game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy

@@ -1245,8 +1245,6 @@ label chapter_1:
       pause 1
       $ i = i + 1
 
-    #(In-CG insult layers)
-
     I "The crowd was standing,{w=0.3} jeering and laughing with whoever said that."
 
     I "More words were said but the laughter eclipsed them and the music."
@@ -2722,5 +2720,25 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     A "Yeah.{w=0.5} If you need any help Naser,{w=0.4} I owe ya for the pizza."
 
-    # and CUT :^)
+    scene black with fade
+
+    "We finish eating and make small talk until the bell signals us to go to our sixth period."
+
+    "Day two out of however many left is now out of my way."
+
+    "I’m fairly certain that if Naser found out I laughed too I’d need to avoid him."
+
+    "Those cheeto covered claws look like they’d freakin’ hurt,{w=0.3} man."
+
+    "With that drama now past me I can just disappear and cheese through the rest of the year like I’m invisible."
+
+    "Oh when June hits it’s gonna be so sweet."
+
+    "Amen to that."
+
+    "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    stop music fadeout 1
+    pause 2
+
     return

game/script/2.fourth-day-of-school.rpy

@@ -1,23 +1,7 @@
 label chapter_2:
-    scene black with fade
 
-    "We finish eating and make small talk until the bell signals us to go to our sixth period."
-
-    "Day two out of however many left is now out of my way."
-
-    "I’m fairly certain that if Naser found out I laughed too I’d need to avoid him."
-
-    "Those cheeto covered claws look like they’d freakin’ hurt, man."
-
-    "With that drama now past me I can just disappear and cheese through the rest of the year like I’m invisible."
-
-    "Oh when June hits it’s gonna be so sweet."
-
-    "Amen to that."
-
-    "..."
-    pause 1
     scene room anon dark with fade
+    
     "-Two Days Later-"
 
     "Alarm is off"