rework ch5 buildup to roof scene

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"I set off for my apartment,{w=.4} body sore but spirit soaring."
"{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
pause 1
#Heart to Heart
play music 'audio/OST/punk_revamp.ogg' fadein 1.0
"One month now. Five to go and Ive found myself in a predicament."
play music 'audio/OST/punk_revamp.ogg' fadein 1
pause 1
"One month now.{w=.75} Five to go and Ive found myself in a predicament."
pause .5
"Im enjoying my time with Fang."
pause .5
"Most of the time just talking about stupid shit."
"Like our mutual love for wire-fu and comedy movies."
"{alpha=*0.5}{i}We are both ventriloquist, ventriloquist, ventriloquist. We are both ventriloquists and we practice every day.{/i}{/alpha}"
pause .5
"{alpha=*0.5}{i}We are both ventriloquists,{w=.2} ventriloquists,{w=.2} ventriloquists.{w=.4} We are both ventriloquists{w=.1} and we practice every day.{/i}{/alpha}"
F "{alpha=*0.5}{i}He carries a basket{/i}{/alpha}"
A "{alpha=*0.5}{i}He carries a paper roll{/i}{/alpha}"
"{alpha=*0.5}{i}and we dont have cysts. But there is one thing thats for sure friends, we are ventriloquists.{/i}{/alpha}"
"{alpha=*0.5}{i}and we dont have cysts.{w=.5} But there is one thing thats for sure my friends,{w=.4} we are ventriloquists.{/i}{/alpha}"
pause .5
"Almost every day now Im either at her desk helping her in Science or working on a lab with her."
"Or shes sat next to me decrypting the mystical arts of Not Sucking at Music."
pause .5
"Im talking more with her than anyone Ive ever talked with."
"Not to mention lunch and after school. Its less hiding from the tangerine tyrant and Naser these days and more spending time with Fang and Reed."
"Not to mention lunch and after school.{w=.5} Its less hiding from the tangerine tyrant and Naser these days and more spending time with Fang and Reed."
"Even if hes constantly checked out."
pause .5
"And smells of burnt skunk."
"The fuck is he on, anyway?!"
pause .5
"The fuck is he on,{w=.2} anyway?!"
pause .5
scene auditorium
show anon neutral at acenter
show reed neutral at sright
Re "Its carfe, bro…"
"...what?"
show anon neutral:
yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
show reed neutral flip behind anon:
yalign 0.1 xalign 1.3
with Fade(0,0,1)
pause .5
show reed explanatory flip
Re "Its carfe,{w=.2} bro{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What?"
show reed considering flip
Re "Carfentanyl."
"..."
pause .5
show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause .25
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"Whatever."
"Fang and the gang (heh) are pretty alright."
"Trish though…"
"Fang and the gang{w=.3} (heh){w=.3} are pretty alright."
pause .5
"Trish though{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"Every day she gives me the same look of distrust and a put-upon sigh."
"As if Im some kind of chore to deal with."
"Whatever. Snot like she matters in the long run."
pause .5
"Whatever.{w=.4} Snot like she matters in the long run."
"But I find myself having these weird thoughts lately."
"Like, is any of this real or not?"
"Like,{w=.3} is any of this real or not?"
pause .5
show anon:
easein 0.5 xalign 0.45
pause .75
show anon fear:
easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4
with Dissolve(.25)
pause .5
show dimmer_light behind anon with Dissolve(.25)
"I tumble backwards."
"Off of the stage."
show anon neutral at aleft:
xalign 0.5 yalign -0.1
linear 1 rotate -90
hide anon neutral with dissolve
hide dimmer_light
play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg'
show anon shocked with Dissolve(.1):
yanchor 0.2
easeout_quad .5 rotate -90 yalign -0.1 xpos 0.3
pause .15
hide anon with Dissolve(.25)
show reed shocked flip
play sound "audio/effects/anonDeskSlam.ogg"
with vpunch
pause 1
"Woah"
A "ow…"
Re "bro….. That sucks….."
"Its lunch time now, and I guess I dozed off."
pause .5
A "ow{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
show reed explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25)
Re "Bro{cps=*.1}.....{/cps}{w=.3} that sucks{cps=*.1}.....{/cps}"
show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
"Its lunch time now,{w=.4} and I guess I dozed off."
"Too many late night study sessions."
Re "You like… need help?"
A "ffff…. Just fix the projector Reed."
Re "Kay… Almost done…"
show anon neutral at aleft:
xalign -0.8 yalign 0.0
linear 1 rotate 0
ease 1.0 xalign 0.0 yalign 0.1
"I hobble to my feet, feeling out the bruise blossoming on my shoulder."
A "Hrrrrg… Stupid fuckin stage."
"I consider jumping back up, but find the stairs up more appealing."
scene hallway
show anon neutral flip at acenter
show trish unimpressed at tleft
play music 'audio/OST/i_have_no_clue_what_im_doing.ogg' fadein 1.0
"Going up the stairs, Trish suddenly grabs my shoulder, pinning it to the wall."
"She leans in close, looking me dead in the eyes."
A "Uhh…"
show reed unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
Re "You like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} need help?"
pause .5
A "{cps=*.25}ffff....{/cps}{w=.4} just{w=.3} fix the projector Reed."
show reed happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
Re "Kay{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} almost done{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
stop music fadeout 5
pause .5
show reed:
easeout 1 xalign 2.5
pause .2
hide reed with dissolve
pause .5
show anon sad:
alpha 0
yalign -0.8 xalign -0.1
show anon:
easein 0.5 yalign -0.45 alpha 1
"I hobble to my feet,{w=.4} feeling out the bruise blossoming on my shoulder."
show anon:
alpha 1 yalign -0.45
pause .5
A "Hrrrrg{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} stupid fuckin stage."
show anon neutral with dissolve
"I consider jumping back up,{w=.4} but find the stairs up more appealing."
pause .5
show anon:
easeout_cubic 1 xalign 0.4 yalign -0.35
with None
pause .5
show trish neutral flip with dissolve:
yalign 0.0 xalign 0.6
show anon:
easeout_back 0.5 xalign 0.2
show trish:
easeout_back 0.5 xalign 0.5
pause .5
play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
with hpunch
pause .5
play music 'audio/OST/i_have_no_clue_what_im_doing.ogg'
pause 1
"Going up the stairs,{w=.3} Trish suddenly grabs my shoulder,{w=.4} pinning it to the wall."
"She leans in close,{w=.4} looking me dead in the eyes."
pause .5
A "Uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "Can I help you?"
pause .25
show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
T "Dont play dumb."
T "Somethings up with Fang today."
show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
"She gestures to where Fang is sitting."
"Fangs picking at her lunch with a fork, not eating a bite."
"Now that I think about it, she has been a bit distant today."
pause .5
"Fangs picking at her lunch with a fork,{w=.4} not eating a bite."
"Now that I think about it,{w=.4} she has been a bit distant today."
pause .5
T "Theyve been like this since band practice yesterday."
"Wait, what?"
show trish angry with dissolve
pause .5
"Wait,{w=.4} what?"
show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause .25
T "Did you do something to them?"
"Do something? What does she mean?"
"Does she think that Fang and I…"
pause .5
"Do something?{w=.4} What does she mean?"
"She doesn't think that Fang and I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
# B: what is THIS
#if persistent.lewd == True:
# show howlewd at truecenter with dissolve
# pause 3
# hide howlewd with dissolve
show trish angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
show anon:
easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.15
T "OI!"
A "What? No! I dont think at least."
A "What?{w=.4} No!{w=.4} I dont think at least."
A "Why are you so concerned?"
A "Everyone has a bad day every now and then, right?"
A "Everyone has a bad day every now and then,{w=.4} right?"
pause .25
show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve
pause .25
T "Fang and I have been friends for ten years now."
T "Not once have I seen them this upset."
T "Youre the only new thing around here."
pause .5
T "It cant be anyone else."
T "So. What did you do?"
T "So.{w=.5} What did you do?"
pause .5
A "I swear I havent done anything with Fang."
A "Look, weve got music next. Ill ask Fang whats up then."
"Trish glowers. We both glance at Fang to see her still sitting there with her untouched food."
T "Youll talk to Fang? Youll probably make it worse. I should be the one to talk with them."
pause .5
A "Look,{w=.4} weve got music next.{w=.5} Ill ask Fang whats up then."
pause .5
"Trish glowers.{w=.5} We both glance at Fang to see her still sitting there with her untouched food."
show trish:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.55
T "{i}Youll{/i} talk to Fang?{w=.6} Youll probably make it worse.{w=.6} {i}I{/i} should be the one to talk with them."
pause .5
A "So why havent you?"
show trish unimpressed with dissolve
pause .5
show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
"Trishs mouth shuts with a click."
"I stare her down."
pause .5
show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
"Her eyes harden and she finally speaks."
show trish annoyed at tleft with dissolve
T "...Fine… but you better not fuck up."
"She lets go of my shoulder, stuffing her hands in her jacket pockets with a huff."
hide trish with moveoutright
pause .5
show trish annoyed flip with dissolve
pause .5
T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Fine{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} but you better not fuck up."
show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve
"She lets go of my shoulder,{w=.4} stuffing her hands in her jacket pockets with a huff."
pause .5
show trish:
easein 1 xalign 0.9
pause .2
show trish neutral with dissolve
pause .5
show anon:
easein_cubic 1.5 yalign 0.1 xalign 0.4
pause .5
"I finally return to where I was sitting on the stage to continue finishing my lunch."
scene bandroom
"Right when I plant myself on the ground Reed speaks up."
show anon neutral at aleft
show reed neutral at scenter
show trish neutral flip at sright
Re "Aaaaand… Done!"
A "Done? With the projector?"
Re "Thats right, man… Now we can watch movies… Shows… Pornos… All that."
show anon:
easein 1 xalign 0.0
show trish:
easein 1 xalign 0.45
with None
show reed neutral flip:
yalign 0.1 xalign 1.5
show reed:
easein 1 xalign 1.2
with dissolve
pause .5
show reed explanatory flip
Re "{cps=*.3}Aaaaand{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} done!"
show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause .5
A "Done?{w=.5} With the projector?"
show reed considering flip
Re "Thats right,{w=.2} man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} now we can watch movies{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} shows{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} pornos{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {nw}"
show reed explanatory flip
extend "all that."
show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause .25
show trish explanatory
T "Were not watching porn in school."
A "Not with that attitude…"
show trish neutral with Dissolve(.25)
pause .25
A "Not with that attitude{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
show trish:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.7
pause .2
show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause .5
play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg'
show trish:
easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.65
pause .2
play sound 'audio/effects/slapStickPunch.ogg'
show anon:
easein_cubic 0.5 xalign -0.05
"Trish throws an orange slice at me."
Re "So what do you guys wanna watch…?"
show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
show reed explanatory flip
Re "So what do you guys wanna watch{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}"
show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause .25
"I cant think of anything that would be appropriate around normal highschoolers."
pause .5
show trish:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
show trish happy with Dissolve(.25)
"Trish raises her hand and jumps in place."
T "How about the Count of Monte Cristo?"
Re "Oh, I know that one! The actors in that one are pretty great…"
A "Oh yeah. I love the VA work."
show reed explanatory flip
Re "Oh,{w=.3} I know that one!{w=.4} The actors in that one are pretty great{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause .25
stop music fadeout 3
A "Oh yeah.{w=.4} I love the VA work."
pause .5
show reed:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.25
pause .2
show trish:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.55
with None
show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause .5
"Trish and Reed stop and stare at me."
play music 'audio/OST/The.ogg' fadein 1.0
T "..."
Re "..."
"Crap, was it something I said?"
pause .5
T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
"Crap,{w=.4} was it something I said?"
pause .5
show trish explanatory flip
T "What-"
"*DING-DONG BING-BONG*"
play sound 'audio/effects/schoolBell.ogg'
I "{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.7}DONG {w=0.65}BING-{w=0.7}BONG{/i}{/cps}"
show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause 0.5
play music 'audio/OST/The.ogg' fadein 1.0
stop sound fadeout 1
"Saved by the bell!"
"I look to Fang and-"
pause .5
"Oh."
"When did she leave?"
A "Oh, Fang left already. Ill go catch up with her."
pause .5
A "Oh,{w=.3} Fang left already.{w=.4} Ill go catch up with her."
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.2
A "BYE!"
stop music fadeout 1.0
show anon:
easeout 0.5 xalign -0.5
hide anon with dissolve
pause .5
scene black with fade
"I make record time out of the auditorium, leaving a still confused Trish and Reed."
"..."
scene classroom with fade
"I make record time out of the auditorium,{w=.4} leaving a still confused Trish and Reed."
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
stop music fadeout 3
pause .5
scene bandroom with fade
play ambient 'audio/effects/classroomLoop.ogg' fadein 3
"Fang isnt in music class when I get there."
"I tap out a quick message to her on my phone. I take a spot next to her seat and wait."
"I tap out a quick message to her on my phone.{w=.4} I take a spot next to her seat and wait."
"Maybe she just needed to use the bathroom."
"..."
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
"Its been about twenty minutes."
"Im starting to get worried."
T "{i}{alpha=0.5}Somethings up with Fang today.{/alpha}{/i}"
"Hmmm..."
"I looked at my phone, and the message I sent her way just before class started."
show anonphone at scenter
A "Hey. Wanna talk?"
pause .5
T "{i}{alpha=0.75}\"Somethings up with Fang today.\"{/alpha}{/i}"
pause .5
"Hmmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
show anonphone with easeinbottom
"I looked at my phone,{w=.4} and the message I sent her way just before class started."
A "\"Hey. Wanna talk?\"{fast}"
pause .5
"Still unseen?"
"..."
T "{alpha=0.5}{i}you better not fuck up.{/i}{/alpha}"
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
pause .5
T "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"You better not fuck up.\"{/i}{/alpha}"
pause .5
"God damn it."
pause .5
A "Mr. Jingo! I need to use the bathroom!"
"..."
stop ambient fadeout 3
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
scene hallway with Dissolve(1)
"One guitar-shaped bathroom pass later Im scrambling through the halls."
scene hallway with dissolve
"If I were a non-binary teenage pterodon having a crisis, where would I hide?"
"Someplace only Fang would go..."
pause .5
"If I were a non-binary teenage pterodon having a crisis,{w=.4} where would I hide?"
"Someplace only Fang would go{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
"The family bathrooms!"
"There are only two in the building."
"I sprint to the first bathroom, closer to the back of the school and nestled away in the special needs area."
"My knuckles rap against the door, locked and preoccupied."
A "Fang? Youre missing class and I seriously need help with this sheet music."
play music 'audio/OST/Dino Destiny Reader.ogg' fadein 1.0
unknown "The one you seek is elsewhere."
"Who the fuck… Wait…"
A "Youre that weird stego chick…Stella?"
St "Thats very rude… And Im not weird…"
A "Whatever, do you know where Fang is?"
St "...Not here… Can you please leave? I have a nervous bladder."
"I sprint to the first bathroom,{w=.4} closer to the back of the school and nestled away in the special needs area."
"My knuckles rap against the door,{w=.4} locked and preoccupied."
pause .5
A "Fang?{w=.4} Youre missing class and I seriously need help with this sheet music."
pause .5
play music 'audio/OST/Dino Destiny Reader.ogg'
pause .5
unknown "{cps=*.4}The one you seek is elsewhere.{/cps}"
pause .5
"Who the fuck{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Wait{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "Youre that weird stego chick{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Stella?"
pause .5
St "Thats very rude{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} And Im not weird{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "Whatever,{w=.4} do you know where Fang is?"
St "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Not here{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Can you please leave?{w=.4} I have a nervous bladder."
pause .5
"I turn away from the door and sprint to the front of the school where the other bathroom is."
"Its while Im moving briskly through the empty corridors of the school with un-tuned guitar in hand that I find divine providence."
"Or rather."
"The feathers floating by the window provide me with the clue I need."
"I look out the window, and while I cant look up to see for sure, the shadow that she is casting on the ground below is enough verification required."
"My feet climb the steps easily, but my mind is ill at-ease."
pause .5
"I look out the window,{w=.4} and while I cant look up to see for sure,{w=.4} the shadow that she is casting on the ground below is enough verification required."
"My feet climb the steps easily,{w=.4} but my mind is ill at-ease."
"The hell is wrong with me right now."
"Why do I feel anxious right now?"
T "{alpha=0.5}{i}What did you do?{/i}{/alpha}"
pause .5
T "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"What did you do?\"{/i}{/alpha}"
"What if I did do something?"
T "{alpha=0.5}{i}Fang and I have been friends for ten years now.{/i}{/alpha}"
"Ive known her for barely a month. And why is it my problem to fix?"
T "{alpha=0.5}{i}Not once have I seen them this upset.{/i}{/alpha}"
pause .5
T "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"Fang and I have been friends for ten years now.\"{/i}{/alpha}"
"Ive known her for barely a month.{w=.5} And why is it my problem to fix?"
pause .5
T "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"Not once have I seen them this upset.\"{/i}{/alpha}"
stop music fadeout 4
pause .5
"I cant stop the gnawing feeling in my chest."
stop music fadeout 1.0
pause .5
scene roof day
show fang neutral:
xalign -0.2