game/script/x8-naomi-tribulations.rpy

@@ -124,8 +124,8 @@ label chapter_x8:
     N "Naser, please, you’ve seemed troubled the entire day. What’s wrong?"
 
     show naomi neutral
-    hide naser
     show naser explanatory flip at nright with dissolve:
+        "naser explanatory flip"
         xalign 1.6
     Nas "Nothing! Nothing at all Naomi!"
 
@@ -168,7 +168,8 @@ label chapter_x8:
     Nas "I mean, I wanted to tell you sooner but-"
 
     N "I understand, Naser. After all, you always have the best ideas."
-    show naomi sad at turnaround
+    show naomi sad flip with dissolve
+    pause .2
 
     hide naomi with easeoutleft
 
@@ -196,6 +197,10 @@ label chapter_x8:
 
     "Been the model girlfriend, right?"
 
+    show naomi:
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.4
+        pause .4
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.3
     "I carry myself down the driveway, trying to hold my thoughts together."
 
     "Spring is about over, but it’s cold."
@@ -204,6 +209,12 @@ label chapter_x8:
 
     "Everything was going wonderfully, but now it’s come shattering down."
 
+    show naomi sad flip:
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.1
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 0.8 yalign -0.4
+            ease_cubic 1.2 yalign -0.5
     "When I reach the curb I crumple into my knees."
 
     "I can’t even focus on a single calamitous thought with so many firing through me."