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"The next few hours were grueling hell."
"Carrying bags of the most rancid smelling fertilizer back and forth"
"Carrying bags of the most rancid smelling fertilizer back and forth{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"Clearing entire sections of flowerbed of weeds using only a trowel"
"Clearing entire sections of flowerbed of weeds using only a trowel{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"Tilling the same flowerbeds by hand..."
"Tilling the same flowerbeds by hand{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
stop music fadeout 4
"I dont think the phrase backbreaking labor was supposed to be literal."
pause .5
scene garden with fade
show rosa neutral at sleft
show anon neutral flip at acenter
play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 3
scene flower garden
show rosa considering:
yalign 0.2 xalign -0.05
show anon neutral flip:
yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
with fade
pause .5
show rosa neutral
Ro "As is expected of hombres!"
pause .5
"I could already tell that by the end of the day I would have crippling arthritis."
pause .5
"Fang returns eventually, but still wont talk to me and just sticks nearby cutting vines."
"Fang returns eventually,{w=.4} but still wont talk to me and just sticks nearby cutting vines."
"Only an hour has passed, but Im about ready to sleep for days."
"Only an hour has passed,{w=.4} but Im about ready to sleep for days."
Ro "An-on! We will now be replanting the flowers you destroyed!"
Ro "An-{w=.2}on!{w=.4} We will now be replanting the flowers you destroyed!"
show rosa considering with Dissolve(.25)
"Destroyed is a harsh word…"
"Destroyed is a harsh word{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
A "But I dont know anything about planting-"
Ro "You speak nonsense! Come here, now, Ill teach you!"
show rosa neutral
Ro "You speak nonsense!{w=.5} {nw}"
show rosa:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.2
extend "Come here,{w=.2} now,{w=.4} Ill teach you!"
"She motions me to get on my knees next to her and hands me a clump of dirt with a juvenile daisy in it."
pause .5
Ro "I will dig the hole, you will place it in. Very simple!"
show anon behind rosa:
easein 1.5 xalign 0.6
pause .5
show anon neutral with dissolve
pause .5
Ro "I will dig the hole,{w=.4} you will place it in.{w=.5} Very simple!"
show rosa considering with Dissolve(.25)
pause .25
"I somehow almost drop the flower."
A "Y-yeah…"
A "Y-{w=.2}yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"I dont even {i}want{/i} to think what would happen if I mess up a third time."
"Rosa points up at Fang, who is still aggressively trimming back the vines."
"Rosa points up at Fang,{w=.5} who is still aggressively trimming back the vines."
Ro "Fang, do you want to plant some, too?"
show rosa neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
Ro "Fang,{w=.4} do you want to plant some,{w=.2} too?"
pause .5
F "Ill… pass."
F "{size=-5}Ill{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} pass.{/size}"
pause .5
show rosa considering with Dissolve(.25)
"With a practiced hand Rosa clears out a cylindrical hole deep enough for the clump to go in."
Ro "Okay, its ready."
Ro "Okay,{w=.3} its ready."
show rosa considering with Dissolve(.25)
"My arms are practically rubber from todays work and are faltering to the point pieces of dirt are being shaken off."
"A little bit from the hole, I have to catch the whole thing when it slips from my grip."
"A little bit from the hole,{w=.4} I have to catch the whole thing when it slips from my grip."
"Rosa puts her hands around mine to steady them before I drop it for real."
Ro "Veeery easy, like this…"
Ro "{cps=*.2}Veeery {/cps}easy,{w=.4} like this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"The bulb is placed in the hole and we let go."
"Rosa quickly fills up the patch of dirt with the trowel, leaving only the stem and flower visible."
"Rosa quickly fills up the patch of dirt with the trowel,{w=.4} leaving only the stem and flower visible."
pause .5
show rosa:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
pause .25
show rosa neutral
Ro "You did it!"
pause .5
A "Doesnt seem like I did much at all…"
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.7
pause .2
show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
A "Doesnt seem like I did much at all{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
Ro "Hush now. We still have dozens left to plant."
show rosa unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
Ro "Hush now.{w=.4} We still have dozens left to plant."
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.8
show anon sad flip with Dissolve(.25)
"A keening whine rumbles from my mouth."
A "Cant I just take the beating instead? Please?"
A "Cant I just take the beating instead?{w=.4} Please?"
pause .5
F "Ill do that if you really want."
F "{size=-5}Ill do that if you really want.{/size}"
show rosa considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause .25
show rosa neutral flip
Ro "Do you want to borrow my slipper?"
pause .25
A "Id prefer the shovel. Aim right here, and do {i}not{/i} resuscitate me after."
show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
A "Id prefer the shovel.{w=.5} Aim right here,{w=.4} and do {i}not{/i} resuscitate me after."
stop ambient fadeout 4
play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating her Company.ogg' fadein 1.0
pause .5
"Fangs chuckle helps to lighten my mood immensely."
"Maybe…"
"Maybe{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
scene black with Fade(1, 0, 1)
"I continue replanting flowers under Rosas caring yet Orwellian supervision."
"At noon the bellowing of our principal calls us back up to the front of the school."
scene outside school
show spears neutral flip:
xalign 1.2 yalign 0.0
show anon neutral:
xalign -0.25 yalign 0.1
show fang neutral behind anon:
xalign -0.1 yalign 0.0
show rosa neutral behind fang:
xalign 0.4 yalign 0.2
with Fade(1,0,1)
pause .5
Sp "Thank you all again for showing up today."
Sp "I hope that through your hard work all of you learned a valuable lesson."
"I catch Fang rolling her eyes from the corner of my vision."
Sp "Please do stay safe on your way home, and try to keep out of trouble in the future."
Sp "Please do stay safe on your way home,{w=.4} and try to keep out of trouble in the future."
pause .5
Sp "Dismissed."
pause .5
show spears neutral with Dissolve(.25)
hide spears with easeoutright
pause .5
show rosa bossy with dissolve
show rosa:
easein 1 xalign 0.85
pause .25
show rosa bossy flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause .25
Ro "Not you, An-on! You stay!"
Ro "Not you,{w=.3} An-{w=.1}on!{w=.4} You stay!"
show anon concerned with dissolve
pause .25
Ro "Right!{w=.4} And before everyone goes{cps=*.1}...!{/cps}"
Ro "Right! And before everyone goes…!"
show stella explanatory at sleft with moveinright
show stella neutral flip:
yalign 0.1 xalign 1.5
show stella:
easein 1 xalign 1.0
with dissolve
"Stella approaches holding a covered pot and paper plates."
show rosa neutral with dissolve
Ro "I made lunch for everyone!!"
show rosa neutral flip with dissolve
Ro "I made lunch for everyone!!"
pause .25
show anon neutral
show fang happy
with Dissolve(.25)
"The small crowd gets a bit more energetic."
Ro "Home cooked Mole Poblano! Enough for seconds and thirds!"
Ro "Home cooked Mole Poblano!{w=.4} Enough for seconds and thirds!"
show stella:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.9
pause .1
show fang behind rosa:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
pause .1
show rosa:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.8
pause .1
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.1
"I graciously accept a plate and stack it high with salty-sweet goodness."
pause .5
"The hot food is absolutely heavenly, reinvigorating me as I bite into the mexican meal."
"The hot food is absolutely heavenly,{w=.5} reinvigorating me as I bite into the mexican meal."
F "mmmm… so filling…"
F "Mmmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} so filling{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "Yeah… Wish I could cook like that…"
A "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} wish I could cook like that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
"Wait."
"I look around and see that the only ones left are Rosa, Stella, Fang and I."
"I look around and see that the only ones left are Rosa,{w=.3} Stella,{w=.3} Fang{w=.3} and I."
"Even Spears has gone home."
pause .5
A "Fang, ab-"
A "Fang,{w=.5} ab-"
Ro "Alright An-on, back to work! You still owe me two hours of heavy lifting!"
Ro "Alright{w=.2} An-{w=.15}on,{w=.3} back to work!{w=.4} You still owe me two hours of heavy lifting!"
Ro "Oh don't be sad. You are a natural greenthumb!"
show anon sad with Dissolve(.25)
pause .25
Ro "When you are not laying on my flowers, that is."
Ro "Oh don't be sad.{w=.5} You are a natural greenthumb!"
"I dont really… Get compliments."
show rosa unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
Ro "When you are not laying on my flowers,{w=.4} that is."
pause .5
"Its just circumstance, its not like I'm actually any less lazy or unskilled."
show rosa considering flip
show anon neutral
with dissolve
"I dont really{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} get compliments."
F "Hold on, Im not done yet."
"Its just circumstance,{w=.4} its not like I'm actually any less lazy or unskilled."
play music 'audio/OST/Dino Destiny Reader.ogg' fadein 1.0
play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 4
stop music fadeout 4
St "We can wait a bit while you two finish. You need all your energy after all."
show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
F "Hold on,{w=.4} Im not done yet."
show stella explanatory flip
St "We can wait a bit while you two finish.{w=.4} You need all your energy after all."
show stella neutral flip
pause .5
"These guys arent half bad."
"I thought they were slave drivers, but then again I did ruin their hard work."
"I thought they were slave drivers,{w=.4} but then again I did ruin their hard work."
pause .5
A "Stella, Ive been meaning to ask…"
play music 'audio/OST/Dino Destiny Reader.ogg'
pause .5
A "Stella,{w=.4} Ive been meaning to ask{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "Why {i}are{/i} you like this?"
show stella sad flip with Dissolve(.25)
St "Like what?"
A "You know, the whole thing with astrology and quoting…"
A "You know,{w=.4} the whole thing with astrology and quoting{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "..."
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "...video games."
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}video games."
St "Oh, I dunno, I guess its just the stuff I like."
show stella considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
St "Oh,{w=.4} I dunno,{w=.4} I guess its just the stuff I like."
A "Right"
A "Right{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
St "Why do you ask? Ooh, are you interested in it, too?!"
show stella neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
St "Why do you ask?{w=.5} {nw}"
show stella explanatory flip
extend "{cps=*.2}Ooh,{/cps}{w=.4} are you interested in it,{w=.2} too?!"
show stella neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
A "I, err… maybe some other time, Stella."
A "I,{w=.3} err{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} maybe some other time,{w=.2} Stella."
pause .5
stop ambient fadeout 3
scene black with fade
"The rest of lunch passes by without incident, and Im left savoring Rosas delicious cooking."
pause .5
"Like they say, the first rule of Mexican food: the more it looks like raw sewage, the better it tastes."
"The rest of lunch passes by without incident,{w=.4} and Im left savoring Rosas delicious cooking."
"Like they say,{w=.3} the first rule of Mexican food:{w=.5} the more it looks like raw sewage,{w=.3} the better it tastes."
"The next two hours of work fly by relatively quickly without Rosa and Stella breathing down my neck."
pause .5
"Replant the rest of the flowers I had crushed, all done by me."
"Replant the rest of the flowers I had crushed,{w=.4} all done by me."
pause .5
"Collect all of the discarded vines and clippings into compost bins, all done by me."
"Collect all of the discarded vines and clippings into compost bins,{w=.4} all done by me."
pause .5
"Carry all of the tools back into the maintenance shed."
"Take a guess who did it."
play music 'audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg' fadein 1.0
stop music fadeout 3
pause .5
"Fang stuck around for some reason, even though I dont think she had any other work to do."
"Fang stuck around for some reason,{w=.4} even though I dont think she had any other work to do."
"But now my prison sentence is finally over and Im free to go."
"My feet hurt, my arms hurt, my back hurts."
play music 'audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg' fadein 1.0
pause .5
"My feet hurt,{w=.4} my arms hurt,{w=.4} my back hurts."
pause .5
scene garden
show rosa neutral at sleft
show stella neutral at stcenter
show anon neutral flip at aright
show stella neutral:
yalign 0.1 xalign 0.4
show rosa considering:
yalign 0.2 xalign -0.1
show anon neutral flip:
yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
with fade
Ro "Anon, you did such a good job today! You should sign up for the gardening club!"
pause .5
St "Yeah! You could come and help out with {i}all{/i} of our meetings!"
show rosa neutral
Ro "An-{w=.1}on,{w=.3} you did such a good job today!{w=.5} You should sign up for the gardening club!"
"I just want to go home."
show stella explanatory
St "Yeah!{w=.4} You could come and help out with {i}all{/i} of our meetings!"
pause .5
A "Thats… Ill just… think about it."
hide rosa neutral with dissolve
hide stella with dissolve
"I walk away before either of them can push joining their club further. Im too tired to argue."
show dimmer_darker behind anon, rosa, stella with Dissolve(.25)
"{cps=*.4}I just want to go home.{/cps}"
"Fang seems to have disappeared, guess she didnt want to stick around longer than she had to."
show stella neutral
hide dimmer_darker
with dissolve
show anon:
easein 1 xalign 1.0
A "Thats{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Ill{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} think about it."
pause .5
show anon:
easeout 1 xalign 1.5
pause .2
show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
hide anon with dissolve
"I walk away before either of them can push joining their club further.{w=.4} Im too tired to argue."
scene flower garden with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"Fang seems to have disappeared,{w=.4} guess she didnt want to stick around longer than she had to after all."
pause .5
show anon neutral:
yalign 0.1 xalign -0.4
show anon:
easein 1.5 xalign 0.5
with dissolve
pause 1
show anon neutral flip with dissolve
"As I pass by some of the gardens I take a moment to admire my handiwork."
"As much as I didnt want to be here, I have to admit they look a lot cleaner than before."
show fang neutral at sleft
F "See? Thats what doing some actual hard work for once can do."
"As much as I didnt want to be here,{w=.4} I have to admit they look a lot cleaner than before."
pause .5
"Fangs sudden appearance from behind me makes me flinch. I guess she stuck around after all."
show fang neutral flip:
yalign 0.0 xalign 1.5
show fang:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.2
with dissolve
pause .5
show fang happy
F "See?{w=.4} Thats what doing some actual hard work for once can do."
F "A wimp like you could use it, too."
show anon:
ease 0.5 xalign 0.2
show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
"Fangs sudden appearance from behind me makes me flinch.{w=.4} I guess she stuck around after all."
"So now Fang is suddenly talking to me, again?"
show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "A wimp like you could use it,{w=.2} too."
pause .5
A "Yeah, sure…"
"So now Fang is suddenly talking to me,{w=.3} again?"
show fang angry
A "Yeah,{w=.4} sure{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Now all the important and beautiful plants can thrive without any of the useless weeds choking them up and holding them back."
pause .5
"Oh right, I almost forgot Fang thinks people like me are barely worth the oxygen."
"Oh right,{w=.4} I almost forgot Fang thinks people like me are barely worth the oxygen."
"Not that I really blame her after earlier."
pause .5
A "Yeah, well, dont let the weeds like me get in your way…"
A "Yeah,{w=.2} well,{w=.4} dont let the weeds like me get in your way{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"I sigh and turn away from Fang, beginning my very achy walk home."
show anon neutral flip with dissolve
"I sigh and turn away from Fang,{w=.4} beginning my very achy walk home."
"Time to go and sleep for twenty hours."
pause .5
show fang neutral
show anon:
easeout_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.1
pause .5
F "Anon, wait."
show fang neutral flip:
easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.1
F "Anon,{w=.5} wait."
"I stop in my tracks. Now what does she want?"
"I stop in my tracks.{w=.4} Now what does she want?"
A "Look, I said I was sorry, okay? I laughed at you guys and ruined your concert."
show anon neutral with dissolve
pause .5
A "Look,{w=.4} I said I was sorry,{w=.2} okay?{w=.5} I laughed at you guys and ruined your concert."
A "I dont care if you never want to talk to me again, I just dont know what else you want me to say."
A "I dont care if you never want to talk to me again,{w=.5} I just dont know what else you want me to say."
F "Anon... It…"
show fang sad
show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
show fang sad flip with dissolve
pause .5
F "Its not the concert Im upset about."
pause .5
"What?"
A "Its not?"
F "I mean, maybe a little bit, but..."
show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "I mean,{w=.4} maybe a little bit,{w=.4} but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
F "Im mad because you kept it from me, okay?"
show fang sad flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Im mad because you kept it from me,{w=.4} okay?"
F "Its just… I havent made many friends in, well… a while."
F "Its just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} I havent made many friends in,{w=.4} well{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} a while."
F "I dont want to lose an actual friend over stupid bullshit like that."
F "I just thought you would have trusted me more to tell me the truth…"
F "I just thought you would have trusted me enough to tell me the truth{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
A "I is this why you stuck around earlier?"
A "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} is this why you stuck around earlier?"
"She hesitates before nodding, like she needed to convince herself."
"She hesitates before nodding,{w=.4} like she needed to convince herself."
F "Not that it matters but Im sorry too."
F "Not that it matters but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Im sorry too."
A "You… for what? Kicking me in the face?"
show fang happy
A "You{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} for what?{w=.4} Kicking me in the face?"
show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "I {i}might{/i} have overreacted a bit earlier but you did deserve that."
F "Im sorry for calling you one of the weeds. Youre not a weed, youre… I dunno, a mushroom or some shit."
show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Im sorry for calling you one of the weeds.{w=.5} Youre not a weed,{w=.3} youre{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I dunno,{w=.3} a mushroom or some shit."
pause .5
A "A mushroom? Not like a cool tree or a cactus or something?"
A "A mushroom?{w=.4} Not like a cool tree or a cactus or something?"
F "Hell no, youre not {i}that{/i} cool. Mushrooms take all the bad shit and turn it into nutrients for all of the good plants, yknow?"
F "Hell no,{w=.3} youre not {i}that{/i} cool.{w=.5} Mushrooms take all the bad shit and turn it into nutrients for all of the good plants,{w=.4} yknow?"
F "Plus you kinda look like one, too."
show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Plus you kinda look like one,{w=.2} too."
pause .5
"Fucking rude."
pause .5
A "Thats like the nicest thing I think Ive ever heard you say."
show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Now youre pushing it."
pause .5
"I let out a sigh of relief. Cant say thats how I expected this conversation to go."
"I let out a sigh of relief.{w=.4} Cant say thats how I expected this conversation to go."
pause .5
A "I guess were both assholes, then…"
A "I guess were both assholes,{w=.2} then{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
F "Heh, yeah… friends?"
F "Heh,{w=.3} yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5} friends?"
pause .5
A "Friends."
pause .5
A "So, uh… why do you know so much about mushrooms, exactly? Reed?"
show fang considering
A "So,{w=.2} uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} why do you know so much about mushrooms,{w=.2} exactly?{w=.5} Reed?"
show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
"Fang gives me a sideways glance and smiles a bit."
show fang neutral
F "Spend enough time around Stella and Rosa and you pick up a few gardening facts."
A "Yeah, first impressions aside theyre pretty alright I guess. Stellas a bit weird and Rosa is a walking stereotype."
A "Yeah,{w=.4} first impressions aside theyre pretty alright I guess.{w=.5} Stellas a bit weird and Rosa is a walking stereotype."
pause .5
show fang happy
F "BWAHAHA!! A dork like {i}you{/i} calling Stella weird?"
show fang:
easein_back 1 xalign 1.2
F "{cps=*.5}BWAHAHA!!{/cps}{w=.4} A dork like {w=.2}{nw}"
show fang:
easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.0
extend "{i}you{/i}{w=.2} calling Stella weird?"
A "A dork like me has every right to call out Stella."
F "Sure, sure. Anyway, Ill be seeing ya, Anon."
F "Sure,{w=.2} sure.{w=.5} Anyway,{w=.4} Ill be seeing ya,{w=.2} Anon."
A "Yeah… See you…"
A "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} See you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
hide fang with moveoutright
show fang:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.2
pause 1
show fang:
easeout 1 xalign 2.2
pause .2
show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
hide fang with dissolve
"Fang strolls away, humming some tune Ive never heard."
"Fang strolls away,{w=.4} humming some tune Ive never heard."
"Left alone now with just my thoughts I find myself feeling a great weight lift from me."
pause .5
"Friends, huh… I cant recall the last time I had a legitimate friend…"
"Friends,{w=.3} huh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} I cant recall the last time I had a legitimate friend{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
A "{i}Some people certainly arent.{/i}"
A "{i}\"Some people certainly arent.\"{/i}"
A "{i}Just never meant to amount to anything or do anything important.{/i}"
A "{i}\"Just never meant to amount to anything or do anything important.\"{/i}"
A "..."
stop music fadeout 4
pause .5
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "I just dont know anymore."
stop music fadeout 1.0
pause .5
scene black with fade
pause .5
"I set off for my apartment, body sore but spirit soaring."
"I set off for my apartment,{w=.4} body sore but spirit soaring."
"..."
"{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
#Heart to Heart
play music 'audio/OST/punk_revamp.ogg' fadein 1.0
"One month now. Five to go and Ive found myself in a predicament."