On branch Monster-Update-6

Changes to be committed:
	modified:   game/script/13A.fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen.rpy
	modified:   game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy
	modified:   game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy
	modified:   game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy
	modified:   game/script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy

formating and speling fixs. WHERE DID THE BLOOMIN MAIN REPO GO?!

game/script/13A.fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen.rpy

@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     FD "Don’t sweat it, son."
 
-    FD "Thing about humans, as well as many charnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement."
+    FD "Thing about humans, as well as many carnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement."
 
     FD "You’d be surprised how useful staying quiet and stationary can be."
 

game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy

@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     FD "Don’t sweat it, son."
 
-    FD "Thing about humans, as well as many charnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement."
+    FD "Thing about humans, as well as many carnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement."
 
     FD "You’d be surprised how useful staying quiet and stationary can be."
 
@@ -433,6 +433,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
     F "Mumbling."
 
     "Fuck."
+
     Nas "I think I’ll hit up the catering first."
 
     Nas "What about you guys?"
@@ -529,6 +530,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
     stop music fadeout 1.0
     play music "audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "Lucy's looking on edge, I should probably intervene quick."
+
     N "-dress is very nice, Lucy, we should go out together clothes shopping sometime!"
 
     F "I-I uh…"
@@ -1249,7 +1251,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     A "And I mean, I REALLY can’t dance."
 
-    A "Like, quadraplegic with down syndrome can’t dance."
+    A "Like, quadriplegic with down syndrome can’t dance."
 
     A "But-"
 

game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy

@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     FD "Don’t sweat it, son."
 
-    FD "Thing about humans, as well as many charnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement."
+    FD "Thing about humans, as well as many carnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement."
 
     FD "You’d be surprised how useful staying quiet and stationary can be."
 

game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy

@@ -1,47 +1,89 @@
 label chapter_6:
     #Not A Date
     scene room anon dark with fade
+
     "-One Month Later-"
+
     play music 'audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg' fadein 1.0
+
     "I’m laying in bed on a saturday morning."
+
     "It’s been raining the last few days, so I’m stuck inside."
+
     "Not like I had any other plans anyways."
+
     "The forecast says it should clear up later today."
+
     "There’s no new games out, and my backlog is just the perfect size of fuck that noise."
+
     "I don’t even feel like baiting on a certain basket weaving polynesian forum."
+
     "The light of my phone is the only thing illuminating my hovel of a home."
+
     "I scroll through the camera roll out of boredom."
+
     "At least that’s what I tell myself."
+
     "Interspersed through various memes and screenshots of homework assignments are pictures Fang has been sending."
+
     "Over the last month I’ve been included more in Fang’s circle of friends."
+
     #[CG of Fang having beaten Anon on a Primal Rage arcade cabinet]
+
     "Ugh… My cred… I can feel it slipping away."
+
     #[CG of Reed in his mascot outfit at one of Naser’s track meet]
+
     "Hehehehe, Reed stole all the hotdogs that day."
+
     #[CG of a selfie of Trish and Fang on the pier]
+
     "I scroll past that one swiftly… god damn it Trish…"
+
     "My perusal through old pictures is interrupted with a text."
+
     "Fang: Looking for new band venue"
+
     "Fang: Don’t feel like going alone"
+
     "Fang: Do you want to come with?"
+
     "...Alone…? No, shut the fuck up alarms."
+
     "Anon: Why alone?"
+
     "Fang: Trish has a horn appt and Reed is"
+
     "A pause."
+
     "Fang: Preoccupied."
+
     #cut to Reed in bathroom cg
+
     Re "...dude like… back to the story..."
+
     #cut back to Anon
+
     "Anon: Alright, where we dropping?"
+
     "Fang: Just show up at my place in like an hour"
+
     "Fang: Need to go now"
+
     "Anon: k"
+
     stop music fadeout 1.0
+
     "This is fine."
+
     play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg' fadein 1.0
+
     "It’s just helping a friend of mine find someplace for her band to play."
+
     "A friend I have feelings for."
+
     "And we’re alone."
+
     scene room anon day
     "JUST HANGING OUT CALM DOWN ANON CALM THE FUCK DOWN."
     "I boot up my computer and start a gacha thread on a taiwanese rum brewing blogsite."

game/script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy

@@ -344,7 +344,6 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         A "Er… why not."
 
-
         "I take the guitar from her hands and put the strap on, letting its weight hang from my shoulder."
 
         "Fang hands me the pick and I aimlessly strum the guitar, the mess of a noise sounding a far cry from her elegant playing."
@@ -356,7 +355,9 @@ label chapter_8:
         show fanganonguitar
         with dissolve
         "Fang grabs another guitar and motions me to copy her hand movements."
+
         "I try to mimic her hands on the fretboard but it feels like my fingers are twisting into pretzels."
+
         F "Not like that, your hand’s gonna get cramped as fuck like that."
 
         "Fang sets her guitar down on a stand and comes over to me."