x8 ...

game/script/x8-naomi-tribulations.rpy

@@ -129,14 +129,15 @@ label chapter_x8:
         xalign 1.6
     Nas "Nothing! Nothing at all Naomi!"
 
-    Nas "Just uh… ah, damn it…"
+    Nas "Just uh{cps=*.15}...{cps} ah, damn it{cps=*.15}...{cps}"
 
     show naser sad flip with dissolve
     "Naser’s shoulders slump down and he heaves out a heavy sigh."
     stop music fadeout 5.0
-    Nas "I’ve been uh… Thinking about this a lot, Naomi…"
+    Nas "I’ve been uh{cps=*.15}...{cps} Thinking about this a lot, Naomi{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
-    Nas "I uh… Wanna take a break…"
+
+    Nas "I uh{cps=*.15}...{cps} Wanna take a break{cps=*.15}...{cps}"
 
     "A break?"
 
@@ -151,16 +152,17 @@ label chapter_x8:
     pause 0.5
     "O-oh."
     show naomi sad with dissolve
-    "I…"
+    "I{cps=*.15}...{cps}"
+
+    N "I see{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
-    N "I see…"
 
     show naser neckhold flip with dissolve
     Nas "Lucy and Anon are taking one, and I thought-"
 
     "I gently set the broom against the wall."
 
-    N "Yes… A break… I…"
+    N "Yes{cps=*.15}...{/cps} A break{cps=*.15}...{/cps} I{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     show naser explanatory flip with dissolve
     Nas "I mean, I wanted to tell you sooner but-"
@@ -183,18 +185,16 @@ label chapter_x8:
     scene home fang outside night with fade
     show naomi sad flip at scenter
     "I slip out the door of Naser’s house."
-    pause 0.5
-    "A break…"
-    pause 0.5
-    "A break…"
+    pause 0.4
+    "A break{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
+    pause 0.4
+    "A break{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     "But why?"
 
     "I’ve done everything right, right?"
 
     "Been the model girlfriend, right?"
-    pause 0.5
-    "A break…"
 
     "I carry myself down the driveway, trying to hold my thoughts together."
 
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ label chapter_x8:
 
     "I can’t even focus on a single calamitous thought with so many firing through me."
 
-    "The thought of being away from Naser, of things just ending…"
+    "The thought of being away from Naser, of things just ending{cps=*.15}...{cps}"
 
     N "{b}*sob*{/b}"
 
@@ -265,9 +265,9 @@ label chapter_x8:
     "He gives me a warm smile and a pat on the shoulder and leaves to let me get acquainted with the new space."
 
     hide spears with easeoutleft
-    "Looks like there’s already a few forms to fill out…"
+    "Looks like there’s already a few forms to fill out{cps=*.15}...{cps}"
 
-    "Oh? There’s a letter in here, too…"
+    "Oh? There’s a letter in here, too{cps=*.15}...{cps}"
 
     ##fade in cg
     #this one music pops on purpose
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ label chapter_x8:
 
     "Oops, I said that out loud."
 
-    "Good thing there’s nobody here…"
+    "Good thing there’s nobody here{cps=*.20}...{/cps}"
 
     "But then what’s that drumming sound?"
 
@@ -305,7 +305,7 @@ label chapter_x8:
 
     "That was me. I hope no one else heard that."
 
-    "But, but, but…"
+    "But, but, but{cps=*.15}...{cps}"
     pause 0.5
     "Naser is{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
     pause 0.5