rework ch3 band room scene
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@ -803,166 +803,339 @@ label chapter_3:
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"I slam into the band room door just as the late bell trills,{w=.4} panting and sweaty."
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show jingo at sleft with dissolve
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show jingo at sleft with Dissolve(1)
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jingo "Good timing, Mr. Mous. Just in time for free period."
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jingo "Good timing,{w=.3} Mr. Mous.{w=.4} Just in time for free period."
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pause .5
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"What…"
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"What{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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jingo "Take up anything you like and have fun."
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pause .25
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"The teacher then took to his extremely lavish loveseat, threw on a pair of headphones and blacked out."
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show jingo:
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easeout 1 xalign -0.5
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pause .25
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hide jingo with dissolve
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"I looked at the scattered instruments, left alone for whatever reason."
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"The teacher then took to his extremely lavish loveseat,{w=.4} threw on a pair of headphones and blacked out."
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pause .5
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"Dent looking brass and cracked woodwinds. Even a bass with a missing string."
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"I looked at the scattered instruments,{w=.3} left alone for whatever reason."
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"Wow. I feel like that right about now."
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"Dent looking brass and cracked woodwinds.{w=.4} Even a bass with a missing string."
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"I reach for one at random, taking a wooden… thing…"
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"Wow.{w=.5} I feel like that right about now."
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pause .5
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"I reach for one at random,{w=.4} taking a wooden{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} thing{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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"It looks like an oak tree made love to an eggplant and this is the aborted monstrosity in Mexico."
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pause .5
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"Whatever, I melt into my chair and pull out my phone. Seems a majority of my classmates have a similar idea."
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"Whatever,{w=.4} I melt into my chair and pull out my phone.{w=.5} Seems a majority of my classmates have a similar idea."
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"I’ve some shitposting to do."
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"Let’s see…"
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"Let’s see{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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pause .5
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show anonphone with easeinbottom
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# TODO: phone overlay with Elliot Raptor, and the text ‘he made some valid points :^)’
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"Ah yes, perfect. Click post aaaand now to wait."
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"Ah yes,{w=.4} perfect.{w=.6} Click post {cps=*.3}aaaand{/cps} now to wait."
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pause .5
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hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
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"Nefarious deed for the day done, I look around the room out of boredom."
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"Oh fuck no."
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"Fang has a weapon of mass hearing loss."
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"I’m covering my ears in preparation when the ptero-rist starts strumming and…"
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"Nefarious deed for the day done,{w=.4} I look around the room out of boredom."
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pause .5
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"Oh fuck no."
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"Fang has a weapon of mass hearing loss."
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"I’m covering my ears in preparation when the ptero-rist starts strumming and{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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pause .5
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play music 'audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg'
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"Oh wow."
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"I still have my hearing."
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pause .5
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"In fact she’s actually playing something pleasant."
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"It’s mellow. Relaxed. A slow rhythm that carries a strange nostalgic hint to it."
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pause .5
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"It’s mellow.{w=.5} Relaxed.{w=.6} A slow rhythm that carries a strange nostalgic hint to it."
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"The difference between this and the performance is night and day."
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pause .5
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"What gives?"
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"Looking a bit closer, she’s swinging her tail a bit to the rhythm."
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pause .5
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"Looking a bit closer,{w=.4} she’s swinging her tail a bit to the rhythm."
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"She uses her tail as a metronome?"
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"Suddenly, the phone slips from my hand onto the floor."
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stop music
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A "SHIT!"
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pause .5
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"Suddenly,{w=.3} the phone slips from my hand onto the floor."
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stop music fadeout .25
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play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
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A "SHIT!" with vpunch
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"The sound it makes as it clatters on the ground is a klaxon of pants-shitting terror."
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"It lies face down on the isle."
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pause .5
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"Do I really want to pick it up and potentially face a harsh reality?"
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"Schrodingers’ crack."
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"...I can’t just leave it there."
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"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I can’t just leave it there."
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pause .5
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"I pick up the phone and slowly turn it over."
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"It’s the moment of truth."
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"...No cracks?"
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"Thank the Lord."
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show fang considering at scenter with dissolve
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pause .5
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"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}No cracks?"
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pause .5
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play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg'
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F "Yeah, you got lucky."
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show fang happy with dissolve
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"Thank the Lord."
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show fang happy at scenter with Dissolve(1)
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F "Yeah,{w=.3} you got lucky."
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pause .5
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"Fang has stopped playing and is throwing a small smirk my way."
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"I should probably say something…"
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"Her playing is pretty good, I'll compliment that."
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pause .5
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"I should probably say something{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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"Her playing is pretty good,{w=.4} I'll compliment that."
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pause .5
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A "That sounded way better than in the video Reed took."
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hide fang shocked
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show fang angry at scenter
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"..."
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show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
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"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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"Wrong choice of words."
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F "You’re still not off my shit list, watch it."
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"Quick Anon, think"
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A "Why didn’t you play guitar back then, you’re obviously a lot better with it."
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hide fang angry
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show fang neutral at scenter
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show fang angry
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F "You’re still not off my shit list,{w=.4} watch it."
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"Quick Anon,{w=.3} think."
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pause .5
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A "Why didn’t you play guitar back then,{w=.4} you’re obviously a lot better with it."
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show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
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F "Would’ve if I could’ve."
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pause .5
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A "What do you mean?"
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pause .5
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"There’s an empty seat next to Fang."
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"Finders’ keepers, I guess."
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F "The band is just Reed, Trish, and I."
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"Finders’ keepers,{w=.4} I guess."
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show anon neutral flip:
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alpha 0
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yalign 0.1 xalign 1.2
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show anon:
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easein 1.5 xalign 0.775 alpha 1
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show fang:
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easein 1.5 xalign 0.1
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pause 1
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show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
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F "The band is just Reed,{w=.2} Trish,{w=.2} and I."
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F "So we all have to decide by majority what happens."
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F "Reed says using a bass is more unique, and Trish always says how it’s a ‘promising business model’."
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F "Reed says using a bass is more unique,{w=.4} and Trish always says how it’s a ‘promising business model’."
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A "But it sounds like you play the guitar much easier than a bass."
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show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
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F "I play the bass just fine."
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F "I think the problem is more that if you want to make an unconventional band layout, you damn well better know what you’re doing."
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show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
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F "I think the problem is more that if you want to make an unconventional band layout,{w=.5} you damn well better know what you’re doing."
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F "If you’re anything short of masterful it won’t sound good."
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F "And when it comes to music, it either sounds good or it doesn’t."
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F "And when it comes to music,{w=.4} it either sounds good or it doesn’t."
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F "Simple as."
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"She continues strumming."
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A "But it’s just a high school band, right?"
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pause .5
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A "But it’s just a high school band,{w=.4} right?"
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A "Shouldn’t it just be fun?"
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F "It is, yeah."
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F "It is,{w=.4} yeah."
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A "Even though you’re just doing what they want without getting a say in it?"
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play sound 'audio/effects/badA.ogg'
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show fang angry with Dissolve(.25)
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"Fang flinches and misses a note."
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F "..."
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F "It’s not like that…"
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F "It’s just… Trish says… I mean… God damn it."
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F "Look, we’re better with two basses. Trish and Reed say so."
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stop music
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pause .5
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F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
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F "It’s not like that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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F "It’s just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Trish says{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {nw}"
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show fang considering
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extend "I mean{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} God damn it."
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pause .5
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show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
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F "Look,{w=.4} we’re better with two basses.{w=.6} Trish and Reed say so."
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pause .5
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A "The au--"
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stop music fadeout 0.1
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"Uhp"
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"Fuck"
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"I almost said 'the audience at the concert' to her outloud."
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pause .5
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"I almost said 'the audience at the concert' to her out loud."
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show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
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F "What was that?"
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pause .5
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play music 'audio/OST/fighter.ogg' fadein 1.0
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A "Nuthin’"
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A "{cps=*.2}Nuthin’{/cps}"
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show fang angry with Dissolve(.25)
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"Fang growls at that."
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F "You know what, we’re having band practice after school today."
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pause .5
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show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
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F "You know what,{w=.4} we’re having band practice after school today."
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show fang neutral
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F "Just show up and see for yourself."
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pause .5
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A "And what if I don’t?"
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show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
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F "You’ll be a little bitch that’s wrong."
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pause .5
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"Oh."
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"In that case."
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A "Fuck you, I’m right, your band sucks with two basses, and you shoulda been on guitar!"
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A "Fuck you,{w=.4} I’m right,{w=.4} your band sucks with two basses,{w=.6} {nw}"
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show fang unimpressed
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extend "and you shoulda been on guitar!"
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"I lock eyes with her."
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pause .5
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show fang:
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easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.0025
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F "Fuck you!"
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pause .5
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show anon behind fang:
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easein_quart 0.5 xalign 0.725
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A "Fuck you!"
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F "Fuck! You!"
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A "FUCK YOU!"
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show fang:
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easein_quart 0.5 xalign 0.1
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show fang angry
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F "Fuck!{w=.4} {nw}"
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show fang:
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easein_quart 0.5 xalign 0.2
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extend "You!"
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show anon:
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easein_back 0.5 xalign 1.1
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pause .15
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play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
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show anon angry flip
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A "FUCK YOU!" with vpunch
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show jingo at sleft with dissolve
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stop music fadeout 1.0
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jingo "Aaaaand we’re caaaaaalm now."
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stop music fadeout 3
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jingo "{cps=*.2}Aaaaand{/cps} we’re {cps=*.15}caaaaaalm{/cps} now."
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show anon neutral flip
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show fang unimpressed
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with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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"Fuck me."
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"..."
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hide jingo with fade
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"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg'
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# CH3 SCENE 5 -
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# TODO: SCENE hallway
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show hallway
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play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg' fadein 2
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scene hallway with Fade(1, 0, 1)
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pause .5
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F "Hurry up, dweeb. If I can keep ahead of you while carrying two instruments, you can speedwalk."
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A "You sure you don’t want me to carry one?"
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F "Pfeh."
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"Fang is leading me back to the auditorium with both the acoustic guitar ‘borrowed’ from the music room and her bass in hand, one over each shoulder."
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# TODO: SCENE auditorium doors
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"When we eventually get to the auditorium, Fang stops."
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"Is something wrong?"
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A "Uh, is everything-"
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F "The doors, moron."
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"She swings the guitar cases on her shoulders around a bit."
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"Oh."
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"I step around her and grab the hanlde, pulling the door wide open."
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"I step around her and grab the handle, pulling the door wide open."
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A "Ladies first."
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"Fang growls and stomps on my foot as she walks past."
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"..."
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A "FUCK!"
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F "Hurry up already."
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# TODO: SCENE auditorium
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scene bandroom
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scene auditorium
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show reed neutral flip at rright
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show trish neutral at tcenter
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"Inside, Reed and Trish already have everything set up onstage."
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