From d3c46bd8d787481d72544bfb8ccfcf621beafeca Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bowie Date: Sun, 29 Aug 2021 19:08:24 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] rework ch11D --- ...-carrying-herself-with-more-confidence.rpy | 231 +++++++++++------- 1 file changed, 145 insertions(+), 86 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/11D.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right-and-she-teases-him-while-carrying-herself-with-more-confidence.rpy b/game/script/11D.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right-and-she-teases-him-while-carrying-herself-with-more-confidence.rpy index dfc58b5..d227c63 100644 --- a/game/script/11D.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right-and-she-teases-him-while-carrying-herself-with-more-confidence.rpy +++ b/game/script/11D.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right-and-she-teases-him-while-carrying-herself-with-more-confidence.rpy @@ -2,99 +2,58 @@ label chapter_11D: #Announcing a Show | Golden #le inconsistant indention has arrived #le wrong move indent slut - - play music "audio/OST/Appreciating her Company.ogg" fadein 1.0 - "About fifteen minutes into the assignment, the two of us are just about done." - - "We’re making surprisingly good time." - - F "Uhm… and you said that the electrons hold the negative charge, right?" - - A "Yeah, yeah." - - F "Can’t imagine when I’d be using this crap in real life." - - A "You never know, you might shrink one day." - - show fang happy behind anon with dissolve - - F "Yeah, and you might stop pretending you’re livestreaming on Yousnoot." - - A "As far as you know I might be giving you incorrect answers, you know." - - F "Mhm, sure." - - "The teacher is making his rounds checking on the students and gets to our desks." - show farnsworth at sright with moveinleft - Drf "Hello, Anon. Fang." - - Drf "Are you two getting along well?" - - AnonAndFang "Yes, Mister Fernsworth." - - Drf "Great to hear." - - Drf "You know, I’m real proud of you two." - - Drf "I remember at the start of the year you were at each other's' throats." - - Drf "And now look at you!" - - "The two of us cringe." - - A "Uhh… Yeah, thanks." - - Drf "At any rate, you two understand the material, right?" - - A "Oh yeah, Fang and I are fine." - - A "I was just helping them with a few problems." - - "Phew, remembered it this time." - - Drf "Good, good." - - Drf "I won’t keep you any longer then." - - hide farnsworth with moveoutleft - - "Fernsworth meanders to pester the next few students." - - A "Anyways, where were we?" - + + show fang: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5 show fang happy flip with dissolve "I turn back to Fang and her mischievous grin." + pause .5 A "What?" "Her grin only grows." + pause .5 A "What?! What’s with the look?" - "She shakes her head and holds up her wrist." + "She shakes her head and covers her mouth." - A "Uh… it’s ten thirty-seven? Why is that funny?" + A "Uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} did I say something funny?" F "Anon you ignorant slut." - F "Notice something missing?" + F "Notice something about me? Anything at all?" + pause .5 - A "...Why do you have feathers on your elbows anyway?" + A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Why do you have feathers on your elbows anyway?" - F "Gawd! No! I’m not enbie, Anon." + F "Gawd! No! I’m not actually enbie, Anon." + pause .5 - A "Oh… Still, why do you have feathers on your elbows?" + "What? Oh! 'She'." + + A "Oh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} still, why do you have feathers on your elbows?" "Fang rolls her eyes and digs her feathered elbow into my side." + show fang: + easeout_cubic 0.25 xalign 0.35 + ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4 + show fang happy with Dissolve(.15) + show anon: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0 + pause .5 A "Alright alright, I get it." + show anon: + ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.05 A "Just joking around." F "Shame your jokes suck." "We chuckle together." + pause .5 A "So, like, I can say you’re my girlfriend now?" @@ -104,13 +63,15 @@ label chapter_11D: "The blush becomes contagious and I find myself looking back at the worksheet." - "... Girlfriend…" + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Girlfriend{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "Suddenly I’m feeling squeamish all over again." + pause .5 - "I mean, we went on dates before, but she’s never straight up said she’s my girlfriend…" + "I mean, we went on dates before, but she’s never straight up said she’s my girlfriend{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "Now I’m on the spot." + pause .5 "It only makes sense that I ask her to prom, right?" @@ -121,6 +82,7 @@ label chapter_11D: A "Hey, Fang, you-" F "We’re going to prom together, right?" + pause .5 A "O-oh, yeah. Totally." @@ -131,6 +93,7 @@ label chapter_11D: A "I mean, only with you?" F "Yes or no, dork." + pause .5 A "Yes." @@ -138,8 +101,19 @@ label chapter_11D: A "Like plucking feathers." - "She playfully elbows me again." + show fang: + easeout_cubic 0.25 xalign 0.35 + ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4 + pause .15 + show anon: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0 + pause .5 + "She playfully elbows me again." + pause .5 + + show anon: + ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.05 "I think I get the feathers on the elbow thing now, because those things fucking dig in. Ow." F "Do you even have something to wear?" @@ -156,8 +130,11 @@ label chapter_11D: A "You actually gonna wear a dress?" - F "I’ve got this sick looking dress shirt…" + show fang neutral with dissolve + F "I’ve got this sick looking dress shirt{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + show fang happy with Dissolve(.25) F "Naaaah, shirts suck." A "Wings again?" @@ -165,13 +142,25 @@ label chapter_11D: F "Wings again. At least I can wear a backless dress." "I cup my chin and try to picture the dress." + pause .5 - "The heat" + "The heat creeping up my face tells Fang exactly what I’m thinking." + show anon grin with dissolve "I grin and nod approvingly." + show fang: + easeout_cubic 0.25 xalign 0.35 + ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4 + pause .15 + show anon: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0 + pause .5 "And earn a third elbow to my side." + show anon: + ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.05 + show anon neutral with dissolve A "Wait, hold on." A "Do you still go by Fang, at least?" @@ -182,6 +171,7 @@ label chapter_11D: F "Taking it one step at a time, you know?" + show fang considering with dissolve F "There’s only about ten minutes left of class, are we gonna have enough time to finish the assignment?" A "Shit, yeah. Forgot." @@ -190,109 +180,178 @@ label chapter_11D: A "It’s gonna be close though." + show fang: + easein_back 1 xalign 0.35 + show fang neutral with dissolve + "Fang scoots her chair closer to me." F "No time to waste then, yeah?" + stop music fadeout 4 + pause .5 + "Splitting the questions between us, Fang and I are able to finish the assignment seconds before the bell." "Somehow." + pause .5 - play music "audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg" fadein 1.0 + play music "audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg" fadein 2 + scene hallway + show fang happy: + yalign 0.0 xalign 1.0 + show anon neutral: + yalign 0.1 xalign 0.4 + with Fade(1, 0, 1) + "We walk through the hall together, at least until we have to split to our separate classes." - scene hallway with dissolve - show anon neutral at aleft - show fang happy at scenter - + show anon shrug with Dissolve(.25) A "Hey wait, you did the word search bit this time, right?" A "I thought you said you were terrible at those?" + show anon neutral with dissolve F "And you’ve believed me up to this point." + pause .5 A "I feel used." F "That’s because I used you." + pause .5 A "I’ll get you fo-" Sp "Ah, Fang! There you are, a moment please." + + show anon: + easein 1 xalign 0.55 + show fang: + easein 1 xalign 1.2 + with None + show spears neutral: + yalign 0.0 xalign -0.5 + show spears: + easein 1 xalign 0.0 + show anon neutral flip behind fang + show fang surprised flip + with dissolve + pause 1 + "We turn to see Principal Spears trailing behind us." + pause .5 F "Yes?" - show spears neutral flip at sright with dissolve - - Sp "Fang, I was planning on asking you during your next class, but since I found you here…" + Sp "Fang, I was planning on asking you during your next class, but since I found you here{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" Sp "I’m embarrassed to say we’re missing one event slot during prom. Scheduling error." Sp "And your teacher, Mr Jingo, recommended you for your musical talents." + pause .5 Sp "I’m not asking you to make your decision right now, but if you’d consider helping out by performing a musical number or two that would help monumentally." + pause .5 + show fang happy flip with dissolve F "Oh!" A "Fang’s going to play for the school?" Sp "If Fang agrees to." - F "Well, uh… Sure!" + F "Well, uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Sure!" F "Yeah, I’d love to do some songs for prom." + show spears happy with Dissolve(.25) Sp "Fantastic news, Fang. When you can, please swing by the office." F "Thank you, Principal Spears. I’ll come after school today." "Spears nods and heads off." + pause .5 - hide spears with moveoutright - + show spears: + easeout 1.2 xalign -0.9 + pause .2 + show spears happy flip with dissolve + hide spears with dissolve + pause .5 + + show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25) F "Shit, now I really need to get a good dress." + show anon: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.45 + show anon neutral with dissolve A "I thought you had one?" + show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) F "A party dress isn’t a performance dress!" F "It’s like- you know what I mean." A "I guess?" + pause .5 A "You don’t seem as excited as last time you got somewhere to play." + show fang sad flip with dissolve F "I know, I mean... last time I had a whole band to play with." + pause .5 A "You sure you’ll be alright playing solo?" + show fang considering flip with dissolve F "Probably." - F "I’ll also need to practice a lot more…" + F "I’ll also need to practice a lot more{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + show fang neutral flip with dissolve F "You’ll help me, right?" A "Of course." A "As long as you don’t need me up on stage with you." + show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25) F "I’m trying to keep the crowd from throwing things this time around, actually." + pause .5 A "Bite me." F "Speaking of. I’ll see you at lunch, right?" A "Yeah, of course." + pause .5 + + show fang behind anon: + easein_back 1 yalign 0.14 xalign 0.8 + easein_cubic 1 yalign 0.0 xalign 1.2 + pause .5 "Fang pecks me on the cheek and starts down the hall to her next class." - hide fang neutral with moveoutright + show fang: + easeout_cubic 1.2 xalign 2.0 + pause .2 + show fang happy with dissolve + hide fang with dissolve + pause .5 + show anon grin with dissolve "I feel my lips spread into a grin. It’s kind of weird to think of it, but I’m actually excited for prom." - stop music fadeout 1.0 + pause .5 + + stop music fadeout 4 + scene black with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 + "Man, I hope dad’s suit has actually been to the cleaner, I don’t wanna disappoint." - "..." + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" return \ No newline at end of file