rework ch5 carpark scene

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@ -223,6 +223,7 @@ image reed sad flip = im.Flip("reed/reed sad.png", horizontal=True)
#shocked flips
image anon shocked flip = im.Flip("anon/emotive set/anon shocked.png", horizontal=True)
image anon ohshit flip = im.Flip("anon/base set/anon ohshit.png", horizontal=True)
image fang shocked flip = im.Flip("fang/emotive set/fang shocked.png", horizontal=True)
image fang c shocked flip = im.Flip("fang/future sets/fang c shocked.png", horizontal=True)
image reed shocked flip = im.Flip("reed/reed shocked.png", horizontal=True)

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@ -1,3 +1,8 @@
init python:
# some stupid bullshit you have to do to get sounds playing in an ATL block
def fang_kicks_a_car_workaround_sfx_fuck_renpy(a,b,c):
renpy.play('audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg', channel='sound')
label chapter_5:
# Gardening Club
@ -81,6 +86,7 @@ label chapter_5:
"The flower bulbs are still closed for the winter,{w=.4} but a few are peeking out."
stop ambient fadeout 3
play music 'audio/OST/Ramo de Rosas.ogg' fadein 2
show rosa neutral flip with Dissolve(1):
yalign 0.2 xalign 1.2
@ -222,6 +228,7 @@ label chapter_5:
with dissolve
"The cavemans bellow reverberates throughout the entire school,{w=.4} even though Im pretty sure he wasnt using the PA system."
play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 5
show rosa:
easeout 1 xalign 1.5
@ -263,6 +270,7 @@ label chapter_5:
"She must never find out about Saturnia."
pause .5
stop ambient fadeout 3
play music 'audio/OST/we just turned on the microphone in our programmers_ house.ogg' fadein 1.0
scene garden
show spears neutral flip:
@ -346,6 +354,7 @@ label chapter_5:
St "You should all pair off now to split the work evenly,{w=.4} decide amongst yourselves."
show stella neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 3
stop music fadeout 3
show rosa:
easeout 1 xalign 1.5
@ -364,6 +373,7 @@ label chapter_5:
"Everyone else almost immediately groups off."
pause .5
stop ambient fadeout 3
play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg'
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Leaving just me{w=.3} and take a wild guess who else."
@ -466,6 +476,7 @@ label chapter_5:
"Damn my scrawny arms."
play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg'
stop music fadeout 3
show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
F "Alright this is good."
@ -784,9 +795,23 @@ label chapter_5:
pause .25
Ro "An-{w=.2}on!{w=.5} Why are you still in there?{w=.5} Get up niño,{w=.3} get up!"
# B: leaving this without a visual for now due to the reasons in the previous comment
"She grabs one of my hands and{w=.2} wHOA-"
# B: I know this visual doesn't really work so well because it's not clear that Anon was meant to be lying in the flowerbed, but whatever
show rosa:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.3
"She grabs one of my hands and{w=.4} {nw}"
show anon fear:
easein_back 0.7 xalign 0.05
show rosa:
easein_back 0.7 xalign 0.5
extend "wHOA-"
show rosa:
easein 1 xalign 0.65
show anon:
easein 0.5 xalign -0.1
show anon neutral with dissolve
pause .5
A "You trying to rip my arm off?"
"She grabs a bicep proudly."
@ -1422,60 +1447,117 @@ label chapter_5:
Ro "You better!"
pause .5
scene outside school with fade
show anon neutral at acenter with moveinleft
scene outside school
with Fade(1,0,1)
"There arent many cars in the parking lot, so finding Fang shouldnt be too hard to find."
"There arent many cars in the parking lot,{w=.4} so Fang shouldnt be too hard to find."
# B: this music is meant to play as per the audio direction doc, but it's pretty chill considering Fang is flipping out
play music 'audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg' fadein 1.0
"That pair of wings rustling in-between two parked cars is probably a hint, not sure."
"That pair of wings rustling in-between two parked cars is probably a hint,{w=.4} not sure."
pause .5
"I silently approach, hiding behind the other cars in the lot."
"I silently approach,{w=.4} hiding behind the other cars in the lot."
show fang angry with dissolve:
yalign 0.0 xalign 1.5
"Shes huddled around the passenger door of a garishly yellow minivan."
pause .5
"Wait, is she…?"
"Wait,{w=.4} is she{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?"
"Shit, I gotta stop her."
"Shit,{w=.4} I gotta stop her."
pause .5
A "Fang, what are you doing?!"
show anon concerned:
yalign 0.1 xalign -0.5
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.1
with dissolve
pause .5
show fang very angry flip with dissolve:
xalign 1.4 yalign 0.0
A "Fang,{w=.5} what are you doing?!"
F "Fuck off, fuck-knuckle."
show fang:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.6
show fang very angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause .5
F "Fuck off,{w=.2} fuck-knuckle."
pause .5
show fang angry with dissolve
A "..."
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "Fang, dont break into a teachers car, well get-"
A "Fang,{w=.4} {cps=*.75}dont break into a teacher's car{w},{/cps}{cps=*.5} well get-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}"
show fang:
easein_back 0.5 xalign 1.2
show fang very angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Shut the fuck up cunt smuggler Im focusing on this."
A "..."
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
"Im over it."
pause .5
A "Why are you doing this?"
show fang angry flip
show fang angry flip with dissolve
F "... Itll be fun."
F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Itll be fun."
F "Hehehehe…"
F "{cps=*.5}Hehehehe{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
F "Why, you want to join in on a joyride?"
F "Why,{w=.4} you want to join in on a joyride?"
"She looks at me like its a genuine question."
pause .5
A "No, I dont."
A "No,{w=.4} I dont."
pause .5
show fang kicking with dissolve:
xalign 1.6 yalign 0.0
show anon fear at sleft with move
show fang:
easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.8
pause .25
show fang very angry with Dissolve(.25)
pause .25
show fang:
easeout_back 0.5 xalign 1.3
pause 0.5
# TODO: would love an impact-with-suspension-creak SFX or something here
# TODO: also a car alarm
show anon fear
play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg' # placeholder
show fang kicking with hpunch
pause .5
A "Fang, what are you doing?!"
A "Fang,{w=.1} what are you doing?!"
pause .5
show fang:
block:
easein 0.5 xalign 1.0
pause .25
easeout_back 0.25 xalign 1.4
function fang_kicks_a_car_workaround_sfx_fuck_renpy # placeholder
repeat 5
block:
easein 0.5 xalign 1.0
pause .5
easeout_back 0.25 xalign 1.4
function fang_kicks_a_car_workaround_sfx_fuck_renpy # placeholder
repeat 5
block:
easein 0.5 xalign 1.0
pause .75
easeout_back 0.25 xalign 1.4
function fang_kicks_a_car_workaround_sfx_fuck_renpy # placeholder
repeat
pause 2
A "Stop kicking the car!!"
pause .5
A "Damn it Fang!"
@ -1489,138 +1571,240 @@ label chapter_5:
F "What do you care?!"
F "Were already in detention, whats a FEW MORE DAYS?!"
show anon angry with dissolve
A "... TO JAIL, FANG."
F "Were already in detention,{w=.4} whats a FEW MORE DAYS?!"
show anon angry with Dissolve(.25)
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}TO JAIL,{w=.3} FANG."
pause .5
F "GO."
F "AWAY."
pause .5
A "YOU WANT TO GET OUR PARENTS INVOLVED?!"
pause .5
"Fang stops kicking the glass, drained of energy and out of breath."
show fang:
easein 0.5 xalign 1.0
pause 1
show fang sad with dissolve
"Fang stops kicking the glass,{w=.4} drained of energy and out of breath."
show fang sad at sright
show anon neutral
with dissolve
pause .5
"Thankfully,{w=.4} the glass isnt even scratched."
pause .5
"Thankfully, the glass isnt even scratched."
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Youre right for being angry at me,{w=.5} youre talented and skilled,{w=.4} and I got nothing to show for myself,{w=.4} and what I did was wrong{cps=*.1}..{/cps}"
A "... Youre right for being angry at me, youre talented and skilled, and I got nothing to show for myself, and what I did was wrong.."
A "But youre better than this,{w=.4} come on."
pause .5
A "But youre better than this, come on."
F "..."
F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"Fang wont look my direction."
"At least she hasnt started kicking the car again."
pause .5
stop music fadeout 3
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Might be a good idea to give her some space."
pause .5
"... Might be a good idea to give her some space."
stop music fadeout 1.0
"All of a sudden I feel like I shouldnt be here."
pause .5
play music 'audio/OST/you need gopher chucks.ogg' fadein 1.0
unknown "HEY!!"
show anon:
easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.2
show fang:
easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.1
with None
show fang surprised flip
show anon ohshit flip
with Dissolve(.25)
pause .5
unknown "WHAT ARE YOU GUYS DOING TO MY CAR?!"
show dimmer_light behind anon, fang with Dissolve(.25)
"We freeze."
pause .5
menu:
"Get out of there.":
scene black with fade
"GET OUT OF THERE.":
scene black with fade
"GET THE FUCK OUT OF DODGE.":
scene black with fade
"Get out of there.":
pass
"GET OUT OF THERE.":
pass
"{b}GET THE FUCK OUT OF DODGE.{/b}":
pass
scene black with fade
"Fang immediately bolts towards the front of the school."
"I follow after, legs pumping furiously in an attempt to both catch up to Fang and avoid the teacher screeching at us from behind."
"I follow after,{w=.4} legs pumping furiously in an attempt to both catch up to Fang and avoid the teacher screeching at us from behind."
"I see Fang veer into the school, the door closing slowly after."
"I see Fang veer into the school,{w=.4} the door closing slowly after."
"By the jacket on my back Im able to slip in just before the door shuts completely."
"Fang is panting in the stairwell near the door. And Im sure Im redder than I was earlier with the vines."
"Fang is panting in the stairwell near the door.{w=.5} And Im sure Im redder than I was earlier with the vines."
scene garden with fade
show fang angry at sleft
show anon neutral at aright
F "Why… hah hah… did you… follow me?"
scene hallway with fade
pause .5
show fang sad:
yalign 0.0 xalign 0.0
show fang:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.1
with dissolve
pause .5
show anon neutral:
yalign 0.1 xalign -0.9
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
with dissolve
pause 1
show fang sad flip with dissolve
pause .5
F "Why{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} hah{w=.3} hah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} did you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} follow me?"
pause .5
"Why?"
A "Be haaaaah… because… Im sorry…"
A "Be{w=.2} {cps=*.5}haaaaah{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} because{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Im sorry{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
stop music fadeout 3
pause 1
"Her snear returns and she makes to turn away."
show fang:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.2#
pause .2
show fang angry with dissolve
"Her sneer returns and she makes to turn away."
pause .5
A "I fucked up. Yes, I was at that concert. And yes, I laughed. I never expected to actually become your friend."
A "I fucked up.{w=.75} Yes,{w=.4} I was at that concert.{w=.6} And yes,{w=.3} I laughed.{w=.6} I never expected to actually become your friend."
pause .5
"Her wings block my view of her."
"But she hasnt left yet. Maybe I can fix this after all."
"But she hasnt left yet.{w=.4} Maybe I can fix this after all."
pause .5
A "I just wanted to coast through school. I was happy being a loner."
A "I just wanted to coast through school.{w=.5} I was happy being a loner."
A "Ive always been one, after all."
show anon neutral at acenter with move
hide fang neutral with dissolve
A "Ive always been one,{w=.3} after all."
pause .5
show fang:
easeout_cubic 1 xalign 2.5
pause .4
hide fang with dissolve
pause .5
"Without a word Fang climbs the stairs."
pause 1
play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' fadein 1.0
show anon:
easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.6
pause 1.5
"Fuck."
pause .5
"I consider following but her silence was evidence enough she wants nothing to do with me."
"And standing here by myself I have time to think of my own admission."
pause .5
"If Fang leaves me alone, Ill get exactly what I want. Right?"
"If Fang leaves me alone,{w=.4} Ill get exactly what I want.{w=.4} Right?"
"She could probably talk Trish and Reed into leaving me alone too."
"Ill get the easy life I wanted."
pause .5
"So why the fuck do I feel absolutely empty right now?"
pause .5
show anon sad with dissolve
"I sigh and slump over on the stairs."
A "Can today get any worse?"
pause .5
show stella neutral at stleft
show stella considering:
yalign 0.1 xalign -0.5
show stella:
easein 1 xalign 0.1
with dissolve
pause .5
St "Karma would suggest yes."
pause .5
"Oh."
"You know, I always thought that tempting fate thing was just a dumb cliche."
show anon neutral flip with dissolve
"You know,{w=.4} I always thought that tempting fate thing was just a dumb cliche."
"It still is.{w=.4} But maybe Stella has a good point about astrology."
pause .5
"It still is. But maybe Stella has a good point about astrology."
show stella explanatory
St "Rosa! I found our errant runaway!"
St "Rosa!{w=.4} I found our errant runaway!"
show stella neutral with Dissolve(.25)
"I hear the shrill screech of a latina banshee approach."
show rosa angry at sright with dissolve
show rosa angry flip behind anon:
yalign 0.2 xalign 2.6
show rosa:
easein_cubic .75 xalign 1.5
with dissolve
show anon:
easein 0.5 xalign 0.45
show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
Ro "Where did you go?!"
Ro "You were supposed to get Fang and return! RETURN!!"
Ro "You were supposed to get Fang and return!{w=.4} {nw}"#
show rosa:
easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.25
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.35
extend "RETURN!!"
A "Oh… Right. Yeah, uh… Sorry."
A "Oh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Right.{w=.4} Yeah,{w=.2} uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Sorry."
Ro "You will be sorry!"
St "Theres two hours left for the rest of the students, but that makes four for you."
show rosa neutral
Ro "Do not worry An-on! We stay as well!"
show stella considering with Dissolve(.25)
St "Theres two hours left for the rest of the students,{w=.4} but that makes four for you."
show rosa considering flip with Dissolve(.75)
pause .5
show rosa neutral flip
Ro "Do not worry An-{w=.15}on!{w=.5} We stay as well!"
pause .5
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{cps=*.3}Greaaat.{/cps}"
pause .5
scene black with Fade(1, 0, 1)
A "... Greaaat."
scene black with fade
"The next few hours were grueling hell."
"Carrying bags of the most rancid smelling fertilizer back and forth…"