angry with Dissolve(.25) - F "WHO AM I,{w=.4} DAMN IT?!" + F "WHO AM I, DAMN IT?!" pause .5 show fang very sad with Dissolve(1) @@ -3362,19 +3420,19 @@ label chapter_5: repeat 7 pause 1 repeat - F "I’m stuck with myself,{w=.5} I can’t just drop everything and try other things now." + F "I’m stuck with myself, I can’t just drop everything and try other things now." F "It’s just too late for that." F "There’s too many ways to fuck up." pause .5 - F "Music is the only thing I’ve ever been decent at,{w=.4} and even then{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + F "Music is the only thing I’ve ever been decent at, and even then{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 show fang: easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.25 - "She looks to me desperately,{w=.4} at a loss for words." + "She looks to me desperately, at a loss for words." "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}" pause .5 @@ -3405,9 +3463,9 @@ label chapter_5: F "Here I am begging for help and you haven’t said a word!" pause .5 - F "You’re always so sure of yourself,{w=.4} yet here you are listening to me in a crisis and you can’t say anything?!" + F "You’re always so sure of yourself, yet here you are listening to me in a crisis and you can’t say anything?!" - "Fang grips my jacket with both hands,{w=.4} digging in." + "Fang grips my jacket with both hands, digging in." pause .5 scene fangroofcry with Dissolve(.25) @@ -3429,7 +3487,7 @@ label chapter_5: F "And now everyone I know is friends with you!" - F "You have no talents,{w=.5} no specific knowledge anywhere,{w=.5} no real personality{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + F "You have no talents, no specific knowledge anywhere, no real personality{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 F "WHAT IS IT WITH YOU THAT YOU CAN LACK AN IDENTITY BUT KNOW EXACTLY WHO YOU ARE?!" @@ -3442,7 +3500,7 @@ label chapter_5: F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - A "I dunno how to say it.{w=.6} All I know is I’m me{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "I dunno how to say it. All I know is I’m me{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 F "You’re{cps=*.1}...{/cps} you?" @@ -3465,10 +3523,10 @@ label chapter_5: F "Naturally{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}" - A "If you are forcing this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} whatever{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} then it's like some misplaced idea or like,{w=.5} a refusal to leave the comfort zone{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "If you are forcing this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} whatever{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} then it's like some misplaced idea or like, a refusal to leave the comfort zone{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 - A "Argh,{w=.4} what I’m trying to say is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "Argh, what I’m trying to say is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" A "I ended up trying to be someone else too." pause .5 @@ -3476,11 +3534,13 @@ label chapter_5: A "To the point that I rejected who I really was{w=.3} and started to fuck myself up." pause .5 - A "I’m not about making others' notice me,{w=.5} or about being great at something." + A "I’m not about making others' notice me, or about being great at something." - A "I just do what makes me,{w=.4} well,{w=.4} me." + A "I just do what makes me, well, me." - A "I'm the only me here,{w=.4} and I think it's safe to assume that there's several of you.{w=.6} Like,{w=.4} you don’t know,{w=.5} you said it yourself." + A "I'm the only me here, and I think it's safe to assume that there's several of you." + + A "Like, you don’t know, you said it yourself." pause .5 "Her fingers tighten around my arm." @@ -3488,18 +3548,18 @@ label chapter_5: "I’m not certain she’s breathing right now." pause .5 - A "And there’s tons of different people going through what you are right now,{w=.6} trying to force their egos,{w=.4} only to reject who they really are." + A "And there’s tons of different people going through what you are right now, trying to force their egos, only to reject who they really are." pause .5 A "Not to undermine your feelings or anything." pause .5 - A "And at the end of it all,{w=.4} I’ve accepted that ‘I’ am,{w=.4} and will always be,{w=.5} ‘me’." + A "And at the end of it all, I’ve accepted that ‘I’ am, and will always be, ‘me’." A "Ya see?" pause .5 - F "I have to{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} figure it out myself{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}" + F "I have to{cps=*.1}...{/cps} figure it out myself{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}" pause .5 "Fang’s grip loosens." @@ -3512,16 +3572,15 @@ label chapter_5: easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.3 show anon neutral flip behind fang at aright with dissolve + pause 1 - pause .5 show fang ear cover with dissolve - "She puts her hands around her knees and lowers her head." "Her expression is one of complete resignation." pause .5 - F "I don’t{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I can’t do anything on my own." + F "I don’t{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I can’t do anything on my own." show fang anguish behind anon with dissolve F "How am I supposed to do something like this?" @@ -3549,35 +3608,35 @@ label chapter_5: F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Alright{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 - "She tries to dry her tears again,{w=.4} only to smudge her face with more blood and makeup." + "She tries to dry her tears again, only to smudge her face with more blood and makeup." "I remove my jacket and offer the sleeve to her." show fang sad with Dissolve(1) pause .25 - "She sniffles,{w=.4} then grabs it to wipe her eyes." + "She sniffles, then grabs it to wipe her eyes." "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}It’s laundry day anyways." show fang happy with dissolve - "After returning my jacket,{w=.5} Fang looks to me again with a somber smile." + "After returning my jacket, Fang looks to me again with a somber smile." pause .5 A "Why did you come up here?" - F "It’s nice up here.{w=.5} Quiet." + show fang neutral with dissolve + F "It’s nice up here. Quiet." pause .5 - A "But why?{w=.5} And why alone?" + A "But why? And why alone?" - show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) - F "To think.{w=.5} Maybe to throw myself a pity party.{w=.6} I do this every year." + F "To think. Maybe to throw myself a pity party. I do this every year." A "Up here?" - F "Nah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} just somewhere I can be alone." + F "Nah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} just somewhere I can be alone." pause .5 A "Every year though?" @@ -3586,7 +3645,7 @@ label chapter_5: F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Since I was 11{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 - A "Jeez.{w=.5} What happened?" + A "Jeez. What happened?" show fang sad with dissolve pause 1 @@ -3594,12 +3653,12 @@ label chapter_5: F "{cps=*.4}I broke Naser’s wing.{/cps}" pause .7 - "Ah.{w=.5} My foot tastes extra salty today." + "Ah. My foot tastes extra salty today." pause .5 - F "We used to be really close.{w=.5} He looked up to me." + F "We used to be really close. He looked up to me." - F "I was supposed to watch him.{w=.5} I’m his big sister after all." + F "I was supposed to watch him. I’m his big sister after all." pause .5 F "He had asked me if we could really fly." @@ -3607,7 +3666,7 @@ label chapter_5: "Fang stretched her wings to highlight that." pause .5 - F "I said{w=.2} ‘of course’{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} I looked away for a second{w=.3} and then it happened{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + F "I said{w=.2} ‘of course’{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} I looked away for a second and then it happened{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 show fang sad flip with dissolve @@ -3616,15 +3675,15 @@ label chapter_5: F "He jumped off the bluff." pause .5 - "Her eyes become distant,{w=.5} and I can only guess just how vividly she’s reliving this moment of her past." + "Her eyes become distant, and I can only guess just how vividly she’s reliving this moment of her past." pause .5 - F "I watched as he jumped.{w=.5} As he bounced off the cliff and into the water." + F "I watched as he jumped. As he bounced off the cliff and into the water." - F "I climbed down as fast as I could,{w=.4} hoping to God he wasn’t dead." + F "I climbed down as fast as I could, hoping to God he wasn’t dead." pause .5 - F "But the current{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Dad and the lifeguard had to go in because the current was too strong." + F "But the current{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Dad and the lifeguard had to go in because the current was too strong." "Her voice quakes as she’s engulfed in her memory." pause .5 @@ -3636,7 +3695,7 @@ label chapter_5: "Fang chokes back a sob and continues." pause .5 - F "Naser was{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} I thought he was dead{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + F "Naser was{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I thought he was dead{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Covered in blood{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -3644,7 +3703,7 @@ label chapter_5: pause .5 show fang very sad with dissolve - F "My baby brother,{w=.3} just 9 years old,{w=.4} had jumped off the bluff,{w=.5} thinking he could fly!" + F "My baby brother, just 9 years old, had jumped off the bluff, thinking he could fly!" "Fang’s eyes grow wet again." @@ -3657,12 +3716,12 @@ label chapter_5: show fanganonhug with dissolve - "Without a second thought I draw her into a hug,{w=.4} comforting her." + "Without a second thought I draw her into a hug, comforting her." "Her voice is muffled by my jacket but she continues." pause .5 - F "I’m why his wing is a fucking mess.{w=.5} I did it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + F "I’m why his wing is a fucking mess. I did it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" F "{size=-5}So why{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{/size}" pause .5 @@ -3671,20 +3730,20 @@ label chapter_5: pause 1 Nas "{i}{alpha=0.75}\"Fang’s still family.\"{/alpha}{/i}" - pause .5 + pause 1 A "Because you’re his sister." - "Fang flinches in my arms,{w=.4} but doesn’t pull away." + "Fang flinches in my arms, but doesn’t pull away." pause .5 - A "You’re the one that’s hurting,{w=.2} Fang.{w=.5} Not Naser." + A "You’re the one that’s hurting, Fang. Not Naser." pause .5 - "I surprised myself there.{w=.5} I honestly don’t know how I managed this conversation." + "I surprised myself there. I honestly don’t know how I managed this conversation." pause .5 - "I let go of Fang and lean back,{w=.4} giving her some space.{w=.6} Her breathing is evening out,{w=.4} and she looks far more composed now." + "I let go of Fang and lean back, giving her some space. Her breathing is evening out, and she looks far more composed now." pause .5 hide fanganonhug @@ -3707,7 +3766,7 @@ label chapter_5: A "You’re pretty much right." - F "Maybe,{w=.4} but I shouldn’t have put it so harshly." + F "Maybe, but I shouldn’t have put it so harshly." pause .5 F "All this time I thought people like you were{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -3715,12 +3774,12 @@ label chapter_5: show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) pause .25 - F "Useless?{w=.5} Something like that." + F "Useless? Something like that." show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) pause .5 - F "But here you are,{w=.4} proving me wrong time and time again." + F "But here you are, proving me wrong time and time again." pause .5 A "I get what you mean." @@ -3960,12 +4019,12 @@ label chapter_5: label postFangAndAnonTalk: pause 1 - F "Hey,{w=.4} can I see that?" + F "Hey, can I see that?" "Fang points at my oversized hall pass." pause .5 - A "Yeah,{w=.4} sure" + A "Yeah, sure" pause .5 hide anon @@ -3974,26 +4033,26 @@ label chapter_5: with Dissolve(1) pause .5 - "She takes it from my hands,{w=.4} our fingers brushing for a second." + "She takes it from my hands, our fingers brushing for a second." "She blushes while she handles the acoustic bathroom pass." pause .5 - F "I think{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I think I finally got the tune,{w=.3} Anon." + F "I think{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I think I finally got the tune, Anon." A "Tune?" pause .5 - "She finishes tuning the guitar and tests it.{w=.5} With a nod to herself Fang begins strumming." + "She finishes tuning the guitar and tests it. With a nod to herself Fang begins strumming." - "The rhythm is slow and the tone is soft,{w=.5} enough so that her humming blends perfectly with it." + "The rhythm is slow and the tone is soft, enough so that her humming blends perfectly with it." - "I lean back,{w=.4} bobbing my head along to the impromptu music." + "I lean back, bobbing my head along to the impromptu music." pause .5 "The streaks from her tears that had once marred her pretty face only help the highlight her soft smile now." - "I hum along now too,{w=.4} which causes Fang to giggle.{w=.6} The rhythm is slowing to a crawl,{w=.5} the song about to end." + "I hum along now too, which causes Fang to giggle. The rhythm is slowing to a crawl, the song about to end." pause .5 F "{cps=*.6}With a meteor coming soon{/cps}{w=.6}{nw}" @@ -4002,7 +4061,7 @@ label chapter_5: extend"{cps=*.6}\n\ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ {fast}Goodbye Volcano High{/cps}" pause 1 - "The lyrics surprise me,{w=.4} but I shrug it off." + "The lyrics surprise me, but I shrug it off." pause .5 A "You ready to get up?" @@ -4013,54 +4072,50 @@ label chapter_5: hide hallpass with Dissolve(1) pause .5 - "I stand and pop my back,{w=.4} looking out over the fence at the ground below." + "I stand and pop my back, looking out over the fence at the ground below." "From here I can see the afternoon sun starting to encroach on the skyline of the small coastal town." pause .5 - "Turning to Fang,{w=.4} I crouch a bit and extend my hand to her." + "Turning to Fang, I crouch a bit and extend my hand to her." - "She moves her bloody hand to take it,{w=.3} but hesitates." + "She moves her bloody hand to take it, but hesitates." pause .5 "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 "She softly grasps my hand." + pause .5 "She winces in pain." pause .5 "You know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - "It’s strange,{w=.6} I expected the alarms to go off again,{w=.4} but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + stop music fadeout 8 + play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 8 + "It’s strange, I expected the alarms to go off again, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - "This feels different,{w=.4} somehow." + "This feels different, somehow." "More natural." pause .5 - "I’m careful to hoist her to her feet.{w=.5} Mindful of her injured palm." + "I’m careful to hoist her to her feet. Mindful of her injured palm." show weridkissu with Dissolve(.25) pause 1 "But her beak accidentally bumps into my cheek on her way up." - pause 1 - "Ah,{w=.3} there they are." + "Ah, there they are." pause .5 - "Fang’s eyes contract and she instinctively hops backwards,{w=.4} covering her muzzle with her hands and turning her head away in her flusteration." + "Fang’s eyes contract and she instinctively hops backwards, covering her muzzle with her hands and turning her head away in her flusteration." - "I clench my lower jaw and look at my palm,{w=.4} slick with sweat and her blood." - - play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 8 - stop music fadeout 5.0 - pause .5 - - "The silence continues for an immeasurable amount of time." + "I clench my lower jaw and look at my palm, slick with sweat and her blood." pause .5 hide weridkissu @@ -4069,70 +4124,79 @@ label chapter_5: show anon neutral: yalign 0.1 xalign -0.25 with dissolve + pause 1 + + "The silence continues for an immeasurable amount of time." pause .5 - A "{cps=*.3}Haha{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} so that’s how dinos kiss{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} {cps=*.5}haha{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "{cps=*.3}Haha{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps} so that’s how dinos kiss{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {cps=*.5}haha{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" #[Internal screaming sfx here] - "FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFU-{w=.4}{nw}" + "FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFU-{w=.5}{nw}" show fang sad flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "Haha{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} not really{w=.4} hahaha{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {cps=*.3}haha{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + F "Haha{cps=*.1}...{/cps} not really{w=.4} hahaha{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {cps=*.3}haha{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - A "Ha ha{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} {cps=*.5}haaaa{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "Ha ha{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {cps=*.5}haaaa{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps} uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 show fang sad with dissolve pause .5 - "I look for something,{w=.4} {i}anything{/i},{w=.4} to end this awkwardness." + "I look for something, {i}anything{/i}, to end this awkwardness." - "Like the guitar hall pass.{w=.5} Wait{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "Like the guitar hall pass." + + "Wait{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 - "I check my phone,{w=.4} seeing that Mr. Jingo’s class will be ending in 10 minutes." + "I check my phone, seeing that Mr. Jingo’s class will be ending in 10 minutes." + play music 'audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg' fadein 1.0 pause .5 show anon sad with dissolve - A "Fuck{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} the assignment{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "Fuck{cps=*.1}...{/cps} the assignment{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 show fang: easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.2 pause .2 show fang unimpressed flip with dissolve - "Fang finally looks my way again,{w=.4} though her face is still flush." + "Fang finally looks my way again, though her face is still flush." pause .5 F "What?" - A "Mr. Jingo’s assignment.{w=.4} There’s no way in hell I’ll be able to do it at home." + A "Mr. Jingo’s assignment." + + A "There’s no way in hell I’ll be able to do it at home." pause .25 show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25) F "{cps=*.3}Pfffft.{/cps}" - "Fang’s hands try to cover her beak,{w=.4} failing horribly to contain her giggles." + "Fang’s hands try to cover her beak, failing horribly to contain her giggles." - F "{cps=*.6}Hehehehehehe.{/cps}{w=.5} God,{w=.4} you really suck at music." + F "{cps=*.6}Hehehehehehe.{/cps} God, you really suck at music." show anon neutral with dissolve "I glare at her." pause .5 - F "Haaaaah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} why don’t you just drop it?{w=.4} It’s an elective anyway." + F "Haaaaah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} why don’t you just drop it? It’s an elective anyway." + pause .5 "Because I need to maintain my GPA for college." - A "Because{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I kinda like it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "Because{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I kinda like it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 "I blush and look down to the entrance of the roof below us." - F "Hmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {cps=*.3}maaaaybe{/cps} I’ll help you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + F "Hmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {cps=*.3}maaaaybe{/cps} I’ll help you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - "Fang hops down,{w=.4} her wings easing her landing." + "Fang hops down, her wings easing her landing." pause .5 F "I owe you for the fuckin’ therapy session anyway." @@ -4140,10 +4204,10 @@ label chapter_5: A "Oh thank fuck." pause .5 - "I climb down the ladder.{w=.5} Those wings must be really convenient." + "I climb down the ladder. Those wings must be really convenient." stop music fadeout 1 stop ambient fadeout 1 - pause .5 + pause 1 show fang surprised: easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0 @@ -4158,7 +4222,7 @@ label chapter_5: show roof day broken behind anon, fang with vpunch - "The door flies open,{w=.3} off its hinges,{w=.3} through the suicide fence and over the side of the building,{w=.4} crashing loudly on the concrete below." + "The door flies open, off its hinges, through the suicide fence and over the side of the building, crashing loudly on the concrete below." pause .5 Sp "I KNOW SOMEONE IS DITCHING UP HERE!{w=.4} MY HUNTING INSTINCTS CAN TELL!" @@ -4182,21 +4246,26 @@ label chapter_5: show anon fear Sp "YOU!" with vpunch - "Principal Spears looks at us,{w=.4} finger pointed at me as if to fire a special beam cannon through my chest." + "Principal Spears looks at us, finger pointed at me as if to fire a special beam cannon through my chest." - Sp "In all my god damned years{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} on top of the roof!{w=.5} Explain.{w=.4} NOW!" + Sp "In all my god damned years{cps=*.1}...{/cps} on top of the roof!{w=.5} Explain.{w=.4} {b}NOW{/b}!" pause .5 show anon neutral with dissolve "Bullshit mode activate." + show anon shrug with dissolve A "I got lost looking for the bathroom?" pause .5 - show dimmer_darker behind spears, anon with Dissolve(.25) + show dimmer_darker behind spears, anon + show anon fear + with Dissolve(.25) "Spears incinerates me on the spot." - hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(.25) + hide dimmer_darker + show anon sad + with dissolve pause .5 show fang neutral with dissolve @@ -4220,29 +4289,32 @@ label chapter_5: show spears neutral flip with dissolve pause .5 - Sp "I’m not stupid.{w=.4} Ptero estrus season isn’t for another few months." + Sp "I’m not stupid. Ptero estrus season isn’t for another few months." pause .5 - Sp "Empty your pockets.{w=.4} Now." + Sp "Empty your pockets. Now." pause .5 - "I reduce myself to hoover flags.{w=.4} All I had on me was my phone and a ratty wallet held together with hot glue and duct tape." + "I reduce myself to hoover flags. All I had on me was my phone and a ratty wallet held together with hot glue and duct tape." - "Fang does the same,{w=.3} dropping her own phone,{w=.4} a spare guitar pick,{w=.4} and an unopened pack of cigarettes." + "Fang does the same, dropping her own phone, a spare guitar pick, and an unopened pack of cigarettes." pause .5 - "Spears looks at Fang dead in the eyes,{w=.4} rips the package open,{w=.5} and stuffs every cigarette in his mouth at once." + "Spears looks at Fang dead in the eyes, rips the package open, and stuffs every cigarette in his mouth at once." show anon concerned show fang surprised with Dissolve(.25) - - "To our mortified stares,{w=.4} he chews them until they are a brown glob and spits it over the fence,{w=.4} landing on a rather oriental looking car."# pause .5 - Sp "Anon.{w=.4} Go to class.{w=.6} Now.{w=.6} \nFang.{w=.75} To the Nurse’s." + "To our mortified stares, he chews them until they are a brown glob and spits it over the fence, landing on a rather oriental looking car."# + pause .5 - stop music fadeout 4 + Sp "Anon. Go to class. Now." + + Sp "Fang. To the Nurse’s." + + stop music fadeout 6 show anon neutral show fang neutral with dissolve @@ -4261,33 +4333,35 @@ label chapter_5: show anon neutral flip with dissolve pause .5 - "I look to Fang one last time.{w=.6} She looks a mess." + "I look to Fang one last time." + + "She looks a mess." play music 'audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg' fadein 1.0 pause .5 scene bloodywing with Dissolve(1.5) pause 1 - "Her wings are ragged,{w=.5} feathers misaligned and a clear patch of them missing on one." + "Her wings are ragged, feathers misaligned and a clear patch of them missing on one." - "Stains on her legs from her make-up,{w=.4} tears{w=.3} and blood." + "Stains on her legs from her make-up, tears and blood." - "Drying blood on her hands,{w=.4} arms and beak." + "Drying blood on her hands, arms and beak." "Eyes puffy and red from crying." pause .5 - "But her smile{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} was{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - pause .5 + "But her smile{cps=*.1}...{/cps} was{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause 1 "I wave her goodbye and wordlessly return to class." pause .5 - stop ambient fadeout 3 + stop ambient fadeout 4 scene bandroom with Fade(1, 1, 1) pause .5 - "I only have a few minutes,{w=.4} but I can’t focus on the assignment.{w=.6} I’ll have to take it home as homework." + "I only have a few minutes, but I can’t focus on the assignment. I’ll have to take it home as homework." pause .5 F "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"Hmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {cps=*.3}maaaaybe{/cps} I’ll help you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}\"{/i}{/alpha}" @@ -4300,7 +4374,7 @@ label chapter_5: "!" - "My heart thumps roughly in my chest.{w=.5} Just what is with me today." + "My heart thumps roughly in my chest. Just what is with me today." pause .5 hide anonphone with easeoutbottom @@ -4309,29 +4383,31 @@ label chapter_5: "All this drama{cps=*.1}...{/cps} when did my life become a soap opera{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 - "Heh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} even included a dramatic kiss{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "Heh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} even included a dramatic kiss{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - "I look at my hand,{w=.4} her blood now dried and dusty on my palm." + "I look at my hand, her blood now dried and dusty on my palm." pause .5 - "Did{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} that count as a kiss?" + "Did{cps=*.1}...{/cps} that count as a kiss?" - "I mean,{w=.4} it was unintentional.{w=.5} She backed off and all." + "I mean, it was unintentional. She backed off and all." "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 - "Jeez,{w=.4} my insides feel like liquid." + "Jeez, my insides feel like liquid." "Surely that’s just my disgusted reaction to Spear’s scare tactic up there." pause .5 - "Nah,{w=.3} this isn’t fear.{w=.5} Unlike a bottomless pit the feeling is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "Nah, this isn’t fear. Unlike a bottomless pit the feeling is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "Pleasant{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 - "Yeah,{w=.3} I kinda like it.{w=.5} {cps=*6}Hmmmm{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "Yeah, I kinda like it." + + "{cps=*6}Hmmmm{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "I wonder if Fang-" pause .5 @@ -4339,15 +4415,19 @@ label chapter_5: "!" pause .5 - "The feeling intensifies.{w=.5} But why?{w=.5} I only thought of-" + "The feeling intensifies." + + "But why?{w=.5} I only thought of-" "It’s not as if she-" "But-" "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - stop music fadeout 4 - scene black with Fade (2, 0, 0) + pause .5 + + stop music fadeout 7 + scene black with Dissolve(2) pause .5 "Do I like Fang?" @@ -4356,10 +4436,12 @@ label chapter_5: "!!!!!!" "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 "{cps=*.25}Fuck.{/cps}" "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}" + pause 1 return