game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy

@@ -2307,47 +2307,18 @@ label chapter_13C:
     show anon neutral flip
     show fang very sad
     with dissolve
-    Lucy "...I've done it so many times..."
+    Lucy "Not you..."
 
     Lucy "But..."
 
-    Lucy "The fucking allosaurus dickwad I had my first time with wasn't half as special as you."
-
-    Lucy "And I didn't just date boys, you know."
-
-    Lucy "I didn't limit my options, and I still think there was more to you!"
-
-    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
-    A "As in...?"
-
-    show fang unimpressed with dissolve
-    Lucy "You know I'm bi, right?"
-
-    A "..."
-
-    A "Like...?"
-
-    Lucy "Well, not really."
-
-    Lucy "Or rather, I don't know why I did it anymore..."
-
-    A "Lucy..."
+    Lucy "..."
 
     show fang angry with dissolve
     "Lucy grits her teeth in anger."
 
-    Lucy "It wasn't serious, okay!"
+    Lucy "I'm sorry, about all my bullshit!"
 
-    Lucy "Those people had problems that needed addressing."
-
-    Lucy "That's not me!"
-
-    Lucy "Anon, please, don't ever think my parents ever--"
-
-    A "Lucy!"
-
-    show fang surprised with dissolve
-    "My voice causes my girlfriend to flinch."
+    Lucy "Please! T-that’s… that’s not me anymore…"
 
     show anon behind fang:
         ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4
@@ -2355,9 +2326,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
     show fang sad with dissolve
     A "Lucy… {w=0.5}It's okay..."
 
-    A "Your parents are cool."
-
-    A "I would never believe they’d hurt you."
+    A "You can let it all out."
 
     "Lucy lets out a sigh."
 
@@ -2386,11 +2355,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     Lucy "But it was never meant to be."
 
-    Lucy "All those relationships were just about who had the most baggage they could dump on each other and gain the most pity points."
-
-    Lucy "And I always lost because I never had it that bad."
-
-    Lucy "I… {w=0.5}I was just an ungrateful slut."
+    Lucy "I… {w=0.5}I was just an ungrateful bitch."
 
     show fang hiding with dissolve
     "Lucy lets out a groan and facepalms."

game/script/2.fourth-day-of-school.rpy

@@ -971,7 +971,7 @@ label chapter_2:
 
     "Doesn’t seem like it’s something she wants to hear right now."
 
-    A "So um, your Naser’s sister, right?"
+    A "So um, you're Naser’s sister, right?"
 
     show fang angry with Dissolve(.25)
     F "SIB-ling."