rework ch4 auditorium lunch scene, rename anon grin
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label chapter_4:
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# CH 4 SCENE 1 - Anon is one slice of toast away from living an anime
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# CH 4 SCENE 1 - Anon is just one slice of toast away from living an anime
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pause 1
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play music 'audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg' fadein 2
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@ -139,8 +139,9 @@ label chapter_4:
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hide anon with dissolve
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I "I turn away from the two and leave them behind."
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# TODO: scene door auditorium
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# CH 4 SCENE 2 - Trish continues to hate Anon's guts, more at 11
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scene door auditorium with fade
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@ -159,163 +160,382 @@ label chapter_4:
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I "I put my hand on the doorhandle and hesitate a bit.{w=.4} Then I pull it open."
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# CH 4 SCENE 2 -
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scene auditorium with Dissolve(1)
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I "The squeak of the door echoes through the near empty auditorium, and immediately all three turn their heads and stare."
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I "The squeak of the door echoes through the near empty auditorium,{w=.4} and immediately all three turn their heads and stare."
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pause .75
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I "There’s an awkward pause that goes on for just a bit too long. Eventually Fang calls out from her seat."
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I "There’s an awkward pause that goes on for just a bit too long.{w=.5} Eventually Fang calls out from her seat."
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show fang shocked at scenter with dissolve
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# TODO: sound direction says play 'She Fucks Human Men', resolve this
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# play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg'
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play music 'audio/ost/she_fucks_human_men.ogg' fadein 2
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pause .5
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# TODO: sound direction says play She Fucks Human Men, resolve this
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play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg'
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show fang surprised flip with Dissolve(1):
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yalign 0.0 xalign 1.3
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pause 1
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show fang shocked flip with Dissolve(.25)
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F "What the hell are {i}you{/i} doing here,{w=.2} dweeb?"
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show fang considering flip with dissolve
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show anon:
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yalign 0.1 xalign -0.5
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show anon neutral:
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easein 1 xalign -0.15
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with dissolve
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pause 1
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F "What the hell are you doing here, dweeb?"
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hide fang shocked
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show fang neutral at scenter
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show anon neutral flip at sright
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A "Hiding from Naomi."
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pause .25
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show fang:
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easein_cubic 2 yalign -0.1 xalign 1.35
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show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
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I "Fang throws her head back and goes limp on the shitty wooden chair."
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F "UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGHHHHHH, THAT BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITCH."
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show fang considering
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I "..."
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A "..."
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F "..."
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A "..."
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show fang angry flip
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F "{cps=*.7}UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGHHHHHH{/cps},{w=.2} THAT {cps=*.7}BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITCH{/cps}."
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show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
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pause .5
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I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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show fang:
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easein_cubic 1 yalign 0.0 xalign 1.3
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I "Fang lifts her head back up."
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show fang unimpressed with dissolve
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F "Ffffffffine, you can stay."
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I "I go sit a few yards away from Fang and Trish on the theater seat. Reed turns back to that device he was messing with before."
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show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
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F "{cps=*.3}Ffffffffine{/cps},{w=.4} you can stay."
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pause .5
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show anon:
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ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.4
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I "I go sit a few yards away from Fang and Trish on the theater seat.{w=.5} Reed turns back to that device he was messing with before."
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I "Looks like a projector?"
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pause .5
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A "You don’t like Naomi?"
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show fang angry with dissolve
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F "What was your first fuckin’ clue? That stupid bitch, acting all high and mighty all the time."
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T "Hey, Fang."
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show fang angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
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F "What was your first fuckin’ clue?{w=.5} That stupid bitch,{w=.4} acting all high and mighty all the time."
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pause .5
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T "Hey,{w=.4} Fang."
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show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
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F "Oh look at me I’m super smart and nice to everyone and everyone likes me so if you disagree with me I get the moral high ground no matter what!"
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I "Fang lets out some combination of a snort and a sigh."
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F "No different than Naser. What a couple."
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F "Ugh, whatever. What was she doing to bother you?"
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A "She’s been pestering me about every little thing since school started. Granted, she’s been a big help in some cases, but jeez she’s overbearing sometimes."
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show trish neutral at tleft with dissolve
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F "No different than Naser.{w=.4} What a couple."
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show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
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F "Ugh,{w=.4} whatever.{w=.5} What was she doing to bother you?"
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A "She’s been pestering me about every little thing since school started.{w=.5} Granted,{w=.4} she’s been a big help in some cases,{w=.4} but jeez she’s overbearing sometimes."
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T "Fang?"
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F "I’ll say. Sometime in the first semester she ended up helping me with a major science project. We only had a day to do the whole thing."
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pause .5
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show anon:
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easein 1 xalign 0.0 #0.4
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show fang:
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easein 1 xalign 0.65 #1.3
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with None
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show trish neutral flip:
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yalign 0 xalign 1.35
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show trish:
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easein 1 xalign 0.9
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with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
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F "I’ll say.{w=.4} Sometime in the first semester she ended up helping me with a major science project.{w=.4} We only had a day to do the whole thing."
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pause .5
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A "You waited until the last day for a major grade?"
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F "It… That doesn’t matter. Shut up."
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F "Anyways, Naomi insisted on helping me, and I just went along with it. She ended up just bossing me around for eight hours."
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show trish indignant
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show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
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F "It{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} That doesn’t matter.{w=.4} Shut up."
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show fang neutral flip
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F "Anyways,{w=.4} Naomi insisted on helping me,{w=.3} and I just went along with it."
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show fang unimpressed flip
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F "She ended up just bossing me around for eight hours."
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show trish:
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easein 1 xalign 0.95
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show trish indignant flip with Dissolve(.25)
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T "HEY GUYS DID YOU FORGET I’M HERE TOO?!"
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show trish neutral flip with dissolve
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pause .25
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show fang:
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easein 1 xalign 0.6
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show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
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pause .25
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F "Oh,{w=.2} right.{w=.4} What were you talking about Trish?"
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show trish smug flip with Dissolve(.25)
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I "Trish pulls a cardboard tube out of her backpack.{w=.4} She pops the top of the tube open and pulls a rolled up poster out and unfurls it."
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show trish happy flip
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T "This!{w=.4} Tada!{w=.5} Our first poster!"
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show fang surprised with Dissolve(.25)
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pause .5
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A "VVURM DRAMA?{w=.4} That’s an{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} interesting name{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} and what’s with the date on it?"
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show fang neutral flip with dissolve
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F "Oh, right. What were you talking about Trish?"
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show trish neutral
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I "Trish pulls a cardboard tube out of her backpack. She pops the top of the tube open and pulls a rolled up poster out and unfurls it."
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T "This! Tada! Our first poster!"
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A "VVURM DRAMA? That’s an… interesting name… and what’s with the date on it?"
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F "Trish wants-"
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T "We need to have an actual show! Not some dumb school show. We need actual people who matter to show our genius to!"
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I "Genius? More like retardation."
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show fang sad with dissolve
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pause .25
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F "{cps=*.5}Trish wants-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}"
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show trish smug flip
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T "We need to have an actual show!{w=.4} Not some dumb school show.{w=.5} We need actual people who matter to show our genius to!"
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pause .5
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I "Genius?{w=.4} More like retardation."
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show fang sad with Dissolve(.25)
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F "I don’t know Trish."
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A "Yeeeaaaaahhhh I’m with Fang on this one."
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show fang neutral
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show trish unimpressed
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pause .5
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A "{cps=*.4}Yeeeaaaaahhhh{/cps}{w=.2} {nw}"
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show trish neutral flip
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extend "I’m with Fang on this one."
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show fang considering
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show trish unimpressed flip
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with Dissolve(.25)
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I "The glare Trish levels at me was akin to a very dull knife."
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show trish:
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easein 0.5 xalign 0.9
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T "You don’t even know how good we are!"
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show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
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T "That was simply a practice session!"
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T "Since you’re Naser’s friend too, just know HE ruined our first concert. Right Fang?"
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F "Ugh, yeah. If he hadn’t invited all those cocksuckers…"
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A "Still I think-"
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show trish angry with dissolve
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T "It doesn’t matter what YOU think!"
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I "Whoa, where did that come from."
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show fang happy with dissolve
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F "Let’s drop it for now. My tuna sandwich is getting cold."
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show trish smug
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pause .25
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show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
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T "Since you’re Naser’s friend too,{w=.4} just know HE ruined our first concert.{w=.5} Right Fang?"
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show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
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F "Ugh,{w=.4} yeah.{w=.5} If he hadn’t invited all those cocksuckers{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
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pause .25
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A "Still {cps=*.4}I think-{w=.4}{nw}"
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T "It doesn’t matter what {w=.1}{nw}"
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show trish angry flip
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play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
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show anon:
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easein_cubic .75 xalign -0.05
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extend "YOU{w=.2} think!" with vpunch
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show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve
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pause .25
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I "Whoa,{w=.4} where did that come from."
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show fang neutral flip with dissolve
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pause .25
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F "Let’s drop it for now.{w=.4} My tuna sandwich is getting cold."
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show trish smug flip with Dissolve(.25)
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I "Trish grins in victory."
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Re "Dude… ya got told…"
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I "What the fuck am I doing? I’m dead if I out myself here outnumbered"
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pause .5
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Re "{size=-10}Dude{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} ya got told{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{/size}"
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stop music fadeout 2
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pause .25
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show dimmer_light behind anon, trish with dissolve
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pause .25
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I "What the fuck am I doing?{w=.5} I’m dead if I out myself whilst outnumbered here"
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I "Trish tore at me like she knew I was there."
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pause .5
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I "Had to happen EVENTUALLY."
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I "I hope that’s not the case."
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show trish neutral
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I "I finally get to opening my omnivore lunch. A BLT, some chicken nuggets, and an orange."
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I "I pray that’s not the case."
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pause .5
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play music 'audio/ost/she_fucks_human_men.ogg' fadein 1
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hide dimmer_light
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show trish neutral flip
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with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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I "I finally get to opening my omnivore lunch.{w=.5} A BLT,{w=.3} some chicken nuggets,{w=.3} and an orange."
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I "I take my first bite of the sandwich and-"
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stop music fadeout 1.0
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I "*DING-DONG BING-BONG*"
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play sound 'audio/effects/schoolBell.ogg'
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I "{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.7}DONG {w=0.65}BING-{w=0.7}BONG{/i}{/cps}"
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pause 0.5
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stop sound fadeout 1
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I "Are you kidding me."
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I "I cram as much of the sandwich into my mouth as I can and close the box."
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I "Reed puts the projector in the corner of the room, and Trish makes for the exit with Fang. I follow after, cheeks still filled with food"
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scene hallway with fade
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show fang happy flip at scenter with dissolve
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show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
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I "Next class is… Music, that’s right. I’ll be walking with Fang then."
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I "Reed puts the projector in the corner of the room,{w=.3} and Trish makes for the exit with Fang."
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I "I follow after,{w=.4} cheeks still filled with food"
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show hallway
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play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg'
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# CH 4 SCENE 3
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play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 2
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scene hallway with Fade(1, 0, 1)
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pause .5
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I "Next class is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Music,{w=.4} that’s right.{w=.5} I’ll be walking with Fang then."
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I "The three all wave each other goodbye and Fang turns towards our shared class."
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pause .5
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stop ambient fadeout 3
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play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg'
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I "May as well make some small talk."
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A "So, uh… What’s your favorite band, Fang?"
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F "My favorite band, huh…"
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F "Guess it’d be something like The Skinks… Maybe the Fossillies?"
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A "‘Oi, tha’ ‘ere’s sum pre’ey bri’ish tayste, yeah?"
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F "Pffft."
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show anon neutral:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 0.1
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show fang neutral behind anon:
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yalign 0.0 xalign 0.9
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with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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A "So,{w=.2} uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} What’s your favorite band,{w=.2} Fang?"
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show fang considering flip with dissolve
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F "My favorite band,{w=.3} huh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
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F "Guess it’d be something like The Skinks{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Maybe the Fossillies?"
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A "‘Oi,{w=.3} tha’ ‘ere’s sum pre’ey bri’ish tayste,{w=.4} yeah?"
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show fang:
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easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.975
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show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
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F "{cps=*.35}Pffft.{/cps}"
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I "She turns away to hide her snickers."
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show fang happy flip with dissolve
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pause .25
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F "Shut it."
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F "I’m sure your favorite is much better."
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A "I’m into…"
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#>>Boomer rock
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#>>Obscure hipster shit
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#>>Anime openings and video game OSTs
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pause .5
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A "I’m into{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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pause .5
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menu:
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jump regardlessofselect
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pass
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pause .5
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show fang:
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easein 0.5 xalign 1.05
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I "Fang holds a hand up to her beak."
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F "AHAHAHAHAHAHHA. God you are such a dweeb"
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I "I flash her my biggest shit-eating grin."
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A "Least I don’t need a ‘loisence’ to listen to it."
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F "Oi luv, didn’ share me taystes to get rallied on, bit rewd, innit?"
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scene black with fade
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I "The two of us banter with each other with increasingly strong british accents all the way to class."
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scene classroom with fade
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I "..."
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F "{cps=*.4}AHAHAHAHAHAHHA.{/cps} {w=.5}{nw}"
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show fang:
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easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.9
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extend "God you are such a dweeb"
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show anon grin with dissolve
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I "I flash her my biggest shit-eating grin."
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A "Least I don’t need a ‘loisence’ to listen to it."
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F "Oi luv,{w=.3} didn’ share me taystes to get rallied on,{w=.5} bit rewd,{w=.2} innit?"
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scene black with fade
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I "The two of us banter with each other with increasingly strong british accents all the way to class."
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scene bandroom with Fade(1, 0, 1)
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I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg'
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show bandroom
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I "ARGH!! This stupid-"
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I "Define a Treble clef? I don’t know what a Treble clef is! I don’t care about this shit, it won’t ever be useful."
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I "Fuck this, who can I cheat off of?"
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play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
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I "ARGH!! This stupid-" with vpunch
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pause .25
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I "Define a Treble clef?{w=.5} I don’t know what a Treble clef is!{w=.5} I don’t care about this shit,{w=.3} it won’t ever be useful."
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I "Fuck this,{w=.4} who can I cheat off of?"
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pause .5
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I "I lean back in my uncomfortable chair hoping to pop my spine back in place."
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N "{i}Oh! What if you asked Fang for help?{/i}" # TODO: is this from a previous line? If so can't find it
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# TODO: this line doesn't occur until chapter 6
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N "{i}Oh! What if you asked Fang for help?{/i}"
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I "I crane my head, looking for Fang. At her own desk she’s filling out her assignment page easily, drumming her fingers on her desk. Almost looks like she’s strumming honestly."
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I "Agh, and that’s another thing. Who the fuck made guitars?! Fuck trying to memorize frets or whatever the fuck."
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I "Oh shit, she’s looking at me now."
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I "She tilts her head and taps her sheet."
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I "OH!"
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I "I respond with an eyeroll and finger gun at my temple. My thumb hammer drops and I fake die in my seat."
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I "Fang shakes her head, returning to her assignment with a tiny smile gracing her beak."
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I "I look at the papers we need to finish. Fuck me, how the hell are we suppose to finish these by the end of class?!"
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# TODO: this line doesn't occur until chapter 6
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N "It can’t hurt to ask, though, right?"
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I "Maybe the neon Nero had a good point."
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I "Still, interrupting her now might piss her off."
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I "FFFFFfuck. I’ll flip a coin."
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#>>> Heads, ask Fang for help
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#>>> Tails, leave Fang alone
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menu:
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"Heads, ask Fang for help":
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