rework ch3 band room scene

game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy

@@ -803,166 +803,339 @@ label chapter_3:
 
     "I slam into the band room door just as the late bell trills,{w=.4} panting and sweaty."
 
-    show jingo at sleft with dissolve
+    show jingo at sleft with Dissolve(1)
 
-    jingo "Good timing, Mr. Mous. Just in time for free period."
+    jingo "Good timing,{w=.3} Mr. Mous.{w=.4} Just in time for free period."
+    pause .5
 
-    "What…"
+    "What{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     jingo "Take up anything you like and have fun."
+    pause .25
 
-    "The teacher then took to his extremely lavish loveseat, threw on a pair of headphones and blacked out."
+    show jingo:
-
+        easeout 1 xalign -0.5
+    pause .25
     hide jingo with dissolve
 
-    "I looked at the scattered instruments, left alone for whatever reason."
+    "The teacher then took to his extremely lavish loveseat,{w=.4} threw on a pair of headphones and blacked out."
+    pause .5
 
-    "Dent looking brass and cracked woodwinds. Even a bass with a missing string."
+    "I looked at the scattered instruments,{w=.3} left alone for whatever reason."
 
-    "Wow. I feel like that right about now."
+    "Dent looking brass and cracked woodwinds.{w=.4} Even a bass with a missing string."
 
-    "I reach for one at random, taking a wooden… thing…"
+    "Wow.{w=.5} I feel like that right about now."
+    pause .5
+
+    "I reach for one at random,{w=.4} taking a wooden{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} thing{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "It looks like an oak tree made love to an eggplant and this is the aborted monstrosity in Mexico."
+    pause .5
 
-    "Whatever, I melt into my chair and pull out my phone. Seems a majority of my classmates have a similar idea."
+    "Whatever,{w=.4} I melt into my chair and pull out my phone.{w=.5} Seems a majority of my classmates have a similar idea."
 
     "I’ve some shitposting to do."
 
-    "Let’s see…"
+    "Let’s see{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     show anonphone with easeinbottom
 
     # TODO: phone overlay with Elliot Raptor, and the text ‘he made some valid points :^)’
 
-    "Ah yes, perfect. Click post aaaand now to wait."
+    "Ah yes,{w=.4} perfect.{w=.6} Click post {cps=*.3}aaaand{/cps} now to wait."
+    pause .5
     
     hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
-    "Nefarious deed for the day done, I look around the room out of boredom."
-    "Oh fuck no."
-    "Fang has a weapon of mass hearing loss."
-    "I’m covering my ears in preparation when the ptero-rist starts strumming and…"
 
+    "Nefarious deed for the day done,{w=.4} I look around the room out of boredom."
+    pause .5
+
+    "Oh fuck no."
+    
+    "Fang has a weapon of mass hearing loss."
+
+    "I’m covering my ears in preparation when the ptero-rist starts strumming and{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     play music 'audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg'
 
     "Oh wow."
+
     "I still have my hearing."
+    pause .5
+
     "In fact she’s actually playing something pleasant."
-    "It’s mellow. Relaxed. A slow rhythm that carries a strange nostalgic hint to it."
+    pause .5
+
+    "It’s mellow.{w=.5} Relaxed.{w=.6} A slow rhythm that carries a strange nostalgic hint to it."
+
     "The difference between this and the performance is night and day."
+    pause .5
+
     "What gives?"
-    "Looking a bit closer, she’s swinging her tail a bit to the rhythm."
+    pause .5
+
+    "Looking a bit closer,{w=.4} she’s swinging her tail a bit to the rhythm."
+
     "She uses her tail as a metronome?"
-    "Suddenly, the phone slips from my hand onto the floor."
+    pause .5
-    stop music
+
-    A "SHIT!"
+    "Suddenly,{w=.3} the phone slips from my hand onto the floor."
+
+    stop music fadeout .25
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
+    A "SHIT!" with vpunch
+
     "The sound it makes as it clatters on the ground is a klaxon of pants-shitting terror."
+
     "It lies face down on the isle."
+    pause .5
+
     "Do I really want to pick it up and potentially face a harsh reality?"
+
     "Schrodingers’ crack."
-    "...I can’t just leave it there."
+
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I can’t just leave it there."
+    pause .5
+
     "I pick up the phone and slowly turn it over."
+
     "It’s the moment of truth."
-    "...No cracks?"
+    pause .5
-    "Thank the Lord."
+
-    show fang considering at scenter with dissolve
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}No cracks?"
+    pause .5
+
     play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg'
-    F "Yeah, you got lucky."
+    "Thank the Lord."
-    show fang happy with dissolve
+
+    show fang happy at scenter with Dissolve(1)
+
+    F "Yeah,{w=.3} you got lucky."
+    pause .5
+
     "Fang has stopped playing and is throwing a small smirk my way."
-    "I should probably say something…"
+    pause .5
-    "Her playing is pretty good, I'll compliment that."
+
+    "I should probably say something{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    "Her playing is pretty good,{w=.4} I'll compliment that."
+    pause .5
+
     A "That sounded way better than in the video Reed took."
-    hide fang shocked
+
-    show fang angry at scenter
+    show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
-    "..."
+
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
     "Wrong choice of words."
-    F "You’re still not off my shit list, watch it."
+
-    "Quick Anon, think"
+    show fang angry
-    A "Why didn’t you play guitar back then, you’re obviously a lot better with it."
+    F "You’re still not off my shit list,{w=.4} watch it."
-    hide fang angry
+
-    show fang neutral at scenter
+    "Quick Anon,{w=.3} think."
+    pause .5
+
+    A "Why didn’t you play guitar back then,{w=.4} you’re obviously a lot better with it."
+
+    show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Would’ve if I could’ve."
+    pause .5
+
     A "What do you mean?"
+    pause .5
+
     "There’s an empty seat next to Fang."
-    "Finders’ keepers, I guess."
+
-    F "The band is just Reed, Trish, and I."
+    "Finders’ keepers,{w=.4} I guess."
+
+    show anon neutral flip:
+        alpha 0
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.2
+    show anon:
+        easein 1.5 xalign 0.775 alpha 1
+    show fang:
+        easein 1.5 xalign 0.1
+    pause 1
+
+    show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "The band is just Reed,{w=.2} Trish,{w=.2} and I."
+
     F "So we all have to decide by majority what happens."
-    F "Reed says using a bass is more unique, and Trish always says how it’s a ‘promising business model’."
+
+    F "Reed says using a bass is more unique,{w=.4} and Trish always says how it’s a ‘promising business model’."
+
     A "But it sounds like you play the guitar much easier than a bass."
+
+    show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
     F "I play the bass just fine."
-    F "I think the problem is more that if you want to make an unconventional band layout, you damn well better know what you’re doing."
+
+    show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "I think the problem is more that if you want to make an unconventional band layout,{w=.5} you damn well better know what you’re doing."
+
     F "If you’re anything short of masterful it won’t sound good."
-    F "And when it comes to music, it either sounds good or it doesn’t."
+
+    F "And when it comes to music,{w=.4} it either sounds good or it doesn’t."
+
     F "Simple as."
+
     "She continues strumming."
-    A "But it’s just a high school band, right?"
+    pause .5
+
+    A "But it’s just a high school band,{w=.4} right?"
+
     A "Shouldn’t it just be fun?"
-    F "It is, yeah."
+
+    F "It is,{w=.4} yeah."
+
     A "Even though you’re just doing what they want without getting a say in it?"
+    
+    play sound 'audio/effects/badA.ogg'
+    show fang angry with Dissolve(.25)
     "Fang flinches and misses a note."
-    F "..."
+    pause .5
-    F "It’s not like that…"
+
-    F "It’s just… Trish says… I mean… God damn it."
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    F "Look, we’re better with two basses. Trish and Reed say so."
+
-    stop music
+    show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "It’s not like that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    F "It’s just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Trish says{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {nw}"
+    show fang considering
+    extend "I mean{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} God damn it."
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Look,{w=.4} we’re better with two basses.{w=.6} Trish and Reed say so."
+    pause .5
+
     A "The au--"
+
+    stop music fadeout 0.1
+
     "Uhp"
+
     "Fuck"
-    "I almost said 'the audience at the concert' to her outloud."
+    pause .5
+
+    "I almost said 'the audience at the concert' to her out loud."
+
+    show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
     F "What was that?"
+    pause .5
+
     play music 'audio/OST/fighter.ogg' fadein 1.0
-    A "Nuthin’"
+    A "{cps=*.2}Nuthin’{/cps}"
+
+    show fang angry with Dissolve(.25)
     "Fang growls at that."
-    F "You know what, we’re having band practice after school today."
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "You know what,{w=.4} we’re having band practice after school today."
+
+    show fang neutral
     F "Just show up and see for yourself."
+    pause .5
+
     A "And what if I don’t?"
+
+    show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
     F "You’ll be a little bitch that’s wrong."
+    pause .5
+
     "Oh."
+
     "In that case."
-    A "Fuck you, I’m right, your band sucks with two basses, and you shoulda been on guitar!"
+
+    A "Fuck you,{w=.4} I’m right,{w=.4} your band sucks with two basses,{w=.6} {nw}"
+    show fang unimpressed
+    extend "and you shoulda been on guitar!"
+
     "I lock eyes with her."
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.0025
     F "Fuck you!"
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon behind fang:
+        easein_quart 0.5 xalign 0.725
     A "Fuck you!"
-    F "Fuck! You!"
+
-    A "FUCK YOU!"
+    show fang:
+        easein_quart 0.5 xalign 0.1
+    show fang angry
+    F "Fuck!{w=.4} {nw}"
+    show fang:
+        easein_quart 0.5 xalign 0.2
+    extend "You!"
+
+    show anon:
+        easein_back 0.5 xalign 1.1
+    pause .15
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
+    show anon angry flip
+    A "FUCK YOU!" with vpunch
+
     show jingo at sleft with dissolve
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
+    stop music fadeout 3
-    jingo "Aaaaand we’re caaaaaalm now."
+
+    jingo "{cps=*.2}Aaaaand{/cps} we’re {cps=*.15}caaaaaalm{/cps} now."
+
+    show anon neutral flip
+    show fang unimpressed
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
     "Fuck me."
-    "..."
-    hide jingo with fade
 
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg'
+    # CH3 SCENE 5 -
 
-    # TODO: SCENE hallway
+    play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg' fadein 2
-    show hallway
+    scene hallway with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+    pause .5
 
     F "Hurry up, dweeb. If I can keep ahead of you while carrying two instruments, you can speedwalk."
+
     A "You sure you don’t want me to carry one?"
+
     F "Pfeh."
+
     "Fang is leading me back to the auditorium with both the acoustic guitar ‘borrowed’ from the music room and her bass in hand, one over each shoulder."
 
     # TODO: SCENE auditorium doors
 
     "When we eventually get to the auditorium, Fang stops."
+
     "Is something wrong?"
+
     A "Uh, is everything-"
+
     F "The doors, moron."
+
     "She swings the guitar cases on her shoulders around a bit."
+
     "Oh."
-    "I step around her and grab the hanlde, pulling the door wide open."
+
+    "I step around her and grab the handle, pulling the door wide open."
+
     A "Ladies first."
+
     "Fang growls and stomps on my foot as she walks past."
+
     "..."
+
     A "FUCK!"
+
     F "Hurry up already."
 
-    # TODO: SCENE auditorium
+    scene auditorium
-
-    scene bandroom
     show reed neutral flip at rright
     show trish neutral at tcenter
     "Inside, Reed and Trish already have everything set up onstage."