From 89249c60ed4f067dd256572539bb78e62b7e8deb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bowie Date: Sun, 1 Aug 2021 11:56:49 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] rework ch5 buildup to roof scene --- ...and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy | 587 ++++++++++++++---- 1 file changed, 480 insertions(+), 107 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy b/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy index 795b437..26155d5 100644 --- a/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy +++ b/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy @@ -2373,190 +2373,563 @@ label chapter_5: "I set off for my apartment,{w=.4} body sore but spirit soaring." "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}" + pause 1 #Heart to Heart - play music 'audio/OST/punk_revamp.ogg' fadein 1.0 - "One month now. Five to go and I’ve found myself in a predicament." + + play music 'audio/OST/punk_revamp.ogg' fadein 1 + pause 1 + + "One month now.{w=.75} Five to go and I’ve found myself in a predicament." + pause .5 + "I’m enjoying my time with Fang." + pause .5 + "Most of the time just talking about stupid shit." + "Like our mutual love for wire-fu and comedy movies." - "{alpha=*0.5}{i}We are both ventriloquist, ventriloquist, ventriloquist. We are both ventriloquists and we practice every day.{/i}{/alpha}" + pause .5 + + "{alpha=*0.5}{i}We are both ventriloquists,{w=.2} ventriloquists,{w=.2} ventriloquists.{w=.4} We are both ventriloquists{w=.1} and we practice every day.{/i}{/alpha}" + F "{alpha=*0.5}{i}He carries a basket{/i}{/alpha}" + A "{alpha=*0.5}{i}He carries a paper roll{/i}{/alpha}" - "{alpha=*0.5}{i}and we don’t have cysts. But there is one thing that’s for sure friends, we are ventriloquists.{/i}{/alpha}" + + "{alpha=*0.5}{i}and we don’t have cysts.{w=.5} But there is one thing that’s for sure my friends,{w=.4} we are ventriloquists.{/i}{/alpha}" + pause .5 + "Almost every day now I’m either at her desk helping her in Science or working on a lab with her." + "Or she’s sat next to me decrypting the mystical arts of Not Sucking at Music." + pause .5 + "I’m talking more with her than anyone I’ve ever talked with." - "Not to mention lunch and after school. It’s less hiding from the tangerine tyrant and Naser these days and more spending time with Fang and Reed." + + "Not to mention lunch and after school.{w=.5} It’s less hiding from the tangerine tyrant and Naser these days and more spending time with Fang and Reed." + "Even if he’s constantly checked out." + pause .5 + "And smells of burnt skunk." - "The fuck is he on, anyway?!" + pause .5 + + "The fuck is he on,{w=.2} anyway?!" + pause .5 + scene auditorium - show anon neutral at acenter - show reed neutral at sright - Re "It’s carfe, bro…" - "...what?" + show anon neutral: + yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5 + show reed neutral flip behind anon: + yalign 0.1 xalign 1.3 + with Fade(0,0,1) + pause .5 + + show reed explanatory flip + Re "It’s carfe,{w=.2} bro{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What?" + + show reed considering flip Re "Carfentanyl." - "..." + pause .5 + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "Whatever." - "Fang and the gang (heh) are pretty alright." - "Trish though…" + + "Fang and the gang{w=.3} (heh){w=.3} are pretty alright." + pause .5 + + "Trish though{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "Every day she gives me the same look of distrust and a put-upon sigh." + "As if I’m some kind of chore to deal with." - "Whatever. S’not like she matters in the long run." + pause .5 + + "Whatever.{w=.4} S’not like she matters in the long run." + "But I find myself having these weird thoughts lately." - "Like, is any of this real or not?" + + "Like,{w=.3} is any of this real or not?" + pause .5 + + show anon: + easein 0.5 xalign 0.45 + pause .75 + show anon fear: + easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4 + with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 + + show dimmer_light behind anon with Dissolve(.25) + "I tumble backwards." + "Off of the stage." - show anon neutral at aleft: - xalign 0.5 yalign -0.1 - linear 1 rotate -90 - hide anon neutral with dissolve + + hide dimmer_light + play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg' + show anon shocked with Dissolve(.1): + yanchor 0.2 + easeout_quad .5 rotate -90 yalign -0.1 xpos 0.3 + pause .15 + hide anon with Dissolve(.25) + show reed shocked flip + play sound "audio/effects/anonDeskSlam.ogg" + with vpunch + pause 1 + "Woah" - A "ow…" - Re "bro….. That sucks….." - "It’s lunch time now, and I guess I dozed off." + pause .5 + + A "ow{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + show reed explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) + Re "Bro{cps=*.1}.....{/cps}{w=.3} that sucks{cps=*.1}.....{/cps}" + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + + "It’s lunch time now,{w=.4} and I guess I dozed off." + "Too many late night ‘study’ sessions." - Re "You like… need help?" - A "ffff…. Just fix the projector Reed." - Re "‘Kay… Almost done…" - show anon neutral at aleft: - xalign -0.8 yalign 0.0 - linear 1 rotate 0 - ease 1.0 xalign 0.0 yalign 0.1 - "I hobble to my feet, feeling out the bruise blossoming on my shoulder." - A "Hrrrrg… Stupid fuckin’ stage." - "I consider jumping back up, but find the stairs up more appealing." - scene hallway - show anon neutral flip at acenter - show trish unimpressed at tleft - play music 'audio/OST/i_have_no_clue_what_im_doing.ogg' fadein 1.0 - "Going up the stairs, Trish suddenly grabs my shoulder, pinning it to the wall." - "She leans in close, looking me dead in the eyes." - A "Uhh…" + + show reed unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) + Re "You like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} need help?" + pause .5 + + A "{cps=*.25}ffff....{/cps}{w=.4} just{w=.3} fix the projector Reed." + + show reed happy flip with Dissolve(.25) + Re "‘Kay{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} almost done{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + stop music fadeout 5 + pause .5 + + show reed: + easeout 1 xalign 2.5 + pause .2 + hide reed with dissolve + pause .5 + + show anon sad: + alpha 0 + yalign -0.8 xalign -0.1 + show anon: + easein 0.5 yalign -0.45 alpha 1 + + "I hobble to my feet,{w=.4} feeling out the bruise blossoming on my shoulder." + show anon: + alpha 1 yalign -0.45 + pause .5 + + A "Hrrrrg{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} stupid fuckin’ stage." + + show anon neutral with dissolve + "I consider jumping back up,{w=.4} but find the stairs up more appealing." + pause .5 + + show anon: + easeout_cubic 1 xalign 0.4 yalign -0.35 + with None + pause .5 + + show trish neutral flip with dissolve: + yalign 0.0 xalign 0.6 + + show anon: + easeout_back 0.5 xalign 0.2 + show trish: + easeout_back 0.5 xalign 0.5 + pause .5 + + play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' + with hpunch + pause .5 + + play music 'audio/OST/i_have_no_clue_what_im_doing.ogg' + pause 1 + + "Going up the stairs,{w=.3} Trish suddenly grabs my shoulder,{w=.4} pinning it to the wall." + + "She leans in close,{w=.4} looking me dead in the eyes." + pause .5 + + A "Uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "Can I help you?" + pause .25 + + show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) T "Don’t play dumb." + T "Something’s up with Fang today." + + show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25) "She gestures to where Fang is sitting." - "Fang’s picking at her lunch with a fork, not eating a bite." - "Now that I think about it, she has been a bit distant today." + pause .5 + + "Fang’s picking at her lunch with a fork,{w=.4} not eating a bite." + + "Now that I think about it,{w=.4} she has been a bit distant today." + pause .5 + T "They’ve been like this since band practice yesterday." - "Wait, what?" - show trish angry with dissolve + pause .5 + + "Wait,{w=.4} what?" + + show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 T "Did you do something to them?" - "Do something? What does she mean?" - "Does she think that Fang and I…" + pause .5 + + "Do something?{w=.4} What does she mean?" + + "She doesn't think that Fang and I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + + # B: what is THIS #if persistent.lewd == True: # show howlewd at truecenter with dissolve # pause 3 # hide howlewd with dissolve + show trish angry flip with Dissolve(.25) + show anon: + easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.15 T "OI!" - A "What? No! I don’t think at least." + + A "What?{w=.4} No!{w=.4} I don’t think at least." + A "Why are you so concerned?" - A "Everyone has a bad day every now and then, right?" + + A "Everyone has a bad day every now and then,{w=.4} right?" + pause .25 + + show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve + pause .25 T "Fang and I have been friends for ten years now." + T "Not once have I seen them this upset." + T "You’re the only new thing around here." + pause .5 + T "It can’t be anyone else." - T "So. What did you do?" + + T "So.{w=.5} What did you do?" + pause .5 + A "I swear I haven’t done anything with Fang." - A "Look, we’ve got music next. I’ll ask Fang what’s up then." - "Trish glowers. We both glance at Fang to see her still sitting there with her untouched food." - T "You’ll talk to Fang? You’ll probably make it worse. I should be the one to talk with them." + pause .5 + + A "Look,{w=.4} we’ve got music next.{w=.5} I’ll ask Fang what’s up then." + pause .5 + + "Trish glowers.{w=.5} We both glance at Fang to see her still sitting there with her untouched food." + + show trish: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.55 + T "{i}You’ll{/i} talk to Fang?{w=.6} You’ll probably make it worse.{w=.6} {i}I{/i} should be the one to talk with them." + pause .5 + A "So why haven’t you?" - show trish unimpressed with dissolve + pause .5 + + show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25) "Trish’s mouth shuts with a click." + "I stare her down." + pause .5 + + show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) "Her eyes harden and she finally speaks." - show trish annoyed at tleft with dissolve - T "...Fine… but you better not fuck up." - "She lets go of my shoulder, stuffing her hands in her jacket pockets with a huff." - hide trish with moveoutright + pause .5 + + show trish annoyed flip with dissolve + pause .5 + + T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Fine{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} but you better not fuck up." + show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve + + "She lets go of my shoulder,{w=.4} stuffing her hands in her jacket pockets with a huff." + pause .5 + + show trish: + easein 1 xalign 0.9 + pause .2 + show trish neutral with dissolve + pause .5 + + show anon: + easein_cubic 1.5 yalign 0.1 xalign 0.4 + pause .5 + "I finally return to where I was sitting on the stage to continue finishing my lunch." - scene bandroom + "Right when I plant myself on the ground Reed speaks up." - show anon neutral at aleft - show reed neutral at scenter - show trish neutral flip at sright - Re "Aaaaand… Done!" - A "Done? With the projector?" - Re "That’s right, man… Now we can watch movies… Shows… Pornos… All that." + + show anon: + easein 1 xalign 0.0 + show trish: + easein 1 xalign 0.45 + with None + show reed neutral flip: + yalign 0.1 xalign 1.5 + show reed: + easein 1 xalign 1.2 + with dissolve + pause .5 + + show reed explanatory flip + Re "{cps=*.3}Aaaaand{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} done!" + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 + + A "Done?{w=.5} With the projector?" + + show reed considering flip + Re "That’s right,{w=.2} man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} now we can watch movies{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} shows{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} pornos{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {nw}" + show reed explanatory flip + extend "all that." + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 + + show trish explanatory T "We’re not watching porn in school." - A "Not with that attitude…" + show trish neutral with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 + + A "Not with that attitude{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + + show trish: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.7 + pause .2 + show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 + play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg' + show trish: + easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.65 + pause .2 + play sound 'audio/effects/slapStickPunch.ogg' + show anon: + easein_cubic 0.5 xalign -0.05 + "Trish throws an orange slice at me." - Re "So what do you guys wanna watch…?" + show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + + show reed explanatory flip + Re "So what do you guys wanna watch{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}" + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 + "I can’t think of anything that would be appropriate around normal highschoolers." + pause .5 + + show trish: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5 + show trish happy with Dissolve(.25) "Trish raises her hand and jumps in place." + T "How about the Count of Monte Cristo?" - Re "Oh, I know that one! The actors in that one are pretty great…" - A "Oh yeah. I love the VA work." + + show reed explanatory flip + Re "Oh,{w=.3} I know that one!{w=.4} The actors in that one are pretty great{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 + + stop music fadeout 3 + A "Oh yeah.{w=.4} I love the VA work." + pause .5 + + show reed: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.25 + pause .2 + show trish: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.55 + with None + show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 + "Trish and Reed stop and stare at me." - play music 'audio/OST/The.ogg' fadein 1.0 - T "..." - Re "..." - "Crap, was it something I said?" + pause .5 + + T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + + "Crap,{w=.4} was it something I said?" + pause .5 + + show trish explanatory flip T "What-" - "*DING-DONG BING-BONG*" + + play sound 'audio/effects/schoolBell.ogg' + I "{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.7}DONG {w=0.65}BING-{w=0.7}BONG{/i}{/cps}" + + show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause 0.5 + + play music 'audio/OST/The.ogg' fadein 1.0 + stop sound fadeout 1 + "Saved by the bell!" + "I look to Fang and-" + pause .5 + "Oh." + "When did she leave?" - A "Oh, Fang left already. I’ll go catch up with her." + pause .5 + + A "Oh,{w=.3} Fang left already.{w=.4} I’ll go catch up with her." + + show anon: + easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.2 A "BYE!" - stop music fadeout 1.0 + show anon: + easeout 0.5 xalign -0.5 + hide anon with dissolve + pause .5 + scene black with fade - "I make record time out of the auditorium, leaving a still confused Trish and Reed." - "..." - scene classroom with fade + + "I make record time out of the auditorium,{w=.4} leaving a still confused Trish and Reed." + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + stop music fadeout 3 + pause .5 + scene bandroom with fade + + play ambient 'audio/effects/classroomLoop.ogg' fadein 3 + "Fang isn’t in music class when I get there." - "I tap out a quick message to her on my phone. I take a spot next to her seat and wait." + + "I tap out a quick message to her on my phone.{w=.4} I take a spot next to her seat and wait." + "Maybe she just needed to use the bathroom." - "..." + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + "It’s been about twenty minutes." + "I’m starting to get worried." - T "{i}{alpha=0.5}Something’s up with Fang today.{/alpha}{/i}" - "Hmmm..." - "I looked at my phone, and the message I sent her way just before class started." - show anonphone at scenter - A "Hey. Wanna talk?" + pause .5 + + T "{i}{alpha=0.75}\"Something’s up with Fang today.\"{/alpha}{/i}" + pause .5 + + "Hmmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + show anonphone with easeinbottom + + "I looked at my phone,{w=.4} and the message I sent her way just before class started." + + A "\"Hey. Wanna talk?\"{fast}" + pause .5 + "Still unseen?" - "..." - T "{alpha=0.5}{i}you better not fuck up.{/i}{/alpha}" + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + hide anonphone with easeoutbottom + pause .5 + + T "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"You better not fuck up.\"{/i}{/alpha}" + pause .5 + "God damn it." + pause .5 + A "Mr. Jingo! I need to use the bathroom!" - "..." + + stop ambient fadeout 3 + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + scene hallway with Dissolve(1) + "One guitar-shaped bathroom pass later I’m scrambling through the halls." - scene hallway with dissolve - "If I were a non-binary teenage pterodon having a crisis, where would I hide?" - "Someplace only Fang would go..." + pause .5 + + "If I were a non-binary teenage pterodon having a crisis,{w=.4} where would I hide?" + + "Someplace only Fang would go{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + "The family bathrooms!" + "There are only two in the building." - "I sprint to the first bathroom, closer to the back of the school and nestled away in the special needs area." - "My knuckles rap against the door, locked and preoccupied." - A "Fang? You’re missing class and I seriously need help with this sheet music." - play music 'audio/OST/Dino Destiny Reader.ogg' fadein 1.0 - unknown "The one you seek is elsewhere." - "Who the fuck… Wait…" - A "You’re that weird stego chick…Stella?" - St "That’s very rude… And I’m not weird…" - A "Whatever, do you know where Fang is?" - St "...Not here… Can you please leave? I have a nervous bladder." + + "I sprint to the first bathroom,{w=.4} closer to the back of the school and nestled away in the special needs area." + + "My knuckles rap against the door,{w=.4} locked and preoccupied." + pause .5 + + A "Fang?{w=.4} You’re missing class and I seriously need help with this sheet music." + pause .5 + + play music 'audio/OST/Dino Destiny Reader.ogg' + pause .5 + + unknown "{cps=*.4}The one you seek is elsewhere.{/cps}" + pause .5 + + "Who the fuck{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Wait{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + A "You’re that weird stego chick{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Stella?" + pause .5 + + St "That’s very rude{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} And I’m not weird{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + A "Whatever,{w=.4} do you know where Fang is?" + + St "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Not here{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Can you please leave?{w=.4} I have a nervous bladder." + pause .5 + "I turn away from the door and sprint to the front of the school where the other bathroom is." + "It’s while I’m moving briskly through the empty corridors of the school with un-tuned guitar in hand that I find divine providence." + "Or rather." + "The feathers floating by the window provide me with the clue I need." - "I look out the window, and while I can’t look up to see for sure, the shadow that she is casting on the ground below is enough verification required." - "My feet climb the steps easily, but my mind is ill at-ease." + pause .5 + + "I look out the window,{w=.4} and while I can’t look up to see for sure,{w=.4} the shadow that she is casting on the ground below is enough verification required." + + "My feet climb the steps easily,{w=.4} but my mind is ill at-ease." + "The hell is wrong with me right now." + "Why do I feel anxious right now?" - T "{alpha=0.5}{i}What did you do?{/i}{/alpha}" + pause .5 + + T "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"What did you do?\"{/i}{/alpha}" + "What if I did do something?" - T "{alpha=0.5}{i}Fang and I have been friends for ten years now.{/i}{/alpha}" - "I’ve known her for barely a month. And why is it my problem to fix?" - T "{alpha=0.5}{i}Not once have I seen them this upset.{/i}{/alpha}" + pause .5 + + T "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"Fang and I have been friends for ten years now.\"{/i}{/alpha}" + + "I’ve known her for barely a month.{w=.5} And why is it my problem to fix?" + pause .5 + + T "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"Not once have I seen them this upset.\"{/i}{/alpha}" + stop music fadeout 4 + pause .5 + "I can’t stop the gnawing feeling in my chest." - stop music fadeout 1.0 + pause .5 + scene roof day show fang neutral: xalign -0.2