cleanup, add more TODOs
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@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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stop ambient fadeout 0.5
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pause 0.5
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###Maybe a good idea to have this song fade in, the silence from before clashes a bit. Though, I will hold off on implementing to see how the bench scene would feel with ambience.
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#TODO: does the audio work with the new ambience?
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scene pathetic at Pan((0, 1031), (0, 0), 10.0) with dissolve
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play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg'
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@ -277,8 +277,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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with dissolve
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I "The hand tightens around my own and pulls roughly."
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###Naser moves up a bit here, is this intentional? Maybe make it a bit more subtle.
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#changed to make it a bit more stubtle, but feel free to tweak as you please
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#Documentation on MoveTransition : https://git.snootgame.xyz/Cavemanon/SnootGame/wiki/Tips#MoveTransition
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show naser neutral flip at nmidright with MoveTransition(0.5, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
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@ -485,7 +484,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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A "uh{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}{w=0.4} I{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}"
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###might be wise to make this more abrupt and maybe fade in some music too
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#TODO: suitable menacing ambience or music
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I "There’s whispers now.{w} The hushed tones,{w=0.4} silenced snickers,{w=0.4} blending with the everpresent stares.{w} My heart hammers at my chest and I am sure that they all can hear it.{w=0.5} See the cold chill racing over me."
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I "I thought I had found a decent spot in the corner when disaster struck."
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# TODO: SFX of some kind
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#TODO: confirm if 2D flipping is OK when done for comedy occasionally
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#TODO: SFX of some kind
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show naser neutral behind anon with easeinleft:
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xalign -0.6 yalign 0.1
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stop ambient fadeout 0.25 # TODO: SFX, whoosh, whipcrack or something
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stop ambient fadeout 0.25
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show anon fear:
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xalign 0.6 yalign 0.1
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easein 0.5 xzoom -1
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show anon fear flip:
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xzoom 1
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###Artists and Writers were hesitant about flipping with zoom last time I did it. Might want to make another version in case they don't approve
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I "Said disaster was a hand grabbing my shoulder and turning me about."
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I "My plate of pizza shaped cardboard threatened to smear across my shirt."
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A "{cps=*0.25}Suuuure{/cps}{cps=*0.1}..{/cps}"
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###Might be wise to pull out a different track. If you need more, our sound guy has plenty.
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#TODO: music variation
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stop ambient fadeout 0.25
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play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg'
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@ -626,7 +624,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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ease 0.35 yalign 0.0
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repeat
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N "SO!{w=0.5} What do you think of Volcano High!{w=0.3} How about your classes{w=0.3} You seem-"
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N "SO!{w=0.5} What do you think of Volcano High!{w=0.3} How about your classes?{w=0.3} You seem-"
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I "I just nod along,{w=0.3} starting to not pay attention."
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I "What."
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show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
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Nas "Fang’s gonna have some extra pizzas for the show.{w=0.5} You could take some home."
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A "I uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} dunno about concerts.{w=0.6} Not really one for public events like that."
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A "{cps=*0.5}I’ll consider it.{/cps}"
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show naomi:
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show naomi explanatory flip:
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easein 0.4 xalign 0.9
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###Naomi should change to her cheery expression quicker
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show naomi happy flip with dissolve
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N "Hey!{w=0.4} Don’t leave me out of the conversation!"
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show naomi happy flip with dissolve
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N "How about I help you pick out some cheap food after school?"
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N "I know some great vegan shops in the area!"
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Sp "Oh,{w=0.4} I do need you to come by my office tomorrow for some paperwork."
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I "I nod and go back to the door where Naser is standing,{w=0.3} holding it open for the last of the audience to go inside."
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###Rock boing no longer plays in the auditorium
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stop music fadeout 1.0
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scene auditorium
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show naser considering with dissolve
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###Might wanna get a different ring tone
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#TODO: find generic (or joke) cellphone ringtone
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play sound 'audio/OST/ringtone.ogg'
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I "Naser’s phone rings.{w=0.4} He moves aside to answer it."
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I "Pffft{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}{w=0.2} That struck a chord with her."
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#(In-CG insult layers)
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window hide
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$ i = 0
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while i < 5:
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$ showCG()
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pause 1
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$ i = i + 1
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#(In-CG insult layers)
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$ showCG()
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pause 1
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$ i = i + 1
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I "I watch as she grabs her bass and takes the arm of the purple one,{w=0.3} rushing off stage with the pink drummer."
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###stop le music, needs some fine tuning
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# stop music fadeout 3.0
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scene black with fade
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window hide
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$ i = 0
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while i < 3:
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$ showCG()
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pause 1
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$ i = i + 1
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$ showCG()
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pause 1
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$ i = i + 1
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I "Oh God I can’t take this,{w=0.3} I’m gonna grow a 6 pack from laughing so much,{w=0.5} I’m just gonna grab my pizza and leave"
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# TODO: music here for Reed's intro?
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show naomi angry with Dissolve(0.25)
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N "Is that contraband,{w=0.3} Reed?"
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show naomi unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
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show reed explanatory flip
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Re "Bro,{w=0.4} you’ve known I’m in a band for like,{w=0.4} a year now."
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pause 0.6
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show reed neutral flip
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show naomi angry:
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easein 0.25 xalign 0.1
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