rework choreo for Anon's first class

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@ -173,9 +173,10 @@ label chapter_1:
stop music fadeout 1.0
stop sound
stop audio
"On the side of the building is where I find sanctuary"
scene garden
show anon neutral flip at scenter
with fade
@ -263,7 +264,7 @@ label chapter_1:
show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve
"The force is enough for my feet to get under me, stumbling back up to stand before the pair of strangers."
"The force is enough for my feet to get under me,{w=0.4} stumbling back up to stand before the pair of strangers."
"It also felt like enough force to pull my arm out of its socket."
@ -284,6 +285,8 @@ label chapter_1:
show naomi neutral at sleft
hide naomiSilo
with dissolve
show anon neutral with dissolve
Nas "Were your welcoming committee."
@ -291,10 +294,13 @@ label chapter_1:
"{cps=*0.5}Is that really necessary?{/cps}"
show naomi explanatory
N "I had this prepared just for you!"
show naomi neutral at scloserleft with ease
show naomi neutral at sleft with ease
show anon neutral flip with dissolve
show naomi neutral at scloserleft with MoveTransition(0.4, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
show naomi neutral at sleft with MoveTransition(0.4, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
"The orange one,{w=0.3} Naomi hands me a brochure."
@ -316,7 +322,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"Naser looks back to the school entrance.{w=0.5} I follow his eyes and see some people trying to lift a large speaker up the stairs of the school."
show naomi sad with dissolve
show naomi sad
N "O-oh."
@ -349,8 +355,12 @@ label chapter_1:
"I turn back to Naomi.{w=0.6} She smiles again,{w=0.4} though there is a plasticity to it."
show naomi explanatory
N "How about I show you the campus,{w=0.3} Anon?{w=0.6} We wouldnt want you getting lost on your first day, now would we?"
show naomi neutral
A "Mm,{w=0.5} sounds good."
scene hallway
@ -368,60 +378,107 @@ label chapter_1:
"I pull the folded up sheet from my pocket and hand it to her.{w=0.6} She unfolds it delicately and scans the page thoroughly."
show naomi happy
N "Oh my gosh!{w=0.6} We share a home room Anon!"
"Oh wonderful."
show naomi neutral
"{cps=*0.4}Oh wonderful.{/cps}"
show naomi explanatory
N "Speaking of,{w=0.3} class will be starting shortly.{w=0.5} Follow me.{w=0.5} Mr. Tsukis classroom is this way."
show naomi neutral
# play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' # already playing, was it supposed to be silent for a bit here?
"I follow after her to a classroom on the 2nd floor. The seats were being filled with students. I take one near the front, knowing Ill have to introduce myself. Ill probably be doing that for all my classes."
scene classroom with fade
"Fuck my life."
show anon neutral flip at aright
"The artificial ring of a bell blares from a speaker on the wall. With it everyone waits as the teacher finally enters the room and shuts the door."
show jinflip at sleft with dissolve
Tsuki "Ohayo gozaimasu curassu. Tudei yu habu e niu curassu-meito tsu Borukeino Hai"
"What"
Tsuki "Anon-kun puriizu camu appu zen intorudiusu yooru serfu"
stop sound
"Naomi coughs and makes a subtle nod up."
"OH!"
stop sound
stop audio
stop music
"I stood from my seat and faced the class. Once again all eyes on me and the tightness in my chest returns. I inhale deep, willing my erratic heart to slow."
show anon neutral flip at acenter with move
show jinflip with move:
xalign -0.2 yalign 0.0
show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve
A "Hey…"
"Again those eyes, just like three weeks ago."
A "My name is Anon. I uh…"
"Just like every day for the past four months."
A "I dont really have any hobbies."
"I wanted to flee. Hide away. Anything to avoid those judging eyes."
N "Why did you transfer here?"
"My throat clenches. Its an innocent question. But I think back again to it all."
A "uh… I…"
"Theres whispers now. The hushed tones, silenced snickers, blending with the everpresent stares. My heart hammers at my chest and I am sure that they all can hear it. See the cold chill racing over me."
Tsuki "Anon-kun, yuu du natto habu tsu ansaa zattu"
"His words snap me out of my trance. Only Naomi was looking at me. The rest were preoccupied."
"Either talking about their winter break. Or catching up on sleep."
"Theyve all been ignoring me the entire time."
Tsuki "Puriizu retaano tsu yo shiito, Anon-kun. Hai, nao curassu-"
"That was nothing like my Japanese animes."
hide anon neutral with dissolve
"Mr. Tsuki continued on, drawing what little attention there was to himself. I sat down, finally feeling the blood that had caught in my legs rush up, leaving me lightheaded."
hide jinflip with dissolve
"And I probably have to do this for each class today?"
"Double fuck my life."
scene black with fade
"I follow after her to a classroom on the 2nd floor.{w=0.5} The seats were being filled with students.{w=0.5} I take one near the front,{w=0.3} knowing Ill have to introduce myself.{w=0.5} Ill probably be doing that for all my classes."
"{cps=*0.4}Fuck my life.{/cps}"
scene classroom with fade
play sound "audio/effects/bell.ogg"
pause 3.0
show anon neutral flip at aright with dissolve
"The artificial ring of a bell blares from a speaker on the wall.{w=0.5} With it everyone waits as the teacher finally enters the room and shuts the door."
show jinflip at sleft with dissolve
Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Ohayo gozaimasu curassu.{w=0.7} Tudei yu habu e niu curassu-meito tsu Borukeino Hai{/cps}"
"What"
Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Anon-kun{w=0.25} puriizu camu appu zen intorudiusu yooru serfu{/cps}"
"Naomi coughs and makes a subtle nod up."
stop music fadeout 1.0
"OH!"
"I stood from my seat and faced the class.{w=0.6} Once again all eyes on me and the tightness in my chest returns.{w} I inhale deep,{w=0.4} willing my erratic heart to slow."
show anon neutral flip at acenter
show jinflip:
xalign -0.2 yalign 0.0
with ease
show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve
A "Hey{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
"Again those eyes,{w=0.4} just like three weeks ago."
A "My name is Anon.{w=0.6} I uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
"Just like every day for the past four months."
A "I dont really have any hobbies."
"I wanted to flee.{w} Hide away.{w} Anything to avoid those judging eyes."
N "Why did you transfer here?"
"My throat clenches.{w=0.5} Its an innocent question.{w=0.5} But I think back again to it all."
A "uh{cps=*0.2}...{/cps} I{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}"
"Theres whispers now.{w=0.75} The hushed tones,{w=0.3} silenced snickers,{w=0.3} blending with the everpresent stares.{w} My heart hammers at my chest and I am sure that they all can hear it.{w=0.5} See the cold chill racing over me."
show jinflip:
xalign -0.1 yalign 0.0
with ease
Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Anon-kun,{w=0.5} yuu du natto habu tsu ansaa zattu{/cps}"
"His words snap me out of my trance.{w=0.5} Only Naomi was looking at me.{w=0.5} The rest were preoccupied."
"Either talking about their winter break.{w=0.5} Or catching up on sleep."
"Theyve all been ignoring me the entire time."
Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Puriizu retaano tsu yo shiito,{w=0.3} Anon-kun.{w=0.5} Hai,{w=0.3} nao curassu-{/cps}"
"That was nothing like my Japanese animes."
hide anon neutral with dissolve
"Mr. Tsuki continued on,{w=0.4} drawing what little attention there was to himself.{w=0.6} I sat down,{w=0.3} finally feeling the blood that had caught in my legs rush up,{w=0.3} leaving me lightheaded."
hide jinflip with dissolve
"And I probably have to do this for each class today?"
"Double fuck my life."
scene black with fade
"Awkward introduction after awkward introduction to classmates that couldnt care less kept me anxious the whole morning."
scene cafeteria
show anon neutral at aleft
with dissolve