From 5bb892394bbfdc7e1f1ae356e9c339ab47a3e36a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: nutbuster Date: Sun, 17 Oct 2021 10:03:11 +1100 Subject: [PATCH 1/3] 13C revision --- ...13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy | 71 ++++--------------- 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 56 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy b/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy index 27539d2..5feb8e9 100644 --- a/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy +++ b/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy @@ -2301,50 +2301,23 @@ label chapter_13C: show fang sad with dissolve "Lucy stirs like she just got stabbed in the heart." - Lucy "Fuck... that hurts like hell." + #I hate google docs, this is “” a mistake + Lucy "Fuck... that hurts like hell..." - Lucy "I’m the one who’s supposed to barge in and break us up!" - show anon neutral flip - show fang very sad - with dissolve - Lucy "...I've done it so many times..." + Lucy "It's... I...." - Lucy "But..." + Lucy "Damn it, Anon..." - Lucy "The fucking allosaurus dickwad I had my first time with wasn't half as special as you." - - Lucy "And I didn't just date boys, you know." - - Lucy "I didn't limit my options, and I still think there was more to you!" - - show anon neutral flip with dissolve - A "As in...?" - - show fang unimpressed with dissolve - Lucy "You know I'm bi, right?" - - A "..." - - A "Like...?" - - Lucy "Well, not really." - - Lucy "Or rather, I don't know why I did it anymore..." - - A "Lucy..." + Lucy "..." show fang angry with dissolve "Lucy grits her teeth in anger." - Lucy "It wasn't serious, okay!" + Lucy "I'm sorry, about all my bullshit!" - Lucy "Those people had problems that needed addressing." + Lucy "Please! T-that’s… that’s not me anymore…" - Lucy "That's not me!" - - Lucy "Anon, please, don't ever think my parents ever--" - - A "Lucy!" + Lucy "I can't go back to being that thing!" show fang surprised with dissolve "My voice causes my girlfriend to flinch." @@ -2353,44 +2326,30 @@ label chapter_13C: ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4 "I move to place a hand on her shoulder." show fang sad with dissolve - A "Lucy… {w=0.5}It's okay..." - - A "Your parents are cool." - - A "I would never believe they’d hurt you." + A "Lucy…" "Lucy lets out a sigh." - Lucy "Anon… {w=0.5}I don't wanna dump all my baggage on you." + Lucy "Anon… {w=0.5}I wouldn't feel right going back to how I used to be." show fang anguish show anon concerned flip with dissolve Lucy "It's not right." - Lucy "And It was just a phase." + Lucy "It was just a phase! I swear!" - Lucy "I'll never do it again." + Lucy "I thought what I was donig was completely normal" Lucy "It was so humiliating..." Lucy "Naser might have known... {w=0.5}and he suffered so much because of it..." - Lucy "I can't imagine just how much more my parents would've hated me if they’d known the real truth." + Lucy "I can't imagine just how much more my parents would've hated if I stuck to being... being..." - Lucy "So just forget it." + Lucy "I don't even know who I used to be now." - Lucy "It was an obsession." - - Lucy "One I was convinced would make me happy." - - Lucy "But it was never meant to be." - - Lucy "All those relationships were just about who had the most baggage they could dump on each other and gain the most pity points." - - Lucy "And I always lost because I never had it that bad." - - Lucy "I… {w=0.5}I was just an ungrateful slut." + Lucy "I… {w=0.5}I was just an ungrateful bitch..." show fang hiding with dissolve "Lucy lets out a groan and facepalms." -- 2.39.2 From a21851b81076f27721c133b3509be4f4e7116aa3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: nutbuster Date: Sun, 17 Oct 2021 10:08:40 +1100 Subject: [PATCH 2/3] Nio's Your -> You're --- game/script/2.fourth-day-of-school.rpy | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/2.fourth-day-of-school.rpy b/game/script/2.fourth-day-of-school.rpy index 2e1c5f9..3b1c26a 100644 --- a/game/script/2.fourth-day-of-school.rpy +++ b/game/script/2.fourth-day-of-school.rpy @@ -971,7 +971,7 @@ label chapter_2: "Doesn’t seem like it’s something she wants to hear right now." - A "So um, your Naser’s sister, right?" + A "So um, you're Naser’s sister, right?" show fang angry with Dissolve(.25) F "SIB-ling." @@ -2097,7 +2097,7 @@ label chapter_2: window hide window auto pause .5 - + menu: "Look the link up": -- 2.39.2 From d229795505b43bffc356056d8053756d27ac8ef5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: nutbuster Date: Sun, 17 Oct 2021 10:17:18 +1100 Subject: [PATCH 3/3] punc --- game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy b/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy index 5feb8e9..c1d4029 100644 --- a/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy +++ b/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy @@ -2339,7 +2339,7 @@ label chapter_13C: Lucy "It was just a phase! I swear!" - Lucy "I thought what I was donig was completely normal" + Lucy "I thought what I was donig was completely normal." Lucy "It was so humiliating..." -- 2.39.2