Add in Fixed bloodywing.jpg fang's chin

Reviewed-on: https://git.snootgame.xyz/Cavemanon/SnootGame/pulls/159

game/screens.rpy

@@ -1259,7 +1259,7 @@ screen extrasnavigation():
     vbox:
         spacing 10
         xpos 1885
-        ypos 1120
+        ypos 1130
         use main_menu_buttons("gui/button/menubuttons/template_idle.png",
             [
                 [ "Help", ShowMenu("help") ],

game/script.rpy

@@ -279,7 +279,6 @@ image fang a prom considering flip = im.Flip("fang/prom sets/fang a prom conside
 image reed considering flip = im.Flip("reed/reed considering.png", horizontal=True)
 image naser considering flip = im.Flip("naser/naser considering.png", horizontal=True)
 image naomi considering flip = im.Flip("naomi/naomi considering.png", horizontal=True)
-image naomi prom considering flip = im.Flip("naomi/naomi prom considering.png", horizontal=True)
 image rosa considering flip = im.Flip("rosa/rosa considering.png", horizontal=True)
 image trish considering flip = im.Flip("trish/trish considering.png", horizontal=True)
 image stella considering flip = im.Flip("stella/stella considering.png", horizontal=True)
@@ -361,7 +360,6 @@ image trish indignant flip = im.Flip("trish/trish indignant.png", horizontal=Tru
 #surprised flip
 image fang surprised flip = im.Flip("fang/basic set/fang surprised.png", horizontal=True)
 image trish surprised flip = im.Flip("trish/trish surprised.png", horizontal=True)
-image trish prom surprised flip = im.Flip("trish/trish prom surprised.png", horizontal=True)
 image naser surprised flip = im.Flip("naser/naser surprised.png", horizontal=True)
 
 #other flips

game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy

@@ -3254,7 +3254,7 @@ label chapter_11:
 
         show fang surprised
         show moe neutral flip:
-            yalign 0.0 xalign 1.7
+            yalign 0.1 xalign 1.7
         show moe:
             easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.3
         with dissolve
@@ -3816,7 +3816,7 @@ label chapter_11:
         # show rosa neutral flip:
         #     yalign 0.2 xalign 0.9
         show moe neutral flip:
-            yalign 0.0 xalign 1.75
+            yalign 0.1 xalign 1.75
         with Dissolve(1)
         pause .5
 
@@ -4332,7 +4332,7 @@ label chapter_11:
             easeout 0.75 xalign 1.3
         pause .25
         hide reed with dissolve
-        
+
         scene hallway with fade
 
         "Reed is chasing close behind only a few feet behind me."
@@ -4362,7 +4362,7 @@ label chapter_11:
         window hide
         window auto
         pause .5
-        
+
         $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0.1, 'music')
         $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0.1, 'ambient')
         pause .5

game/script/11D.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right-and-she-teases-him-while-carrying-herself-with-more-confidence.rpy

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ label chapter_11D:
     #Announcing a Show | Golden
     #le inconsistant indention has arrived
     #le wrong move indent slut
-    
+
     show fang:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
     show fang happy flip with dissolve
@@ -81,6 +81,7 @@ label chapter_11D:
 
     A "Hey, Fang, you-"
 
+    show fang happy flip with dissolve
     F "We’re going to prom together, right?"
     pause .5
 
@@ -200,14 +201,26 @@ label chapter_11D:
 
     play music "audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg" fadein 2
     scene hallway
+    with Dissolve(1.0)
+#with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+
     show fang happy:
-        yalign 0.0 xalign 1.0
+        xalign -1.2
+        yalign 0.0
+        ease_cubic 3.0 xalign 1.0
     show anon neutral:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.4
-    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
-    
+        xalign -1.4
+        yalign 0.1
+        ease_cubic 3.0 xalign 0.4
+    with dissolve
+#with easeinleft # Fade(1, 0, 1)
+
     "We walk through the hall together, at least until we have to split to our separate classes."
 
+    show fang:
+        xalign 1.0
+    show anon:
+        xalign 0.4
     show anon shrug with Dissolve(.25)
     A "Hey wait, you did the word search bit this time, right?"
 
@@ -230,16 +243,18 @@ label chapter_11D:
     window auto
 
     show anon:
-        easein 1 xalign 0.55
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.55
     show fang:
         easein 1 xalign 1.2
-    with None
-    show spears neutral:
-        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.5
     show spears:
-        easein 1 xalign 0.0
+        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.8
+        xalign -0.8
+        easein 1.5 xalign 0.0
+    with None
+    pause 0.0001
     show anon neutral flip behind fang
     show fang surprised flip
+    show spears neutral
     with dissolve
     pause 1
 
@@ -250,6 +265,8 @@ label chapter_11D:
 
     Sp "Fang, I was planning on asking you during your next class, but since I found you here{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
+    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
+
     Sp "I’m embarrassed to say we’re missing one event slot during prom. Scheduling error."
 
     Sp "And your teacher, Mr Jingo, recommended you for your musical talents."
@@ -280,12 +297,12 @@ label chapter_11D:
     pause .5
 
     show spears:
-        easeout 1.2 xalign -0.9
-    pause .2
+        easeout_cubic 1.2 xalign -0.9
     show spears happy flip with dissolve
+    pause .2
     hide spears with dissolve
     pause .5
-    
+
     show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Shit, now I really need to get a good dress."
 
@@ -346,11 +363,13 @@ label chapter_11D:
     window auto
 
     show fang:
-        easeout_cubic 1.2 xalign 2.0
-    pause .2
+        yalign 0.0
+        xalign 1.2
+        easeout_cubic 1.4 xalign 2.4
     show fang happy with dissolve
+    pause .4
     hide fang with dissolve
-    pause .5
+    pause .25
 
     show anon grin with dissolve
     "I feel my lips spread into a grin. It’s kind of weird to think of it, but I’m actually excited for prom."
@@ -369,4 +388,4 @@ label chapter_11D:
     window auto
     pause .5
 
-    return
+    return

game/script/12D.aquarium.rpy

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 label chapter_12D:
     #Let's all go to the Aquarium
-    scene black with fade
-    pause 3
+    scene black
+    pause 2.5
 
     play music "audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "Every day after school for the next few weeks I would join Fang to help her practice."
@@ -50,36 +50,100 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     "Looking through one of the map kiosks, I try to make a mental plan for the trip."
 
-    show anon neutral at aleft
-    show fang neutral at sright
+    show fang neutral at scenter:
+    show anon neutral at aleft:
+        xalign 0.1
     with dissolve
 
-    A "Uhh… {w=0.2}They got exhibits for the deep sea, the gulf of Mexico, the dopefish, tropical reefs…"
+    A "Uhh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} {w=0.2}They got exhibits for the deep sea, the gulf of Mexico, the dopefish, tropical reefs{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "... Eenie{w=0.15} meanie{w=0.15} mini-"
+    A "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}Eenie{w=0.15} meanie{w=0.15} mini-"
 
     F "Really?"
 
     A "Sea turtles it is."
 
+    show fang:
+        pause .6
+        "fang happy" with dissolve
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.4
+    show anon:
+        easeout_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.225 #0.35
+        pause .1
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.175 #0.725
+
     "I take Fang’s hand and lead her through the lobby into the chamber labeled ‘Sea Turtle Conservatory’."
 
-    scene aquariumexhibit with fade
+    show fang:
+        #"fang happy"
+        xalign 0.4
+        ease_cubic 3.1 xalign 1.65+1.8+0.6
+    show fang happy
+    show anon:
+        xalign 0.175
+        ease_cubic 3.1 xalign 1.85+0.5 #0.725
 
-    F "Anon, are you sure you want to spend the day here? If you wanted to go to the mall or somethin- {cps=*2.0}omigawd.{/cps}"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
+    pause 1.5
+    scene black with dissolve
+    pause .5
+    scene aquariumexhibit with dissolve
+
+
+    show fang happy:
+        xalign -1.8
+        ease_cubic 2.4 xalign 0.625
+        pause .1
+        "fang very happy" with dissolve
+        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.680
+    show anon neutral:
+        xalign -1.8
+        ease_cubic 2.412 xalign 0.225 #0.625
+
+    pause .2
+
+    F "Anon, are you sure you want to spend the day here? {w=.2} If you wanted to go to the mall or somethin- {cps=*2.0}omigawd.{/cps}"
 
     "A little sea turtle swims out of hiding in the tank right in front of us."
 
+    show fang:
+        "fang very happy"
+        "fang adorable" with dissolve
+        block:
+            parallel:
+                easeout_cubic 0.05 yalign -0.04
+                ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
+                ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.0
+            parallel:
+                pause 0.12
+                ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.8
+                ease_cubic 1.2 xalign 1.8
+#pause 0.0001
+    show fang adorable with dissolve
+
     "Immediately Fang breaks free of my arm and presses against the glass."
 
     F "Look at these cute little shits, I love them!"
 
-    show fang adorable at sleft 
-    show anon neutral at aright
-    with dissolve 
+    show fang adorable at sleft:
+        xalign 1.8
+        "fang adorable" with dissolve
+        easeout_cubic 0.1 yalign -0.04
+        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.0
+    show anon:
+        xalign 0.225
 
     A "Yeah, I see them."
 
+    show fang adorable:
+        yalign 0.0
+
+    show anon neutral:
+        ease_cubic 1.95 xalign 0.87
+
     "I peer into the tank and see a few more hatchlings bob out of the decorative grass."
 
     "The hype becomes contagious and I find myself pressed against the glass as well."
@@ -90,6 +154,8 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     A "Come on Fang, there’s more stuff to see."
 
+    show fang sad flip with dissolve
+
     F "{cps=*0.75}Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnno{/cps}."
 
     A "There’s more here than just those baby turtles, you know."
@@ -98,43 +164,60 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     A "You’re just going to stay here all day then?"
 
-    F "Yyyeeeep."
+    F "{cps=*0.75}NYyyeeeep.{/cps}"
+
+    show fang happy with dissolve
 
     A "What’ll you do for lunch?"
 
     F "Bring me something from the cafe."
 
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+
     A "Allright, here I am going off without you."
 
-    A "Oh look, a Dumbo Octopus."
+    show anon:
+        "anon neutral flip"
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.7
+        pause .2
+        "anon grin flip" with dissolve
+
+    A "{w=.5}Oh look, {w=.5} a Dumbo Octopus."
 
     F "{cps=*2.0}Whereisit?{/cps}"
 
+    show fang happy flip with dissolve
+
     "In a snap Fang’s moved from pressing her face against the turtle tank to pressing it against the octopus tank."
 
-    scene aquariumexhibit
-    show fang happy at sleft:
-        yalign 0.0 xcenter 0.4
+    #scene aquariumexhibit
+    #intentional ghost / meteor walk
+    show fang happy flip:
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.1
     with dissolve
-    
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+
     #confirmed that fang has autism
     Attendant "Ma’am, please refrain from-"
 
-    show fang adorable at sleft with dissolve #at sleft
+    show fang adorable flip at sleft with dissolve# at sleft
 
     F "{cps=*1.5}OmigoshAnonlookatit.{/cps}"
 
     F "It’s like a living egg yolk with button eyes."
 
-    A "Is that the first analogy you can think of…?"
-    
+    A "Is that the first analogy you can think of{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}?"
+
     #Fang has the zoomies
     F "And what’s over there? Are those seahorses{cps=*1.5} holy crap I have to take a video of this.{/cps}"
+
     window hide
     window auto
+    hide anon with dissolve
 
+    scene aquariumexhibit
 
-    
+    show fang adorable at sleft with dissolve #at sleft
     #new method
     show fang:
         # yalign 0.0 xcenter 0.4
@@ -149,7 +232,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
                 linear 0.25 xzoom -1.0
             parallel:
                 ease_cubic 0.5 zoom 0.8 ypos 0.1 xpos -0.2
-        pause 1.0  
+        pause 1.0
         ease_cubic 0.5 zoom 0.4 xpos 0.0 ypos 0.3
         pause 1.0
         block:
@@ -165,34 +248,36 @@ label chapter_12D:
     pause 2.0
     "I shrug apologetically at the attendant who has given up entirely."
 
-
     "But watching Fang zoom between the exhibits to gush over each oddly cute sea animal was just too much."
 
     "Subtly my phone finds its way into my jacket pocket, already set to record."
     window hide
     window auto
 
-    show anonphone at scenter with dissolve # moveinbottom
+    #show anonphone at scenter with easeinbottom
+    show anonphone at scenter with easeinbottom #cursed
 
     "She’ll probably kill me if she found out."
     hide fang adorable with dissolve
     "But it’d be a good death."
     pause 0.5
     "Wait, where’d she go?"
+
+    #hide anonphone with dissolve
     window hide
     window auto
+    hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
 
-    hide anonphone with dissolve #moveoutbottom
+    pause .25
+    scene black with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+    scene stingray pool with dissolve
 
-    scene aquarium with fade
-    show fang happy at sleft with dissolve
     "I round the corner to see the next room has a large group of school children hovering over a stingray touch tank."
     "That is, a large group of school children and Fang, towering above the rest."
 
     "She does have the act down though."
 
-    scene stingray pool with dissolve
-
     A "Oh, cool, a stingray pool."
 
     A "You plan on touching one?"
@@ -233,7 +318,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     A "You alright?"
 
-    F "Yeah, no, it’s just… You were right about them being slimy."
+    F "Yeah, no, it’s just{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} You were right about them being slimy."
 
     A "Well, I have yet to hear of a dry fish."
 
@@ -241,11 +326,13 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     "After a few more rounds of rays, Fang decides she’s had enough."
 
+    scene black with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+    scene aquarium
 
-    scene aquarium 
     show anon neutral at aleft
     show fang happy flip at sright
-    with fade
+    with dissolve
     A "See, that wasn’t terrible, right?"
 
     A "Actually, you got all your fingers right?"
@@ -258,17 +345,19 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     show fang neutral flip with dissolve
 
-    F "So uh…"
+    F "So uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
     F "Which exhibit are we checking next?"
 
     "I check the aquarium pamphlet to see where we haven’t been yet."
 
-    A "Well… if we go outside we can see the dolphin pools. That way it loops back through the deep sea exhibits."
+    A "Well... if we go outside we can see the dolphin pools. That way it loops back through the deep sea exhibits."
 
     "With Fang in agreement I lead her towards the exit marked with a large dolphin sign."
     stop music fadeout 3
 
+    scene black with dissolve
+    pause 0.75
     scene aquariumoutside with dissolve
 
     "Upon exiting the building my nose is assaulted by a mix of salty air and the smell of raw fish."
@@ -276,7 +365,6 @@ label chapter_12D:
     "Somehow it’s even fishier than inside the aquarium."
     play music "audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
-
     show fang happy at sleft
     show anon neutral flip at aright
     with dissolve
@@ -291,7 +379,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     F "Would you jump through a hoola hoop for me if I had treats?"
 
-    A "..."
+    A "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "I notice the trainer has traded the hoop for a large brush and is getting one of the dolphins to open its mouth."
 
@@ -301,49 +389,90 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     "She raises an eyebrow for a second and then realizes."
 
+    #god elbow worse than her standing jab? lmao
+    show fang neutral with dissolve
+    show fang:
+        "fang angry" with dissolve
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 1.0
+        parallel:
+            easein_cubic 0.9 xalign 0.3
+        parallel:
+            block:
+                pause 1.1
+                "fang embarass" with dissolve
+                pause 1.4
+                "fang sad" with dissolve
+
+    show anon:
+        pause .62
+        ease_cubic 0.25 xalign 1.02
+        ease_cubic 0.35 xalign 1.0
+
     "An elbow jams into my shoulder and her other hand covers her snout."
 
+    pause .5
+
     A "So that’s how you brush your teeth!"
 
     show fang considering with dissolve
 
-    F "...I don’t need someone to bribe me at least."
+    F "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}I don’t need someone to bribe me at least."
 
     A "Well if you ever need help I’m sure I can get them to lend me one of those brushes."
 
-    show fang neutral with dissolve
+    show fang angry with dissolve
+    show fang:
+        "fang angry" with dissolve
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.0
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.5
+        "fang neutral" with dissolve
+
+    show anon:
+        pause .5
+        "anon ohshit flip" #
+        ease_cubic 0.25 xalign 1.1
+        "anon neutral flip" with dissolve
+        ease_cubic 0.35 xalign 1.0
 
     "And that gets me a jab to the ribs this time."
 
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+
     A "Oh come on, you have to admit they look a bit like you..."
 
     F "Ehh, I don’t see it."
 
     "The dolphin beside her nods in agreement."
 
-    "...Right then…"
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Right then{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    show fang happy at sleft with dissolve
+    show fang happy with dissolve
 
     A "So, how bout we hit the last spot and then go grab our own lunch?"
 
     A "Unless you want to have some tuna with your clone there."
 
+    show fang considering with dissolve
+
     "Fang rolls her eyes at that."
 
     "Her dolphin duplicate did too."
 
     A "You’re fucking with me,{w=0.2} aren’t you."
 
+    show fang neutral with dissolve
+
     F "What’re you talking about?"
 
     "Fang’s aquatic doppelganger makes a laugh-like chirping and finally swims away."
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "So Deep Sea then!"
 
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
+
+    pause .5
 
     "We leave the dolphin pen, following signs back towards the building."
 
@@ -353,7 +482,9 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     "Oh, I didn’t realize they had one of these."
 
-    scene aquariumtube with fade
+    pause .25
+
+    scene aquariumtube with dissolve
 
     "From within the glass walkway we’re surrounded by a myriad of colorful marine life swimming around us."
     show fang surprised at sright
@@ -368,13 +499,23 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     F "Recording what?"
 
+    #show fang  flip with dissolve
     show fang neutral flip with dissolve
 
-    A "The uh…{w=0.3} {cps=*2.0}The shark!{/cps} Yeah, that cool looking shark over there!"
+    A "The uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1} {cps=*2.0}The shark!{/cps} Yeah, that cool looking shark over there!"
+
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
 
     "I point to the shark that’s currently lazing about, casually drifting by the walkway."
 
-    show fang adorable with dissolve
+    show anon:
+        pause .4
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.5
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
+
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 1.1 xalign -0.3
+    show fang adorable flip with dissolve
 
     "Fang turns to gush at the shark, giving me the opportunity to quickly stop my phone and see that my battery is near dead and storage near full."
 
@@ -388,58 +529,83 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     A "Hm?"
 
-    F "The lights…"
+    F "The lights{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Oh! Nah, the room is dark because the things inside aren’t used to light."
 
+    show fang neutral with dissolve
+
     F "O-oh."
 
-    A "Wait…{w=0.2} are you sca-"
+    show anon flip with dissolve
 
-    F "No! I just…{w=0.2} Wasn’t expecting it, is all."
+    A "Wait{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2} are you sca-"
 
-    show anon neutral at aleft:
-        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.5
+    show fang sad with dissolve
+
+    F "No! I just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2} Wasn’t expecting it, is all."
+
+    show anon neutral:
+        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.39
+        ease_cubic 0.65 xalign 0.45
+        "anon face happy" with dissolve
+    show fang:
+#pause 1.2
+        pause 0.95
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign -0.19
+        "fang happy" with dissolve
 
     "I offer her my hand."
-    
 
     "Despite her claim otherwise I can feel how tense she is by how her fingernails dig into my hand."
+
+    show anon:
+        "anon face happy"
+        ease_cubic 1.8 xalign 2.8
+    show fang:
+        "fang happy"
+        ease_cubic 1.8 xalign 3.6
+
+    pause .5
     stop music fadeout 2
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
+
     "I lead her into the darkened room, what little light there is coming from the various animals within."
     play music "audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
 
     "The aquariums within are packed with bioluminescent jellyfish, illuminating the darkened room with an ethereal glow."
-    scene jellyfishroom with fade
+    scene jellyfishroom with dissolve
 
-    F "Whoa. This is…"
+    F "Whoa. This is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Beautiful."
 
-    F "Yeah…{w=0.3} that…"
+    F "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.3} that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "I wasn’t referring to the exhibit."
 
     "Fang’s grip on my hand eases, and her fingers work to intertwine with mine."
 
     "With what little light there is I can make out Fang’s smile."
+
     "My eyes have adjusted enough that I can see Fang’s eyes locked onto mine, the gossamer light making them glow."
+
     "My lips press softly onto Fang’s beak-end in a chaste peck."
 
     F "Eep!"
+
     F "Oi! G-give me a warning next time!"
 
-    A "Mmmm… Naaaah."
+    A "Mmmm{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} Naaaah."
 
     "I laugh even as her hip bumps me roughly."
 
     "Our interlocked fingers prevent her from using her preferred elbow tactic."
 
-    A "So…{w=0.2} had fun?"
+    A "So{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.05} had fun?"
 
-    F "Mmmm… {w=0.2}Maaaaybe…"
+    F "Mmmm{cps=*0.12}...{/cps}{w=0.05}Maaaaybe{cps=*0.12}...{/cps}"
 
     F "I’ll say yes if you delete that recording."
 
@@ -451,6 +617,8 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     "She glowers."
 
+    pause .5
+
     A "Feel rested?"
 
     F "A bit. I’ll feel even more rested after some lunch though."
@@ -458,9 +626,9 @@ label chapter_12D:
     A "Sounds like a plan."
     window hide
     window auto
-    pause .5
+    pause .25
 
-    scene aquariumoutside with dissolve
+    scene aquariumoutside with Dissolve(1.25)
     pause .5
     "The rest of our rest day was spent just relaxing on the pier."
 
@@ -471,7 +639,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
     "And a very relaxed girlfriend."
 
     "Overall,{w=0.2} mission successful."
-    
+
     pause 0.5
     "Except the sunburn."
 
@@ -479,9 +647,9 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     stop music fadeout 3.0
     scene black with Dissolve(1.5)
-    pause .5
+    #pause .5
 
-    "..."
+    #"{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 1

game/script/13A.fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen.rpy

@@ -60,10 +60,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     N "Oh, Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    N "That’s an{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{nw}" 
-    show naomi prom considering
-    extend "Interesting outfit you’re wearing."
-    show naomi prom unimpressed with dissolve
+    N "That’s an{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Interesting outfit you’re wearing."
 
     "Naomi side-eyes me a dagger."
 
@@ -132,14 +129,14 @@ label chapter_13A:
     window auto
     pause .5
 
-    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+
     scene kitchen
     show dimmer_lighter
     show anon prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
     show naomi prom angry:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 0.0
-    with Dissolve(1)
+    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
     pause 1
 
     "She gives me a death stare for what seems like a solid minute before she begins yelling at me."
@@ -188,7 +185,6 @@ label chapter_13A:
     show anon:
         pause .75
         easein_back 1 xalign 0.65
-    show naomi prom unimpressed with dissolve
     "Naomi sighs and walks away, shoving into my shoulder on the way out, completely disregarding my presence."
 
     show anon prom neutral with dissolve
@@ -250,7 +246,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     "Naomi’s leaned against a wall next to the entry to that hall."
 
-    show naomi prom unimpressed flip with dissolve
+    show naomi prom angry flip with dissolve
     "She turns to me, with an expression of very intently restrained rage on her face."
 
     "Did I really do this, Naomi?"
@@ -263,8 +259,6 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     show fang a prom considering with dissolve
     "Fang looked ready to set her house on fire until she caught me in the corner of her eye."
-    window hide
-    window auto
     pause .5
 
     stop music fadeout 4
@@ -280,7 +274,6 @@ label chapter_13A:
     pause .2
     hide anon
     hide fang
-    show naomi prom considering flip
     with dissolve
 
     "Without a word she grabbed me by the wrist and dragged me through the front door, guitar in her other hand."
@@ -289,13 +282,12 @@ label chapter_13A:
     pause .5
 
     play ambient 'audio/effects/nightLoop.ogg' fadein 3
-    scene black with Dissolve(1)
     scene home fang outside night
     show fang a prom considering:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 0.8
     show anon prom neutral:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.3
-    with Dissolve(1)
+    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
     pause .5
 
     F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}’mme call a taxi or something."
@@ -312,8 +304,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     pause .5
 
     stop ambient fadeout 4
-    scene black with Dissolve(1)
-    scene taxi night with Dissolve(1)
+    scene taxi night with Fade(1, 0, 1)
     pause .5
 
     D "Ay, it’s my favorite couple again! How’s the leg, skinnie?"
@@ -375,14 +366,12 @@ label chapter_13A:
     pause .5
 
     play ambient 'audio/effects/nightLoop.ogg' fadein 3
-    play ambient1 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdMurmurLoop.ogg' fadein 3
-    scene black with Dissolve(1)
     scene outside school night
     show fang a prom neutral:
         yalign 0.0 xalign -0.1
     show anon prom neutral:
         yalign 0.1 xalign -0.25
-    with Dissolve(1)
+    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
     pause .5
 
     "Eventually the cab pulls up to the school gymnasium, illuminated by the celebratory decorative string lights."
@@ -411,7 +400,6 @@ label chapter_13A:
     pause .5
 
     stop ambient fadeout 4
-    stop ambient1 fadeout 4
     play music 'audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg' fadein 1.0
 
     show fang:
@@ -464,8 +452,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     hide anon with dissolve
     pause .5
 
-    scene black with Dissolve(1)
-    scene prom with Dissolve(1)
+    scene prom with Fade(1, 0, 1)
     "The two of us go up to the entrance, the room filled with seniors, strobe lights and a very suspicious smelling fog."
 
     show reed sunglasses flip:
@@ -514,8 +501,6 @@ label chapter_13A:
     window auto
     pause .5
 
-    scene black with Dissolve(1)
-    pause 0.5
     scene bandroom
     show fang a prom neutral:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 0.9
@@ -525,24 +510,15 @@ label chapter_13A:
         yalign 0.1 xalign -0.6
     show trish prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 1.2
-    with Dissolve(1)
+    with fade
     "We hauled ass to Mr.Jingo’s room, where the band had stored their gear."
 
     "Reed’s drumset was in pieces and I helped him reassemble it while Trish and Fang tuned their guitars."
-    window hide
-    window auto
     pause .5
 
     stop music
     play sound 'audio/effects/stringsnap.ogg' # CC0
-    show fang:
-        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.88
-    show fang a prom shock
-    show trish prom surprised flip
-
-    pause 1
-
-    #"{i}*TWANG*{/i}"
+    "{i}*TWANG*{/i}"
 
     show fang:
         easein_back 0.5 xalign 1.0
@@ -632,15 +608,13 @@ label chapter_13A:
     "I didn’t even want to be here in the first place, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "But I’m following Moe’s advice and supporting Fang, right?"
-    window hide
-    window auto
     pause .5
 
     play music "audio/effects/promChatterLoop2.ogg" fadein 3
     scene prom
     show anon prom neutral:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.3
-    with Dissolve(2)
+    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
 
     "The music slams into me as I reenter the room, grating on my ears and thrumming roughly in my chest."
 
@@ -816,9 +790,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     Sp "{cps=*.3}Naaaaaser aaaaand Naaaaoooomiiiiii!{/cps}"
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/crowdCheerLoop.ogg' fadein 1
-    play ambient1 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg' fadein 2
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.4, 0, 'ambient1')
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg' fadein 1
     "He tosses the paper over his shoulder and yanks out the crowns from a pocket inside his jacket."
     window hide
     window auto
@@ -850,9 +822,6 @@ label chapter_13A:
     "Spears offers the crowns to Naomi, who puts the larger one on Naser’s crest to droop off, and then dons the tiara{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "The whole moment is picturesque, just like Naomi wanted."
-
-    stop ambient fadeout 4
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 4, 'ambient1')
     pause .5
 
     show naomi prom happy flip with dissolve
@@ -870,7 +839,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     window hide
     window auto
 
-    show naomi prom unimpressed flip with dissolve
+    show naomi prom neutral flip with dissolve
     pause .5
 
     show naomi:
@@ -924,7 +893,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     "And then Fang comes on with her bass as well."
 
     pause .5
-    stop ambient1 fadeout 3
+    stop ambient fadeout 3
     play music 'audio/OST/you can_t sage here.ogg' fadein 1.0
     pause .5
 
@@ -995,6 +964,11 @@ label chapter_13A:
     scene prom fang freak out a ending with Dissolve(1)
 
     "Fang stays a moment longer, the despair on her face manifesting through hot streams of tears."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 1
+
+    scene prom with fade
     pause .5
 
     "She turns to leave as well, trying to maintain a calm composure."
@@ -1003,12 +977,6 @@ label chapter_13A:
     pause .5
 
     "It splashes against her head, drenching her suit in red dye and making her smash onto the floor."
-    window hide
-    window auto
-    pause 1
-
-    scene prom with Dissolve(1)
-    pause .5
 
     "A few more food articles follow while Fang scrambles to get up."
 
@@ -1100,7 +1068,6 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     show trish:
         easein_quart 1.5 xalign 0.65
-    show trish prom surprised flip with dissolve
     T "I, whu-"
 
     A "I don’t care, I need to find Fang. Now."

game/script/14A.KO_OP-ending.rpy

@@ -1,3 +1,4 @@
+image fangfog = im.Blur(im.MatrixColor("fang/emotive set/fang anguish.png",im.matrix.brightness(-1)), 1.5)
 image red = "#ff0000"
 
 label chapter_14A:
@@ -722,7 +723,11 @@ label chapter_14A:
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient')
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0, 'ambient1') #policeSirenReverbLoop
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient3')
-    scene roofshooter
+    scene roof fog
+    show fangfog:
+        yanchor 0.5 xanchor 0.5
+        ypos 0.6 xpos 0.5
+        alpha 0.25 zoom 0.25
 
     play ambient "audio/effects/windShooterLoop.ogg" fadein 5 volume 0.7
     play ambient3 "audio/effects/radioChatterLoop.ogg" fadein 5 volume 0.3
@@ -812,7 +817,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     hide red
     with Dissolve(0.4)
     hide fang flash blurred with Dissolve(2)
-    pause 3
+    pause 2
 
     A "{i}ARGH!{/i}"
     pause .5
@@ -823,19 +828,18 @@ label chapter_14A:
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient3')
 
     "Hot, searing pain."
-    pause .5
+
     "My left leg crumples under me."
     pause 1
 
     "As I fall I see Fang’s beautiful amber eyes."
-    pause .5
 
     "They’re red and puffy, with makeup-less tears running freely down her cheeks."
-    stop sound fadeout 4
+    stop sound fadeout 5
 
     window hide
     window auto
-    pause 1.5
+    pause 1
 
     play audio 'audio/effects/shooterWitnessed.ogg' volume 0.6
     play ambient1 'audio/effects/hungrybeast.ogg' volume 0.05 fadein 2
@@ -1171,11 +1175,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     pause 2
 
     scene black with Dissolve(1)
-    pause 1
-    A "{i}Fang!{/i}"
-    window hide
-    window auto
-    pause 1
+    pause .5
 
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3, 'ambient1')
     scene shooterroof:
@@ -1183,24 +1183,19 @@ label chapter_14A:
         #xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.5 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
         #zoom 1.12
     with Dissolve(3)
-
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/windShooterLoop.ogg' volume 0.2 fadein 2
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 1.5, 'ambient1')
-    pause 0.5
-
-    #"She jumps."
-    #pause .5
-
-    play sound 'audio/effects/shooterFangJumps.ogg' volume 0.7
-
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0.6, 'ambient1')
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0.6, 'ambient')
-    pause 6
-
-    stop ambient
     stop ambient1
+    pause 1
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient1')
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient')
+
+    "She jumps."
+    pause .5
+
+    A "{i}Fang!{/i}"
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    play sound 'audio/effects/shooterFangJumps.ogg' volume 0.7
+    pause 6
 
     "I can’t look over."
     pause .5
@@ -1310,23 +1305,15 @@ label chapter_14A:
     stop ambient fadeout 5
     play ambient1 "audio/effects/drizzleLoop.ogg" fadein 3
     play ambient2 "audio/effects/windLightLoop.ogg" fadein 3
-
-    scene black with Dissolve(2)
-    pause 0.5
-    scene a15 with Dissolve(2)
+    scene a15 with Fade(2, .5, 2)
     pause 2
 
     "The alternations of footsteps and the crutch make me feel more mechanical than human."
-    pause 0.5
 
     "Then again, that may be true regardless of having a crutch."
+
     window hide
     window auto
-    pause 0.5
-
-    play ambient "audio/effects/windShooterLoop.ogg" fadein 5
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.3, 4, 'ambient')
-    scene a14 with Dissolve(2)
     pause 2
 
     "The two graves are right next to each other."
@@ -1389,14 +1376,14 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     stop ambient1 fadeout 10
     stop ambient2 fadeout 20
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 20, 'ambient')
+    play ambient "audio/effects/windShooterLoop.ogg" fadein 20
 
     "{i}{cps=*.3}Don’t leave me alone.{/cps}{/i}"
     pause 1
 
     "I just feel completely and utterly and hopelessly alone."
 
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 6, 'ambient1')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3, 'ambient1')
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 3
@@ -1425,8 +1412,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     $ quick_menu = False
     window hide
 
-    stop ambient fadeout 25
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 25, 'ambient')
+    stop ambient fadeout 20
 
     pause 7
 
@@ -1441,5 +1427,4 @@ label chapter_14A:
     scene black with Dissolve(17.0)
     pause 5
 
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient')
     return

game/script/14D.gold-ending.rpy

@@ -84,9 +84,9 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Hey Reed, what’s happening?"
 
-    A "You seem to certainly have uh…{w=0.2} changed."
+    A "You seem to certainly have uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} changed."
 
-    A "Why do you look like uh…{w=0.2} I don’t want to sound rude or anything, but…"
+    A "Why do you look like uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I don’t want to sound rude or anything, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "You look homeless, Reed."
 
@@ -98,22 +98,22 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     Re "What’d you say, man?"
 
-    A "What?{w=0.2} Nothing. No idea what you’re talking about."
+    A "What?{w=0.2} Nothing.{w=0.1} No idea what you’re talking about."
 
     A "So, how did you get to become the 'richest raptor in the world'?"
 
     Re "You wouldn’t believe it, man!"
 
-    Re "See, it all started with…"
+    Re "See, it all started with{cps=*.12}...{/cps}"
 
     "Reed proceeds to run his mouth off about a bunch of gibberish."
 
     "I cannot understand anything he's saying."
 
     "I think I heard ‘pharmaceutical business’ at one point?"
-    pause 0.3
+    pause 0.2
 
-    Re "...and then I was brought here by the birds, dude."
+    Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}and then I was brought here by the birds, dude."
 
     Re "So what’ve you been up to, man?"
 
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "It’s not as exciting as your story, honestly."
 
-    A "I just went off to college, got my bachelor’s, and now I’m just a sound engineer."
+    A "I just went off to college,{w=.1} got my bachelor’s,{w=.1} and now I’m just a sound engineer."
 
     Re "Sounds pretty sweet, dude."
     show reed future neutral flip with dissolve
@@ -136,7 +136,8 @@ label chapter_14D:
     A "Definitely,{w=0.2} I need some air conditioning."
 
     "We quickly moved along to the gymnasium."
-    scene reunion with fade
+    pause .2
+    scene reunion with dissolve
     A "Man, it really hasn’t changed. Takes me back."
     show anond neutral at aleft
     show reed future explanatory flip at rright:
@@ -150,8 +151,14 @@ label chapter_14D:
     A "No, didn’t know I had to."
 
     "Reed gestures to the sign-in table."
-    scene reunion with fade
-    show anond neutral at aleft with easeinleft
+
+    scene black with dissolve
+    scene reunion with dissolve
+
+    show anond neutral:
+        yalign 0.1
+        xalign -1.20
+        ease_cubic 2.1 xalign 0.3
     "The clerk is crouched behind the table sorting through a box."
 
     "I go over to write in my John Hancock and the person behind the counter stands up."
@@ -159,11 +166,19 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "My nose is assaulted by the pheronomes of perfumes that probably cost more than a years' salary."
 
     show naomi future at sright with dissolve
+    show naomi:
+        pause .1
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.12
+        ease_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.0
+
     N "Oh!"
 
-    N "Anon, you made it!"
+    show naomi:
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.85
 
-    A "Yeah, I did."
+    N "Anon,{w=.1} you made it!"
+
+    A "Yeah,{w=.1} I did."
 
     A "Life been treating you well?"
 
@@ -173,7 +188,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Real shame about his last presidential run."
 
-    N "Oh, he got over it."
+    N "Oh,{w=.1} he got over it."
 
     N "There’s always 2028!"
 
@@ -187,7 +202,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     N "No, I lost touch with him about three years ago."
 
-    A "Oh, sorry. How about work, then?"
+    A "Oh, sorry.{w=.2} How about work, then?"
 
     N "I haven’t been working, mostly staying back at home and looking after the kids."
 
@@ -205,19 +220,31 @@ label chapter_14D:
     stop music fadeout 3
     play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdInteriorLoop.ogg' fadein 3
 
+    scene black with Dissolve(0.5)
+    pause 1.0
     scene reunion
-    show anond neutral at aleft
-    show reed future neutral flip at rcenter
-    with fade
+    show reed future neutral:
+        xalign 0.0
+        yalign 0.1
+    show anond neutral:
+        yalign 0.1
+        xalign -0.3
+    with dissolve
     "I go rejoin Reed and we enter the gymnasium together."
 
     "The setup is rather similar to that prom night all those years ago, albeit without the foreign decor."
 
     "Young men and women mingle with small drinks and party foods across the floor."
 
-    Re "Man, those look good. Come over here, I’ll get you a drink, on me."
+    Re "Man, those look good.{w=.15} Come over here, I’ll get you a drink, on me."
 
-    "I follow him over to the minibar. Trish is sitting in one of the seats, huddled over an empty glass."
+    show anond:
+        pause .15
+        ease_cubic 0.90 xalign 0.05
+    show reed:
+        ease_cubic 0.85 xalign 0.25
+
+    "I follow him over to the minibar.{w=.15} Trish is sitting in one of the seats, huddled over an empty glass."
 
     window hide
     window auto
@@ -225,13 +252,14 @@ label chapter_14D:
     stop ambient fadeout 1
     play music "audio/OST/Ramo de Rosas.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
-    show rosa future flip at sright behind reed with easeinright:
-        xalign 0.75
+    show rosa future flip at sright behind reed:
+        xalign 2.3
+        easein_cubic 2.0 xalign 1.25
     pause .5
 
     "Rosa is pouring drinks for the few other drunkards when she spots us approach."
 
-    Ro "Oh! An-on, it is great to see you after all this time!"
+    Ro "Oh!{w=0.2} An-on, it is great to see you after all this time!"
 
     Ro "Please, sit and talk awhile!"
 
@@ -239,19 +267,21 @@ label chapter_14D:
     window hide
     window auto
 
-    show reed future at rright:
-        xalign 1.5
+    show anond:
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign -0.1
+    show reed:
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.15
     show rosa future flip at sright:
-        xalign 1.0
-    with ease
-    show trish future neutral flip at tcenter with dissolve
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 1.35
+    show trish future neutral flip at tcenter with dissolve:
+        xalign 0.75
     pause .5
 
     "She looks up from her sulking and her face lights up at the sight of us."
 
-    T "Anon! It’s been years!"
+    T "Anon!{w=0.3} It’s been years!"
 
-    A "Trish, Rosa, glad we found you here!"
+    A "Trish, Rosa,{w=0.2} glad we found you here!"
 
     Re "Come on man, we’ve been texting this whole time."
 
@@ -275,7 +305,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "Rosa instinctively rubs her own horn."
 
-    A "H-hollow?"
+    A "H-{w=0.2}hollow?"
 
     T "Of course, I even got in contact with a sculptor and figured out how to make them whistle in the wind!"
 
@@ -295,7 +325,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     T "It’s not even that bloody, I only hire the best."
 
-    A "B-bloody?"
+    A "B-{w=0.2}bloody?"
 
     T "What, never had a piercing before? Same thing."
 
@@ -309,12 +339,25 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "I look up to see the one person I’m most anxious and excited to talk with again approaching."
 
     play music "audio/OST/That Monochromatic Weirdo.ogg" fadein 1.0
-    show anond neutral flip with ease:
-        xalign 0.1
     A "Fang! You’re here!"
-    show fang d shock with easeinleft:
-     xalign -0.7
-    F "Wha- {w=0.2}I- {w=0.2}dammit Anon, I told you to stop calling me that!"
+    show fang d shock:
+        xalign -2.2
+        easein_cubic 0.89 xalign -0.65
+    show anond:
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.15
+    show reed:
+        ease_cubic 0.75 xalign 0.725
+    show rosa:
+        ease_cubic 0.65 xalign 1.45
+    show trish:
+        ease_cubic 0.7 xalign 0.875
+    with None
+
+    pause 0.0001
+    show reed future neutral flip with dissolve
+    show anond neutral flip with dissolve
+
+    F "Wha-{w=0.2} I-{w=0.2} dammit Anon,{w=0.2} I told you to stop calling me that!"
 
     Re "Isn’t that the name Lucy used back in senior year?"
 
@@ -332,7 +375,8 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     play music "audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
-    scene d03 with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
+    scene d03 with dissolve
 
     Re "C’mon, get over here. I’ll order us all another watchamacallit of drinks. It’s on me, the richest raptor in the {cps=*0.3}woooorld{/cps}!"
 
@@ -354,7 +398,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "I feel like we’re missing someone."
 
-    A "Where’s Spears? I could have sworn he would be here."
+    A "Where’s Spears?{w=.1} I could have sworn he would be here."
 
     Re "Nah man, he’s gone. I saw him on TV the other day, though."
 
@@ -364,7 +408,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     Re "He’s built a reputation for his gimmick of wrecking a car every ad he does."
 
-    A "I…{w=0.3} I see."
+    A "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I see."
 
     "Oh god I thought that was a joke about slamming people into cars."
 
@@ -375,8 +419,10 @@ label chapter_14D:
     show anond neutral at aleft
     show reed future neutral flip at rcenter:
         xalign 0.6
-    show trish future neutral flip at tcenter:
-        xalign 0.8
+    show trish future neutral at tcenter:
+        xalign 0.75
+    show rosa future flip at sright behind reed:
+        xalign 1.3
     with dissolve
     "She goes up onstage and tests the microphone, getting everyone’s attention."
 
@@ -390,29 +436,25 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "She puts the mic back on its stand and jumps offstage."
 
-    show fang d happy with easeinleft:
-     xalign -0.7
-
     "Reed pats my shoulder."
 
     Re "You got a ride home, man?"
 
     A "I can walk, but thanks."
 
-    show fang d happy flip with dissolve:
-     xalign -0.7
-    # pause 0.2
-    hide fang d happy flip with easeoutleft
+    show fang d happy:
+        xalign -2.2
+        easein_cubic 1.11 xalign -0.65
     "Lucy returns to the minibar, where Rosa is waiting with the last of the alcohol."
 
     T "There it is."
-    show rosa future flip at sright with easeinright:
-        xalign 1.3
-    show fang d happy with easeinleft:
-     xalign -0.7
+
+    show trish future neutral flip with dissolve
 
     Re "Alright, great seeing you guys. I’ll bounce."
 
+    show trish future smug flip with dissolve
+
     T "We should all meet again for lunch sometime!"
 
     A "Yeah, absolutely. It’s been forever since I’ve been in town, would love to get a tour of what’s new."
@@ -431,7 +473,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     T "See you guys."
     hide trish with dissolve
-    Ro "Come visit me too, An-on. Stella and I would love to have you."
+    Ro "Come visit me too, An-on.{w=.1} Stella and I would love to have you."
 
     hide rosa with dissolve
 
@@ -445,10 +487,14 @@ label chapter_14D:
     N "Oh, don’t worry about it! It was nice getting to act like a class representative again."
 
     show naomi future flip at sright with dissolve
-    hide naomi future with easeoutright
+    show naomi:
+        easeout_cubic 1.0 xalign 2.75
+
     "The Plastic Persimmon waves and lets the door swing closed with an echoing *clang*."
 
-    A "Sooo… {w=0.3}Just the two of us…"
+    hide naomi
+
+    A "Sooo{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {w=0.1}Just the two of us{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     F "Damn you Anon and damn you Bill Withers."
 
@@ -458,7 +504,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "Lucy holds up a plastic bag that *clink*s with each shake."
 
-    F "I was gonna offer you the last of these… {w=0.3}Buuuut…"
+    F "I was gonna offer you the last of these{cps=*.12}...{/cps} Buuuut{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Hey now, let’s not let those go to waste."
 
@@ -466,11 +512,11 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Rooftop?"
 
-    F "Rooftop. {w=0.3}Now."
+    F "Rooftop.{w=0.3} Now."
 
     "She leads the way through the darkened school hallways and stairwell."
 
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
 
     "I can picture all the old posters from my time here along the walls."
 
@@ -478,9 +524,10 @@ label chapter_14D:
     stop music fadeout 3.0
     play ambient 'audio/effects/nightLoop.ogg' fadein 3
     label kino:
-    scene roof night with fade
+    scene roof night with dissolve
     show fang d neutral at sleft
-    show anond neutral flip at sright
+    show anond neutral flip at sright:
+        xalign 0.8
     "The door is booted open and the night air has finally cooled down to something breathable now."
 
     "I turn to the ladder on the side of the stair enclosure and climb up."
@@ -492,11 +539,11 @@ label chapter_14D:
     play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "And with the stars above and no moon I would say the view is picturesque."
 
-    F "Oi, you gonna hog the drinks?"
+    F "Oi,{w=.1} you gonna hog the drinks?"
 
     "I take out a pair of bottles, using one to pop the cap off the other."
 
-    F "Show-off. They’re twist-offs, ya know."
+    F "Show-off.{w=.2} They’re twist-offs, ya know."
 
     "To prove her point she takes the capped one and simply twists it’s top off."
 
@@ -504,7 +551,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     show fang d happy with dissolve
 
-    F "Pfffft. Anyways."
+    F "Pfffft.{w=0.2} Anyways."
 
     A "A toast!"
 
@@ -518,7 +565,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Oh?"
 
-    "I’m already handing her a second bottle, knowing that she’ll finish her first with her next chug."
+    "I’m already handing her a second bottle,{w=.1} knowing that she’ll finish her first with her next chug."
 
     A "I guess you’ve been busy."
 
@@ -526,7 +573,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     F "Dealing with teens is a fuckin’ nightmare."
 
-    F "There’s this one brat, Kenny. The little shit has broken two trumpets already."
+    F "There’s this one brat, Kenny.{w=.15} The little shit has broken two trumpets already."
 
     A "Can’t be that bad."
 
@@ -534,7 +581,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "Lucy’s rant went on for what felt like an hour."
 
-    "Though judging by the pile of beer bottles, it couldn’t have been more than twenty minutes."
+    "Though judging by the pile of beer bottles,{w=.1} it couldn’t have been more than twenty minutes."
 
     F "-at the fucking dance of all places."
 
@@ -548,13 +595,23 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     F "Bullshit."
 
-    A "For real! You were just as bad!"
+    A "For real!{w=.1} You were just as bad!"
 
+    #still -ob
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.55
+        ease_cubic 0.7 xalign 0.0
+    pause .3
+    show anond:
+        pause .02
+        ease_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.82
+        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.8
     "Lucy’s elbow finds it’s familiar spot in my side."
 
+
     F "Nuh uh."
 
-    A "Yeah huh.{w=0.4} Faaaaang."
+    A "Yeah huh.{w=0.2} {cps=*.5}Faaaaang.{/cps}"
 
     "She groans and hides her face in her knees."
 
@@ -562,20 +619,20 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Trish."
 
-    F "Mrrrr… {w=0.3}Okay, so maybe we were that bad."
+    F "Mrrrr{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1} Okay, so maybe we were that bad."
 
     A "That’s life for ya."
 
     "She sighs and relaxes. Her legs stretch forward and she leans back on her arms."
 
-    F "Yeah…"
+    F "Yeah{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
-    F "That’s life…"
+    F "That’s life{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     "I mimic her pose and find myself staring at the small dots spreading across the night sky."
     stop music fadeout 5.0
 
-    A "Teacher at your alma mater. Wasn’t really expecting that, ya know."
+    A "Teacher at your alma mater.{w=.25} Wasn’t really expecting that, ya know."
 
     F "And you as a sound engineer?{w=0.3} Pffft, I figured you’d be making a sexbot or something."
 
@@ -585,23 +642,23 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     play music "audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance - Demo.ogg" fadein 1.0
     stop ambient fadeout 5
-    A "Hey, Lucy…"
+    A "Hey, Lucy{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "I keep my eyes on the stars, even when Lucy turns to look at me."
 
     "I can feel heat creep across my face."
 
-    A "I got a contract with a studio here. I’m thinking…"
+    A "I got a contract with a studio here. I’m thinking{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Since I’ll be here for a good while, how about we get some dinner sometime."
 
-    A "Y’know…{w=0.3} together…"
+    A "Y’know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1} together{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     "I look at Lucy at last."
 
     "Her face is turned back to the sky, but there’s a dusting of pink across her cheeks."
 
-    F "I would…{w=0.3} I totally would, Anon…"
+    F "I would{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1} I totally would, Anon{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     F "But I’ve got work like you wouldn’t believe."
     show fang d neutral with dissolve
@@ -635,7 +692,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
     A "I know."
     #play music
     play music 'audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance - Live.ogg' fadein 1.0
-    scene d04b with fade
+    scene d04b with dissolve
 
     "That didn’t stop Lucy from shuffling closer until our legs were pressed together."
 
@@ -651,7 +708,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     F "Thanks, now my face is forever stuck in a cringe, Anon."
 
-    A "...Way to ruin the moment Fang."
+    A "{cps=*.2}...{/cps}Way to ruin the moment Fang."
 
     F "You ruined it first with your mumbling."
 
@@ -660,7 +717,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
     F "You ruined it, you fix it."
 
     A "Fine I will."
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
     "My hand cups her cheek gently."
 
     "Lucy smiles and leans in."
@@ -668,11 +725,15 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "Ah, I missed this feeling."
 
     "Our lips meld together as we embrace just like we were teens again."
+
     $ quick_menu = False
+    scene black with fade
+    pause .5
+
     window hide
-    scene e4of4 with fade
+    scene e4of4 with Dissolve(1.0)
     stop music fadeout 15.0
     pause 16
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with Dissolve(1.0)
     pause 1
     return

game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy

@@ -110,9 +110,11 @@ label chapter_4:
     Nas "Naomi, please stop memorizing the schedules of the new students."
 
     show naomi considering with Dissolve(.25)
-    N "Sorry, it's necessary for record keeping."
+    N "Sorry, but I did help Anon pick his electives."
     pause .5
 
+    "Why did I ever agree to padding out my credits with a new subject, I should have taken pre-ancient history or some shit."
+
     "Naomi places a finger on her chin{w=.15}(?){w=.15} for a moment and stares into space."
 
     "Suddenly, her face lights up."
@@ -358,7 +360,7 @@ label chapter_4:
     pause 0.5
     show vvurm_drama_poster at acenter:
         yalign 0.2
-    with wipeup 
+    with wipeup
     pause 1.0
     T "This! Tada!{w=.4} Our first poster!"
 

game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy

@@ -2083,6 +2083,10 @@ label chapter_5:
 
     Sp "Thank you all again for showing up today."
 
+    Sp "You can thank Naomi that you got off with campus beautification."
+
+    Sp "She was quite adamant that it would be more constructive than multiple detention."
+
     Sp "I hope that through your hard work all of you learned a valuable lesson."
 
     "I catch Fang rolling her eyes from the corner of my vision."

game/script/x3-PTA-meeting.rpy

@@ -65,8 +65,8 @@ label chapter_x3:
         ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.8
 
     show farnsworth:
-        easein_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.1
-        easeout_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.0
+        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
+        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.0
     Drf "Huhwha. Oh! Why are you in my attic?"
 
     window hide
@@ -74,8 +74,7 @@ label chapter_x3:
 
     show farnsworth:
         ease_cubic 2.25 xalign 0.625
-        easeout_cubic 1.2 xalign 0.4
-        easein_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.35
+        easeout_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.35
 
     pause 2.95
     show spears:
@@ -102,8 +101,8 @@ label chapter_x3:
     show farnsworth behind fangmom with dissolve
 
     show jingo flip:
-        easein_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
-        easeout_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.0
+        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
+        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.0
     jingo "Yes I am the music head."
 
     show fangmom:
@@ -111,6 +110,8 @@ label chapter_x3:
     pause .5
 
     FM "And I am the parent ambassador."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     show fangmom:
         ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.3
@@ -118,6 +119,8 @@ label chapter_x3:
     pause 0.3
     show fangmom neutral flip with dissolve
 
+    pause .5
+
     Sp "Now, onto the subject of this meeting."
 
     show spears:
@@ -165,8 +168,11 @@ label chapter_x3:
     unknown "YOU HAVE NO PROOF THAT MY EUGENE WAS INVOLVED!"
     show carldelewski with dissolve
 
-    Sp "If we could foc-{w=.5}{nw}"
+    Sp "If we could foc-"
 
+    show fangmom:
+        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.2
+        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
     FM "Now now. I think we really should address the parents’ concerns, sir."
 
     unknown "YEAH! Like who let an {i}APE{/i} be around my precious Megan!"
@@ -267,10 +273,8 @@ label chapter_x3:
 
     pause 1
 
-    #Who the hell decided that jin shouldn't have a consistent naming scheme
     show jinflip behind spears at scenter:
         xalign 0.5
-    hide jin
     with dissolve
     pause 0.5
 
@@ -286,14 +290,14 @@ label chapter_x3:
     pause 0.5
 
     show carldelewski:
-        easein_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.1
-        easeout_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.0
+        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
+        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.0
         ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.8
     carl "I KNEWS YOU WERE FAKIN’ IT!"
 
 
     show jinflip:
-        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.3
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.3
     Tsuki "Aye habbu no curue watto yo meano."
     window hide
     window auto

game/script/x7-naomi-tribulations.rpy

@@ -1020,7 +1020,7 @@ label chapter_x7:
     pause 0.75
     show trish:
         ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
-    show trish sad notears with Dissolve(.25)
+    show trish sad with Dissolve(.25)
     pause .25
 
     "Oh no, not the sad eyes."
@@ -1936,6 +1936,8 @@ label chapter_x7:
     play audio 'audio/effects/crowdCheer.ogg' volume 0.5
     pause 1
 
+    show stella sad:
+        xalign -0.2
     show chadshark:
         easein_cubic 1 yalign 0.0 xalign -0.4
     show naser behind chadshark:
@@ -1948,8 +1950,6 @@ label chapter_x7:
             easeout_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.0
             repeat
     pause 0.0001
-    show stella sad:
-        xalign -0.2
     hide stella_hack
     show naser brooding flip
     show naomi happy flip
@@ -2087,6 +2087,6 @@ label chapter_x7:
     stop ambient fadeout 3.0
     stop music fadeout 3.0
     scene black with Dissolve(2)
-    pause 2
+    pause 1
 
     return

game/storyline.rpy

@@ -73,11 +73,11 @@ label .ending:
     play music "audio/OST/Dino Destiny Reader.ogg"
     call get_ending
     if _return == 4:
-        scene d_credits at Pan((0, 0),(0, 9850), 65) with fade
+        scene d_credits at Pan((0, -500),(0, 9850), 65) with fade
     elif _return == 3:
-        scene c_credits at Pan((0, 0),(0, 9850), 65) with fade
+        scene c_credits at Pan((0, -500),(0, 9850), 65) with fade
     else:
-        scene b_credits at Pan((0, 0),(0, 9850), 65) with fade
+        scene b_credits at Pan((0, -500),(0, 9850), 65) with fade
     pause
     stop music fadeout 5
     scene black with Dissolve(3)